Run: 2026-11-11-01M75P0YQT76QM0KF3XEFMZ93B

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Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.025082
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back, and the door swung open to reveal three thousand pounds of bespoke charcoal wool smelling of rain and expensive sins. Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane in the cramped hallway. Blood seeped through the crisp white linen at his ribs, blooming into a dark, jagged stain. "Wrong flat." Rory braced her foot against the scuffed oak and shoved. The tip of his cane shot out, wedging between the door and the jamb with a dull thud. "Charming as ever, ma petite." "Eva isn't here. Go bleed on someone else's rug." "I am aware Eva is in Prague." "Then you wasted a cab fare to Brick Lane." "Let me in, Aurora. Before the hounds catch the scent." Rory froze. Her fingers tightened on the brass handle, the small crescent scar on her left wrist pulling taut against her skin. Lucien didn't bluff about hounds. Not the kind from Avaros. She yanked the door wide, grabbed him by his soaked lapel, and hauled him across the threshold. He stumbled, a sharp hiss escaping his teeth as his weight shifted onto his bad leg. Rory slammed the door shut and threw all three deadbolts into place. Flip-flop, click-clack. Metal bit into metal. Roasted cumin and frying onions drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house downstairs, mixing with the sharp, metallic tang of half-demon blood. Every inch of Eva's flat suffocated under towering stacks of brittle parchment, leather-bound grimoires, and frantic sticky notes. Ptolemy, a fat orange tabby, cracked one yellow eye open from atop a pile of Babylonian translations, hissed at Lucien, and bolted into the bedroom. Smart cat. Lucien sank onto the threadbare velvet sofa, crushing a stack of star charts. His slicked-back platinum hair had come undone at the temples, damp strands brushing his sharp cheekbones. That mismatched gaze, one eye warm amber, the other a pit of pitch black, tracked her across the room. "Still playing house in someone else's clutter?" "Still getting stabbed by angry clients?" "An occupational hazard. Pour me a drink, darling. Something brown." "Get stuffed, Luc." "I am losing quite a lot of blood on Eva's lovely little old red Persian rug." Rory glared at the dark pool spreading beneath his tailored trousers. Eva would flay them both alive. She stomped into the tiny kitchenette, yanked open a cupboard, and grabbed a bottle of cheap Scotch and a roll of gauze. Returning, she tossed the gauze at his chest and uncorked the bottle with her teeth, spitting the cork onto the coffee table. She didn't hand him a glass. She tilted the bottle and poured a generous measure straight onto his soaked shirt. Lucien's jaw clenched. His fingers dug into the sofa cushions, shredding the velvet, though he didn't make a sound. "Sadist." "Take the jacket off." "Buy me dinner first." "Take it off, or I stitch the wool straight into your skin." His mouth curved into a slow, wicked smirk that made her stomach drop straight to the curry shop's cellar. Six months. Six months since Prague, since a hotel room with broken mirrors and an empty side of the bed, and one look still made her pulse hammer a frantic, traitorous rhythm against her ribs. He shrugged out of the ruined suit jacket, wincing as the fabric pulled at the wound. Rory knelt between his knees, keeping her eyes locked on the buttons of his waistcoat. Unfastening them took steady hands. Hers didn't shake. She wouldn't give him the satisfaction. "You cut your hair." "Split ends." "You liked it long." "Evan liked it long. You liked pulling it. Subtle difference." She parted the blood-soaked linen. Three jagged lacerations raked across his pale, muscular ribs, oozing black-red ichor that smoked faintly in the cool room. Demon steel. The flesh around the edges already blistered, fighting his natural healing. Rory sucked in a sharp breath. She grabbed the Scotch, took a burning swig for herself, and pressed a wad of gauze hard against the cuts. Lucien's hand shot out, wrapping around her scarred left wrist. His skin burned like a fever. "Gentle, Laila." "Don't call me that." "You screamed it loud enough in November." She pressed harder. He gasped, his head falling back against the sofa, exposing the pale column of his throat. Good. Let it hurt. "Why are you here, Lucien? You have a dozen safe houses between Soho and the river." "Compromised." "All of them?" "My father's court sent a cleaner." Rory paused, blood soaking through the cotton beneath her knuckles. Avaros didn't send cleaners for petty information brokers unless the broker stole something catastrophic. She looked up. His head tilted down, black and amber eyes locking onto hers. Weary, lethal, and far too close. "What did you take?" "Nothing." "Liar." "A ledger. Names of half-breeds hiding in London." Her breath hitched. Not half-breeds. Humans, too. People tangled in the underworld who didn't belong on any demon's radar. People like Eva. People like a delivery girl who knew too much. His thumb stroked the crescent scar on her wrist, back and forth, a slow, hypnotic tick-tock against her racing pulse. The heat of his palm seeped straight into her bones. "You left me in Vienna," she said. "Prague. Vienna was October." "You vanished. Left ten grand on the nightstand like I was a high-end whore and ghosted." "I paid for your flight home. My enemies were closing in." "You didn't ask what I wanted!" "You wanted a normal life, Rory! Delivering noodles, drinking cheap pints above Silas' bar, playing pretend that monsters don't exist!" He lunged forward, ignoring the torn flesh in his side, closing the inches between them until his Whiskey-and-smoke breath brushed her lips. His free hand tangled in her straight black hair, tilting her face up. "Tell me I am wrong. Tell me you didn't wake up thanking God the big bad Frenchman took his shadows out of your bed." "I woke up cold," she whispered. Silence slammed down between them, thick and suffocating. Downstairs, a plate shattered in the kitchen, followed by muffled shouting in Bengali. Up here, Lucien's gaze dropped to her mouth. His grip in her hair tightened, pulling her an inch closer. Her lips parted. The scent of rain, copper, and expensive cologne drowned out everything else. Six months of fury melted into a sharp, aching hunger that coiled low in her belly. "Aurora," he murmured, his voice rough as gravel. Scratching echoed from the hallway outside. Heavy nails dragging down the painted wood of the front door. Lucien didn't pull away, though his heterochromatic eyes went flat and lethal. Slowly, silently, his right hand slid down to his ivory cane resting against the sofa, twisting the handle until two inches of gleaming silver steel hissed free. Boom. The solid oak door bowed inward. Plaster rained from the ceiling, dusting Rory's black hair white, as the top deadbolt sheared clean off the wall and shot across the room like a bullet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"jaw clenched"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"racing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"velvet"
2"jaw clenched"
3"stomach"
4"pulse"
5"racing"
6"silence"
7"shattered"
8"echoed"
9"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1162
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount893
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Avaros2
Eva3
Babylonian1
Lucien8
Scotch2
Prague1
Whiskey-and-smoke1
Silence1
Bengali1
Scratching1
Rory8
Six3
People3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Scotch"
4"Silence"
5"Scratching"
6"Rory"
7"People"
places
0"Prague"
1"Bengali"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1162
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean17.88
std17.59
cv0.984
sampleLengths
025
127
22
328
45
59
67
79
810
932
1051
1167
122
1348
147
156
1610
173
1816
1961
2020
2119
221
234
244
2512
2654
2745
284
292
304
3110
3237
3326
3416
352
364
377
3823
3916
401
413
426
4344
444
451
461
478
4831
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences117
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.016574585635359115
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004419889502762431
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean9.93
std7.13
cv0.718
sampleLengths
025
111
216
32
410
518
65
79
87
99
1010
112
1220
135
145
1517
1616
1712
182
194
2024
2118
2225
232
2413
2516
2619
277
286
2910
303
3116
3211
336
3422
3522
366
3714
383
3916
401
414
424
4312
4419
452
4633
4716
4815
495
84.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5384615384615384
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners63
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Slowly, silently, his right hand"
ratio0.014
71.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her fingers tightened on the"
1"She yanked the door wide,"
2"He stumbled, a sharp hiss"
3"His slicked-back platinum hair had"
4"She stomped into the tiny"
5"She didn't hand him a"
6"She tilted the bottle and"
7"His fingers dug into the"
8"His mouth curved into a"
9"He shrugged out of the"
10"Hers didn't shake."
11"She wouldn't give him the"
12"She parted the blood-soaked linen."
13"She grabbed the Scotch, took"
14"His skin burned like a"
15"She pressed harder."
16"He gasped, his head falling"
17"She looked up."
18"His head tilted down, black"
19"Her breath hitched."
ratio0.371
52.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences70
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back,"
1"Lucien Moreau leaned on his"
2"Blood seeped through the crisp"
3"Rory braced her foot against"
4"The tip of his cane"
5"Her fingers tightened on the"
6"Lucien didn't bluff about hounds."
7"She yanked the door wide,"
8"He stumbled, a sharp hiss"
9"Rory slammed the door shut"
10"Metal bit into metal."
11"Every inch of Eva's flat"
12"Ptolemy, a fat orange tabby,"
13"Lucien sank onto the threadbare"
14"His slicked-back platinum hair had"
15"That mismatched gaze, one eye"
16"Rory glared at the dark"
17"Eva would flay them both"
18"She stomped into the tiny"
19"She didn't hand him a"
ratio0.814
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Returning, she tossed the gauze at his chest and uncorked the bottle with her teeth, spitting the cork onto the coffee table."
1"His mouth curved into a slow, wicked smirk that made her stomach drop straight to the curry shop's cellar."
2"He gasped, his head falling back against the sofa, exposing the pale column of his throat."
3"He lunged forward, ignoring the torn flesh in his side, closing the inches between them until his Whiskey-and-smoke breath brushed her lips."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he murmured, his voice rough as gravel"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.103
85.9555%