Run: 2026-11-11-01M756041BR9ZFQNQB97F81HAB

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Duration:
42.0s
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$0.008611
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Meta

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened and Lucien Moreau filled the frame with rain on his charcoal jacket and his ivory-handled cane planted on the landing boards. Curry steam rose from the restaurant below and mixed with wet wool and traffic noise from Brick Lane. Behind Rory, Eva's cramped one-bedroom flat held books in towers, scrolls in string bundles, and research notes in piles on every surface. Ptolemy the tabby crouched on a stack of paper with his tail hooked over the edge. Lucien's platinum hair lay slicked back and wet. One amber eye and one black eye held on Rory's face. His cane tip tapped the wood once. "Step aside, Rory." Rory braced her shoulder in the gap and pressed her palm to the door edge. Her straight black hair brushed her shoulders. Her bright blue eyes stayed on his mismatched pair. She counted the three deadbolts she had opened and counted the neighbors within earshot on Eva's landing. Ptolemy slipped past her ankle, rubbed his head against Lucien's shoe, and hissed at the cane. "Eva handed me a key in March. You forgot that part." Lucien reached past Rory and lifted a chipped mug from the sink unit by the door. He set the mug on top of a bundle of scrolls and nudged the door wider with his hip. Rory moved back to guard the table. Hall light struck her left wrist and showed the small crescent scar under the skin. Lucien looked at the scar and shut his mouth around a name. "You used that key in Marseille. You locked me in the safe house and left through the back." Rory's hand tightened on the table edge. Paper notes shifted under her fingers and one sheet slid to the floor. Ptolemy leapt from the stack, landed on the sheet, and dragged it toward the bookcase. Lucien kept his cane upright and kept his eyes on Rory. His black eye caught the hall bulb and lost the amber glint in the other eye. "I locked the door against men in the hall. You climbed out the window with my coat and my notes." Rory bent and snatched the sheet from Ptolemy's paws. The cat yowled and swatted her knuckles with soft claws. She straightened with the paper crumpled in her fist. Eva's handwriting covered the page in tight lines and a sketch of a gate with Avaros script under the arch. Lucien shifted his weight and the cane blade inside the ivory handle clicked against metal. "You left my name on a ledger. Avaros men read it. Evan read it." Lucien pulled a damp envelope from inside his jacket and dropped it on the scrolls beside the mug. Water spotted the paper and spread into the fibers. His tailored suit hung heavy on his shoulders and dripped onto Eva's rug. Rory stared at the envelope and kept the crumpled sheet in her fist. Ptolemy circled the envelope and thumped his tail against the mug. "I traded my name. The ledger carried Lucien Moreau. It carried no Carter." Rory opened the envelope with her thumbnail and shook out a folded card. A name and a Golden Empress address filled the card in block letters. She read the name twice. Yu-Fei Cheung's restaurant address sat at the top in red print. Lucien watched her read and held his cane across his body like a barrier. "My flat sits above Silas' bar. Go there." Lucien lifted the mug from the scrolls and peered inside at tea skin from Eva's morning brew. He set the mug down on the rug and missed the table by inches. Ptolemy swung a paw at the mug and slopped tea across the rug fibers. Lucien stepped back from the spill and kept his shoes off the wet patch. Rory watched the cat and kept her distance from the cane. "Eva called me before midnight, Rory. Ouvre la porte." Rory picked up Eva's phone from the table and checked the screen. No call log filled the screen. A note in Eva's handwriting sat under the phone and read: lock the door, feed the cat, mind the scrolls. Rory flipped the note over and found a second line: do not open for Lucien. She held the note up toward the hall light. "Eva wrote my orders. No opening for Lucien. You read fast for a man with a key." Lucien pressed his lips together and turned his cane handle in his grip. The thin blade slid a fraction from the shaft before he pushed it home with his thumb. The metal rang against the ivory. Rory stepped back toward the bookcase and knocked a paperback from the shelf with her elbow. The book dropped behind her feet and Ptolemy pounced on the cover. "A man took a scroll from Eva's table tonight. He tested the deadbolts with a card. He wanted the Ellis name." Rory's fingers went numb around the paperback. She set the book on the table and missed the edge. The book thumped onto the scrolls and scattered string bundles across the notes. Ptolemy chased a string bundle under the chair and came out with red yarn on his claws. Lucien watched her face and kept his cane still. "Ellis is my mother's name. You brought that man to Eva's door." Lucien set his cane against the bookcase and freed his hands. He opened the damp envelope wider and pulled out a second folded sheet. Avaros script covered the sheet in black ink and a red seal marked the corner. He laid the sheet beside the card and smoothed the fold with his palm. Rory leaned over the table and read the script she had studied with Eva through the winter. "I followed him from the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei's driver saw his face. I paid the driver for the name. The name led here." Rory grabbed the Golden Empress delivery bag from its hook by the sink. Grease marked the paper lining and a rubber band held a receipt to the strap. She had carried that bag through rain on Brick Lane and through Eva's doorway four nights in a row. The bag smelled of sesame oil and cardboard. Lucien tracked her hands. "You followed my route." Lucien shrugged and rainwater ran from his jacket cuff onto the rug. He flicked his wrist and the water spotted the scrolls. Rory lunged and shoved the delivery bag over the scroll bundle to shield the paper. Her sleeve caught on Lucien's wet cuff for a second. His suit fabric clung to his forearm and his black eye stayed fixed on her face. "Your blue jacket showed in the curry house window. Drivers stand out on this street." Rory pulled her sleeve free and stepped into the narrow space between the sink unit and the bookcase. The flat gave her no room to pace. Lucien turned sideways to fit through the gap and his shoulder brushed the bookcase spines. His chin cleared the top of her head by a few inches. Ptolemy threaded between their ankles and yowled at the ceiling. "You watched Eva's window from the street." Lucien reached past Rory for the Golden Empress cap on the hook. His arm brushed her shoulder and his suit sleeve left a wet streak on her top. Rory ducked under his arm and grabbed the cap. The hook swung against the wall and knocked a loose note to the floor. Ptolemy pounced on the note and pinned it with both front paws. "Avaros blood shows in bad light. I need a shadow and a cap gives me both." Rory held the cap out at arm's length. The red logo stood out against the black cotton. She tossed the cap toward Lucien and he caught it against his chest. He pulled it low over his platinum hair and hair pushed out at the sides. Rory stared at the crooked logo. Lucien pulled the cap straight with one hand and kept the cane in the other. "Wear the cap. Drivers wear caps. Nobody studies a driver." Lucien tugged the cap brim down and his amber eye narrowed under the shadow. Rory stepped close and reached for the cap strap at his jaw. Her left wrist rose into the hall light and the crescent scar showed white against her skin. Lucien caught her wrist between thumb and fingers and held it still for a beat. His grip stayed firm and his black eye dropped to the scar. Rory yanked her hand back and stepped into the bookcase. "Cardiff. A bike, a river wall, and a cut you hid under a bracelet for years." Rory backed into the bookcase and a row of spines jabbed her shoulder blades. She rubbed her wrist with her other hand and squeezed hard enough to leave marks. Lucien let go of the cap strap and dropped his hand to his side. Ptolemy wound around Rory's ankles and begged for food with a loud yowl. The cat's noise filled the cramped room and pushed both humans to look down. "Eva told you that story. She tells you everything I hide from her." Lucien crouched and opened the cupboard under the sink. He took out a cat food tin and a bowl and set the bowl on the floor. Ptolemy abandoned Rory's ankles and attacked the food. Lucien stood and brushed cat hair from his suit trousers. Rory folded her arms and watched the cat eat. "Eva tells me enough to keep me fed and clothed. She charged me for the cat food in March." Rory grabbed Eva's waxed jacket from the door hook and threw it at Lucien's chest. He caught the jacket against his cane arm and held it bunched in one fist. She pointed at the cane and then at his charcoal jacket. "Leave the cane. Avaros men know the ivory handle. Leave the suit. Take the waxed jacket." Lucien draped Eva's waxed jacket over his shoulders and shrugged out of the charcoal jacket underneath. He folded the charcoal jacket and set it on the chair under the scrolls. Demon-dark markings traced his collarbone in thin lines. Rory's eyes dropped to the lines and snapped back to his face. His black eye darkened and filled the socket for a second before amber returned. "My father opened doors in Avaros. My mother closed them in Marseille. I stand in the gap." Rory shoved the delivery bag into his free hand. The bag strap cut into his palm and he adjusted his grip. She pointed toward the window over the sink and toward the back wall where the one-bedroom door stood shut. Eva's flat gave them one front door and a kitchen window above the curry house roof. Rory tapped the window latch with her knuckle. "Yu-Fei sends drivers to the curry house at ten. Kitchen staff leave the alley door on the latch. You walk out with my bag. Hands empty. Eyes down." Lucien tested the bag weight and shifted the cane to his other hand. He looked at the window latch and then at Rory. Rain tapped the glass in a fast rhythm. Ptolemy finished the food and headbutted Lucien's shin. Lucien reached down and scratched the cat behind the ears. The cat leaned into his hand and purred against his suit trousers. "And you stay here with the scroll copy under the cat." Rory snatched the Avaros sheet and slid it into the delivery bag front pocket. She tucked the card beside the sheet and folded the pocket flap over both. Ptolemy jumped onto the chair and sat on the charcoal jacket. Lucien watched the cat crush the jacket lapel and kept his mouth flat. Rory pointed at the cat with two fingers. "Ptolemy guards paper better than you guard a room." Lucien pulled the cap low and yanked the waxed jacket zip to his throat. His platinum hair escaped at the sides and fell across his amber eye. Rory reached up and pushed the hair back under the cap with her fingertips. Her fingers brushed his temple and the damp skin there. He stayed still and held the bag strap tight. Kettle steam thinned past them and Ptolemy purred against the jacket on the chair and rain drummed the glass. "Laila." Rory's hand dropped from his temple and hit the bookcase edge. She stepped back and knocked a stack of notes loose. Paper slid down her back and onto the rug. Ptolemy leapt from the chair and chased a sheet across the floor. Lucien set the delivery bag on the table and released the strap. His hand flexed open and shut at his side. "Use Rory. Laila left on the Marseille train in your coat." Lucien pressed his lips together and his mismatched eyes stayed on Rory's face. Rory folded her arms over her chest and covered the scar on her left wrist with her right hand. Ptolemy dragged the sheet under the table and thumped his tail against Lucien's shoe. The mug on the rug kept a tea stain on the fibers and the Avaros sheet stayed folded inside the delivery bag pocket. "Rory. Fair enough." Rory turned to the front door and reached for the first deadbolt. The metal tongue slid into the frame with a click. Ptolemy lifted his head from the charcoal jacket and stared at the door. Lucien held the delivery bag in one hand and the cane in the other and kept his eyes on Rory's hand at the second lock. Rain drummed the landing window and curry steam pushed through the gap under the door.
created_at"2026-11-11T11:30:55.667Z" 11/11/2026, 11:30:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2265
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2265
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"charged"
4"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences149
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences177
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2265
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
39.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions126
wordCount1900
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien38
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Rory42
Eva12
Ptolemy18
Avaros4
Golden3
Empress3
Cheung1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Cheung"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.395
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences147
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2265
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences177
matches
0"carried that bag"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean39.74
std27.67
cv0.696
sampleLengths
0106
13
264
311
469
518
662
720
863
914
1064
1113
1256
138
1470
159
1662
1717
1864
1921
2057
2112
2270
2323
2459
254
2663
2715
2863
297
3063
3116
3266
3310
3480
3516
3670
3713
3853
3919
4041
4116
4264
4317
4464
4528
4661
4711
4860
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs299
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences177
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.007349081364829396
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences177
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
74.33% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences177
mean12.8
std4.3
cv0.336
sampleLengths
024
118
222
316
48
511
67
73
815
97
109
1117
1216
1311
1416
1519
167
1715
1812
1918
207
2113
2215
2311
2416
2520
269
2710
289
2920
3015
3114
3218
339
3413
3513
3611
3713
3813
3913
405
4111
4214
438
4417
4514
4614
4714
4811
499
48.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.1977401129943503
totalSentences177
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences149
matches
0"His cane tip tapped the"
1"Her straight black hair brushed"
2"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
3"She counted the three deadbolts"
4"He set the mug on"
5"His black eye caught the"
6"She straightened with the paper"
7"His tailored suit hung heavy"
8"She read the name twice."
9"He set the mug down"
10"She held the note up"
11"She set the book on"
12"He opened the damp envelope"
13"He laid the sheet beside"
14"She had carried that bag"
15"He flicked his wrist and"
16"Her sleeve caught on Lucien's"
17"His suit fabric clung to"
18"His chin cleared the top"
19"His arm brushed her shoulder"
ratio0.255
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount146
totalSentences149
matches
0"The door opened and Lucien"
1"Curry steam rose from the"
2"Ptolemy the tabby crouched on"
3"Lucien's platinum hair lay slicked"
4"His cane tip tapped the"
5"Rory braced her shoulder in"
6"Her straight black hair brushed"
7"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
8"She counted the three deadbolts"
9"Ptolemy slipped past her ankle,"
10"Lucien reached past Rory and"
11"He set the mug on"
12"Rory moved back to guard"
13"Hall light struck her left"
14"Lucien looked at the scar"
15"Rory's hand tightened on the"
16"Paper notes shifted under her"
17"Ptolemy leapt from the stack,"
18"Lucien kept his cane upright"
19"His black eye caught the"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences115
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9620%