Run: 2026-11-11-01M7561RHTZ4NG2P3TTAF1CNRW

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Duration:
24.6s
Cost:
$0.005602
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn ducked under the tape and stepped onto the platform at the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Water dripped through a cracked ceiling and struck the rails in a thin rhythm. Her torch beam crossed cracked tiles, a fallen sign, and a body beyond the yellow line. Her five-foot-nine frame filled the beam's edge. Closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair sat tight against her skull. Brown eyes narrowed against dust. A sharp jaw caught light from a work lamp. Her worn leather watch knocked the handrail as she moved with military precision toward the corpse. Eva Kowalski knelt beside the corpse with a satchel open at her knees. Books crowded the satchel and pressed hard against leather sides. Curly red hair spilled over her forehead. Round glasses slid down her freckled nose. Green eyes tracked the torch beam. She tucked hair behind her left ear and pushed the glasses up with one finger. A British Museum archive pass hung from her coat pocket beside a notebook full of sigil rubbings. "Veil Market, Detective. He carried a bone token in his fist. A trader cut him for the token." Quinn crouched on the opposite side of the body and pulled on gloves. The man lay face down in a dark coat. His right hand clutched a carved bone token against his chest. Blood pooled under his torso and spread across cracked tiles in a black sheen. A small brass compass sat in dust beside his head. Green patina furred the brass casing. A Shade artisan etched protective sigils across the compass face. The needle pointed down through the platform concrete. "Show me a wound." Eva lifted the coat hem with two fingers and exposed a tear in the coat fabric over the man's left ribs. Blood caked the tear and stiffened the outer cloth. Her finger tapped the tear. "Knife cut. He bled out here. The market moved on the full moon and left the station empty. A trader killed him after the crowd left." Quinn slid her pen under the coat and parted the fabric. The man's sweater underneath stayed dry. Skin under the sweater stayed whole. No cut broke the skin. Blood coated the outside of the coat and never touched the lining. Blood dried in a hard patch on the sleeve cuff. The cuff itself showed no tear and no puncture. "Blood stayed outside his coat. No wound sits under that tear." Eva shook her head and tapped the coat tear with one nail. Her glasses slipped and she caught them against her nose. "He wore the coat open. Blood soaked through and missed the lining." Quinn ran her thumb over the coat buttons. Someone buttoned every button from collar to waist. The coat closed flat across the chest. The tear sat under the second button and aligned with the buttonhole. Blood smeared the buttonhole edge and never reached the sweater. "He wore it buttoned. Blood never touched skin." Eva rammed her finger against the compass casing. Her satchel thumped her knee. She pulled a rubbing from her notebook and held sigils up to the torch. Her master of Ancient History from Oxford never covered Shade work like this. Restricted archives at the British Museum held three plates with the same sigil ring. "Compass pulled down to a rift. Trader stepped through it after the cut. Market gate stood at the tunnel mouth on the full moon." Quinn stood and walked the platform in a straight line to the tunnel gate. Staff chained the gate and kept the key in the duty office. Dust coated the chain in an even sheet. Dust coated the padlock in an even sheet. No boot broke that sheet. Her torch swept back across the platform. One set of boot prints crossed the dust between gate and body. No second set followed that path. No set returned to the gate. "Killer left no prints. Killer broke no dust on the chain." Eva pointed her torch at the tunnel mouth and then at the compass. Her mouth flattened. She pushed her glasses up and stared at the dust sheet on the chain. "Rift took him. He stepped through the rift beside the body." Quinn crouched beside the prints and matched tread against the dead man's boots. The prints repeated the same heel bar and the same worn toe groove. Print length matched his boot length to the thumb width. His soles stayed clean. No blood marked his soles. No blood marked the print edges. The prints straddled the blood pool and continued past it toward the body. Blood lay over dust beside the prints and never inside them. "His own boots made those prints. Blood fell after he walked past." Eva leaned back on her heels and gripped her satchel strap. Her freckles stood out in the torch glare. She shook her head at the prints and at the pool. "So he staged his own death? Come off it, Quinn. He bled on the platform and died." Quinn lifted the man's left wrist and felt the joint. Rigor stiffened the elbow at a sharp angle. Cold bit through her glove. Purple pooling discolored the back of his neck and the knuckles of his raised hand. Pooling gathered in skin against the ground. The man lay face down and his front pressed the tiles. Pooling on his back told another story. His back had pressed the ground for hours. Her worn leather watch showed 2:17. The second hand ticked backward one notch and then resumed its march. "He lay on his back for hours. Someone turned him face down later." Eva jerked her head up. Hair fell across her glasses. She shoved it behind her left ear and stared at the man's back. Her mouth tightened. She pressed the notebook against her satchel and shook her head. "Rift flipped him. Rift pressure rolls a body over. Your clique theory falls apart. No crew staged this." Quinn turned the torch on the compass. Blood formed a thin ring around the compass in the dust. The ring measured no wider than a dinner plate. No splatter marked the pillars. No arc marked the tiles beyond the ring. Blood in the ring lay black and flat. Blood under the man's torso lay black and flat. The compass needle held straight down. The sigils on the compass face matched the sigil ring in Eva's rubbing. "Needle points to the nearest rift. Rift sits under the platform. He died above it." Quinn rested her palm on the platform concrete beside the ring. Cracks formed a circle under the body and compass. The cracks radiated from a point under the compass. Dust inside the cracks stayed clean. The bone token in the man's fist felt warm through her glove. Bone tokens from the Veil Market felt cold to the touch. Warmth rose from the concrete through the token and into her fingers. "Token stayed warm. Concrete stayed warm. Rift sits under us." Quinn pressed her thumb into her watch strap. DS Morris died three years ago on a case with no clean explanation. Police buried the file and sealed the room. Quinn kept the watch Morris gave her and kept the file in her head. No supernatural talk in the station had ever satisfied her. She stared at the coat tear and the dry sweater under it. "You think the clique planted him? They run this market and plant bodies for sport?" Quinn checked the coat tear with her pen. The tear edges bent outward. A knife through a worn coat left edges bent inward. Outward edges pointed to a cut after death or a cut on a table before dressing. The dry sweater and dry lining ruled out a cut through a buttoned coat on a living man. The clean soles ruled out a walk through his own blood. The back pooling ruled out death face down on the tiles. The compass ring ruled out a random spill. "He never bled here."
created_at"2026-11-11T11:31:49.44Z" 11/11/2026, 11:31:49 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"aligned"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"aligned"
2"measured"
3"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1330
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1101
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Blood"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Kowalski1
British2
Museum2
Shade2
Ancient1
History1
Oxford1
Eva8
Veil1
Market1
Morris2
Quinn12
Blood9
Dust3
persons
0"Kowalski"
1"Museum"
2"Eva"
3"Market"
4"Morris"
5"Quinn"
6"Blood"
places
0"British"
1"Oxford"
2"Veil"
3"Dust"
globalScore0.955
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1330
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences130
matches
0"broke that sheet"
1"followed that path"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean38
std28.96
cv0.762
sampleLengths
093
175
218
381
44
535
626
759
811
922
1012
1145
128
1354
1424
1578
1611
1730
1811
1975
2012
2130
2217
2389
2413
2537
2618
2776
2815
2970
3010
3165
3215
3387
344
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1105
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pressed hard against leather"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.007239819004524887
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018099547511312218
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
99.70% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean10.23
std4.08
cv0.399
sampleLengths
017
114
216
37
49
55
69
716
813
910
107
117
126
1315
1417
1518
1613
179
1811
1914
2010
216
2210
238
244
2521
269
275
2826
2911
306
316
325
3312
3410
359
3611
3712
3810
3912
408
418
427
4312
4410
458
468
475
4814
4913
48.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners45
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair sat"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences113
matches
0"Her torch beam crossed cracked"
1"Her five-foot-nine frame filled the"
2"Her worn leather watch knocked"
3"She tucked hair behind her"
4"His right hand clutched a"
5"Her finger tapped the tear."
6"Her glasses slipped and she"
7"Her satchel thumped her knee."
8"She pulled a rubbing from"
9"Her master of Ancient History"
10"Her torch swept back across"
11"Her mouth flattened."
12"She pushed her glasses up"
13"His soles stayed clean."
14"Her freckles stood out in"
15"She shook her head at"
16"His back had pressed the"
17"Her worn leather watch showed"
18"She shoved it behind her"
19"Her mouth tightened."
ratio0.195
48.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences113
matches
0"Quinn ducked under the tape"
1"Water dripped through a cracked"
2"Her torch beam crossed cracked"
3"Her five-foot-nine frame filled the"
4"Brown eyes narrowed against dust."
5"A sharp jaw caught light"
6"Her worn leather watch knocked"
7"Eva Kowalski knelt beside the"
8"Books crowded the satchel and"
9"She tucked hair behind her"
10"A British Museum archive pass"
11"Quinn crouched on the opposite"
12"The man lay face down"
13"His right hand clutched a"
14"Blood pooled under his torso"
15"A small brass compass sat"
16"A Shade artisan etched protective"
17"The needle pointed down through"
18"Eva lifted the coat hem"
19"Blood caked the tear and"
ratio0.823
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.6152%