Run: 2026-11-11-01M75NQPKVRD7K1RNHCP5DR2VC

Run Details

Duration:
57.5s
Cost:
$0.021164
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Cold London rain pelted the asphalt of Camden High Street, shattering neon reflections into liquid smears. Harlow Quinn vaulted a toppled recycling bin, her boots splashing through black puddles without breaking stride. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp, channeling freezing water down the back of her trench coat collar. Thirty yards ahead, Tomás Herrera vaulted a low brick wall. His canvas messenger bag slammed against his hip, the heavy clinking of glass vials cutting through the drumming rain. "Herrera! Police! Stop!" Her voice ripped through the narrow, brick-choked alleyway. Tomás didn't slow. He pivoted on the slick cobblestones, catching himself against a rusted drainpipe. His sleeve rode up, exposing the pale, jagged line of the scar along his left forearm under the sickly yellow glow of a sodium streetlamp. A silver Saint Christopher medallion bounced wild against his collarbone before tucking back beneath his soaked collar. "Go home, Detective! You're miles off your beat!" He shoved a wooden pallet into her path. Wood splintered against brick. Harlow sidestepped the debris with crisp, economical grace, her sharp jaw set like an iron trap. Eighteen years with the Met had carved out every ounce of hesitation in her stride. She pumped her arms, closing the gap. "I saw you come out of the Raven's Nest with that bag, Tommy! NHS struck you off two years ago, so who are you playing doctor for in Soho?" Tomás vaulted a chain-link gate, the metal rattling in its frame. He landed hard on the far side, wincing as his ankle rolled, then pushed off a dumpster to regain momentum. "People who don't ask stupid questions in the dark! Turn around, Quinn! Let it go!" Harlow hit the chain-link fence, fingers hooking the cold diamond wire. She hauled her five-foot-nine frame up and swung a leg over the rusted barbs, dropping onto the slick tarmac of a deserted service yard. Her left wrist scraped the metal, the worn leather strap of her watch catching on a wire before snapping free. She checked the cracked dial out of pure reflex. Two-fifteen in the morning. Radio dead zones riddled this pocket of North London, and calling for backup meant losing visual. She hadn't lost visual on a runner since Morris died. She wouldn't start tonight. Tomás darted left, plunging toward a boarded-up archway half-swallowed by creeping ivy and graffiti. Rusted iron gates hung ajar over a set of descending concrete steps. Faded red-and-blue signage clung to the soot-stained tile above the entrance, marking an abandoned Tube station forgotten by the city planners decades ago. Harlow unclipped the baton from her belt, thumb flicking the catch. Water streamed down her face, stinging her brown eyes. She took the steps three at a time, plunging out of the storm and into a throat of damp concrete that smelled of wet dog, ozone, and burnt copper. Fluorescent tubes flickered along the curved ceiling, half of them dead, casting twitching shadows across tiled walls weeping brown moisture. Footsteps echoed ahead—wet rubber squeaking on grime-slicked stone. Harlow rounded the corner onto the old ticket concourse and skidded to a halt, dropping into a low, balanced stance behind a scarred concrete pillar. A figure blocked the rusted turnstiles at the bottom of the escalators. Seven feet of broad shoulders wrapped in a butcher’s leather apron stood motionless beneath a single buzzing bulb. The bouncer’s face sat buried in the shadow of a heavy canvas hood, though his hands hung fully visible at his sides. Grey, hairless skin stretched tight over knuckles the size of walnuts, ending in thick, yellowed nails that curved inward. Tomás hit the turnstiles chest-first, panting hard, olive skin slick with sweat and rainwater. He slapped his palm against the bouncer’s chest. "Let me through. Right now." The hooded giant didn't budge. A sound like grinding gravel rolled from beneath the canvas cowl. "Full moon's three nights off, Spaniard. Rules hold till the shift. Pay the toll." Tomás glanced back up the stairs, warm brown eyes wide, dark curls dripping onto his forehead. His hand dove into his soaked jacket pocket, rummaging past gauze rolls and plastic syringes. "I got tail, alright? Met detective. Mean one. Open the gate before she—" A massive grey hand shot out and clamped onto Tomás’s shoulder, pinning him to the rusted metal bar. "Bone. Or bleed on the tiles." "Alright, alright, *joder*, give me a second!" Tomás yanked his hand free from his pocket and slammed a pale, carved disk onto the rusted ticket box. From behind the pillar, Harlow squinted. It wasn't ivory or plastic. Porous marrow stippled the edges of the coin, etched with jagged grooves that caught the failing light and drank it in. The bouncer swept the bone token off the metal box. He stepped aside and yanked a heavy iron lever protruding from the wall. Stone ground against stone. The tiled wall beside the escalators didn't have a door, yet a vertical seam split the grime-caked ceramics down the middle, folding inward to reveal a steep iron staircase plunging straight down toward the old Northern Line platforms. Warm air billowed up from the fissure. It carried no trace of subterranean rot or rat droppings. Cinnamon, sulfur, and thick, metallic musk washed over Harlow's face, making the fine hairs on her forearms stand at attention. Faint violet light pulsed from below, accompanied by the low, rhythmic hum of a hundred hushed voices bartering in languages that scraped at the eardrums. Tomás slipped toward the gap, then paused on the threshold. He looked straight back toward the concrete pillar where Harlow crouched, her shoulder pressed against the freezing tile. Even in the gloom, his gaze locked onto the toe of her boot. "Don't follow me down here, Detective. This isn't like Morris's file. You step off these stairs, the Met won't even find your badge." He vanished into the violet glow. The giant in the butcher's apron didn't pull the lever to close the seam. Instead, the hooded head tilted toward the upper concourse, nostrils flaring beneath the wet canvas as if tasting the air. Heavy boots scraped across the floor. The bouncer turned his back on the concourse and lumbered into a side alcove, leaving the split wall yawning open. A deliberate gap. Or a neglected trap. Harlow stayed pressed against the pillar, breathing through her nose in slow, measured four-counts. Her pulse drummed against the worn leather band of her watch. Three years ago, in an East End warehouse smelling of that exact same burnt-copper stench, DS Morris had walked through a door ahead of her while she waited on tactical support. Five minutes later, the room was empty save for Morris's service weapon melted into a puddle of slag and claw marks gouged two inches deep into solid steel girders. Internal Affairs called it an industrial chemical explosion. They buried the file and gave her a commendation medal to shut her mouth. She reached down to her radio, her thumb hovering over the transmit button. Static hissed faintly from the earpiece—just enough signal bouncing down the stairwell to maybe, if the clouds broke, ping a dispatcher on Camden High Street. Protocol dictated she retreat to street level, establish a perimeter, and call in an armed response unit for suspected trafficking of unlicensed pharmaceuticals. Clean. Safe. By the book. Down through the split wall, glass shattered, followed by a chorus of guttural laughter and the sharp hiss of steam hitting open flame. Shadowy silhouettes crossed the bottom of the iron steps—one hunched low on backward-bending joints, another trailing a cloak that moved against the draft. None of it fit inside a witness statement. None of it belonged in the city she had policed for nearly two decades. Harlow pulled her thumb off the radio. With a twist of her fingers, she clicked the volume knob all the way down until the static died completely. She slid the extendable baton back into its loop on her belt; aluminum wouldn't do much against seven feet of muscle or whatever waited at the bottom of those stairs. Instead, her hand slipped inside her damp trench coat, fingers wrapping around the cold polymer grip of the unauthorized compact Glock holstered beneath her left arm. She drew it half an inch to check the chamber, then eased it back against her ribs. Adjusting her cuffs with brisk, military precision, Harlow stepped out from behind the pillar. Her boots made no sound on the wet tiles as she crossed the empty concourse and stood at the threshold of the split wall, staring down into the violet-lit stairwell of the Veil Market. Heat rolled up from the hidden platforms below, drying the rain on her cheeks as her right boot hovered over the top iron step.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:05:56.999Z" 11/11/2026, 4:05:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1465
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1465
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"rhythmic"
6"gloom"
7"measured"
8"pulse"
9"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
95.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"start to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1462
ratio0.001
matches
0"joder"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1339
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
London2
Camden2
High2
Street2
Quinn1
Tomás9
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Met1
North1
Morris3
Tube1
Harlow11
Northern1
Line1
East1
End1
Affairs1
Glock1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Met"
6"Morris"
7"Harlow"
8"Affairs"
9"Glock"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"North"
5"East"
6"End"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if tasting the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1462
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean38.47
std26.47
cv0.688
sampleLengths
052
129
23
365
48
550
629
731
815
998
1049
1149
1228
1325
1471
1522
165
1716
1814
1931
2013
2118
226
237
2451
2523
2642
2762
2841
2923
306
3167
32107
3366
3468
3527
3673
3772
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs215
matches(empty)
29.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences101
ratio0.04
matches
0"Footsteps echoed ahead—wet rubber squeaking on grime-slicked stone."
1"Static hissed faintly from the earpiece—just enough signal bouncing down the stairwell to maybe, if the clouds broke, ping a dispatcher on Camden High Street."
2"Shadowy silhouettes crossed the bottom of the iron steps—one hunched low on backward-bending joints, another trailing a cloak that moved against the draft."
3"She slid the extendable baton back into its loop on her belt; aluminum wouldn't do much against seven feet of muscle or whatever waited at the bottom of those stairs."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1362
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"narrow, brick-choked alleyway."
1"exact same burnt-copper stench,"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.013950073421439061
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004405286343612335
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean14.48
std7.98
cv0.551
sampleLengths
016
116
220
310
419
53
68
73
812
925
1017
118
128
134
1416
1515
167
1729
1811
1920
2015
2111
2224
2320
249
254
2616
2710
284
2914
3012
3123
3211
339
3429
3520
368
3725
3812
3918
4022
4119
4214
438
445
455
4611
4714
4816
4915
90.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5544554455445545
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners56
74.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Instead, the hooded head tilted"
1"Instead, her hand slipped inside"
ratio0.022
98.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
1"His canvas messenger bag slammed"
2"Her voice ripped through the"
3"He pivoted on the slick"
4"His sleeve rode up, exposing"
5"He shoved a wooden pallet"
6"She pumped her arms, closing"
7"He landed hard on the"
8"She hauled her five-foot-nine frame"
9"Her left wrist scraped the"
10"She checked the cracked dial"
11"She hadn't lost visual on"
12"She wouldn't start tonight."
13"She took the steps three"
14"He slapped his palm against"
15"His hand dove into his"
16"It wasn't ivory or plastic."
17"He stepped aside and yanked"
18"It carried no trace of"
19"He looked straight back toward"
ratio0.303
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences89
matches
0"Harlow Quinn vaulted a toppled"
1"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
2"His canvas messenger bag slammed"
3"Her voice ripped through the"
4"Tomás didn't slow."
5"He pivoted on the slick"
6"His sleeve rode up, exposing"
7"A silver Saint Christopher medallion"
8"He shoved a wooden pallet"
9"Wood splintered against brick."
10"Harlow sidestepped the debris with"
11"She pumped her arms, closing"
12"Tomás vaulted a chain-link gate,"
13"He landed hard on the"
14"Harlow hit the chain-link fence,"
15"She hauled her five-foot-nine frame"
16"Her left wrist scraped the"
17"She checked the cracked dial"
18"Radio dead zones riddled this"
19"She hadn't lost visual on"
ratio0.719
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Even in the gloom, his"
ratio0.011
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Harlow Quinn vaulted a toppled recycling bin, her boots splashing through black puddles without breaking stride."
1"Her left wrist scraped the metal, the worn leather strap of her watch catching on a wire before snapping free."
2"Grey, hairless skin stretched tight over knuckles the size of walnuts, ending in thick, yellowed nails that curved inward."
3"Faint violet light pulsed from below, accompanied by the low, rhythmic hum of a hundred hushed voices bartering in languages that scraped at the eardrums."
4"Instead, the hooded head tilted toward the upper concourse, nostrils flaring beneath the wet canvas as if tasting the air."
5"Shadowy silhouettes crossed the bottom of the iron steps—one hunched low on backward-bending joints, another trailing a cloak that moved against the draft."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.4670%