Run: 2026-11-11-01M75NDMXAQS4ND806CX0V123V

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Duration:
50.3s
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$0.027392
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Google AI Studio

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back, and Rory wrenched the heavy wooden door open. Lucien Moreau leaned against the peeling wallpaper of the narrow stairwell, blood seeping through the fingers pressed against his tailored charcoal waistcoat. "Eva isn't here." "Charming greeting, *ma chère*." "You're bleeding on the mat." "A minor disagreement in Shoreditch. May I come in, or shall I bleed out for the neighbours?" Rory gripped the brass doorknob. Six months of silence, of deleting his number and throwing out the silk scarf he had left on her pillow, evaporated in the span of three heartbeats. Her pulse hammered against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She stepped back. Lucien crossed the threshold, dragging the scent of expensive bergamot, rainwater, and hot copper into the cramped hallway. The rich aromas of toasted cumin and simmering fenugreek drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house below, clashing with the metallic tang of his wound. Books towered on every flat surface of Eva's place. Ancient leather-bound tomes balanced precariously on the microwave, while yellowed parchment scrolls spilled out of an umbrella stand and curled across the worn Persian rug. Ptolemy, Eva's fat orange tabby, cracked one green eye open from atop a stack of Latin lexicons, hissed once at the half-demon, and bolted into the bedroom. "Smart beast," Lucien murmured. He leaned heavily on his ivory-handled cane, his knuckles white against the carved bone. Sweat beaded along his hairline, threatening to ruin the immaculate sweep of his slicked-back platinum hair. Rory kicked the door shut and shot all three bolts home. Click-clack. Click-clack. Click-clack. Her hands remained steady, though a cold knot tightened in her stomach. "Kitchen. Sit before you ruin Eva's rug. Some of those scrolls are older than your father." Lucien navigated the maze of research notes, his heterochromatic eyes sweeping the room. The black eye swallowed the dim light of the mismatched lamps, unreadable and abyssal, while the amber one locked onto Rory as she stalked past him toward the sink. He lowered himself onto a rickety wooden chair beside a tiny round bistro table, biting back a sharp intake of breath. Rory yanked open a cupboard, shoving aside jars of dried herbs and half-empty packets of digestive biscuits until she found the battered plastic first-aid kit. She filled a chipped Ceramic mug with tap water, grabbed a clean tea towel, and dropped them onto the table. "Coat off." "Still giving orders." "Still ignoring good advice, Luc? Take it off." He set the cane against the table's edge. With slow, deliberate movements, he shrugged out of his ruined jacket. Rory stepped between his knees to help pull the fabric free of his left arm, hating the immediate heat that radiated from his skin. He smelled too familiar. Too much like dark corners in Soho bars and tangled sheets above Silas's pub. She unbuttoned his waistcoat and tugged his crisp white shirt free from his trousers. Four jagged parallel gouges tore across his lower ribs. Blackened edges rimmed the torn flesh, smoking faintly with residual demonic venom. Rory stilled, the wet towel hovering an inch from his skin. "Hellhound?" "Avarosian tracker. Someone paid a steep price to import one into the East End." "And you brought its trail straight to Brick Lane." "Wards on my townhouse fell an hour ago. Silas's bar is crawling with watchers." He tilted his head back, exposing the strong column of his throat. "Eva's wards hold. And she owes me a favour." "Eva's in Edinburgh until Tuesday. You're stuck with me." Rory pressed the damp towel against his ribs. Lucien hissed, his left hand shooting out to clamp around her hip. His long fingers dug into the denim of her jeans, anchoring himself as the cold water met the sizzling venom. She didn't pull away. Instead, she leaned in closer, blotting the dark crimson blood with clinical precision. Her straight black hair swung forward, brushing against his bare collarbone. Beneath her palm, his heart beat a erratic, violent rhythm. "You changed your hair," he said, his voice dropping an octave, rough like velvet dragged over gravel. "Cut it in November." "I liked it long." "Good thing I didn't cut it for you." She tossed the bloodied towel into the sink and uncapped a bottle of clear antiseptic. Without warning, she poured it straight over the lacerations. Lucien's breath caught. His grip on her hip tightened to the point of bruising, pulling her flush against his chest. Rory braced her free hand on his bare shoulder to keep her balance. Muscle coiled tight beneath smooth, pale skin. She looked down, meeting that startling, mismatched gaze. Up close, golden flecks danced inside the amber iris, fierce and entirely focused on her mouth. "You left," Rory whispered. The quiet accusation hung heavy in the cramped kitchen, louder than the muffled laughter rising from the street outside. "Rory." "Don't give me the French charm. You walked out at four in the morning. Left five hundred pounds on my dresser like I was one of your informants." "That money was for a train ticket back to Cardiff." His thumb stroked a slow, burning arc over thejut of her hipbone, right through the fabric of her shirt. "The Syndicate discovered your name. Every scavenger from Whitechapel to Chelsea was looking for Lucien Moreau's sudden weakness." "I am not weak." "No. You are human." His black eye seemed to bleed into the pale sclera as his demonic blood worked overtime to fight the venom. "Fragile. Breakable. One slip of a blade, and that bright blue fire goes out of your eyes forever. I couldn't stomach the math." "So you made the choice for me." Rory tore open a sterile gauze pad with her teeth, spitting the paper wrapper onto the floor. "Just like Evan did. Different cage, nicer suit." Lucien flinched as if she had struck him across the jaw. His hand dropped from her waist. "Never compare me to that worm." "Then stop treating me like glass!" She slapped the gauze over the wound, pressing hard enough to draw a fresh bloom of red through the white cotton. "I deliver spring rolls to vampires in Mayfair, Luc. I know what lurks in the dark. You didn't leave to protect me. You left because caring about someone terrified you." Silence stretched between them, punctuated only by the drip-drop of the leaky kitchen tap. Slowly, Lucien raised his clean hand. His fingers brushed the side of her neck, calloused thumb tracing the sharp line of her jaw before tilting her chin up. The heat in his touch stripped the oxygen straight from her lungs. "It still terrifies me," he murmured. He pulled her down. Rory grabbed a fistful of his ruined collar, meeting him halfway. There was nothing gentle about it. Six months of anger, bruised pride, and starving want collided as his mouth slanted over hers. He tasted of mint, smoke, and a faint, sharp trace of copper. Rory gasped against his lips, and he took advantage, deepening the kiss with a low groan that vibrated straight into her chest. She tangled her fingers into his platinum hair, ruining the slick perfection, loving the soft slide of the strands against her skin. His arm banded around her lower back, lifting her effortlessly until she straddled his lap on the creaking wooden chair. Pain must have lanced through his torn ribs, yet he held her crushed against him, kissing her like a man facing the gallows. Rory rolled her hips, chasing the friction, her heart hammering a frantic beat against her ribs. From the bedroom, Ptolemy let out an ear-splitting yowl. Rory froze, tearing her mouth from Lucien's. Out in the narrow hallway, the brass handle of the front door rattled violently. Wood groaned under a sudden, massive impact. Plaster dust rained down from the ceiling as something heavy slammed against the outer door, snapping the top deadbolt clean in half with a gunshot crack. Lucien shoved Rory behind him and stood, drawing six inches of gleaming steel from his cane. A low, guttural snarl vibrated through the floorboards, accompanied by the frantic, wet scraping of claws against wood. "Back window," Lucien ordered, stepping toward the hallway. "Run."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count2
5
word"navigated"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"abyssal"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"charm"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count2
13
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"silk"
2"pulse"
3"simmering"
4"stomach"
5"navigated"
6"unreadable"
7"abyssal"
8"familiar"
9"velvet"
10"charm"
11"tracing"
12"vibrated"
13"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1368
ratio0.001
matches
0"ma chère"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1078
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
Moreau1
Eva2
Persian1
Latin1
Ceramic1
Soho1
Silas1
Lucien11
Silence1
Ptolemy2
Click-clack3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Lucien"
5"Silence"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.758
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1368
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean24
std22.23
cv0.926
sampleLengths
013
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23
34
45
517
647
7106
84
930
1026
1116
1263
1345
142
153
168
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1835
1911
201
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249
2540
2638
2717
284
294
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3124
3264
334
3419
351
3628
3747
384
3947
4032
4117
426
4357
4414
4540
466
4715
4878
4959
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences106
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1090
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"Ancient leather-bound tomes"
2"tight beneath smooth, pale skin."
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.01926605504587156
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007339449541284404
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean12.91
std7.94
cv0.615
sampleLengths
013
122
23
34
45
517
65
727
812
93
1018
1127
129
1325
1427
154
1614
1716
1811
191
201
211
2212
2316
2413
2529
2621
2725
2820
292
303
318
328
3311
3424
354
3614
3714
389
3912
4011
411
4214
439
4426
459
469
478
4812
4920
84.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5283018867924528
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners56
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Too much like dark corners"
1"Instead, she leaned in closer,"
2"Slowly, Lucien raised his clean"
ratio0.04
81.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences75
matches
0"Her pulse hammered against the"
1"She stepped back."
2"He leaned heavily on his"
3"Her hands remained steady, though"
4"He lowered himself onto a"
5"She filled a chipped Ceramic"
6"He set the cane against"
7"He smelled too familiar."
8"She unbuttoned his waistcoat and"
9"He tilted his head back,"
10"His long fingers dug into"
11"She didn't pull away."
12"Her straight black hair swung"
13"he said, his voice dropping"
14"She tossed the bloodied towel"
15"His grip on her hip"
16"She looked down, meeting that"
17"His thumb stroked a slow,"
18"His black eye seemed to"
19"His hand dropped from her"
ratio0.347
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences75
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back,"
1"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
2"Rory gripped the brass doorknob."
3"Her pulse hammered against the"
4"She stepped back."
5"Lucien crossed the threshold, dragging"
6"The rich aromas of toasted"
7"Books towered on every flat"
8"Ptolemy, Eva's fat orange tabby,"
9"He leaned heavily on his"
10"Sweat beaded along his hairline,"
11"Rory kicked the door shut"
12"Her hands remained steady, though"
13"Lucien navigated the maze of"
14"The black eye swallowed the"
15"He lowered himself onto a"
16"Rory yanked open a cupboard,"
17"She filled a chipped Ceramic"
18"He set the cane against"
19"Rory stepped between his knees"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory gasped against his lips, and he took advantage, deepening the kiss with a low groan that vibrated straight into her chest."
1"Rory rolled her hips, chasing the friction, her heart hammering a frantic beat against her ribs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
35.71% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"Lucien ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.229
88.4441%