Run: 2026-11-11-01M75603KFDGDNRYG681Q4RT1C

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Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.006702
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory left the Golden Empress with the last delivery bag slung over one shoulder. Yu-Fei Cheung had locked the door and counted the cash register and waved her toward the street with a tired hand. Rain had soaked the pavement to a black shine. Bus fumes hung low over the road. Cold from the Thames cut through her coat. She pushed her staff keys into her coat pocket and felt the pendant shift against her palm. Heat spread through the crimson stone and up the silver chain. Heat had spread through it on the walk to the restaurant, on the stairs to the flat above Silas' bar, and through three sleepless nights in bed. Tonight heat pulled toward Richmond Park. Someone had left the pendant on her doorstep three days earlier in a black box with no card and no name. Silver chain. Stone the size of a thumbnail. Deep crimson color with a dim inner glow. Rory had carried the box to Eva, and Eva had turned the stone over in her fingers and told her to hand it to police. Rory had kept it in a coat pocket. Eva had warned her about men who left gifts and men who left traps. Rory had nodded and kept the pendant. She had solved puzzles with clean edges since school in Cardiff and kept that habit through her pre-law course at Cardiff University. She kept the pendant off her skin during shifts and close at night. "Lead me." Rory shouldered the delivery bag and cut past the bus stop. She crossed the road at a gap in traffic and headed for the park fence. The pendant warmed with each step north. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught on her coat cuff and she freed it with a tug. She thought of the childhood accident that left the scar and the fence at home in Cardiff and her mother, Jennifer, pressing a cloth to her wrist. She pushed the memory aside and kept her eyes on the tree line. No cars passed on the road behind her. She heard tires on wet asphalt and then no tires. Richmond Park spread black beyond the gate. She slipped through a side gap where the fence bent and branches clawed at her coat. Deer moved in the dark in sleek shapes and stopped and watched her with pale eyes. Six deer stood in the first open stretch. Rory kept her path straight and let the pendant pull her toward the old trees. Her bright blue eyes adjusted to the dark in stages. First came tree trunks. Then came grass. Then came the line of ancient oak standing stones at the edge of the clearing. Rough stone rose tall in a broken line. Moss clung to the north side of each stone. She stepped between two stones and the air changed against her skin. Cold replaced the mild night air. The cold hit her teeth. Wildflowers covered the ground in clumps—poppies and bluebells and white cow parsley thick for late season. Petals held dew in bright beads. A sweet smell rose from damp soil and crushed leaves. Rory crouched and touched a bluebell with one fingertip. The petal felt warm. She withdrew her hand and checked her fingers for sap. A dark line marked her skin. She wiped it on her jeans. She pulled her phone from her pocket and thumbed the screen awake. The time read 11:47. She locked the phone and unlocked it again. The time read 11:47. The delivery bag strap dug into her shoulder. She shifted it to her other shoulder and felt the pendant pulse against her sternum through her shirt. Warmth thumped in time with her pulse. She lifted the pendant clear and watched the crimson stone. The inner glow brightened and dimmed with each pulse. She thought of the habit her tutors drilled into her in Cardiff: list facts, test facts, discard wishes. Facts sat in her head in a row. Stones. Flowers. Cold air. A phone that refused time. The list gave her no comfort. "Who left you on my step?" Rory spoke to the pendant. Her voice sounded loud in the clearing and hung in the cold air. She held the pendant up toward the stones and waited with her mouth open. She turned in a slow circle and checked the stone line and the oak trunks and the dark between the trees. No path showed. No gate showed. She had entered between two stones and the way out had folded shut behind her. "You brought me here for a reason." The first sound came from the trees. Water dripped from leaf to leaf in a regular pattern. Plink. Plink. Plink. Rory scanned the trunks for a stream and found roots and fallen leaves and flowers with dew on each petal. No stream ran through the clearing. The dripping kept time with her pulse. Wind moved through the oak leaves overhead. The flowers on the ground held their shape while leaves above them shivered and rustled. She pressed her lips together and listened to the wind move through the leaves and leave the flowers alone. She walked ten paces across the flowers and counted each step under her breath. Ten steps pressed into soft soil and left dents in the petals. Her boot slid on a wet leaf. She stopped. An extra step landed on the grass behind her, half a beat late. Rory turned her head. The grass lay flat. No boot showed. She walked ten paces toward her starting point and counted the steps a second time. Ten steps went down. Eleven sounds came back to her ears. She stopped in the middle of the clearing. "Ten in. Eleven out." She slipped her staff keys between the fingers of her left hand. She scanned the grass for boot prints and found dents with folded petals and no soles. She checked the space behind her and the space behind the stones and the dark under the oaks. Her gaze kept returning to the same stretch of grass north of her position. A shape moved between two stones across the clearing. Tall. Thin. No features showed in her peripheral vision. Rory snapped her gaze toward it. Grass bent in a line under weight. No figure stood in the grass. She snapped her gaze toward the stones. The shape had gone. She checked the line of flowers for footprints and found deep dents with no prints inside them. The dents pointed toward her. She counted the dents. Eight dents ran in a straight line from the stones to the center of the clearing. She crossed to the nearest stone and pressed her palm flat against the rock. Cold soaked through her skin and into her wrist. The crescent scar throbbed under her sleeve in time with the pendant. She pulled her sleeve down over her hand and kept her palm on the stone. Moss gave under her fingers like a wet sponge. She ran her hand down the edge and felt carved lines under the weathered surface. The lines formed loops that tangled and stopped. She left the stone and wiped her hand on her jeans. "Come out from behind the stones." Her voice crossed the clearing and hit the far stones and returned from a different oak. She clapped once, sharp and loud in the cold air. One clap crossed the clearing. Two echoes answered, one from the north stones and one from the south trees. She clapped a second time and heard the second echo shift its position. The echo came from closer ground this time. Rory kept her hands at her sides and listened to the flowers. Not a petal moved. The echoes moved. She picked a loose stone from the soil and threw it toward the dark between the oaks. The stone hit a trunk with a dull knock. Leaf rustle followed the knock after a pause. She threw a second stone toward the opposite side of the clearing. Leaf rustle came before the knock this time. Rory stood with her keys tight between her fingers. "I heard that." Rory stood and listened to the wind in the oak leaves. Something in the dark moved with her throws. Or something moved on its own schedule and fed her a false order of events. The pendant burned against her sternum. Rory shoved her hand inside her shirt and closed her fingers around the hot stone. Heat reached through the silver chain and into her palm. The crimson glow lit the inside of her curled fingers. Her straight black hair hung damp around her face and dripped on her shoulders. Her breath misted in the cold air in white puffs. She watched each puff fade and listened to a matched puff come from the dark between the oaks. The matched puff hung in the air. "Breathe with me." Rory turned toward the gap between the stones where she had entered. Flowers covered the ground between her and the gap. She took one step north and heard two sets of steps in the flowers. She took a second step and heard the second set keep pace with her, half a beat late. She stopped. The second set took one more step in the flowers and stopped. She faced the dark between the oaks and held her keys high in her left hand. "Show yourself." Silence stretched across the clearing. A line of bluebells bent toward her across the flowers, petal by petal, in a slow wave. Rory lifted the pendant clear of her shirt with her right hand and stepped toward the gap between the stones.
created_at"2026-11-11T11:30:55.222Z" 11/11/2026, 11:30:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulse"
count4
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"echoes"
count2
6
word"echo"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"scanned"
3"weight"
4"throbbed"
5"echoes"
6"echo"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences156
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1612
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1570
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Cheung1
Thames1
Tonight1
Richmond2
Park2
Eva3
Cardiff4
University1
Jennifer1
Rory17
Cold4
Heat3
Plink3
persons
0"Cheung"
1"Eva"
2"Jennifer"
3"Rory"
4"Heat"
places
0"Thames"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Cardiff"
4"Cold"
globalScore0.959
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences124
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1612
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"kept that habit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean62
std43.88
cv0.708
sampleLengths
0120
1126
22
3110
4111
590
6121
76
874
97
1094
1193
124
1360
1490
1593
166
1785
1863
193
2034
2190
223
2383
242
2542
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs228
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences164
ratio0.006
matches
0"Wildflowers covered the ground in clumps—poppies and bluebells and white cow parsley thick for late season."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount123
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.008130081300813009
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean9.83
std5.61
cv0.571
sampleLengths
014
121
29
37
48
517
611
727
86
921
102
116
128
1325
148
1514
167
1722
1813
192
2011
2115
227
2319
2427
2513
268
2710
287
2916
3016
318
3215
3310
344
353
3615
378
389
3912
406
415
4216
436
4410
459
464
4710
486
496
43.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.32926829268292684
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners54
45.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences145
matches
0"Then came grass."
1"Then came the line of"
ratio0.014
87.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences145
matches
0"She pushed her staff keys"
1"She had solved puzzles with"
2"She kept the pendant off"
3"She crossed the road at"
4"She thought of the childhood"
5"She pushed the memory aside"
6"She heard tires on wet"
7"She slipped through a side"
8"Her bright blue eyes adjusted"
9"She stepped between two stones"
10"She withdrew her hand and"
11"She wiped it on her"
12"She pulled her phone from"
13"She locked the phone and"
14"She shifted it to her"
15"She lifted the pendant clear"
16"She thought of the habit"
17"Her voice sounded loud in"
18"She held the pendant up"
19"She turned in a slow"
ratio0.331
42.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences145
matches
0"Rory left the Golden Empress"
1"Yu-Fei Cheung had locked the"
2"Rain had soaked the pavement"
3"Bus fumes hung low over"
4"She pushed her staff keys"
5"Heat spread through the crimson"
6"Heat had spread through it"
7"Tonight heat pulled toward Richmond"
8"Someone had left the pendant"
9"Stone the size of a"
10"Rory had carried the box"
11"Rory had kept it in"
12"Eva had warned her about"
13"Rory had nodded and kept"
14"She had solved puzzles with"
15"She kept the pendant off"
16"Rory shouldered the delivery bag"
17"She crossed the road at"
18"The pendant warmed with each"
19"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
ratio0.834
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Eva had warned her about men who left gifts and men who left traps."
1"She thought of the childhood accident that left the scar and the fence at home in Cardiff and her mother, Jennifer, pressing a cloth to her wrist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.0896%