Run: 2026-11-11-01M75P0BR80SG1CJTY8GCQ7JVW

Run Details

Duration:
45.9s
Cost:
$0.020924
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water sheeted off the corrugated tin awnings of Camden High Street, drumming a relentless staccato against Detective Harlow Quinn’s shoulders. Her boots struck the slick tarmac in measured, heavy strides. Rainwater plastered her cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her scalp and traced the sharp edge of her jaw, dripping onto her collar. Thirty yards ahead, Tomás Herrera vaulted a cluster of overflowing wheelie bins. His heavy canvas medical bag swung wide, banging against his hip. He stumbled on the landing, his trainer skidding through an oil-slicked puddle, before catching himself on a rusted drainpipe. "Stop! Police!" Quinn's voice cut through the downpour, crisp and authoritative. She didn't waste breath on a second warning. Pumping her arms, she cleared a toppled bicycle and rounded the corner into a narrow service alley that smelled of sour lager and wet brick. Tomás glanced back. Neon light from a kebab shop bled into the alley, catching the rainwater on his olive skin and the wild, wet curls of his dark brown hair. His warm brown eyes widened. He clutched the strap of his kit bag tighter, the sleeve of his soaked jacket riding up to expose the pale, jagged ridge of a knife scar along his left forearm. "Give it up, Herrera! You're boxed in!" Tomás backed toward a chain-link fence blocking the end of the passage. Chest heaving, he reached inside his collar, his fingers closing briefly around the silver Saint Christopher medallion hanging at his throat. "I didn't steal anything, Detective! Let me walk!" "Drop the bag and get against the wall." Quinn slowed her approach, squaring her shoulders with the rigid posture drilled into her over eighteen years on the force. She unclipped the strap over her telescopic baton, brown eyes locked on his hands. "We're going to have a long chat about why an ex-NHS paramedic was slipping out the back of The Raven's Nest with unlicensed surgical gear." "People cut themselves in bars. Broken glass. You know Soho." "Save it for the interview room. Morris and I worked that beat for five years before he died, and nobody ever needed arterial clamps for a bar brawl." At the mention of her dead partner, Quinn’s jaw clenched. Three years of dead ends, sealed coroner reports, and anomalies that defied physics tightened like a wire in her chest. Herrera and his Soho crowd sat right in the middle of the spiderweb. Tomás didn't drop the bag. His gaze darted left, dropping to a boarded-up archway set into the Victorian brickwork—the condemned entrance to an abandoned Tube station. Rusted padlocks hung from an iron grate, except the heavy chain wasn't looped through the hasp. It merely rested over the metal, staged to look secure. Tomás lunged sideways. He wrenched the grate open, metal shrieking against stone, and threw himself into the pitch-black stairwell beyond. "Bloody hell." Quinn sprinted forward. She caught the iron gate just before it slammed shut, the rusted bars biting into her palms. Cold, stale air billowed up from the subterranean shaft, carrying an odd, metallic tang mixed with burning sage and damp earth. She glanced down at her left wrist. The luminous hands of her worn leather watch read 02:14. Calling for backup down here meant losing radio signal the second she descended past the ticket hall, and waiting on the street meant losing Herrera altogether. Quinn pulled her torch from her belt, clicked it on, and plunged down the steps. The beam sliced through thick, swirling dust. Broken ceramic tiles crunched beneath her soles. Wet footprints, dark against the grime of decades, led straight across a derelict concourse where shredded vintage posters peeled from curved walls. Quinn moved heel-to-toe, sweeping the light across rusted turnstiles and shattered ticket booths. Footsteps echoed ahead, slapping against concrete. Hollow. Fast. She vaulted a low barrier and took the immobile escalator two steps at a time, the serrated metal treads slick under her boots. Halfway down the deep shaft, the beam of her torch grew redundant. Amber light flickered at the bottom. Not the harsh fluorescent buzz of London Underground maintenance crews, nor the sweep of security lamps. Firelight. Quinn clicked her torch off and flattened her five-foot-nine frame against the curved tiled wall at the base of the escalator. Voices hummed from the main platform tunnel—a low, polyglot murmur of dozens, perhaps hundreds, of people, punctuated by the clink of glass and the hiss of open flames. Peering around the tiled corner, Quinn froze. A wooden booth blocked the mouth of the platform tunnel, flanked by two figures wearing heavy butcher's aprons stained dark at the hems. The man on the left stood well over six feet, his neck thick as a bollard, his eyes obscured by round, smoked-glass spectacles despite the gloom. Tomás stood right in front of them, chest heaving, rainwater pooling around his scuffed trainers. He dug frantic fingers into his jeans pocket and slapped a small, pale object onto the wooden counter. From twenty feet away, it looked like a carved knucklebone. "One through," Tomás panted, his Spanish accent thickening under the stress. "Just passing to the North End stairs." The giant picked up the bone token, rolled it between thick, scarred fingers, and tilted his head toward the escalator shaft behind Tomás. His nostrils flared. "You brought rain down the steps, medic. And brass." "Nobody saw me open the gate." Tomás swiped wet curls from his forehead, shifting his weight from foot to foot. "Keep the token. Let me pass." The second guard, a gaunt woman with silver rings piercing the ridge of her eyebrow, leaned over the counter. Her tongue darted out, tasting the stagnant air. "Full moon's three nights off. The Veil Market stays put until Tuesday, Herrera. If a Met copper stumbles past this threshold because you got sloppy, the wardens will strip the flesh from your calves." "There's no copper!" Tomás snapped, though his hand drifted back to his throat, thumb rubbing the Saint Christopher medal. "Open the chain." The giant grunted, pocketing the bone. A heavy iron chain dropped with a dull clatter. Tomás ducked past the booth and vanished around the bend of the platform, swallowed instantly by a shifting wall of shadows and amber glow. Quinn pressed her spine harder against the cold glazed bricks. Her pulse hammered a steady, disciplined beat against her ribs. Beyond that booth, glimpses of the platform defied every briefing she had ever sat through at Scotland Yard. Braziers burned with pale green flames that cast no smoke. Stalls draped in velvet and oilskin lined the edges of the dry, empty rail bed. A patron walked past the tunnel mouth carrying a glass jar that pulsed with trapped, furious bioluminescence, while a vendor weighed grey powder on brass scales, whispering words that made the fine hairs on Quinn's forearms stand straight up. Unlicensed pharmaceuticals didn't burn green. Street gangs didn't trade in bone tokens. Memories of Morris's body flashed behind her eyes—found in a locked East End warehouse, his service weapon unfired, frost coating his eyelashes in the middle of August. The brass had called it cardiac arrest. Quinn had called it murder, and they had buried her in paperwork for two years to shut her up. Her radio crackled softly at her shoulder, spitting static. No bars. Down here, two hundred feet beneath Camden clay, her warrant card meant nothing. If those sentries spotted her, there would be no arrest, no caution read, no backup breaching the grates in time. Just another cold body written off as a tragic mystery. At the booth, the gaunt woman rested her elbows on the scarred wood, scanning the dark escalator shaft one more time. "Lock the top grate?" the giant asked, his voice scraping like gravel in a cement mixer. "Leave it," the woman replied, turning back toward the green-lit haze of the platform. "The damp keeps the rats out. Besides, nothing mundane comes down those stairs twice." Quinn's right hand drifted down to her hip, fingers brushing the cold steel of her baton, while her left hand touched the worn leather strap of her watch. Tomás was fifty yards ahead, carrying a bag that linked the Soho bar to whatever madness festered on those tracks. She scanned the grimy floor near her boots. Half-buried in a pile of decades-old cigarette butts and shattered brick lay no bone token, only rusted iron spikes and broken glass. Stepping away from the wall, Quinn tested her weight on the balls of her feet, staring past the two guards into the shifting, unnatural light of the tunnel.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:10:40.907Z" 11/11/2026, 4:10:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1431
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1431
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"pumping"
count1
3
word"jaw clenched"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"traced"
2"pumping"
3"jaw clenched"
4"shattered"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
7"flickered"
8"gloom"
9"weight"
10"eyebrow"
11"pulse"
12"velvet"
13"pulsed"
14"scanning"
15"scanned"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1428
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1248
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street2
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Tomás12
Herrera3
Saint2
Christopher2
Soho2
Victorian1
Tube1
London1
Underground1
Spanish1
Scotland1
Yard1
Morris1
East1
End1
August1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
places
0"High"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"Victorian"
4"London"
5"Scotland"
6"East"
7"End"
globalScore0.939
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a carved knucklebone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1428
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.73
std18.55
cv0.585
sampleLengths
051
142
22
342
466
57
633
78
867
910
1028
1143
1252
1320
142
1541
1643
1715
1849
198
2035
2123
2249
237
2449
2543
2618
2726
289
2926
3027
3134
3222
3339
3420
3582
3612
3753
3854
3921
4016
4128
4248
4330
4428
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs204
matches(empty)
57.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences100
ratio0.03
matches
0"His gaze darted left, dropping to a boarded-up archway set into the Victorian brickwork—the condemned entrance to an abandoned Tube station."
1"Voices hummed from the main platform tunnel—a low, polyglot murmur of dozens, perhaps hundreds, of people, punctuated by the clink of glass and the hiss of open flames."
2"Memories of Morris's body flashed behind her eyes—found in a locked East End warehouse, his service weapon unfired, frost coating his eyelashes in the middle of August."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1265
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.023715415019762844
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.003952569169960474
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean14.28
std8.45
cv0.592
sampleLengths
020
110
221
312
411
519
62
79
88
925
103
1127
125
1331
147
1512
1621
178
1828
1914
2025
2110
2228
2310
2420
2513
265
2721
2816
2910
303
3117
322
333
3417
3521
367
3710
3826
3915
407
417
4222
4313
446
451
461
4723
4812
496
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.62
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners62
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Just another cold body written"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her boots struck the slick"
1"His heavy canvas medical bag"
2"He stumbled on the landing,"
3"She didn't waste breath on"
4"His warm brown eyes widened."
5"He clutched the strap of"
6"She unclipped the strap over"
7"His gaze darted left, dropping"
8"It merely rested over the"
9"He wrenched the grate open,"
10"She caught the iron gate"
11"She glanced down at her"
12"She vaulted a low barrier"
13"He dug frantic fingers into"
14"His nostrils flared."
15"Her tongue darted out, tasting"
16"Her pulse hammered a steady,"
17"Her radio crackled softly at"
18"She scanned the grimy floor"
ratio0.229
74.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences83
matches
0"Water sheeted off the corrugated"
1"Her boots struck the slick"
2"Rainwater plastered her cropped salt-and-pepper"
3"His heavy canvas medical bag"
4"He stumbled on the landing,"
5"Quinn's voice cut through the"
6"She didn't waste breath on"
7"Tomás glanced back."
8"Neon light from a kebab"
9"His warm brown eyes widened."
10"He clutched the strap of"
11"Tomás backed toward a chain-link"
12"Chest heaving, he reached inside"
13"Quinn slowed her approach, squaring"
14"She unclipped the strap over"
15"Herrera and his Soho crowd"
16"Tomás didn't drop the bag."
17"His gaze darted left, dropping"
18"It merely rested over the"
19"Tomás lunged sideways."
ratio0.771
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"If those sentries spotted her,"
ratio0.012
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He stumbled on the landing, his trainer skidding through an oil-slicked puddle, before catching himself on a rusted drainpipe."
1"Pumping her arms, she cleared a toppled bicycle and rounded the corner into a narrow service alley that smelled of sour lager and wet brick."
2"Chest heaving, he reached inside his collar, his fingers closing briefly around the silver Saint Christopher medallion hanging at his throat."
3"A patron walked past the tunnel mouth carrying a glass jar that pulsed with trapped, furious bioluminescence, while a vendor weighed grey powder on brass scales…"
4"Stepping away from the wall, Quinn tested her weight on the balls of her feet, staring past the two guards into the shifting, unnatural light of the tunnel."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Tomás panted, his Spanish accent thickening under the stress"
1"Tomás snapped, though his hand drifted back to his throat, thumb rubbing the Saint Christopher medal"
2"the giant asked, his voice scraping like gravel in a cement mixer"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Tomás panted (pant)"
1"Tomás snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.211
84.0536%