Run: 2026-11-11-01M75N94GWENN17VY9H1ZGMTSZ

Run Details

Duration:
3m 25s
Cost:
$0.109618
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bottom deadbolt slid back with a dry metallic clack. Rory twisted the middle cylinder, slipped the top brass chain free, and pulled the warped timber door inward. Warm air thick with roasted cumin and frying ghee surged up the stairwell from the curry house below, colliding with the February damp clinging to the man on the landing. Lucien Moreau stood beneath the caged stairwell bulb. Rainwater darkened the shoulders of his tailored charcoal overcoat and beaded along the slicked-back sweep of his platinum hair. One amber eye and one pitch-black eye locked onto hers. Rory threw her hip against the oak panel to slam it shut. The ferrule of his ivory-handled cane wedged into the gap an inch above the threshold. Wood struck cured ash with a dull thud. "Get the cane out of the jamb, Luc." "Two Avaros blood-hounds turned onto Commercial Street ninety seconds ago." "Whitechapel station is four minutes south. Run faster." Lucien shifted his weight onto the ivory grip. A crease carved between his brows, and when his coat fell open, the white Sea Island cotton beneath his waistcoat showed a dark, plum-colored stain spreading across his right flank. "Their handler used salt-forged shot. If I step back onto Brick Lane, the scent pulls them up your stairs and straight through Eva's wards." Ptolemy trotted out from behind Rory's bare ankles, tail hooked high, and rubbed his striped tabby cheek against the wet cuff of Lucien's trousers. Traitorous beast. Rory stared at the widening patch of crimson on Lucien's shirt, then past his shoulder toward the grimy landing window. Sirens wailed up near Shoreditch. Downstairs, kitchen porters shouted orders over the clatter of iron pans. She stepped back from the sisal mat. "Inside. Drip on the Anatolian runner and Eva will hex your kidneys." Lucien crossed the threshold, lifting his cane clear of the cat's paws. His sleeve brushed Rory's forearm as he passed, carrying the chill of wet wool, cedarwood, and the scorched-copper tang of half-demon blood. Rory pushed the door shut, drove all three deadbolts into the frame, and pressed her palm flat against the etched copper sigil nailed above the keyhole until the ward hummed against her calluses. When she turned around, Lucien filled the narrow living room. Eva's flat left zero margin for broad shoulders in bespoke suiting. Leather-bound grimoires crowded the radiator; unrolled vellum scrolls anchored by chipped mugs buried the dining table, the windowsill, and half the floorboards. Red neon from the curry house sign outside bled through rain-streaked glass, striping Lucien's pale cheekbones in crimson. He hooked his cane over the back of a spindle chair and reached for the horn buttons of his overcoat with his left hand. His right hung stiff at his side. "Where is Eva?" "Cardiff. Visiting her aunt until Thursday." Lucien's fingers stalled on the second button. His mismatched gaze cut across the cramped room to the yellow Golden Empress delivery bag slumped beside the kitchenette, then rose to Rory's straight, shoulder-length black hair, damp at the ends from her post-shift shower. "You're staying here." "Ptolemy starves himself unless someone holds the saucer while he eats. Save the surprise. You broker half the secrets south of the Thames." "My network tracks syndicate movements, chérie, not cat-sitting schedules." "Right. Forgot I dropped off your priority list once you cleared out my flat." She stepped over a crate of Babylonian clay tablets into the galley kitchen and yanked open the cupboard beneath the sink. Glass vials chimed together inside Eva's dented tin tackle box. Rory hauled it onto the scarred laminate counter, popped the rusted latch, and pulled out clear spirit, gauze squares, surgical forceps, and curved silver needles. Wool rustled in the front room as Lucien shrugged out of the wet overcoat. Air hissed between his teeth when the silk lining snagged on his side. Rory carried the open tin back in and nudged a stack of Latin lexicons off the low pine coffee table with her shin. Heavy bindings hit the rug with a flat slap. Ptolemy bolted onto the top of the refrigerator, yellow eyes wide. "Sit before you bleed on the velvet." Lucien lowered himself onto the sagging two-seater, stretching one long leg into the tight gap between sofa and table. With his left hand, he unfastened his charcoal waistcoat, tugged the soaked linen shirt free of his trousers, and parted the torn fabric. Rory dropped to her knees on the rug between the coffee table and his knees. Sixteen inches separated them. Heat radiated off his skin, dry and feverish, overriding the East London damp. Three jagged furrows tore across the lean muscle over his lower ribs, black ash crusting the raw edges where demon-forged salt ate at mortal tissue. Thin grey smoke curled toward the ceiling from the deepest gouge. "Who pulled the trigger?" "One of my father's bailiffs. They took exception to a shipping manifest that vanished from Tilbury Docks." Rory twisted the cap off the spirit bottle with her thumb. "Stealing paperwork makes people violent. Who knew." "Bailiffs carry containment chains. Salt-shot is an executioner's load." She drenched a square of folded gauze until alcohol splashed into the tin lid, then met his gaze head-on. From this close, gold flecks ringed his amber iris, sharp beside the bottomless black of its twin. "Hold onto something." "Do your worst, Carter. You owe me one." She pressed the soaked pad flat against the top furrow. Lucien's spine locked. His left hand clamped onto the edge of the pine table until the wood creaked under his palm. A guttural French curse tore from his throat, vibrating through the cramped space between them. Black grit sizzled on contact with the spirit, dissolving into dark rivulets that tracked down the taut skin above his hipbone. Rory kept her grip steady. She swapped the blackened pad for clean gauze, angled the silver forceps into the cut, and extracted a jagged grain of dark salt from torn muscle. It dropped into the tin lid with a sharp ping. "Seven weeks, Luc." "Six weeks and four days." "You kept count." "I keep immaculate books." Rory locked the forceps around a second crystal, fixing her bright blue eyes on his ribs rather than the tight line of his mouth. "Funny. From where I stood, the math looked simple enough. You knocked on my door above Silas' bar at midnight. You drank my Irish whiskey. You spent four hours in my sheets, waited until my breathing slowed, and walked out with the Vane dossier I spent a fortnight building." "Vane ran an Avaros clearinghouse. Walk into Clerkenwell with that folder, and his buyers skin you behind St John's Gate before tossing what's left into the Fleet." "That wasn't your decision!" She plucked a deep shard free. Lucien's breath caught hard in his chest, ribs expanding against the heel of her resting hand. Smooth skin burned beneath her knuckles, stretched tight over muscle that jumped at the sting of silver. "You're twenty-five, Rory. You ride a bicycle with a bent mudguard through Soho traffic delivering prawn dumplings, and you read your father's old tort law volumes when rain keeps you awake. Vane's enforcers don't serve writs." "I survived Evan without a fixer playing bodyguard. I survived half a year in this city before you ever stepped into Silas' taproom." She dropped the stained forceps into the tackle box and picked up a curved suture needle, drawing fine silver wire through its eye. Her fingers stayed level, though blood thrummed beneath her jaw. "If you wanted the Vane file off the street, you had options. Buy me out. Threaten me. Rake my lock open on a Tuesday afternoon while I was hauling hot-and-sour soup up Shaftesbury Avenue." "I had a key to your flat." Rory went motionless, silver wire pinched between thumb and forefinger. Her gaze snapped up to his face. Lucien leaned back against the faded cushions, shirt hanging open around bare shoulders, silver stubble catching the crimson neon spilling across the room. "Took a wax impression the Tuesday prior. Cut the brass in Soho." "What?" "Silas put thirty-year-old Chubb locks on the upstairs doors, Rory. Worn pins. Any half-competent cutpurse in Whitechapel could walk through it in twelve seconds." Anger drained the chill from her hands, replaced by a hot, dizzying rush that crowded her lungs. "If you had brass for my door, why did you knock at midnight?" Lucien leaned forward off the velvet cushions. His left hand left the pine table and closed around her left wrist, fingers spanning the pale, crescent-shaped scar below the heel of her palm. His thumb settled directly over her pulse, skin rough and furnace-hot. "Because the dossier was sitting beside your kettle in plain sight, and I walked straight past it." Air snagged behind Rory's teeth. She pulled back half an inch; his grip anchored her hand inches from his bare sternum. "You lifted it before dawn." "At five in the morning. After waking up with your hair across my collarbone and spotting two of Vane's lookouts parked across from Silas' cellar doors." His thumb brushed once across the raised white curve of her childhood scar—the exact spot his mouth had pressed against in the dark forty-six nights ago. "Walk out empty-handed, and they go upstairs to see what kept me. Walk out carrying Vane's ledger under my arm, and the hounds follow my Bentley all the way to Dover." "You left the door on the latch and vanished to Marseille. Zero word. Not a burner text, not a message through Silas, nothing. I sat on that linoleum floor staring at an empty counter, convinced every touch was sleight of hand to keep my eyes off the kitchen." "Letting you hate me kept Vane's knives away from your throat." "Letting me hate you made me want to put one through yours." Lucien closed the remaining gap between sofa and floor until the scent of rain, raw spirit, and warm skin drowned out the cardamom rising through the floorboards. A fresh bead of dark crimson welled along his lower rib and trailed toward his belt, ignored by both of them. "You have three inches of sharpened silver in your right hand, chérie. Stitch my side or open an artery, because kneeling between my knees in a washed-out cotton shirt is testing whatever restraint I brought up those stairs." Rory stared at the faint scar bisecting his lower lip, her pulse knocking hard against the pad of his thumb. Rain rattled the sash window above the street. Down in the Brick Lane alley, an iron bin lid clanged shut. "Let go of my wrist, Luc." He turned her hand over instead, pressing her open palm flat against the bare skin above his heart so its fast, heavy cadence struck straight against her skin. "Tell me you believed it was sleight of hand." "Everything is leverage in your line of work." "Look me in the eye and tell me I faked four hours in your bed." Her fingers flexed involuntary fractions against the heat of his chest, nails grazing solid muscle while the unthreaded tail of silver wire slipped from her other hand onto the rug. Bright blue met amber and black in the red-striped gloom. "You treated me like a mark." "I stole to keep you breathing. Call me a thief, Rory, call me Avaros filth, throw Eva's library at my head—don't insult both of us by pretending you didn't feel my hands shaking when you took my coat off." His right arm moved despite the torn muscle in his flank, long fingers sliding beneath the damp fall of her black hair to cup the nape of her neck, thumb tilting her chin up toward his mouth.
created_at"2026-11-11T15:57:59.719Z" 11/11/2026, 3:57:59 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1958
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1958
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count2
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chill"
2"etched"
3"silk"
4"velvet"
5"crystal"
6"pulse"
7"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1956
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1265
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
February1
Moreau1
Sea1
Island1
Rory16
Lucien15
Shoreditch1
Golden1
Empress1
Babylonian1
Eva2
Latin1
East1
London1
French1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Babylonian"
4"Eva"
places
0"Sea"
1"Island"
2"Shoreditch"
3"East"
4"London"
5"Brick"
6"Lane"
globalScore0.868
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1956
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean23.85
std17.77
cv0.745
sampleLengths
058
137
212
323
48
510
68
738
824
962
107
1112
1267
1361
1431
153
166
1742
183
1923
209
2114
2256
2327
2443
257
2642
2768
284
2917
3011
317
329
3336
343
358
3610
3757
3841
393
405
413
424
4324
4449
4527
464
4739
4836
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
74.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences126
ratio0.024
matches
0"Leather-bound grimoires crowded the radiator; unrolled vellum scrolls anchored by chipped mugs buried the dining table, the windowsill, and half the floorboards."
1"She pulled back half an inch; his grip anchored her hand inches from his bare sternum."
2"His thumb brushed once across the raised white curve of her childhood scar—the exact spot his mouth had pressed against in the dark forty-six nights ago."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1283
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"dark, plum-colored stain"
1"pale, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.0171473109898675
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000779423226812159
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean15.52
std9.97
cv0.642
sampleLengths
010
118
230
38
419
510
612
715
88
98
1010
118
128
1330
1424
1524
162
1720
185
1911
207
2112
2212
2322
2433
2510
2611
2722
2818
2924
307
313
326
337
3435
353
3623
379
3814
3921
4010
4125
4214
4313
4423
459
4611
477
4819
4923
92.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5634920634920635
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners71
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Bright blue met amber and"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences78
matches
0"She stepped back from the"
1"His sleeve brushed Rory's forearm"
2"He hooked his cane over"
3"His right hung stiff at"
4"His mismatched gaze cut across"
5"She stepped over a crate"
6"She drenched a square of"
7"She pressed the soaked pad"
8"His left hand clamped onto"
9"She swapped the blackened pad"
10"It dropped into the tin"
11"She plucked a deep shard"
12"She dropped the stained forceps"
13"Her fingers stayed level, though"
14"Her gaze snapped up to"
15"His left hand left the"
16"His thumb settled directly over"
17"She pulled back half an"
18"His thumb brushed once across"
19"He turned her hand over"
ratio0.282
68.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences78
matches
0"The bottom deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory twisted the middle cylinder,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood beneath the"
3"Rainwater darkened the shoulders of"
4"Rory threw her hip against"
5"The ferrule of his ivory-handled"
6"Wood struck cured ash with"
7"Lucien shifted his weight onto"
8"A crease carved between his"
9"Ptolemy trotted out from behind"
10"Rory stared at the widening"
11"Downstairs, kitchen porters shouted orders"
12"She stepped back from the"
13"Lucien crossed the threshold, lifting"
14"His sleeve brushed Rory's forearm"
15"Rory pushed the door shut,"
16"Eva's flat left zero margin"
17"He hooked his cane over"
18"His right hung stiff at"
19"Lucien's fingers stalled on the"
ratio0.782
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Smooth skin burned beneath her knuckles, stretched tight over muscle that jumped at the sting of silver."
1"Rory stared at the faint scar bisecting his lower lip, her pulse knocking hard against the pad of his thumb."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.7370%