Run: 2026-11-11-01M75MZFPSMKNJY4NKZVXQ1Q1P

Run Details

Duration:
44.7s
Cost:
$0.021754
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the tarmac of Camden High Street, fracturing the amber glare of the sodium streetlights into jagged ribbons across the puddles. Harlow Quinn pumped her arms, her boots kicking up dirty spray with each measured stride. Water plastered her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her skull and trickled down the rigid line of her sharp jaw. Eighteen years in the Met hadn't dulled her lungs, though the damp cold bit deep into her chest. Twenty yards ahead, Tomás Herrera vaulted a slick metal bollard. His heavy canvas medical bag slapped against his hip, throwing off his centre of gravity. He stumbled on the wet cobblestones, catching himself with one olive-skinned hand against the brick wall of a shuttered pub before surging forward into a narrow alleyway. "Herrera! Stop! Police!" Her voice cut through the drumming downpour, crisp and authoritative. Tomás didn't check his pace. He glanced back once, rainwater dripping from his short, dark curls, warm brown eyes wide beneath the shadow of a bruised sky. The silver Saint Christopher medallion bounced wildly against his collarbones, having slipped free from beneath his soaked collar. Harlow pivoted into the alley, her trench coat flaring behind her. She kept her elbows tucked, movements stripped of wasted energy. A rusted commercial bin blocked half the passage. Tomás shoved it into her path as he passed, the metal screeching against wet stone. Harlow didn't break stride. She planted a boot on the lower rim of the bin, launched herself over the slick plastic lid, and hit the ground on the far side, absorbing the impact in her knees. The worn leather watch on her left wrist caught the dim glow of an overhead security lamp—02:14. Backup was at least six minutes out, tangled in late-night Soho traffic miles behind them, back near the green neon glow of Silas' bar where she had first spotted him slipping out the rear exit. "You're out of road, Tommy! That way leads straight to the canal wall!" Ahead, the brick passage terminated in a chain-link fence bordering a derelict stretch of railway property. Tomás skidded to a halt, chest heaving, mist blooming from his parted lips. For a second, he looked trapped. His hand went to his medical bag, fingers tightening around the strap, pushing up his wet sleeve to reveal the pale, jagged ridge of a knife scar running along his left forearm. Harlow slowed to a brisk walk, closing the distance, keeping her hands clear of her coat pockets, palms open but ready. "Drop the bag, Tomás. Keep your hands where I can see them. We just want a chat about the unlicensed pharmaceuticals you've been pulling out of the Nest." Tomás backed away from the canal fence, his boots scraping over broken glass and sodden cardboard. He shook his head, water flying from his curls. "You don't know what you're chasing, Detective. Turn around. Go back to your desk." "Not tonight. Step away from the wall." Instead of complying, Tomás lunged sideways toward an alcove choked with dead ivy and rusted scaffolding. An iron gate sat recessed into the brickwork—the sealed entrance to an abandoned Camden Tube station, bricked up and forgotten since the fifties. Except the padlock hung open, sliced clean through, the heavy metal warm enough to hiss as raindrops struck it. "Wait—" Tomás wrenched the iron lattice wide, squeezed through the gap, and slammed it shut. The latch didn't catch, bouncing back an inch. Darkness yawned beyond the bars, exhaling a draft that smelled nothing like London's sewers. Cinnamon, ozone, wet copper, and charred sage rolled out into the alley, thick enough to coat Harlow's tongue. Harlow reached the gate in three strides. She grabbed the cold iron, pulling it open. Pitch-black concrete stairs descended into the earth, slick with moss and tracked rainwater. Halfway down the first flight, a faint, sickly violet light pulsed, illuminating the tiled curve of a subterranean pedestrian tunnel. Tomás's footsteps echoed off the glazed ceramic walls, rapid and descending. Harlow pulled her tactical torch from her belt and clicked it on. The white LED beam sliced down the stairwell, catching discarded needles and sodden crisp packets on the top steps, then nothing but clean, swept stone further down. She touched the radio clipped to her lapel. Static hissed from the speaker—not the dead air of thick concrete blocking a signal, but a rhythmic, crackling hum that made her back teeth ache. She clicked the channel dial. The static rose in pitch, whining like an overloaded transformer before dying completely. The small green power LED flickered twice and went dark. Her jaw tightened. Three years ago, in an empty warehouse in Rotherhithe, DS Morris's radio had died with that exact frequency whine right before the lights went out. Right before Harlow had found him staring at ceiling rafters with ruptured eardrums and a stopped heart, no marks on his body, a case file buried in bureaucratic concrete by superiors who refused to meet her eyes. Below, a heavy door groaned on oiled hinges. Voices drifted up the shaft—not the hushed whispers of junkies squatting in the dark, nor the rowdy shouts of an illegal rave. Hundreds of voices murmured in a low, thrumming cadence, accompanied by the clink of glass and the sharp hiss of a brazier. Harlow descended the steps, keeping her back to the curved tile wall, torch held high in a modified tactical grip. At the bottom of the flight, the tunnel dog-legged to the right, opening onto the old ticket hall. She killed her torch and pressed her shoulder against the corner brickwork, peering around the edge. The ticket hall wasn't abandoned. Braziers wrought from blackened iron burned with smokeless, blue-white flames, casting long, dancing shadows across cracked mosaic floors. Stalls constructed from salvaged timber, velvet drapes, and tarnished brass crammed every square foot between the old wooden kiosks. Dozens of figures moved through the narrow aisles. Some wore tailored Mayfair overcoats; others wore tattered oilskins or heavy hooded cloaks that hid their faces entirely. Thirty feet ahead, a makeshift checkpoint blocked the gap between two dismantled turnstiles. Two burly men in butcher's aprons stood beside a podium made of stacked railway sleepers. Neither carried a visible firearm, yet the air around their shoulders shimmered like heat haze above summer asphalt. Tomás stood at the turnstile, chest heaving, rain dripping from his coat onto the dry flagstones. He dug into his jeans pocket and slapped something small and pale onto the dark wood of the sleeper. Even from thirty feet, Harlow saw the yellow-white curve of carved bone—a circular token etched with jagged, interlocking lines. One of the guards picked up the bone token, rolled it across his knuckles, and held it toward the blue flame of the nearest brazier. The bone didn't cast a shadow; instead, a faint crimson vein pulsed inside the marrow. "Cutting it close tonight, medic," the guard rumbled, his voice vibrating through the soles of Harlow's boots. "Full moon's in two hours. Market packs up at dawn." "Just let me through, Viktor. I need nightshade distillate and three vials of binding salt before you lot shift across the river." Tomás looked back over his shoulder, his dark eyes scanning the shadowed mouth of the stairwell where Harlow stood concealed. His hand hovered near the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat. "Someone's trailing me. Met detective. Short hair, grey coat. If she comes down those stairs, turn her around. Don't hurt her, just—don't let her past the gate." Viktor's heavy brow lowered. He pocketed the bone token and shifted his weight, stepping half a pace toward the tunnel mouth. Beside him, the second guard reached beneath his butcher's apron and drew out a baton made of dark, knotted wood banded in dull silver. Across the nearest stalls, heads began to turn. A woman rearranging jars of luminous, shifting grey powder froze, her eyes catching the blue firelight—pupils vertical and thin as sewing needles, locked directly onto the shadows hiding Harlow. Tomás slipped past the turnstiles, vanishing into the dense press of velvet drapes and strange, spiced smoke toward the lower platforms. Harlow flattened her spine against the damp tiles, her pulse hammering a steady, disciplined beat against the leather strap of her watch. She had no warrant, a dead radio, no firearm, and no bone token. Only a retractable police baton clipped to her hip, eighteen years of street instincts screaming that the rules of engagement had just evaporated, and the cold memory of DS Morris lying on a Rotherhithe floor. Viktor took another heavy step toward the stairs, the silver bands on his partner's wooden club humming a low, metallic note in the damp air. "Oi," Viktor called out, his voice echoing up the tiled shaft. "Step out into the light, copper, or take yourself back up to the rain while your legs still work." Harlow's fingers brushed the cold steel of her baton. Above her, London rain pattered faintly against the alley stones; ahead, the blue flames of the market hissed, throwing sharp shadows across the threshold between the stairs and the turnstiles.
created_at"2026-11-11T15:52:43.498Z" 11/11/2026, 3:52:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"mosaic"
count1
8
word"constructed"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count2
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"pulsed"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"rhythmic"
5"flickered"
6"dancing"
7"mosaic"
8"constructed"
9"velvet"
10"shimmered"
11"etched"
12"scanning"
13"weight"
14"pulse"
15"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
91.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1517
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1354
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Quinn1
Met1
Tomás11
Herrera1
Saint2
Christopher2
Soho1
Ahead1
Tube1
London2
Harlow15
Rotherhithe2
Morris2
Mayfair1
Viktor3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Harlow"
6"Morris"
7"Mayfair"
8"Viktor"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Soho"
4"London"
5"Rotherhithe"
globalScore0.946
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.659
wordCount1517
matches
0"not the dead air of thick concrete blocking a signal, but a rhythmic, crackling hum"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"screaming that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean41
std22.8
cv0.556
sampleLengths
075
152
23
355
444
588
613
767
821
928
1025
1114
127
1358
141
1554
1659
1772
1828
1965
2052
2138
2216
2368
2446
2554
2640
2727
2822
2931
3027
3182
3221
3370
3425
3530
3639
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences93
ratio0.097
matches
0"The worn leather watch on her left wrist caught the dim glow of an overhead security lamp—02:14."
1"An iron gate sat recessed into the brickwork—the sealed entrance to an abandoned Camden Tube station, bricked up and forgotten since the fifties."
2"Static hissed from the speaker—not the dead air of thick concrete blocking a signal, but a rhythmic, crackling hum that made her back teeth ache."
3"Voices drifted up the shaft—not the hushed whispers of junkies squatting in the dark, nor the rowdy shouts of an illegal rave."
4"Some wore tailored Mayfair overcoats; others wore tattered oilskins or heavy hooded cloaks that hid their faces entirely."
5"Even from thirty feet, Harlow saw the yellow-white curve of carved bone—a circular token etched with jagged, interlocking lines."
6"The bone didn't cast a shadow; instead, a faint crimson vein pulsed inside the marrow."
7"A woman rearranging jars of luminous, shifting grey powder froze, her eyes catching the blue firelight—pupils vertical and thin as sewing needles, locked directly onto the shadows hiding Harlow."
8"Above her, London rain pattered faintly against the alley stones; ahead, the blue flames of the market hissed, throwing sharp shadows across the threshold between the stairs and the turnstiles."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount434
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"screeching against wet stone."
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.02304147465437788
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004608294930875576
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean16.31
std7.88
cv0.483
sampleLengths
022
115
220
318
410
515
627
73
810
95
1022
1118
1211
1310
148
1515
164
1732
1817
1935
2013
2116
2213
236
2432
2521
2628
2716
289
2914
307
3116
3223
3319
341
3514
368
3714
3818
397
408
4113
4220
4311
4412
4527
468
4725
485
4913
95.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5806451612903226
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Instead of complying, Tomás lunged"
1"Right before Harlow had found"
2"Only a retractable police baton"
ratio0.036
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences83
matches
0"His heavy canvas medical bag"
1"He stumbled on the wet"
2"Her voice cut through the"
3"He glanced back once, rainwater"
4"She kept her elbows tucked,"
5"She planted a boot on"
6"His hand went to his"
7"He shook his head, water"
8"She grabbed the cold iron,"
9"She touched the radio clipped"
10"She clicked the channel dial."
11"Her jaw tightened."
12"She killed her torch and"
13"He dug into his jeans"
14"His hand hovered near the"
15"He pocketed the bone token"
16"She had no warrant, a"
ratio0.205
80.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences83
matches
0"Harlow Quinn pumped her arms,"
1"Water plastered her closely cropped"
2"His heavy canvas medical bag"
3"He stumbled on the wet"
4"Her voice cut through the"
5"Tomás didn't check his pace."
6"He glanced back once, rainwater"
7"The silver Saint Christopher medallion"
8"Harlow pivoted into the alley,"
9"She kept her elbows tucked,"
10"A rusted commercial bin blocked"
11"Tomás shoved it into her"
12"Harlow didn't break stride."
13"She planted a boot on"
14"The worn leather watch on"
15"Backup was at least six"
16"Tomás skidded to a halt,"
17"His hand went to his"
18"Harlow slowed to a brisk"
19"Tomás backed away from the"
ratio0.759
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Even from thirty feet, Harlow"
ratio0.012
97.51% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Darkness yawned beyond the bars, exhaling a draft that smelled nothing like London's sewers."
1"Static hissed from the speaker—not the dead air of thick concrete blocking a signal, but a rhythmic, crackling hum that made her back teeth ache."
2"Right before Harlow had found him staring at ceiling rafters with ruptured eardrums and a stopped heart, no marks on his body, a case file buried in bureaucrati…"
3"A woman rearranging jars of luminous, shifting grey powder froze, her eyes catching the blue firelight—pupils vertical and thin as sewing needles, locked direct…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"the guard rumbled, his voice vibrating through the soles of Harlow's boots"
1"Viktor called out, his voice echoing up the tiled shaft"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Viktor called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.167
87.2696%