Run: 2026-11-11-01M755R1QY5NRNAJRRGCA4HSR3

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Duration:
23.2s
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$0.004486
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Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the side door of The Raven's Nest with the Golden Empress delivery bag slung across her chest and rain soaking through her jacket. Green neon from the sign above the entrance bled across the wet pavement in Soho and smeared the windows of the bar. She kicked the door shut with her heel and headed for the stairs at the back. The flat above Silas' bar kept its own hours. At this hour she expected dark glass, empty stools, and the low hum from the old fridge behind the counter. A man stood behind the counter. He filled the space at six foot one and braced his weight off his left leg. Grey streaked his auburn hair at the temples and ran through his beard. A silver signet ring caught the light on his right hand as he wiped a glass with a cloth. Maps curled at the edges above the bottles and black-and-white photographs crowded the walls. Silas lifted his hazel eyes from the glass and fixed them on her. Rory dropped the delivery bag on the floorboards. Keys struck the wood beside her boots and skittered under a stool. Her straight black hair hung damp to her shoulders and stuck to her neck. Her bright blue eyes stayed on the ring. "Rory." "Silas." He set the glass down and stepped from behind the counter. His limp dragged through the space between the stools. The left knee gave him a hitch in each stride. He stopped a pace from her and looked at the bag, at the wet jacket, at the crescent scar on her left wrist where her sleeve had ridden up. "You cut your hair." "You grew a beard." "I grew grey." "You grew a limp." "I grew that in Prague." Rory bent down and fished the keys from under the stool. Her fingers brushed dust and a bottle cap. She stood and tucked the scar under her sleeve with her thumb. The bar smelled of lemons and old wood and spilled beer from the boards. A bus rattled past outside and threw headlights across the photographs. "You left the keys with a note." "I left the keys with the landlord and told him to give them to a girl from Cardiff if she turned up." "She turned up." "You turned up four years late for a drink." Silas turned back to the counter and pulled down a bottle. He poured amber liquid into a glass and pushed it across the wood toward her. The glass rang against the counter. "You still take it with no ice." "I take water now." He poured water into a second glass and pushed that glass closer. She wrapped her hand around it. Condensation soaked into her palm and ran between her fingers. "Yu-Fei Cheung still runs the kitchen at the Golden Empress?" "Yu-Fei runs the kitchen and the drivers. He knows every shortcut through Soho and charges me for the ones I miss." "He charged you for shortcuts in Cardiff too." "I had a bicycle in Cardiff." "You had a briefcase in Cardiff." Rory laughed through her nose and shook her head. The delivery bag stank of garlic and soy from the last order. Yu-Fei had loaded her with extra containers because rain kept customers indoors and the kitchen had misfired a pot of noodles. "Pre-law briefcase." "You argued statute with your father at the dinner table." "Brendan Carter argued statute at the dinner table. Jennifer Carter marked exercise books and told us both to use the garden." "Your mother kept the garden better than either of you kept the argument." Silas drank from his own glass and set it down with care. His right hand trembled around the rim for a second and then steadied. The signet ring knocked against the wood. He covered the tremor with his thumb. "Eva put you on the train to London." "Eva put me on a train and put the ticket in my coat pocket. She watched from the platform until the train moved." "She phoned the bar for six months." "She phoned you?" "She phoned the number in the flat. The landlord told her the tenant had gone north for work." Rory looked at the maps. A pin held one corner of a map of Europe. Another map showed London streets with ink marks across Soho. The photographs held strangers at this same counter with glasses in their hands and mouths open in laughter. Nobody in the photographs looked like the man behind the counter. "You went north." "I went everywhere with a bad knee and a notebook of contacts. The notebook outlasted the knee." "You came back south." "The lease came up for renewal." "The bar kept the lease without you." "The bar kept the roof. The rest closed while I was gone." Silas wiped the counter in long strokes. The cloth smeared a spill into a shine. He worked around her glass without touching it. Rory tracked the ring with her eyes and then looked away at the bookshelf at the back wall. Its spines leaned against each other and left a gap near the floor. "The bookshelf still moves?" "The bookshelf still holds books." "That was not an answer." "That was the answer I can give in front of the staff." "There is no staff." "There is a man who mops on Thursdays and believes the mirrors watch him." Rory slid onto a stool. The seat wobbled under her weight and she caught the counter with her left hand. The scar pressed against the wood. Silas watched her hand and said nothing. He reached under the counter and produced a small notebook with a cracked spine. "You kept the number." "You kept the flat key." "I kept the flat. The key lived in my pocket with the delivery bag tag." "Four years in a pocket." "Delivery pockets eat keys." He opened the notebook to a page filled with names in pencil. His own handwriting slanted across the lines. He turned the page back and Rory saw her name under a Cardiff address in his neat script. Brendan Carter's name sat below hers. Jennifer Carter's name sat below his with a school name beside it. "You wrote to my mother." "I wrote once." "She wrote back?" "She wrote three pages. She marked a spelling error in the first paragraph and told me to drink tea with milk if I drank tea at all." Rory touched the edge of the notebook and pulled her hand back. The page smelled of paper and tobacco from years behind the bar. Silas closed the notebook and slipped it under the counter. His limp pulled him half a step closer to the bookshelf and he leaned his shoulder against it. "Evan phoned the flat too." The name landed between them and stayed there. Rory tightened her grip around the water glass. The condensation ran over the scar on her wrist and she wiped it with the hem of her sleeve. "He phoned once. He asked for Aurora. The landlord told him no Aurora lived above the bar." "Good." "Good for the landlord." Silas poured his drink into the sink and rinsed the glass. Water splashed his shirt and darkened the cotton. He dried his hands on the cloth and tossed the cloth over his shoulder. "I taught you chess the night your father lost a case in Cardiff." "You taught me to lose on purpose and blame the opening." "You learned to sacrifice a pawn." "I sacrifice sleep for deliveries now. Yu-Fei pays extra for rain." "You sacrifice nothing. You calculate." Rory smiled and the smile faded as she looked at his hands. The knuckles stood out under the skin. The beard held grey in thick patches. The limp had carved a new path through his walk and changed the way he reached for bottles on the high shelf. He climbed a step stool to reach the water and his left knee buckled against the rung. Silas caught the shelf and steadied himself. Bottles rattled. The green neon threw a line across his face. "You should sit." "I should stand. Sitting stiffens the joint and the joint stiffens me." "You had a straight stride in Cardiff." "You had a law textbook under your arm in Cardiff and a coat too big for your shoulders." "I still have the textbook. It holds up the flat door when the wind pushes." "Your mother sent you that book?" "My father sent me that book. He wrote my name inside the cover and the date. He spelled Cardiff wrong." Silas laughed once. The sound surprised her and pulled another laugh from her before she caught it. He lowered himself onto the stool beside her and winced as the knee bent. He stretched the leg out and tapped the floor with his shoe. "Jennifer still teaches?" "Jennifer retired and runs a reading group. She sends me lists of books and corrections for my spelling." "Brendan still argues?" "Brendan argues with the television and loses. He sends me clippings about cases in London and asks if I recognize the barristers." "Do you?" "I recognize the buildings. The rest blurs." Silas turned his glass and watched the light move through the water. The ring flashed against the counter each time he turned it. Rory copied the movement with her own glass and stopped when she caught him watching her hand. "Eva lives in London now." "Eva lives two streets from here. She eats at the Golden Empress on Fridays and leaves Yu-Fei a tip for the staff." "She never told me." "She tells people things in her own time." Rory stood and slung the delivery bag across her chest again. The strap dug into her shoulder through the wet jacket. She rested a hand on the counter to balance the weight. Silas stood with her and the height difference stretched between them as it had stretched on the platform in Cardiff when she had worn boots with heels to reach his eye level. "You came downstairs for a drink?" "You came upstairs for your bag?" "I came downstairs because the tap in the flat drips and the landlord ignores it." "The landlord is me." "Then fix the tap." Silas reached under the counter and pulled a wrench from a drawer. He held it up beside the glass. Rory took the wrench from his hand and felt the cold metal settle against her palm. The wrench weighed more than she expected and she shifted her grip. "You still solve problems with whatever sits in the drawer." "You still hand me tools and watch from a distance." "I hand you tools. I stood in Cardiff and watched you argue with a textbook." "I stood in London and watched a door for your return." The words hung over the counter and neither of them reached for them. Silas picked up the cloth from his shoulder and folded it into a square. Rory set the wrench down beside her water glass. The metal rang against the wood. "You kept my name in the notebook." "You kept the flat above a bar with a green sign. The sign lights your window every night. Yu-Fei told me you wave at it from the delivery door." "I wave at the sign when the rain hits my face." Silas placed both hands flat on the counter. The ring pressed into the wood. His fingers spread and the tremor moved through them again. He lifted one hand and rubbed the knee through his trousers. "Prague left me this souvenir and a file of names I cannot burn." "You burned the notebook pages?" "I burned the pages that mattered and kept the page with your name." Rory looked at the bookshelf. The gap near the floor showed dust and a line where the shelf had scraped the boards over years. She thought of the room behind it and the maps inside and the men who had sat in the dark with Silas while she delivered noodles to bar staff on Thursdays. She thought of the note on the flat door with her name in pencil and no signature. "You left before I learned the city." "You learned the city without me." "I learned the alleys. I learned Yu-Fei's timers and the lift in the office block that sticks in winter. I learned the flat stairs and the drip in the tap." "You learned Cardiff before that." "I learned Cardiff with a briefcase. London taught me to carry weight in a bag across my chest." Silas pushed her water glass toward her with one finger. The glass moved an inch and stopped against her hand. She closed her fingers around it and lifted it to her mouth. The water tasted of pipes and lemon from the cloth on the counter. She set the glass down without drinking more. "You take the wrench upstairs." "You take the glass downstairs?" "I take water from the tap in the flat. The tap drips and I catch it in a cup." Silas nodded toward the stairs. Rory picked up the wrench and the delivery bag. Her left wrist showed again as she adjusted the strap and she pulled the sleeve down over the scar. The maps curled overhead and a photograph caught her eye: a young Silas stood beside a woman at this counter with his arm around her shoulders and a grin that showed his teeth. Rory had never seen that grin on his face. "Who is she?" Silas followed her gaze to the photograph. His hand stilled on the counter. "Your mother brought her to the bar the night before you left Cardiff. Jennifer said every house needs a photograph of someone who left and came back." Rory squinted at the woman's face. The black-and-white print blurred the details and left the smile. She looked from the photograph to Silas and from Silas to the ring on his hand. "You never answered her letter in the notebook." "I answered it in person. I stood in her garden and listened to her correct my spelling for an hour." "She let you in the garden?" "She let me in the house and gave me tea with milk. She told me to tell you that the textbook still sits by the door." Rory held the wrench tighter. The cold spread into her palm. Silas pushed his own empty glass across the counter and toward the sink. The glass scraped the wood and stopped beside the cloth. He looked at her hand around the wrench and at the scar under her sleeve and at her eyes. "You still keep the textbook by the door?" "I keep it by the door in the flat above your bar. The door sticks when the wind comes off the Thames."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2470
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2470
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"pawn"
count1
4
word"calculate"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"charged"
2"trembled"
3"pawn"
4"calculate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences227
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2470
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1448
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Soho2
Europe1
London1
Rory20
Cardiff2
Carter2
Silas22
Thursdays1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Europe"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.74
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like the man behind the counter"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2470
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences227
matches
0"pushed that glass"
1"seen that grin"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs136
mean18.16
std18.98
cv1.045
sampleLengths
093
16
275
342
41
51
659
74
84
93
104
115
1256
137
1422
153
169
1732
187
194
2028
2110
2221
238
246
256
2642
272
2810
2921
3013
3139
328
3323
347
353
3618
3754
383
3917
404
416
427
4312
4454
454
465
475
4812
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences227
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount883
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01812004530011325
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences227
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences227
mean10.88
std6.46
cv0.594
sampleLengths
026
122
216
39
420
56
616
713
819
914
1013
118
1212
1314
148
151
161
1711
189
1910
2029
214
224
233
244
255
2611
278
2812
2914
3011
317
3222
333
349
3511
3615
376
387
394
4012
416
4210
4310
4421
458
466
476
489
4912
35.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.16740088105726872
totalSentences227
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences121
matches
0"She kicked the door shut"
1"He filled the space at"
2"Her straight black hair hung"
3"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
4"He set the glass down"
5"His limp dragged through the"
6"He stopped a pace from"
7"Her fingers brushed dust and"
8"She stood and tucked the"
9"He poured amber liquid into"
10"He poured water into a"
11"She wrapped her hand around"
12"His right hand trembled around"
13"He covered the tremor with"
14"He worked around her glass"
15"Its spines leaned against each"
16"He reached under the counter"
17"He opened the notebook to"
18"His own handwriting slanted across"
19"He turned the page back"
ratio0.306
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences121
matches
0"Rory pushed through the side"
1"She kicked the door shut"
2"The flat above"
3"A man stood behind the"
4"He filled the space at"
5"A silver signet ring caught"
6"Maps curled at the edges"
7"Silas lifted his hazel eyes"
8"Rory dropped the delivery bag"
9"Keys struck the wood beside"
10"Her straight black hair hung"
11"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
12"He set the glass down"
13"His limp dragged through the"
14"The left knee gave him"
15"He stopped a pace from"
16"Rory bent down and fished"
17"Her fingers brushed dust and"
18"She stood and tucked the"
19"The bar smelled of lemons"
ratio0.975
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences78
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She thought of the room behind it and the maps inside and the men who had sat in the dark with Silas while she delivered noodles to bar staff on Thursdays."
1"The maps curled overhead and a photograph caught her eye: a young Silas stood beside a woman at this counter with his arm around her shoulders and a grin that s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.5798%