Run: 2026-11-11-01M75N2S0PCEGNW1K1VQQE6YAA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.051078
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled across the rain-slicked asphalt outside The Raven's Nest, tinting the puddles the colour of oxidized copper. Inside, heat from the radiators fought the damp creeping under the heavy oak door. Rory set her scuffed motorcycle helmet on the corner of the mahogany bar and peeled off her soaked leather gloves, finger by finger. The sharp tang of fried ginger and sesame oil clung to her cuffs, a souvenir from six hours of weaving through West End traffic for the Golden Empress. Silas approached from the far end of the counter, his left leg catching in its familiar, uneven rhythm against the floorboards. Low amber bulbs glinted off the silver signet ring on his right hand as he reached for a clean tumbler. He took one look at the rainwater dripping from the ends of her straight black hair onto the wood and reached beneath the counter for a bar towel instead. "Rough run?" "Piccadilly was a car park. Tourist stepped off the kerb near Shaftesbury Avenue without looking." Rory took the towel and pressed it to the back of her neck. Cold lingered in her knuckles. Upstairs, a hot shower and a radiator that clanked like an iron foundry waited for her, separated from the bar by two flights of narrow stairs. The street door swung open, letting in a gust of wet Soho wind and a burst of laughter that belonged to another postcode. Four men stepped across the threshold, furling sleek black umbrellas with silver tips. Charcoal wool overcoats, silk ties loosened at the collar, leather briefcases polished to a dark mirror sheen. Inns of Court, migrating west after late chambers drinks. They clustered near a framed 1920s map of Prague, shaking rain onto the worn Persian rug while scouting for a booth. Rory hooked her helmet under her left arm, the small crescent scar on her inner wrist flashing pale against the black lining of her jacket sleeve. She turned toward the hallway leading to her flat. "Aurora?" Nobody in London used those three syllables. Here she was Rory, or Carter when Silas wanted a favour, or the girl on the Honda when Yu-Fei shouted orders through the kitchen hatch. The name belonged to lecture halls smelling of floor wax, to Sunday roasts in Pontcanna where every conversation turned into a cross-examination. She stopped. Her boots felt bolted to the timber. One of the suited men broke away from his group. Owen Pritchard had grown into the face his father owned—broad across the brow, smoothed out by expense-account claret, the boyishness sanded off his jaw. He left his umbrella leaning against a display of monochrome photographs from Berlin and crossed the room with the measured stride of someone paid by the hour to command space. "Good God. It is you." Rory shifted the helmet against her hip, leaving her right hand free. "Hello, Owen." His gaze dropped from her bright blue eyes to the reflective yellow piping on her waterproof trousers, then back up to the frayed collar of her jacket. A muscle jumped near his mouth before years of moot court training ironed his expression smooth. "What on earth are you doing in a place like this?" Silas materialized behind the taps, hazel eyes sweeping Owen from bespoke lapel to manicured thumbnail. He rested one palm flat on the mahogany, his trimmed grey-streaked beard tilting a fraction toward the newcomer. "Buying a drink, one hopes. What'll it be?" Owen blinked, registering the older man's quiet authority, and pulled a leather cardholder from his breast pocket. "Two Glenfiddichs. Neat, if Aurora still takes hers without water." "Soda water with lime for me, Si." Silas gave a single nod, left the whiskey bottle untouched for a beat longer than necessary, and built Rory's soda first. Ice cracked under the splash of carbonated water. When he limped down the bar to attend the three colleagues settling near the tall bookshelf at the back, silence pooled between Rory and the ghost of her twenty-first year. Owen leaned an elbow on the brass rail, careful to avoid the damp ring left by her gloves. "Three years. Not a text, not an email. You vanished two months before third-year finals." "I relocated." "Relocated. People who relocate leave forwarding addresses. They tell their study partners they won't be delivering the rebuttal on Tuesday morning." He swirled the amber liquid in his glass without drinking. Up close, fine lines bracketed his eyes. Back in Cardiff, they had split packets of cheap digestives in the law library at two in the morning, trading highlighter pens and testing each other on contract precedent until the security guards rattled their keys. Owen had worn frayed jumpers from charity shops then, his nails bitten down to the quick before every mock trial. Now his cufflinks caught the light—heavy gold ovals stamped with a family crest he used to mock over £2 pints at the Taf. "You found someone else to read the brief, judging by the suit. Where did you land?" "Fountain Court. Finished my pupillage in October. Tenancy came through last month." "Brendan will be thrilled. You always were his second-favourite contender." The mention of her father hung in the air like cigarette smoke. Owen winced, setting his glass down with a dull click. "I ran into him at an appellate dinner in Cardiff last spring. He looked older, Aurora. Jennifer wasn't with him. When I asked how you were getting on in London, his face went to stone. Changed the subject to maritime arbitration before the soup arrived. Does he know you're—" Owen stopped, his fingers tightening around the tumbler as his eyes flicked once more to the scratched visor of her helmet. "Delivering takeaway in the rain? Unlikely. We don't exchange Christmas cards." "You had a first-class average. Half the chambers in Temple would have fought over your application on your surname alone, never mind your marks. You threw a whole life down a drain." "It wasn't my life, Owen. I was renting it from my father, and the lease had rotten terms." Rory lifted her glass. The lime tasted sharp, cutting through the grease coating the back of her throat. Across the room, one of Owen's colleagues—a blond man with a laugh like barking seals—pointed at an antique chart of the Baltic Sea and raised his pint toward Owen, miming a check of his wristwatch. Owen ignored him. "Was it Evan?" The name dropped onto the scuffed wood between them. Rory kept her gaze level, watching the bubbles rise and burst at the rim of her tumbler. "Evan is history." "He stayed in Cardiff after you bolted. Told everyone you'd had some sort of breakdown over exam pressure. Packed a bag while he was at rugby practice and cleared out your half of the joint account." A dry laugh escaped her throat, devoid of warmth. "My half was empty three months before I bought the train ticket. Evan had a habit of misplacing his rent money at the bookies on St Mary Street." Owen stared into his scotch. His shoulders lost an inch of their tailored rigidity, curving inward until he resembled the twenty-year-old who used to hunch over tort textbooks in the corner booth of the union café. "That night in February. After the Law Society ball." Rory set her glass down. Water beaded on the outside, sliding over her knuckles. "Leave it." "You showed up to the nine o'clock seminar wearing a turtleneck in an overheated room. Couldn't hold a pen properly with your left hand, kept typing everything one-handed on your laptop. When I asked what happened, you told me you slipped on the front steps." "Cardiff gets icy in February." "It was twelve degrees and pouring rain that whole week." Owen turned his head to face her. Beneath the sheen of Fountain Court polish, something raw surfaced in his expression, ugly and preserved in brine. "I knew the weather, Aurora. I walked home from the same ball in a soaked dinner jacket. I stood next to your desk, looked at the purple edge creeping above your collar, and accepted the lie because I had four thousand words due on promissory estoppel by Friday noon and Evan was captain of the first XV." Rory traced the crescent scar on her wrist with the pad of her thumb. Behind the bar, the espresso machine hissed as Silas purged the steam wand, a sharp white cloud rising toward the pressed-tin ceiling before dissipating into the gloom. "And if you had challenged it? Called me a liar in front of twenty Pre-Law students? I would have smiled, shut my laptop, and stopped sitting next to you." "You wouldn't have disappeared off the face of the earth alone on a midnight coach." "Eva met me at Victoria Station. I wasn't alone." "Eva didn't spend three years dissecting case law with you every day. I went round to the house on Cathays Terrace a week after you left. Evan answered the door in his dressing gown, eating toast. There was a hole in the plaster halfway up the stairs, right at shoulder height, freshly patched with white filler that didn't match the paint. I stood on the mat, handed over the textbook you'd borrowed from me, and walked down the path." His voice dropped beneath the low murmur of the Soho crowd and the clink of bottles. "I kept that textbook on my shelf right through Bar school. Still has your margin notes in green ink." Rory looked at his hands—soft, uncalloused, ringless, resting beside a £40 glass of malt whiskey. Once, she had shared his vocabulary, his ambition, the clean linear track stretching from university halls to silk robes and oak-panelled rooms. Looking at him felt like peering through the window of a warm house she had burned down from the inside just to breathe clean air. She didn't want the house back. Yet the cold in her wet boots ached all the same. "Green ink ran out years ago, Owen. Your friends are waiting." Across the room, the blond barrister tapped his watch again, gesturing toward the door where the green neon sign hummed through the rain-streaked glass. Owen didn't look back at them. He lifted his whiskey, drained half of it in a swallow that made his throat work, and set the heavy crystal base back onto the bar between them.
created_at"2026-11-11T15:54:31.329Z" 11/11/2026, 3:54:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1736
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1736
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silk"
count2
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silk"
2"measured"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
5"warmth"
6"traced"
7"gloom"
8"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen79
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1731
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1124
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Owen"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Owen"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
West1
End1
Golden1
Empress1
Soho2
Court2
Prague1
Persian1
London1
Rory12
Carter1
Silas5
Honda1
Yu-Fei1
Sunday1
Pontcanna1
Pritchard1
Berlin1
Owen13
Cardiff1
Taf1
Baltic1
Sea1
Fountain1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Court"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Pritchard"
7"Owen"
places
0"Raven"
1"West"
2"End"
3"Soho"
4"Prague"
5"London"
6"Sunday"
7"Pontcanna"
8"Berlin"
9"Cardiff"
10"Taf"
globalScore0.922
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like peering through the window of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1731
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean27.92
std24.34
cv0.872
sampleLengths
084
170
22
315
444
583
635
71
854
99
1064
115
1212
132
1443
1511
1633
178
1817
1910
207
2159
2218
2315
242
2521
2696
2716
2812
2910
3022
3149
3221
3311
3432
3518
3656
373
3826
393
4036
419
4228
4336
449
4514
462
4745
485
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
30.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences102
ratio0.039
matches
0"Owen Pritchard had grown into the face his father owned—broad across the brow, smoothed out by expense-account claret, the boyishness sanded off his jaw."
1"Now his cufflinks caught the light—heavy gold ovals stamped with a family crest he used to mock over £2 pints at the Taf."
2"Across the room, one of Owen's colleagues—a blond man with a laugh like barking seals—pointed at an antique chart of the Baltic Sea and raised his pint toward Owen, miming a check of his wristwatch."
3"Rory looked at his hands—soft, uncalloused, ringless, resting beside a £40 glass of malt whiskey."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1140
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"trimmed grey-streaked beard"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.013157894736842105
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0017543859649122807
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean16.97
std12.27
cv0.723
sampleLengths
019
114
223
328
421
520
629
72
815
913
105
1126
1223
1313
1417
159
1621
1726
189
191
207
2125
2222
232
247
2510
2624
2730
285
2912
302
3127
3216
3311
3415
3518
368
3717
3810
397
4021
418
4230
4318
4415
452
4621
4710
487
4936
93.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5686274509803921
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners58
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Once, she had shared his"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences66
matches
0"He took one look at"
1"They clustered near a framed"
2"She turned toward the hallway"
3"Her boots felt bolted to"
4"He left his umbrella leaning"
5"His gaze dropped from her"
6"He rested one palm flat"
7"He swirled the amber liquid"
8"His shoulders lost an inch"
9"His voice dropped beneath the"
10"She didn't want the house"
11"He lifted his whiskey, drained"
ratio0.182
96.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences66
matches
0"Rory set her scuffed motorcycle"
1"The sharp tang of fried"
2"Silas approached from the far"
3"He took one look at"
4"Rory took the towel and"
5"The street door swung open,"
6"Charcoal wool overcoats, silk ties"
7"Inns of Court, migrating west"
8"They clustered near a framed"
9"Rory hooked her helmet under"
10"She turned toward the hallway"
11"Nobody in London used those"
12"Here she was Rory, or"
13"The name belonged to lecture"
14"Her boots felt bolted to"
15"Owen Pritchard had grown into"
16"He left his umbrella leaning"
17"Rory shifted the helmet against"
18"His gaze dropped from her"
19"A muscle jumped near his"
ratio0.727
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Now his cufflinks caught the"
ratio0.015
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Upstairs, a hot shower and a radiator that clanked like an iron foundry waited for her, separated from the bar by two flights of narrow stairs."
1"His shoulders lost an inch of their tailored rigidity, curving inward until he resembled the twenty-year-old who used to hunch over tort textbooks in the corner…"
2"He lifted his whiskey, drained half of it in a swallow that made his throat work, and set the heavy crystal base back onto the bar between them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.0518%