Run: 2026-11-11-01M75N0ATT9XWK38N9D00CKE2R

Run Details

Duration:
2m 6s
Cost:
$0.057208
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobbles of Camden Lock, turning the narrow service alley into a sluice of black water and guttering neon. Detective Harlow Quinn kept her stride long and controlled, boots punching through ankle-deep puddles with military precision. At forty-one, the cold London damp had a way of finding the old cartilage tears in her knees, but eighteen years in the Met had taught her how to lock pain behind a closed door. She breathed in through her nose, out through her mouth, keeping her brown eyes fixed on the fleeing shadow thirty yards ahead. Tomás Herrera was fast, fueled by the clean, desperate adrenaline of a cornered rabbit. Quinn had picked him up two hours earlier in Soho, sitting in an unmarked Vauxhall across from The Raven’s Nest. Through the rain-streaked glass and beneath the bar’s distinctive green neon sign, she had watched the dim interior lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs. Herrera hadn't come through the front door at first; one minute the back corner near a heavy bookshelf had been empty, and the next, the disgraced paramedic was shrugging into a waterproof jacket, clutching a heavy canvas medical bag to his ribs. She knew his file backward: twenty-nine, born in Seville, five-foot-ten, struck off the NHS register eighteen months ago for administering unauthorized, unidentifiable compounds to trauma patients who had vanished from their wards before morning. He was the off-the-books stitch-man for a Soho clique Quinn had spent six months trying to pin to a string of impossible felonies. She had shadowed his night bus north to Camden, waiting for him to lead her to a safehouse or a supplier. Instead, he had clocked her reflection in a shuttered shop window on Chalk Farm Road and bolted. Ahead, the alley bottlenecked between high Victorian brick viaducts and chained metal dumpsters. Herrera cut sharp to his left, trying to vault a stack of sodden wooden pallets. His boot slipped on slick timber. He went down hard onto one knee, his medical bag slamming against the brickwork with the muffled clink of glass vials. Quinn surged forward, hand dropping to the extendable baton clipped beneath her soaked trench coat. "Herrera! Police! Stay where you are!" He scrambled up beneath the buzzing amber cone of a security lamp. For a fraction of a second, he looked directly at her. Rain plastered his short, curly dark brown hair to his forehead, streaming down olive skin gone grey with panic. His warm brown eyes held none of the cold calculation Quinn was used to seeing in violent offenders—only stark, unvarnished terror. As he braced his palm against the jagged edge of a skip to push himself upright, his jacket cuff snagged and tore back, exposing a pale, livid scar running the length of his left forearm. A silver Saint Christopher medallion swung loose from his collar, catching the sickly streetlight before he pivoted and threw himself at a tall chain-link fence at the dead end of the lane. Quinn didn't waste breath shouting again. She closed the remaining distance in four seconds, watching him haul his frame over the rusted wire and drop into the weed-choked forecourt of a derelict building beyond. When she reached the fence, she recognized the soot-blackened oxblood terracotta tiles of the facade. It was an abandoned Tube station, one of the dead branches beneath Camden shuttered during the Blitz and left to rot. Corrugated iron sheets were bolted across the main arches, plastered with peeling gig posters, yet a narrow steel maintenance door on the flank stood six inches ajar. Herrera was already gone, swallowed by the dark behind the steel. Quinn glanced at the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 02:38. Rain ran off her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair and traced the line of her sharp jaw. Protocol was unambiguous: secure the perimeter, get on the Airwave radio, call for local uniformed units and a dog handler to clear an unmapped subterranean structure. She keyed the handset pinned inside her lapel. Instead of the reassuring chirp of the Met network, the speaker spat a sharp, wet hiss of dead static. She frowned, thumbing the volume wheel. Nothing. Even at street level, right beside this brick shell, the signal was being choked out by something thick enough to deaden frequencies. Three years ago, in a condemned Rotherhithe warehouse, her radio had made that exact same sound ten minutes before she found DS Morris dead on the concrete—eyes wide, blood frozen in his veins in the middle of a July heatwave, not a mark on him that any Home Office pathologist could explain. Professional Standards had called it an undiagnosed aneurysm and buried the file. Quinn had been hunting the truth in the margins ever since. She let go of the dead radio, hooked her fingers into the chain-link, and vaulted the fence with clean, economical grace. At the maintenance door, she drew her baton with her right hand without extending it, using the rubberized grip to nudge the heavy iron inward. The hinges didn't squeal. Someone had greased them recently. Inside, the air hit her first. She expected stagnant rainwater, pigeon droppings, and diesel soot from the active Northern Line tunnels nearby. Instead, a warm updraft coiled up from the earth, carrying the sharp, metallic tang of ozone layered over charred sage, wet copper, and something cloyingly sweet that made the back of her throat tighten. A spiral cast-iron staircase corkscrewed down into the London clay, lit at wide intervals by small, caged lanterns that flickered with a strange, greenish-amber luminescence—no wires, no bulbs, just steady phosphor suspended in glass. Below, the hurried clatter of Herrera’s boots echoed off glazed cream tiles. Quinn descended on the balls of her feet, hugging the outer wall to minimize her silhouette. Five stories down, the stairs emptied into a long, curving pedestrian passage tiled in cracked green and white ceramic. Moisture wept down the grout. Ahead, the tunnel ended at a rusted wrought-iron portcullis spanning the entrance to the old wooden escalators. She flattened herself into a recessed maintenance alcove twenty yards back and watched. A figure stood beside the portcullis, massive and unnaturally still in a floor-length waxed duster, face obscured beneath the brim of a soaked felt hat. Herrera skidded to a halt before the gate, chest heaving, clutching his medical bag with one arm while his free hand dug frantically into his coat pocket. Change spilled through his wet, trembling fingers—pound coins clattering across the tiles alongside two pale, flat disks the size of crowns. Herrera cursed softly in Spanish, dropped to a crouch, snatched up one of the pale disks, and pressed it into the guard’s gloved palm. He didn't bother with the loose coins or the second disk, which rolled into the scum-lined drainage channel near the base of the wall. The guard closed a massive fist over the offering. With a dull mechanical clank, the portcullis slid open a foot. Herrera squeezed sideways through the gap and hurried down the stationary wooden treads of the escalator, disappearing beneath the low concrete soffit. The gate clicked shut. The guard stepped back into the old ticket booth beside the arch, sinking into shadow until only the pale gleam of cataract-clouded eyes remained visible through the brass grille. Quinn waited, counting thirty slow heartbeats. Nobody else came down the stairs behind her. Moving silent and low, she left the alcove and crept forward along the tiled curve, keeping below the sightline of the ticket window until she reached the drainage gutter ten feet short of the gate. Her fingers closed around the dropped disk. She brought it close to her face. In the sickly lantern light, she saw it wasn't plastic or metal. It was dense, slightly curved, and yellowed with age, etched with tiny, intricate geometric grooves that caught at her calloused thumb. Flipping it over, she saw the unmistakable porous honeycomb of marrow. A bone token. From down the escalator shaft came a low, resonant hum—not the rumble of a train, but the layered murmur of dozens, maybe hundreds, of hushed voices reverberating through a vast subterranean vault. Quinn tucked the baton up her sleeve, turned up her wet collar to shadow her sharp jaw, and stepped up to the ticket booth. She didn't look through the brass bars. She kept her eyes down, mimicking the hunched, furtive posture of a buyer who didn't want to be remembered, and set the bone token onto the worn mahogany counter. For three agonizing seconds, nothing moved. Cold sweat prickled beneath her body armor. If there was a spoken password, she was finished—five-foot-nine, unarmed save for steel cuffs and twenty-one inches of hardened steel, trapped eighty feet beneath Camden with a dead radio. Then pale, scarred fingers slid through the slot and swept the bone away. Down at her boots, the heavy iron latch of the portcullis disengaged. Quinn pushed through, letting the gate clank shut at her heels—a heavy, final sound that vibrated up her spine. She walked halfway down the petrified wooden steps of the dead escalator until the concrete ceiling fell away, opening onto the vast vaulted cavern of the abandoned platform. She froze in the shadow of an iron support pillar. The Veil Market sprawled across both platforms and down into the dry, gravel-filled pit where the rails had been torn up decades ago. Tents of oiled canvas and salvaged velvet hung from the rusted signal gantries. Stalls lit by jars of bioluminescent blue moss displayed goods that made Quinn’s rational, procedural mind recoil: rows of stoppered apothecary bottles swirling with mercury-bright smoke, bundles of black-leaved flora that twitched slightly in the draftless air, brass scales weighing twists of grey powder, and bone-handled surgical instruments laid out on velvet cloths. And the crowd—men and women in bespoke Savile Row coats brushing shoulders with gaunt figures in tattered streetwear. Under the moss-light, details slipped sideways. A tall woman haggling over an iron lockbox blinked horizontally. A vendor counting silver coins had too many knuckles on each long, pale finger. Quinn’s hand tightened around her hidden baton until her knuckles ached. Every instinct honed over nearly two decades on the force screamed at her to turn around, climb those stairs, and get back to the clean, comprehensible geometry of London’s streets. She had no warrant, no backup, no jurisdiction that meant a damn thing on this platform, and no weapon capable of evening the odds if the things wearing human coats realized a Met detective was standing on their Mezzanine. Down on the old northbound platform, two men in drenched wool overcoats brushed past the base of the escalator, keeping their voices low. "Tell your alchemist to double the order of nightshade distillate," the taller one muttered, checking a silver pocket watch. "Full moon rises tomorrow night. Once the Market packs up and shifts, we won't track the new burrow for a week." Tomorrow night. If she walked out now to build an operational order, persuade a skeptical superintendent, and assemble an armed Trojan unit, she would breach that rusted maintenance door upward of twenty-four hours from now and find nothing but damp tiles, rat droppings, and an empty Tube station. Just like Rotherhithe. Just like every phantom lead she had chased since she zipped Morris into a black plastic bag. Fifty yards down the crowded track bed, near a stall hung with cages of silent, pale birds, a head of damp, dark brown curls bobbed through the throng. Herrera was already handing a crumpled slip of paper to a hooded apothecary, his scarred forearm resting nervously atop his medical bag. Quinn looked down at the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Beneath the scratched crystal, the sweeping second hand had stopped dead, trembling faintly against an invisible pull. She let out a slow, measured breath, squared her shoulders, and stepped off the bottom tread into the Veil Market.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1996
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1996
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"streaming"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"facade"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count2
12
word"crystal"
count1
13
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"streaming"
1"stark"
2"facade"
3"traced"
4"structure"
5"flickered"
6"echoed"
7"mechanical"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"vibrated"
11"velvet"
12"crystal"
13"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences107
matches
0"y with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1986
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions75
wordCount1949
uniqueNames38
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden4
Lock1
Harlow1
Quinn15
London3
Met3
Herrera9
Soho2
Vauxhall1
Raven1
Nest1
Seville1
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
Victorian1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube2
Blitz1
Airwave1
Rotherhithe2
Morris2
July1
Home1
Office1
Standards1
Northern1
Line1
Spanish1
Veil2
Market2
Savile1
Row1
Mezzanine1
Tomorrow1
Trojan1
Rain3
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
7"Standards"
8"Line"
9"Market"
10"Row"
11"Rain"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Vauxhall"
3"Raven"
4"Seville"
5"Chalk"
6"Farm"
7"Road"
8"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.504
wordCount1986
matches
0"not the rumble of a train, but the layered murmur of dozens, maybe hundreds, of hushed voic"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean47.29
std29.63
cv0.627
sampleLengths
095
114
2144
338
455
521
6130
734
863
911
1054
1156
1275
1321
1434
1556
1646
1757
1813
1952
2069
2142
2233
2349
247
2551
263
2732
2860
2942
3025
3147
3210
3389
3448
3580
3623
3740
3868
3950
4029
4120
95.43% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"were bolted"
1"being choked"
2"been torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs303
matches
0"was shrugging"
1"was standing"
2"was already handing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences109
ratio0.083
matches
0"Herrera hadn't come through the front door at first; one minute the back corner near a heavy bookshelf had been empty, and the next, the disgraced paramedic was shrugging into a waterproof jacket, clutching a heavy canvas medical bag to his ribs."
1"His warm brown eyes held none of the cold calculation Quinn was used to seeing in violent offenders—only stark, unvarnished terror."
2"Three years ago, in a condemned Rotherhithe warehouse, her radio had made that exact same sound ten minutes before she found DS Morris dead on the concrete—eyes wide, blood frozen in his veins in the middle of a July heatwave, not a mark on him that any Home Office pathologist could explain."
3"A spiral cast-iron staircase corkscrewed down into the London clay, lit at wide intervals by small, caged lanterns that flickered with a strange, greenish-amber luminescence—no wires, no bulbs, just steady phosphor suspended in glass."
4"Change spilled through his wet, trembling fingers—pound coins clattering across the tiles alongside two pale, flat disks the size of crowns."
5"From down the escalator shaft came a low, resonant hum—not the rumble of a train, but the layered murmur of dozens, maybe hundreds, of hushed voices reverberating through a vast subterranean vault."
6"If there was a spoken password, she was finished—five-foot-nine, unarmed save for steel cuffs and twenty-one inches of hardened steel, trapped eighty feet beneath Camden with a dead radio."
7"Quinn pushed through, letting the gate clank shut at her heels—a heavy, final sound that vibrated up her spine."
8"And the crowd—men and women in bespoke Savile Row coats brushing shoulders with gaunt figures in tattered streetwear."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1989
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"dry, gravel-filled pit"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.02212166918049271
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.009552538964303671
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean18.22
std10.72
cv0.588
sampleLengths
021
117
235
322
414
520
625
742
834
923
1021
1117
1213
1315
146
1521
1615
176
1812
1911
2019
2121
2235
2332
246
2528
2615
2721
2827
2911
3011
311
3216
3326
348
3519
366
371
3822
3952
4012
4111
4221
4325
444
455
466
4716
4834
4934
75.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.48148148148148145
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences104
matches
0"Instead, he had clocked her"
1"Instead of the reassuring chirp"
2"Instead, a warm updraft coiled"
3"Then pale, scarred fingers slid"
4"Just like Rotherhithe."
5"Just like every phantom lead"
ratio0.058
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences104
matches
0"She breathed in through her"
1"She knew his file backward:"
2"He was the off-the-books stitch-man"
3"She had shadowed his night"
4"His boot slipped on slick"
5"He went down hard onto"
6"He scrambled up beneath the"
7"His warm brown eyes held"
8"She closed the remaining distance"
9"It was an abandoned Tube"
10"She keyed the handset pinned"
11"She frowned, thumbing the volume"
12"She let go of the"
13"She expected stagnant rainwater, pigeon"
14"She flattened herself into a"
15"He didn't bother with the"
16"Her fingers closed around the"
17"She brought it close to"
18"It was dense, slightly curved,"
19"She didn't look through the"
ratio0.24
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences104
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn kept her"
1"She breathed in through her"
2"Tomás Herrera was fast, fueled"
3"Quinn had picked him up"
4"Herrera hadn't come through the"
5"She knew his file backward:"
6"He was the off-the-books stitch-man"
7"She had shadowed his night"
8"Herrera cut sharp to his"
9"His boot slipped on slick"
10"He went down hard onto"
11"Quinn surged forward, hand dropping"
12"He scrambled up beneath the"
13"Rain plastered his short, curly"
14"His warm brown eyes held"
15"A silver Saint Christopher medallion"
16"Quinn didn't waste breath shouting"
17"She closed the remaining distance"
18"It was an abandoned Tube"
19"Herrera was already gone, swallowed"
ratio0.644
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Even at street level, right"
1"If there was a spoken"
2"If she walked out now"
ratio0.029
82.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences83
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She knew his file backward: twenty-nine, born in Seville, five-foot-ten, struck off the NHS register eighteen months ago for administering unauthorized, unident…"
1"A spiral cast-iron staircase corkscrewed down into the London clay, lit at wide intervals by small, caged lanterns that flickered with a strange, greenish-amber…"
2"He didn't bother with the loose coins or the second disk, which rolled into the scum-lined drainage channel near the base of the wall."
3"It was dense, slightly curved, and yellowed with age, etched with tiny, intricate geometric grooves that caught at her calloused thumb."
4"She kept her eyes down, mimicking the hunched, furtive posture of a buyer who didn't want to be remembered, and set the bone token onto the worn mahogany counte…"
5"Stalls lit by jars of bioluminescent blue moss displayed goods that made Quinn’s rational, procedural mind recoil: rows of stoppered apothecary bottles swirling…"
6"She had no warrant, no backup, no jurisdiction that meant a damn thing on this platform, and no weapon capable of evening the odds if the things wearing human c…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the taller one muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
90.0021%