Run: 2026-11-11-01M75P26A976EN4A3ZXEE1N9W3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 41s
Cost:
$0.055438
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled across the Soho pavement, fracturing in puddles oily with rainwater and diesel. Rory pushed her shoulder against the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest and stepped inside, bringing the chill of Dean Street with her. Water dripped from the hems of her waterproof trousers onto the scuffed floorboards. She tucked her scuffed moped helmet into the crook of her elbow and shook out her straight, shoulder-length black hair, scattering droplets across the brass foot-rail of the bar. Behind the mahogany counter, Silas looked up from a ledger. The amber glow of a low-hanging Edison bulb caught the grey streaks in his auburn hair and neat beard. He closed the book, rested his right hand on the wood—the broad face of his silver signet ring dull with decades of wear—and shifted his weight to spare his stiff left knee. His hazel eyes cataloged the grease spot on Rory's sleeve, the tightness around her jaw, the faint scent of charred ginger and Sichuan peppercorns clinging to her jacket from Yu-Fei Cheung's kitchen. "Rough run down Charing Cross?" Rory set the helmet on an empty stool and peeled off her wet riding gloves, flexing stiff fingers. A pale, crescent-shaped scar sat stark against the chilled skin of her left wrist. "Tourists with umbrellas. None of them look before stepping off the curb." Silas reached for a short tumbler, his movement unhurried, his bad leg dragging a fraction of an inch against the rubber mat. Before the whiskey touched the glass, laughter broke from the far corner of the room, near the tall mahogany bookshelf that concealed the bar's private parlor. Three men in charcoal overcoats gathered their umbrellas beneath a framed map of pre-war Mitteleuropa. Soho had been changing for years, pushing boutique law firms and media agencies closer to Silas' quiet sanctuary, driving shelter-seekers through the door whenever the sky opened up. Two of the men headed for the exit, collars turned up against the waiting downpour. The third lingered at the bar to collect a black card from a silver tray. He slipped it into a stitched leather wallet, glanced down the length of the counter, and stopped. His umbrella tip clicked against the floorboards. "Aurora?" The name hung in the damp air like pipe smoke. Nobody in London used those three syllables. Not Silas, not Yu-Fei, not Eva. That name belonged to a girl who ironed her blouses on Sunday nights and annotated Supreme Court judgments in three colors of ink. Rory turned her head. Bright blue eyes met dark brown ones beneath a neat sweep of sandy hair. Callum Price stood six feet away, wrapped in pristine navy cashmere. At twenty-one, Callum had survived on supermarket meal deals, chewed the plastic caps off his pens during tort lectures, and begged Rory for her father's insights on appellate advocacy. At twenty-five, the boyishness had been planed off him. His shave was razor-close, his silk tie knotted with geometric precision, his posture shaped by chambers and courtrooms. Silas paused with the bottle poised over the tumbler. His gaze flicked from Callum's polished oxfords to Rory's expression, waiting for a signal to intervene. Rory gave a fractional tilt of her chin. Silas poured two fingers of whiskey, slid the glass in front of her, and drifted down the bar to polish beer taps that needed no cleaning. Callum walked over, looking past her shoulder as if expecting an entourage, before his focus dropped to the scratched visor of her helmet and the frayed nylon cuff of her Golden Empress jacket. "God, it is you." Rory wrapped her palm around the tumbler, letting the glass warm her knuckles. "Hello, Callum." He stopped one stool away, leaving a polite buffer of empty space between his dry cashmere and her dripping Gore-Tex. Around them, monochrome photographs of forgotten harbors and dead diplomats stared down from dark green walls. "Three years. You vanished off the face of the earth in the middle of Hilary term, and you turn up five minutes from Shaftesbury Avenue." "London is big enough to hide most people. You took a wrong turn coming from Holborn." A faint flush crept up Callum's neck, betraying the anxious undergraduate beneath the barrister's armor. He set his umbrella against the mahogany and took the stool beside her helmet. "One of the senior clerks knows a pub on Frith Street. We missed the turn in the rain and saw the green sign." "You got pupillage, then. Twelve King's Bench Walk?" Callum's fingers found the stem of an abandoned water glass, turning it a quarter-inch clockwise. "Fountain Court. Commercial litigation. I started my second six in October." "My father will be thrilled someone from our study group made the cut." The mention of Brendan Carter sucked the warmth out of Callum's polite smile. Back in Cardiff, Brendan's name had been currency, a golden key Rory carried in her pocket while hating the weight of the lock it fit. She took a slow sip of whiskey. Peat and smoke cut through the grease coating the back of her throat. "I ran into your dad in Swansea last spring. He was leading for the defense on a shipping fraud." Rory kept her eyes on the amber reflection in her glass. "How was his backhand? He used to complain the damp in Swansea ruined his wrist." "He looked older, Rory. Tired." There it was—the shift to the name they had used over lukewarm library coffee at two in the morning. Callum leaned an elbow on the bar, ignoring a ring of spilled tonic water soaking into his sleeve. "He asked me if I'd heard from you." Rory set the glass down. It made a dull thud on the wood. "Jennifer knows where to send a postcard at Christmas. He knows I'm breathing." "Breathing isn't what anyone expected for you. You beat the entire year in the second-year moot. Professor Jenkins kept your skeleton argument on judicial review as the model paper for two cohorts after you dropped out." "Paper doesn't keep the rain off, Callum. Gore-Tex does." His gaze dropped again, tracing the reflective yellow stripe across her chest, the cracked leather of her boots, the scuffed helmet sitting between them like a severed head. Disbelief warred with pity across his features, and pity won. Rory hated him for it—hated the clean, unbruised trajectory of his life, the straight line drawn from Cardiff lecture halls to Temple chambers without a single detour through a locked bathroom or a midnight train out of Paddington with forty pounds in coins. "What happened to you? One week we were splitting cases on promissory estoppel, and the next week your desk was empty. Your phone went straight to a disconnected tone." "I changed my mind about the law." "Nobody changes their mind in February with four months left on a degree." "People change their minds when the alternative is worse." Callum stared at her left hand resting on the bar. Above the pale crescent scar from a childhood fall off a garden wall in Pontcanna, her wrist was bare, the bone sharp beneath thin skin. In her final autumn at Cardiff, she had worn heavy wool cardigans indoors, tugging the cuffs down over her knuckles whenever she reached for a highlighter. Callum swallowed. Outside, a black cab splashed through the gutter, throwing a wave of green-tinted water against the front window. "I saw Evan in Bristol six months ago." Rory's fingers did not twitch against the glass, though the pulse in her throat struck once, hard, against her collar. Down the bar, Silas stopped wiping the brass tap, his reflection motionless in the smoky mirror behind the optic shelves. "Did you." "He's working for an architectural firm near the docks. Married some girl from Bath." "Good for Bath." Callum rubbed his thumb across his knuckles, scraping at invisible dry skin. His voice dropped beneath the low hum of the bar's refrigerator. "I lived in the ground-floor flat on Cathays Terrace that last term, Rory. Right under yours and Evan's." Rory turned on her stool to face him square. Up close, fine lines bracketed his mouth—stress from eighty-hour weeks drafting pleadings for billionaires, an entirely respectable kind of exhaustion. "I know where you lived. You borrowed our milk every Tuesday." "The night before the land law seminar. November. The radiator pipes in that house carried everything." Silence stretched between them, thick with the smell of wet wool, old paper, and spilled malt. On the wall behind Callum's head, a photograph from nineteen-fifty showed two men exchanging briefcases on a fog-bound bridge, their faces blurred by shutter speed and silver nitrate. "You never came up the stairs, Callum." He stared down at the scarred mahogany, his jaw working. "A plate hit the floorboards above my bedroom. Then the wardrobe door slammed hard enough to shake dust off my ceiling rose. Tom wanted to call the police. I told him couples fight during exam season. I told him Brendan Carter's daughter wouldn't stand for anything serious, and if we called a squad car to the house, Evan would make things awkward on campus." "You put your headphones on." Callum flinched as if she had struck him across the mouth with her wet gloves. "I had a skeleton argument due at nine the next morning." "And you got a First." "I got a seventy-four." He looked up, eyes bright and wet in the dim Soho light, stripped of all Fountain Court authority. "Three days later, a removal van took Evan's things, and the landlord nailed a padlock to your door. Eva screamed at me outside the union building when I asked where you'd gone. She spat on my shoes." "Eva never had much patience for mitigation." "I looked for you when I moved to London for Bar school. Checked the Inns of Court rosters. Checked the paralegal registers at all the legal aid clinics in Southwark and Hackney, thinking you'd gone into housing or human rights just to spite your dad." Rory picked up her whiskey and drained the rest of it. The ice clinked against her teeth. "You looked in all the placesAurora Carter would go. She never got on the train." Callum reached into his breast pocket and pulled out a heavy cream card embossed with black lettering. He held it between two fingers, hovering over the wet ring left by her glass, unable to bring himself to lay it down on the sticky wood. "We hire researchers, Rory. Paralegals without completed degrees, if they have the aptitude. I know two partners on the commercial bench who knew your father on the Wales and Chester circuit. One phone call—" "Put that away before it gets soy sauce on it." His hand stayed frozen in mid-air, the crisp rectangle trembling between them. "You're delivering takeaway on a moped in the middle of winter. You have a brain that runs circles around half the juniors in my chambers, and you're hauling noodles through Soho traffic for minimum wage." "Yu-Fei pays cash above the rate, feeds me duck pancakes at midnight, and never asks why I bolt my bedroom door from the inside." Callum lowered the card an inch, its corner grazing the wood. His voice cracked. "Let me fix one thing, Rory. One small piece of it." Rory looked from the embossed lettering of Fountain Court to the man holding it—a boy who had traded his hearing for a seventy-four in land law, offering her a ladder back into a burning building because he couldn't stomach looking at the ashes on her coat. Down the bar, the brass bell above the street door jangled as another gust of wind drove rain across the threshold, turning the neon light on Callum's wet cheekbones the color of tarnished copper.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1969
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1969
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"cataloged"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"chilled"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"cataloged"
3"stark"
4"chilled"
5"sanctuary"
6"pristine"
7"silk"
8"flicked"
9"warmth"
10"tracing"
11"pulse"
12"silence"
13"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"d with pity"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1963
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1281
uniqueNames30
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho3
Raven1
Nest1
Dean1
Street1
Silas6
Edison1
Rory16
Sichuan1
Yu-Fei2
Cheung1
Mitteleuropa1
Two1
London1
Eva1
Sunday1
Supreme1
Court3
Price1
Callum16
Golden1
Empress1
Gore-Tex1
Brendan2
Carter1
Cardiff3
Temple1
Paddington1
Pontcanna1
Fountain2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Edison"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Eva"
7"Price"
8"Callum"
9"Brendan"
10"Carter"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dean"
2"Street"
3"Sichuan"
4"Two"
5"London"
6"Gore-Tex"
7"Cardiff"
8"Temple"
9"Pontcanna"
globalScore0.875
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if expecting an entourage, before his focus dropped to the scratched visor of her helmet and the frayed nylon cuff of her Golden Empress jacket"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1963
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean25.17
std22.39
cv0.89
sampleLengths
081
193
25
332
412
591
647
77
81
946
1018
1167
1259
1333
144
1513
162
1736
1825
1916
2029
2123
228
2315
2411
2513
2658
2719
2811
2915
305
3137
328
3313
3413
3536
369
3781
3829
397
4013
419
4261
4320
448
4540
462
4714
483
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"been planed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences120
ratio0.042
matches
0"He closed the book, rested his right hand on the wood—the broad face of his silver signet ring dull with decades of wear—and shifted his weight to spare his stiff left knee."
1"There it was—the shift to the name they had used over lukewarm library coffee at two in the morning."
2"Rory hated him for it—hated the clean, unbruised trajectory of his life, the straight line drawn from Cardiff lecture halls to Temple chambers without a single detour through a locked bathroom or a midnight train out of Paddington with forty pounds in coins."
3"Up close, fine lines bracketed his mouth—stress from eighty-hour weeks drafting pleadings for billionaires, an entirely respectable kind of exhaustion."
4"Rory looked from the embossed lettering of Fountain Court to the man holding it—a boy who had traded his hearing for a seventy-four in land law, offering her a ladder back into a burning building because he couldn't stomach looking at the ashes on her coat."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount865
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pale, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.009248554913294798
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011560693641618498
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean16.36
std10.57
cv0.646
sampleLengths
015
124
213
329
410
519
632
732
85
918
1014
1112
1222
1326
1415
1528
1615
1715
1817
197
201
2110
227
236
2423
254
2614
2711
2829
299
3018
319
3216
338
3426
3533
364
3713
382
3920
4016
4125
4216
4315
4414
4523
468
4715
4811
4913
79.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.48333333333333334
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners58
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Bright blue eyes met dark"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences75
matches
0"She tucked her scuffed moped"
1"He closed the book, rested"
2"His hazel eyes cataloged the"
3"He slipped it into a"
4"His umbrella tip clicked against"
5"His shave was razor-close, his"
6"His gaze flicked from Callum's"
7"He stopped one stool away,"
8"He set his umbrella against"
9"She took a slow sip"
10"It made a dull thud"
11"His gaze dropped again, tracing"
12"His voice dropped beneath the"
13"He stared down at the"
14"He looked up, eyes bright"
15"He held it between two"
16"His hand stayed frozen in"
17"His voice cracked."
ratio0.24
86.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rory pushed her shoulder against"
1"Water dripped from the hems"
2"She tucked her scuffed moped"
3"The amber glow of a"
4"He closed the book, rested"
5"His hazel eyes cataloged the"
6"Rory set the helmet on"
7"A pale, crescent-shaped scar sat"
8"Silas reached for a short"
9"Soho had been changing for"
10"The third lingered at the"
11"He slipped it into a"
12"His umbrella tip clicked against"
13"The name hung in the"
14"Nobody in London used those"
15"That name belonged to a"
16"Rory turned her head."
17"Callum Price stood six feet"
18"His shave was razor-close, his"
19"Silas paused with the bottle"
ratio0.747
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Before the whiskey touched the"
ratio0.013
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Before the whiskey touched the glass, laughter broke from the far corner of the room, near the tall mahogany bookshelf that concealed the bar's private parlor."
1"That name belonged to a girl who ironed her blouses on Sunday nights and annotated Supreme Court judgments in three colors of ink."
2"Callum walked over, looking past her shoulder as if expecting an entourage, before his focus dropped to the scratched visor of her helmet and the frayed nylon c…"
3"Rory looked from the embossed lettering of Fountain Court to the man holding it—a boy who had traded his hearing for a seventy-four in land law, offering her a …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.2442%