Run: 2026-11-11-01M755T4ZETTQXG1SGM3MZ8Q03

Run Details

Duration:
28.0s
Cost:
$0.006879
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement outside The Raven's Nest and green neon from the sign over the door smeared across wet glass. Aurora Carter pushed through the entrance with a Golden Empress delivery bag over one shoulder and rain in her straight black hair. Water ran from her jacket to the floorboards. A dark line spread beside her boots. She twisted the hem of her sleeve between her fingers and the small crescent scar on her left wrist showed white against wet skin. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar with a polishing cloth in his right hand. The silver signet ring on that hand caught green light each time he turned a glass. Maps covered the walls between black-and-white photographs. Men in heavy coats stood on a Prague street in one print. A woman held a bicycle in another. Silas favored his left leg when he crossed to the sink. His grey-streaked auburn hair stuck damp to his forehead and his trimmed beard held a bead of water. "You look drowned, Rory." Aurora dumped the delivery bag on a stool. The bag knocked a coaster to the floor. "Yu-Fei sent me through Soho on a bike with a chain in pieces. I carried three boxes up Dean Street on foot." Silas picked up the coaster. He set it back on the bar with his ring hand and reached for a kettle. "Tea, then." "Tea. With a stool that stays put." "The stools stay put when people stop arguing with them." "People argue with stools when people build them from spite." Silas filled a mug and slid it toward her. Steam curled past his beard. "You pay me rent for the flat upstairs and you come down here for a kettle." "The kettle upstairs died in March." "I replaced it with a new one in June." "That new one leaks." "That new one has character." Aurora wrapped both hands around the mug. Heat soaked into her palms. "Character leaks onto the counter." "You drink tea like a barrister bills hours. Fast and expensive." Aurora lifted the mug and drank. "My father billed hours. I delivered noodles. Do not confuse us." "Your father billed hours in Cardiff. You bill miles in London. Same waistcoat. Different lining." "Brendan Carter would frame that sentence and hang it in chambers." "Jennifer would underline it in red and ask what you learned." The door opened. Cold air cut green neon light in half. A woman shook rain from an umbrella with a bent spoke. Her hair ended at her jaw and brushed black plastic earrings. A blue cardigan covered a white shirt. A plain gold band hugged her left ring finger. Silas looked up from the sink. His hazel eyes narrowed at her face and softened a second after. "Bar or table." "Bar, please. And a phone charger if you have one. The train ate my battery." "Chargers cost an arm. Tea costs less." "Tea, then. Lemon. No sugar." Silas set a charger beside a clean glass. He slid both toward her with his ring hand. The woman sat two stools from Aurora. She plugged in her phone and tucked hair behind one ear. A photograph above the bar caught her eye. Her mouth opened. She turned her head toward Aurora. "Rory." Aurora stared at the gold band and the earrings and the scar of rain on the white shirt. Her throat closed around a name she had not used in years. "Eva." Eva stood. Her stool scraped the floor. She grabbed Aurora around the shoulders and held her. Aurora's mug shook in her hands. "You disappeared." "I moved." Eva pulled back. Her hands stayed on Aurora's arms. She looked at Aurora's jacket and boots and bright blue eyes. "You look like Cardiff rain followed you south." "Cardiff rain sent me a postcard. I read it on a bike." Eva laughed once. The sound cracked at the end. "God, Rory. Look at you." "Look at you. You cut your hair. You wear a cardigan. You own a gold band." "I own a mortgage. A car that stalls on hills. A daughter who colors on walls." "You have a daughter." "Mia. Three. She draws cats with six legs." "You had purple hair in Cardiff." "I had purple hair and a band and a plan to run a gallery in London. Mia has a school place and I have a staffroom." "Gallery Eva." "Gallery Eva fed on instant noodles and rent from a landlord who owned a ferret." "I remember the ferret. It ate my sock." "It ate three socks. You cried at a sock." "That sock had a hole. I took it personally." Eva sat down hard on the stool. The stool wobbled. She stared at the phone charger and the tea Silas had not yet brought. Her fingers drummed a rhythm on the bar. "I teach Year Five." "You teach." "Twenty-seven kids. One hamster named Biscuit. A sink full of paint pots. A curriculum that eats paper." Aurora set her mug down. Tea slopped over the rim. "Pre-Law Eva had a speech ready for Cardiff University's student union." "Pre-Law Eva read cases in a bathrobe with a kebab on her lap." "You dropped out in second term." "I found law boring. I found you interesting. Trade places." "I kept law. Sort of. I deliver for Yu-Fei Cheung at Golden Empress. I live above this bar. I own a bike with a dead chain." "You live above a bar." "Silas owns the bar. Silas owns the flat. Silas owns my dignity on rent day." Silas coughed behind the sink. He dried a glass with slow strokes. The signet ring clicked against porcelain. "I said nothing." "You coughed with intent." "Intent and a bad knee." Eva looked at Silas and then at Aurora. Her phone lit up on the bar. A photograph filled the screen: a small girl with paint on her cheek. She turned the phone face down. "Tom has her tonight. He puts her to bed with that voice he uses for patients." "Patients." "Paramedic. He works nights. He sleeps in daylight and argues with weather forecasts." Aurora smudged tea with her thumb and left a brown arc on the wood. "You married a paramedic from Cardiff." "I married Tom from a bus stop on Cathays Terrace. He had a book about mountains and a sandwich with too much pickle." "You never liked pickles." "I like pickles now. People change. Ask Mia. She briefed me." Eva picked up her tea when Silas set it down. Lemon steam hit her face. She blew across the surface. "I came to London for a course. Two days. I booked a hotel near Tottenham Court Road. I planned to see the National Gallery and go home." "You saw the gallery." "No. The queue ate the day. I walked to this bar because a taxi driver mentioned it. He said it had maps." "Silas collects maps like other men collect regrets." Silas set a biscuit tin on the bar and retreated to the bookshelf at the back wall. He leaned his weight on his left leg and pulled a thick volume from the third shelf. The shelf swung inward on silent hinges and opened onto a dark room. "Back room is warmer if you want privacy." Eva glanced at the open doorway. Aurora glanced at the phone face down on the bar. Aurora picked up her mug. Eva picked up her tea. Both mugs left rings on the bar. They carried tea through the doorway. The back room smelled of paper and old leather. A single table stood under a lamp with a green shade. Maps lined one wall and pinned photographs crowded another. Silas closed the bookshelf behind them with his right hand. The ring tapped wood. Eva sat across from Aurora. She wrapped both hands around her mug and hid the gold band with her thumbs. "Your mum asked after you in October." "She told me." "She told you what." "She told me you taught school in Cardiff and married Tom and had Mia. She told me in a voice like a weather report." Aurora traced the crescent scar on her left wrist with her right thumb. "She wanted me at Mia's christening." "I wanted you there. I wrote it on the invitation and scrubbed it out." "You scrubbed me out." "I scrubbed the sentence. 'Rory, come home.' I wrote it wrong." "What part." "Home. I wrote home like it still meant a house with a broken boiler and your mum's soup." Eva pulled her cardigan sleeves over her hands. "You left Cardiff with a bin bag and a train ticket." "I left Evan with a bin bag and a train ticket." The name landed on the table. Eva looked at the lamp shade. Green light pooled on her cheek. "You never told me he hit you." "I told you he raised his voice. You filled in the rest with jokes." "You let me fill it with jokes." "I let you keep a clean version. You had exams. You had your dad's van and a job at the museum. You had a life that did not need Evan in it." Aurora pressed her thumbnail into the scar. The skin whitened around the nail. "I changed my number. I sat on a bus to London and watched Cardiff shrink in the window. I wrote you a text and deleted it eleven times." "Eleven." "Eleven. The twelfth version said 'sorry.'" "Sorry for what." "For leaving you with him. For making you choose." Eva turned her mug in a slow circle. "I chose you every time. You made the choice for me." "Eva." "You do not get to say my name like a defense speech." "Fair." Aurora looked at the scar and at the empty space beside her mug where a phone had sat for years. "I work deliveries. I pay rent to a man who was MI6 and polishes glasses and limps around his own bar. I tell myself I chose this because law bored me. Law did not bore me. Evan bored me to death and I needed a new story." Eva stared at her. "You chose a story with a bike chain that snaps." "It snaps on schedule. I respect honesty." Eva laughed and coughed and covered her mouth with both hands. The gold band flashed under the lamp. "You sound like you." "You sound like a teacher. Sit down and learn something." "I learned pickles are a gateway." "Mia taught you that." "Mia taught me pickles and patience and how to sing 'Twinkle Twinkle' with hand actions. Tom taught me to sleep through sirens." Aurora leaned forward. The mug warmed her elbows. "Do you miss the gallery plan." "I miss the version of me who had time to want it. I keep a sketchpad in the kitchen drawer next to batteries and takeaway menus. Mia drew over page one." "Page one had what." "A woman with purple hair and a gallery with white walls. Mia gave her six arms." "Cats with six legs. Women with six arms. Your daughter has range." Eva looked at her phone on the table beside her. The screen stayed dark. "I have to leave in the morning. The course starts at nine. Tom left formula by the kettle and a note that says 'do not boil the kettle dry.'" "You boil kettles dry." "I boiled one dry in second year and set off the alarm in Cathays Terrace. You opened every window in January and blamed the landlord's ferret." "The ferret deserved blame. He ate my sock. He ate my essay notes once." "He ate your notes on tort. You wrote them again from memory and got a first." "I got a first because I was angry." "Anger writes fast." Aurora raised her mug. Her hand trembled around the ceramic. "I got angry and I ran. I ran to London and I rented a room above a bar and I told my parents I needed space. I told Eva I needed time. I told myself the same lie with different punctuation." Eva reached across the table. Her fingers stopped above Aurora's scar. "You cut that there." "I cut it on a bike in Cardiff before Evan. A pedal. I was twelve and stupid. You patched it with a plaster and a story about a shark." Eva touched the scar with one fingertip. "Shark got away. You got a scar. I got a lecture from your mum about tetanus." Aurora turned her wrist over and laughed once. "Jennifer Carter with a first aid kit. Brendan with a legal pad. You with a shark." Eva withdrew her hand and held her mug. "I wanted to call when Mia was born. I sat in the hospital corridor and dialed your old number. A man answered and said I had the wrong person." "That number died too." "Everything died. My band. My gallery plan. My purple hair. Your number. My sense of direction." "You have a daughter who sings with hand actions. That is not death." "You have a flat above a bar and a boss who polishes glasses with a signet ring. That is not death either." Silas knocked once on the bookshelf. The sound traveled through wood into the room. "Tea is cold in there." Eva stood. Her chair scraped. Aurora stood. She left her mug on the table. Steam had stopped rising. Eva picked up her phone from the bar in the main room when Silas swung the shelf open. The charger light glowed red beside her glass. She unplugged it and put it in her cardigan pocket. "Rory." Aurora waited by the door with rain dark on her jacket. "Stay for another tea. One more. Then I have to go." Eva set her empty mug down beside Aurora's mug. Her gold band clicked against ceramic. "You still drink it fast." Aurora lifted her mug. She drank the cold tea in one swallow and tasted lemon and old paper. "Do you have my new number." Eva looked at the phone in her pocket. "I have the old one. The man told me I had the wrong person." Aurora reached into her delivery bag for a pen. "Give me your hand." Eva held out her left hand. The gold band sat tight against her knuckle. Aurora wrote numbers on the back of Eva's hand with a blue pen from the delivery bag. The ink bled into skin lines. Eva stared at the numbers. "I wrote it on Tom's hand once when his phone died. He walked around with my number on his skin for a week." "Did he wash it off." "He kept it. It faded in the shower. He complained for days." Aurora capped the pen. She put the pen back in the delivery bag and zipped the pocket shut. "Call it." Eva looked at the numbers on her hand and at the door and at Aurora. "If I call it, will you answer when I am back in Cardiff and Mia wants a cat with six legs."
created_at"2026-11-11T11:27:40.02Z" 11/11/2026, 11:27:40 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2513
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2513
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"porcelain"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"trembled"
4"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences259
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2513
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount1085
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.95
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Prague1
Aurora32
Silas14
Eva26
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places
0"Raven"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.025
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2513
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences259
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs206
mean12.2
std8.9
cv0.729
sampleLengths
021
122
239
330
426
529
64
716
822
921
102
117
1210
1310
1414
1516
166
179
184
195
2012
215
2211
236
2411
2515
2611
2711
2811
2938
3018
313
3215
337
345
3517
3618
3717
381
3930
401
412
425
4315
442
452
4620
478
4812
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences259
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1088
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white against wet skin."
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.009191176470588236
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences259
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences259
mean9.7
std7
cv0.722
sampleLengths
021
122
28
37
424
514
616
77
812
97
1011
1118
124
138
148
1522
165
1716
182
197
2010
2110
229
235
2416
256
269
274
285
297
305
315
3211
336
3411
3515
3611
3711
383
398
4011
4111
427
439
446
4512
463
4715
487
495
43.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.25096525096525096
totalSentences259
uniqueOpeners65
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences125
matches
0"She twisted the hem of"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair stuck"
2"He set it back on"
3"Her hair ended at her"
4"His hazel eyes narrowed at"
5"He slid both toward her"
6"She plugged in her phone"
7"Her mouth opened."
8"She turned her head toward"
9"Her throat closed around a"
10"Her stool scraped the floor."
11"She grabbed Aurora around the"
12"Her hands stayed on Aurora's"
13"She looked at Aurora's jacket"
14"She stared at the phone"
15"Her fingers drummed a rhythm"
16"He dried a glass with"
17"Her phone lit up on"
18"She turned the phone face"
19"She blew across the surface."
ratio0.248
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences125
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
1"Water ran from her jacket"
2"A dark line spread beside"
3"She twisted the hem of"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"Maps covered the walls between"
7"Men in heavy coats stood"
8"A woman held a bicycle"
9"Silas favored his left leg"
10"His grey-streaked auburn hair stuck"
11"Aurora dumped the delivery bag"
12"The bag knocked a coaster"
13"Silas picked up the coaster."
14"He set it back on"
15"Silas filled a mug and"
16"Steam curled past his beard."
17"Aurora wrapped both hands around"
18"Aurora lifted the mug and"
19"The door opened."
ratio0.968
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.2496%