Run: 2026-11-11-01M75NK29N6W1C7T7GZQRN3KFZ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.039454
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped between the twin pillars of ancient, petrified oak, and London vanished. One boot rested on the damp mud of Richmond Park; the other crushed a cluster of blooming white campions. Behind her, the amber smear of city streetlights bled into the clouds, carrying the distant rumble of late-night Heathrow flights. Ahead lay the clearing. As she dragged her back foot across the threshold, the urban drone severed like a cut wire. Dead air clamped over her ears. She swallowed to pop them, her jaw working against the sudden drop in pressure. "Isolde?" Her voice hit the darkness and died three feet from her mouth. No echo bounced off the surrounding timber. Nothing rustled in the canopy. Rory tugged the zipper of her Golden Empress windbreaker up to her chin. Residual grease and ginger clung to the nylon from her evening shifts, a cheap, familiar scent that clashed with the thick perfume of the clearing. Wildflowers carpeted the dirt year-round here—bluebells tangling with autumn crocus, foxgloves towering beside spring primroses. Normally, night pollinators worked the petals in a drowsy hum. Tonight, the blossoms stood rigid as blown glass. She unclipped the heavy torch from her belt and thumbed the switch. A white cone of light carved across the grass. "Midnight by the boundary oaks. Your note, not mine. If you're running Fae time, give me a sign so I don't freeze my arse off." Silence answered. Rory swept the beam across the perimeter. Six massive oak standing stones ringed the pocket realm, gnarls of petrified wood older than the city sprawling beyond them. Moss choked their grooves. Between the third and fourth monolith, a crumpled piece of parchment fluttered on a spike of gorse—no, it hung limp. Not a breath of wind stirred the clearing. She checked her watch. The sweeping second hand stuttered on the twelve, vibrated, and snapped backward four ticks before stalling altogether. Time always frayed inside the Grove, stretching minutes into hours or compressing an afternoon into a blink, yet her quartz Seiko had never seized before. She fished her mobile from her jeans pocket. Zero signal. Standard for the pocket. The digital clock read 23:59. While she stared at the glass, the digits dissolved into 04:12, flashed 19:08, and locked onto blank dashes. Rory tapped the voice memo icon and lifted the microphone toward her lips, keeping the torch leveled at the center of the meadow. "Log entry, Tuesday night. Entered the Richmond grove via the south oaks. Zero ambient fauna. Watch died at the threshold. Isolde is a no-show." A snap split the quiet. Rory lowered the phone, thumb pausing over the red stop button. Not a twig breaking underfoot. Too wet for deadwood. It sounded like cartilage popping in an ungreased joint, ten yards to her left where the dog-roses knotted into a wall. She pivoted, straight black hair swinging across her cheekbone, and speared the brambles with the torchlight. Leaves gleamed like waxed slate. Thorns hooked into empty space. Near the roots, a clump of purple clover lay flat against the soil. As Rory held her breath, three crushed stems uncurled, lifting millimeter by millimeter as though relieved of a heavy weight. Nothing stood on them. No badger slipped through the briars. No deer bounded toward the trees. "Clever." Rory shifted her grip on the aluminum torch cylinder, sliding her palm back so the heavy bezel could swing as a club. "Skulk in the weeds then. I came to talk terms, not play hide-and-seek in the dark." From the opposite side of the clearing—behind her right shoulder—came a soft drag through the buttercups. *Shhhk.* Like canvas sackcloth pulled across wet grass. She spun. Bright blue eyes narrowed against the harsh backscatter of her own beam. Empty turf stretched toward the northern oak stones. Five yards out, a tall stalk of white foxglove swayed like a metronome while every neighboring flower stood cast in stone. Back and forth the bell-shaped blossoms nodded, bleeding pale pollen onto the dark grass, losing momentum with each arc. Rory backed up a pace, aiming for the center of the turf where nothing could creep within arm's reach undetected. Her boot heel sank into soft loam. Cold sweat prickled along her spine beneath her cotton shirt, raised not by temperature, but by an animal certainty taking root at the base of her skull. Something stood inside the ring with her. She lifted the phone again, gaze darting from the nodding foxglove to the dark gaps between the boundary oaks. "Addendum. Visual displacement in the flora. Acoustics are wrong—sound isn't carrying past ten feet." She hit play to test the mic. Static hissed from the tiny speaker. Beneath the white noise, her recorded voice spoke through tinny distortion. *"Addendum. Visual displacement in the flora..."* Rory frowned, leaning an inch closer to the speaker. Under her recorded words ran a second track. A ragged, wet inhalation that dragged across the audio, out of sync with her own pauses. She hadn't breathed like that. Her chest had been locked tight while speaking. Before the clip finished, heat bloomed against her sternum. Rory gasped, dropping the phone into her coat pocket, and hooked two fingers inside her collar. The pale crescent scar on her left wrist flashed in the spill of the torchlight as she hauled the silver chain free. Dangling over her windbreaker, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed. No bigger than her thumbnail, the deep crimson gem housed a dull ember at its core, pulsing in jagged bursts against her gloved knuckles. Warmth seeped through the stone like fevered skin. Fae magic never woke the gem. Never once. Heat meant a Hel rift. A tear leading downward into rot and ash, bleeding through the seams of a Fae sanctuary where no underworld door had any right to exist. *Click.* Right behind her ear. Close enough that a thread of icy air stirred the ends of her black hair. Rory lunged forward and whipped around, swinging the torch in a vicious horizontal arc at head height. Aluminum whistled through empty night. Her beam raked wildly across the clearing, painting white streaks over frozen daisies and towering weeds before settling on the southern boundary—the twin petrified oaks she had walked between five minutes ago. Three monoliths stood there now. Left oak, gnarled and split down the crown. Right oak, draped in dry ivy. Wedged into the six-foot gap between them towered a third silhouette, tall and narrow as a splintered mast. Rory froze, lungs burning against her ribs. She raised the beam two inches to illuminate the center shape. Before the white circle touched its base, the silhouette folded sideways, slipping behind the left oak without rustling a single strand of ivy. No footsteps thudded on the turf. Only the smell rolled across the flattened wildflowers—river silt, copper, and meat left in a locked cellar. "Show yourself!" Her shout cracked against the invisible ceiling of the pocket. Five yards into the shadows beyond the torch's reach, a voice gave the cadence back to her—not words, just two hollow notes pitched to match the break in her throat, warbling out from the gap behind the oaks. Another pulse of heat spiked from the crimson stone against her chest, hotter now, stinging through her nylon jacket. To her right, deep in the unlit brambles, a second throat clicked an answer to the first. Grass blades whispered to her left, flattening in a slow, deliberate line that curved inward to circle her boots.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:03:25.119Z" 11/11/2026, 4:03:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"standard"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"fluttered"
4"vibrated"
5"standard"
6"weight"
7"throbbed"
8"warmth"
9"sanctuary"
10"footsteps"
11"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords8
totalWords1247
ratio0.006
matches
0"Shhhk."
1"\"Addendum. Visual displacement in the flora...\""
2"Click."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1158
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Heathrow1
Golden1
Empress1
Grove1
Seiko1
Rory12
Like1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Fae2
Right2
persons
0"Seiko"
1"Rory"
2"Like"
3"Pendant"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.982
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like cartilage popping in an ungre"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.802
wordCount1247
matches
0"not by temperature, but by an animal certainty taking root at the base of her skull"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean29
std19.12
cv0.659
sampleLengths
013
160
220
31
424
571
621
725
861
954
1029
1123
1224
135
1441
1516
1643
1716
1839
1924
2062
2154
227
2319
2414
2524
266
2746
289
2938
3040
318
3230
331
3419
3554
365
3732
3818
3946
402
4148
4255
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"been locked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences103
ratio0.068
matches
0"One boot rested on the damp mud of Richmond Park; the other crushed a cluster of blooming white campions."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the dirt year-round here—bluebells tangling with autumn crocus, foxgloves towering beside spring primroses."
2"Between the third and fourth monolith, a crumpled piece of parchment fluttered on a spike of gorse—no, it hung limp."
3"From the opposite side of the clearing—behind her right shoulder—came a soft drag through the buttercups."
4"Her beam raked wildly across the clearing, painting white streaks over frozen daisies and towering weeds before settling on the southern boundary—the twin petrified oaks she had walked between five minutes ago."
5"Only the smell rolled across the flattened wildflowers—river silt, copper, and meat left in a locked cellar."
6"Five yards into the shadows beyond the torch's reach, a voice gave the cadence back to her—not words, just two hollow notes pitched to match the break in her throat, warbling out from the gap behind the oaks."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1170
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.019658119658119658
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002564102564102564
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean12.11
std7.68
cv0.634
sampleLengths
013
119
220
34
417
56
614
71
812
97
105
1113
1225
1315
1410
158
1612
179
1825
192
207
2120
224
2320
248
254
2617
2725
288
292
304
315
3218
3323
3424
355
3611
375
384
3921
4016
415
425
4313
4420
454
466
476
4823
4916
99.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6310679611650486
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners65
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences91
matches
0"Normally, night pollinators worked the"
1"Too wet for deadwood."
2"Bright blue eyes narrowed against"
3"Only the smell rolled across"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences91
matches
0"She swallowed to pop them,"
1"Her voice hit the darkness"
2"She unclipped the heavy torch"
3"She checked her watch."
4"She fished her mobile from"
5"It sounded like cartilage popping"
6"She pivoted, straight black hair"
7"Her boot heel sank into"
8"She lifted the phone again,"
9"She hit play to test"
10"She hadn't breathed like that."
11"Her chest had been locked"
12"Her beam raked wildly across"
13"She raised the beam two"
14"Her shout cracked against the"
ratio0.165
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences91
matches
0"Rory stepped between the twin"
1"She swallowed to pop them,"
2"Her voice hit the darkness"
3"Nothing rustled in the canopy."
4"Rory tugged the zipper of"
5"Wildflowers carpeted the dirt year-round"
6"Tonight, the blossoms stood rigid"
7"She unclipped the heavy torch"
8"A white cone of light"
9"Rory swept the beam across"
10"Moss choked their grooves."
11"She checked her watch."
12"The sweeping second hand stuttered"
13"She fished her mobile from"
14"The digital clock read 23:59."
15"Rory tapped the voice memo"
16"A snap split the quiet."
17"Rory lowered the phone, thumb"
18"It sounded like cartilage popping"
19"She pivoted, straight black hair"
ratio0.549
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences91
matches
0"While she stared at the"
1"Before the clip finished, heat"
2"Before the white circle touched"
3"To her right, deep in"
ratio0.044
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Residual grease and ginger clung to the nylon from her evening shifts, a cheap, familiar scent that clashed with the thick perfume of the clearing."
1"As Rory held her breath, three crushed stems uncurled, lifting millimeter by millimeter as though relieved of a heavy weight."
2"A ragged, wet inhalation that dragged across the audio, out of sync with her own pauses."
3"Grass blades whispered to her left, flattening in a slow, deliberate line that curved inward to circle her boots."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
94.3825%