Run: 2026-11-11-01M75NZ8GD009RC5M6EGMM7JRG

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Duration:
41.3s
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked, and Rory yanked the heavy wooden door open with a snarl ready on her tongue. Lucien Moreau stood on the cramped landing, a crimson stain blooming through the ribs of his tailored charcoal suit. "Eva isn't here." "Thank the Pit for small mercies." "Leave, Luc." "I bleed on your carpet, *chérie*, or I bleed on the stairs." Rory gripped the brass doorknob until her knuckles whitened. Six months of silence, six months of scrubbing the phantom scent of his bergamot cologne from her pillows, and he returned half-dead on Brick Lane. The sharp aroma of fried cumin and roasting fenugreek drifted up from the curry house downstairs, mixing sickeningly with the coppery tang of half-demon blood. He leaned his weight onto his smooth ivory-handled cane. Sweat beaded along his slicked-back platinum blond hair, though his heterochromatic gaze, one warm amber eye and one abyssal black, remained irritatingly sharp. Rory stepped aside. Lucien crossed the threshold with a stiff, controlled limp. As soon as his polished Oxford shoes cleared the mat, Rory slammed the door and threw all three deadbolts. Click-clack. Safe from the street, trapped with the monster. She stalked past him into the tiny living room. Every surface groaned under Eva's hoard: towering stacks of leather-bound grimoires, unrolled parchment scrolls weighted down with chipped mugs, and manic clusters of yellow sticky notes. Ptolemy, a fat orange tabby cat, cracked one green eye open from atop a pile of Latin translations, hissed once at Lucien, and bolted into the bedroom. "Smart beast." "He has good taste." "Unlike his temporary caretaker?" "Don't flatter yourself. Sit on the plastic chair, not the sofa. Velvet ruins easily." Lucien lowered himself onto the hard folding chair by the cluttered dining table, biting back a groan that vibrated low in his chest. He set his cane against a teetering tower of folklore journals. With trembling, blood-slicked fingers, he unbuttoned his waistcoat. Rory fetched the battered white plastic first-aid kit from beneath the kitchen sink, grabbing a bottle of cheap vodka from the counter on her way back. Her pulse hammered a frantic tattoo against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Cool-headed Rory, Eva always called her. Right now, Rory wanted to break the vodka bottle over his immaculate blond head. She dropped the kit onto the table, sending a sheaf of rune diagrams fluttering to the floorboards, and stood between his knees. "Shirt. Off." "Buy me dinner first, Aurora." "Call me that again and I stitch you up with rusty wire." "Still prickly." "Still breathing. Which is more than you'll manage in an hour if you keep stalling." His black eye darkened, swallowing the ambient yellow light of the bare ceiling bulb. He shrugged out of his jacket and waistcoat, hissing through his teeth as the fabric pulled at the wound on his left flank. Rory didn't wait for him to manage the white dress shirt. She popped the mother-of-pearl buttons free with sharp, practiced tugs, parting the linen to expose pale, scarred muscle and a jagged, smoking gash across his ribs. Blackened edges curled around the torn flesh. The smell of ozone and singed meat hit the back of her throat. "Hellfire steel?" "An Avarosian stiletto." "You told me your father's court stayed out of East London." "Politics shift." "Clearly." Rory uncapped the vodka and poured a generous splash directly into the wound. Lucien's hand shot out, clamping around her left wrist like an iron shackle. His skin burned fever-hot against her scar. A low, demonic snarl tore from his throat, vibrating right through the soles of her bare feet, his amber eye flaring bright gold. Rory didn't flinch. She held the bottle poised above his bare chest, locking her bright blue eyes onto his mismatched ones, breathing in the heady mix of blood, alcohol, and pure, lethal predator. "Break my wrist, Frenchman, and you bleed out alone." His chest heaved. Beneath the heat of his palm, her pulse betrayed her, leaping wildly against his thumb. Slowly, deliberately, his thumb stroked the raised crescent of her childhood scar. Once. Twice. The exact way he used to trace it in the dark above Silas' bar, right before he ruined her for anyone normal. "You moved out of your flat." "I'm cat-sitting." "Liar. Your coat is on the hook, your terrible green trainers are by the radiator, and Yu-Fei's delivery bags are stacked by the bin." "So you're stalking me now?" "Checking on my investments." Rory wrenched her arm free, stepping back as though burned. The word hung between them like poison gas. *Investments.* The exact word she had overheard him use on the phone in Marseille French six months ago, right before he vanished without a note, leaving three grand in crisp fifty-pound notes on her kitchen table like severance pay for a whore. She tore open a packet of sterile gauze with her teeth and pressed the pad hard against his bleeding ribs. Lucien gasped, his head tipping back, exposing the strong column of his throat. "You left money on my counter, Luc." "You needed to break your lease." "I needed you to stay!" Silence slammed into the cramped flat, broken only by the muffled bass of Bhangra music thumping through the floorboards from the restaurant below. Rory froze, cursing the crack in her voice. She pressed harder on the gauze, watching bright red seep through the white cotton, hating how her hands shook. Lucien lowered his chin. The smooth, arrogant fixer vanished, leaving something raw and jagged in the harsh light. "Evan got out on bail that morning." Rory's breath caught. Her fingers went numb against his hot skin. "What?" "Your dear ex-boyfriend. Your father's barrister friends pulled strings in Cardiff." "Evan is in Melbourne. He fled the country in October." "Because I broke three of his fingers and bought him a one-way ticket." Rory stumbled back a half-step, bumping against a bookshelf. A heavy tome on Mesopotamian demonology tumbled down, thudding onto the worn rug. Lucien didn't look away from her face. He took the bloody gauze from her frozen hand and pressed it to his own side, rising slowly from the plastic chair. Even wounded, half-dressed, and bleeding black-edged blood, he towered over her, crowding her against the shelves until her spine hit the wood. "Why didn't you tell me?" "Because you look at monsters and see strays to fix, Rory. And what I did to him in that alley wasn't fit for human eyes." "You think I'm fragile?" "I think you're clean. And everything from Avaros stains." He raised his clean hand, his knuckles brushing a strand of straight black hair behind her ear. Rory closed her eyes for a fraction of a second, traitorous heat pooling low in her belly despite the fury roaring in her ears. Six months of hating him unravelled at a single touch, twisting into a dark, aching hunger that made her want to bite his lip until he bled there, too. She grabbed a fistful of his torn, bloodstained collar and dragged his mouth down to within an inch of hers. "I'm already stained, you arrogant bastard." His breath hitched, hot against her lips. His hand slid from her cheek to the nape of her neck, tangling in her hair, tilting her head up as his mouth descended to claim hers. Wood splintered in the hallway. A massive boot kicked Eva's front door clean off its hinges, sending all three deadbolts flying across the plaster in a shower of sparks and shattered brass. Two figures in long leather coats stepped over the wreckage into the flat, twin Avarosian blades burning with violet hellfire in their gloved fists.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1279
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"abyssal"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"roaring"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"abyssal"
3"velvet"
4"vibrated"
5"pulse"
6"predator"
7"roaring"
8"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1279
ratio0.002
matches
0"chérie"
1"Investments."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1008
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Oxford1
Eva3
Latin1
Lucien8
Marseille1
French1
Bhangra1
Mesopotamian1
Avarosian1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Oxford"
3"Marseille"
globalScore0.756
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1279
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean19.38
std19.79
cv1.021
sampleLengths
019
119
23
36
42
512
659
732
83
937
1062
112
124
134
1414
1542
1661
1722
182
195
2012
212
2215
2374
2420
252
263
2711
282
291
3013
3143
3233
339
3454
356
362
3724
385
394
4060
4120
4213
437
446
455
4650
4718
487
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences104
ratio0
matches(empty)
70.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount714
adjectiveStacks5
stackExamples
0"smooth ivory-handled cane."
1"fat orange tabby cat,"
2"trembling, blood-slicked fingers,"
3"small crescent-shaped scar"
4"fever-hot against her"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02661064425770308
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008403361344537815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.3
std8.74
cv0.711
sampleLengths
019
119
23
36
42
512
69
725
825
99
1023
113
129
1319
141
158
169
1726
1827
192
204
214
2214
2323
2411
258
2626
2715
286
2914
3022
312
325
3312
342
3515
3614
3723
3811
3926
407
4113
422
433
4411
452
461
4713
4813
497
82.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5096153846153846
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners53
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Slowly, deliberately, his thumb stroked"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences64
matches
0"He leaned his weight onto"
1"She stalked past him into"
2"He set his cane against"
3"Her pulse hammered a frantic"
4"She dropped the kit onto"
5"His black eye darkened, swallowing"
6"He shrugged out of his"
7"She popped the mother-of-pearl buttons"
8"His skin burned fever-hot against"
9"She held the bottle poised"
10"His chest heaved."
11"She tore open a packet"
12"She pressed harder on the"
13"Her fingers went numb against"
14"He took the bloody gauze"
15"He raised his clean hand,"
16"She grabbed a fistful of"
17"His breath hitched, hot against"
18"His hand slid from her"
ratio0.297
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences64
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked, and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"Rory gripped the brass doorknob"
3"The sharp aroma of fried"
4"He leaned his weight onto"
5"Sweat beaded along his slicked-back"
6"Rory stepped aside."
7"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
8"She stalked past him into"
9"Every surface groaned under Eva's"
10"Ptolemy, a fat orange tabby"
11"Lucien lowered himself onto the"
12"He set his cane against"
13"Rory fetched the battered white"
14"Her pulse hammered a frantic"
15"She dropped the kit onto"
16"His black eye darkened, swallowing"
17"He shrugged out of his"
18"Rory didn't wait for him"
19"She popped the mother-of-pearl buttons"
ratio0.813
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"As soon as his polished"
1"Even wounded, half-dressed, and bleeding"
ratio0.031
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Lucien lowered himself onto the hard folding chair by the cluttered dining table, biting back a groan that vibrated low in his chest."
1"A low, demonic snarl tore from his throat, vibrating right through the soles of her bare feet, his amber eye flaring bright gold."
2"Six months of hating him unravelled at a single touch, twisting into a dark, aching hunger that made her want to bite his lip until he bled there, too."
3"His hand slid from her cheek to the nape of her neck, tangling in her hair, tilting her head up as his mouth descended to claim hers."
4"A massive boot kicked Eva's front door clean off its hinges, sending all three deadbolts flying across the plaster in a shower of sparks and shattered brass."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.3479%