Run: 2026-11-11-01M7567WWWA074927FM519BW6K

Run Details

Duration:
30.5s
Cost:
$0.007318
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on Lucien Moreau with rain in his hair and blood on his cuff. Water ran from his charcoal coat and darkened Eva's mat. His ivory-handled cane tapped the step outside the flat on Brick Lane. Curry smoke rose through the floorboards from the restaurant below. Books leaned in towers behind Rory. Scrolls filled the shelves. Research notes covered the kitchen table from end to end. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, shot past Rory's ankles, planted his paws on the mat, and yowled at the cane. Rory gripped the door edge. Her straight black hair dripped onto her shoulders. Her bright blue eyes met amber in one of Lucien's eyes and black in the other. "Move, ma chérie. Rain brings witnesses." Rory kept her shoulder in the gap. The third deadbolt had taken her full minute to throw. Her left wrist rested against the frame, and the small crescent scar there pulled tight under her skin. She had cleaned that scar with Eva's tincture and cursed Lucien's name under her breath for a week. London rain hammered the awning across the street. It hammered the curry house sign. It hammered the hood of a black cab that idled with its lights off. At five foot six, Rory stood five inches short of Lucien. "Eight months, Luc. You picked eight months and a storm to knock on Eva's door. Four languages and you pick lies in all of them." Lucien lifted his cane and laid the ivory handle across the gap like a bar. Water dripped from his chin onto his tie. His platinum hair fell loose across his forehead and lost its slicked-back shape. His tailored suit clung to his shoulders. Blood spread through the cuff at his left wrist and met the rainwater in a thin pink line. He held the other hand steady. The hand with the blood shook against the cane. "Avaros hounds tracked my blood to the Golden Empress. They tracked your delivery bag from Yu-Fei Cheung's kitchen to the flat above Silas' bar. Eva's wards break the trail. Her door breaks the scent." Rory looked past his shoulder at Brick Lane. The street stood empty except for rain and trash cans and a leaning poster for a boxing match. No hounds showed their faces. Ash coated her tongue instead. Ozone stung her nose. The smell had followed her through Marseille docks and Cardiff rain and a London alley behind the Golden Empress. Ptolemy circled Lucien's shoes and hissed. The cat backed toward Rory's ankles with his tail high. "Cross the threshold and Eva's scrolls lock demon blood inside the flat. The ward holds until dawn. It holds until your blood cools. Pick a different hiding place, Frenchman." Lucien lowered the cane. He stepped over the mat with his shoes wet. The scroll above the lintel flared gold. The hall light flickered once and steadied. Three deadbolts shot home on their own. The sound rang through the books. The window rattled in its frame. Ptolemy yowled and bolted for the kitchen. "Your ward made the choice. I take the couch. I take the floor. I take the space between the bookshelf and the door. Your rules, Rory." The hallway gave them six inches of passing room. Lucien peeled off his coat and draped it over a stack of research notes. Water soaked through the paper. He laid his cane across the books with the ivory handle toward the wall. The blade inside the cane clicked against a spine. He kept his hands in view. He kept his eyes on Ptolemy, who had changed tactics and rubbed his head against Lucien's ankle. The tabby purred loud enough to fill the hall. "Ptolemy votes for fish and warm ankles. Do not read loyalty into a cat with no standards." Rory moved into the kitchen and filled the kettle at the sink. Steam had fogged the window over the stove. The table held no clear space for mugs. She cleared a patch with her hip and pushed a pile of Eva's notes onto the floor. A scroll rolled under the cupboard. Lucien followed her into the kitchen and stopped at the table's edge. His coat dripped onto the linoleum. His blood dripped with it. "Evan paid for your address at Cardiff. A barrister's son buys leverage. I bought the address back from him in a London lockup." Rory set the kettle on the stove with a clatter that shook the mugs. Her jaw tightened. She pressed her palm flat on the table and left it there. Ptolemy jumped onto a chair and watched Lucien's hands. "You sold my name to a broker in Marseille first. You fed the underworld a true name and called the lie protection." Lucien spread his empty hands on the table. Rainwater pooled under his fingers. The cut across his left palm showed white through the blood. He did not wipe it. He looked at the crescent scar on Rory's left wrist and kept his gaze there for a long beat. She curled her fingers around the kettle handle. Heat climbed into her palm. She kept her hand on the handle. "I traded a false name. Malphora. The broker chased a ghost across France. Evan chased you through Cardiff and London." Rory lifted the kettle before the water boiled. She poured into two chipped mugs and spilled a line of tea across the notes. Lucien reached for a towel. She snatched the towel from the rail and held it against her chest. Steam rose between them and thinned the light from the bulb over the stove. The bulb hummed. The curry smell from below turned sharper and hotter. "My father wanted a human witness for a debt in Avaros. He marked your scar in his ledger. I removed the mark. I left the dock in Marseille before his men found the stamp." Rory set one mug in front of Lucien and kept the other in her own hand. She wrapped both hands around the ceramic. Her shoulders shook from cold or temper. She drank and burned her tongue. Lucien watched her throat work. He lifted his mug and set it down untouched. Ptolemy leapt onto the table, knocked a scroll to the floor, and sat on Eva's notes. "Cardiff wall. You fell and bled on Eva's carpet. You apologized to the carpet while Eva laughed through her teeth. You still tell that story wrong." "Eva tells clients and charity cases everything about me. You listened like a man with an invoice." Lucien's mouth twitched. He reached past Ptolemy for the towel, and Rory stepped back against the cupboard. Books crowded the shelf beside her head. Her hair brushed a spine. Lucien braced one arm on the shelf beside her shoulder. His hand opened flat on the wood. His sleeve dripped onto her forearm. A drop of rainwater from his hair landed on her collarbone and tracked down inside her T-shirt. Her chest locked mid-breath. She stared at his black eye and his amber eye and refused to blink. "I stood across from Silas' bar for three nights after Evan broke your window. I watched your light upstairs. I did not knock. I did not speak." "Three nights. No speech about protection. No invoice. No broker talk. A record for you, Luc." Lucien dropped his arm from the shelf. He turned his bleeding palm up on the table. The cut had opened deeper than the cuff suggested. Rory pulled a tin of gauze from the junk drawer and set it beside his hand. She wound the gauze around his palm over and under his fingers. Her thumbs pressed the tail of the bandage flat. His other hand lay beside hers on the table, fingers spread, knuckles white around nothing. Steam fogged the window. The kettle clicked off. "Je n'ai pas de facture pour toi, Rory. I have nothing to sell you tonight." "Tonight you answer in plain English. No French escape hatch. No fixer patter. Ask and answer, counselor style. Start with Marseille." Ptolemy yowled at the deadbolts and scraped the door with his claws. The sound outside the window changed pitch. Rain struck the glass hard, then eased. The gold light under the lintel scroll faded to a dull glow. Lucien flexed his bandaged hand. The gauze spotted pink at the center. Rory stepped around the table and blocked the hallway with her body. The cramped flat left no room for a wide stance. Lucien stayed where he stood, cane in reach, coat dripping, eyes on her face. "Ask, then. Ask the question you carried out of Cardiff in your teeth." "Did you kiss me on the dock in Marseille because you wanted me, or because a witness needed a reason to live?"
created_at"2026-11-11T11:35:10.499Z" 11/11/2026, 11:35:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1458
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1065
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien20
Moreau1
Eva5
Brick2
Lane2
Rory15
Marseille1
Cardiff1
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy8
Water3
Steam3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Water"
6"Steam"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
globalScore0.561
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1458
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"cleaned that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean45.56
std29.79
cv0.654
sampleLengths
0115
16
292
325
476
534
675
729
853
926
1083
1117
1274
1323
1438
1522
1668
1720
1867
1934
2066
2126
2217
2387
2427
2516
2685
2715
2821
2986
3013
3122
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1068
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.010299625468164793
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean11.22
std6.38
cv0.569
sampleLengths
016
110
212
310
46
54
610
718
85
98
1016
116
127
1310
1418
1518
168
176
1814
1911
2025
2115
228
2313
247
2518
266
279
2834
298
3018
315
325
334
3419
356
3610
3729
384
399
407
417
427
436
446
457
4626
479
4814
495
44.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3153846153846154
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences112
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane tapped the"
1"Her straight black hair dripped"
2"Her bright blue eyes met"
3"Her left wrist rested against"
4"She had cleaned that scar"
5"It hammered the curry house"
6"It hammered the hood of"
7"His platinum hair fell loose"
8"His tailored suit clung to"
9"He held the other hand"
10"He stepped over the mat"
11"He laid his cane across"
12"He kept his hands in"
13"He kept his eyes on"
14"She cleared a patch with"
15"His coat dripped onto the"
16"His blood dripped with it."
17"Her jaw tightened."
18"She pressed her palm flat"
19"He did not wipe it."
ratio0.348
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences112
matches
0"The door opened on Lucien"
1"Water ran from his charcoal"
2"His ivory-handled cane tapped the"
3"Curry smoke rose through the"
4"Books leaned in towers behind"
5"Scrolls filled the shelves."
6"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, shot past"
7"Rory gripped the door edge."
8"Her straight black hair dripped"
9"Her bright blue eyes met"
10"Rory kept her shoulder in"
11"The third deadbolt had taken"
12"Her left wrist rested against"
13"She had cleaned that scar"
14"London rain hammered the awning"
15"It hammered the curry house"
16"It hammered the hood of"
17"Lucien lifted his cane and"
18"Water dripped from his chin"
19"His platinum hair fell loose"
ratio0.964
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He kept his eyes on Ptolemy, who had changed tactics and rubbed his head against Lucien's ankle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9420%