Run: 2026-11-11-01M75P3D3F8RT5J8ZYETB2MK7A

Run Details

Duration:
4m 48s
Cost:
$0.191238
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory twisted the top brass thumb-turn, slid the middle iron bar from its bracket, and clicked the bottom cylinder lock. She pulled the door open four inches. October rain and bergamot cut through the stairwell's thick haze of fried onions and fenugreek. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow landing. Dampness darkened the shoulders of his tailored charcoal overcoat, though every strand of his slicked-back platinum blond hair stayed immaculate. Beneath the bare hallway bulb, his mismatched gaze locked onto hers—one iris burning amber, the other a solid pit of ink-black shadow. Rory threw her shoulder into the oak panel to slam it shut. A polished leather Oxford wedged into the gap before the latch caught. Wood struck bone with a sharp crack. Lucien kept his face carved from pale stone, gloved fingers curling around the ivory handle of his cane. "Wrong address, Moreau. Eva is in Prague until Thursday." Lucien planted his open palm against the peeling paint at eye level, holding the heavy timber back without strain. "I did not climb three flights of rotting stairs for Eva. Silas racked a twelve-gauge the moment my shadow crossed his threshold. Your landlord possesses dismal aim and alarming enthusiasm." Rory braced her hip against the inside handle, bright blue eyes narrowing as straight black hair swung against her collarbone. "I bought him a bottle of single malt to shoot on sight. Go stand under his streetlamp so he gets a clean second round." Lucien slid two fingers inside his coat lapel and drew out a folded pink carbon slip. Soot blackened one corner. Pressed across Yu-Fei's neat ink columns sat a thumbprint seared into the paper, ringed by tiny geometric hooks. "An usher from my father's court walked into the Golden Empress twenty minutes after you ended your shift. Ordered roast duck, paid in sovereigns, and stamped an Avaros blood-compass onto your dispatch clipboard." Goosebumps prickled along Rory's forearms despite the spice-heavy heat rising through the floorboards from the Brick Lane curry house on the ground floor. She snatched the slip from his hand. Sesame oil and burnt sulfur clung to the flimsy sheet. Her own block capitals sat half an inch from the scorch mark. She released the handle and vacated the doorway. Lucien stepped across the threshold, bringing river mist and woodsmoke into the cramped one-bedroom flat. Rory shoved the door shut and threw all three deadbolts home in quick succession. When she pivoted, the Frenchman occupied the sole strip of clear linoleum beside the hissing radiator. Precarious towers of occult paperbacks, loose research notes, and unrolled vellum scrolls buried every table, chair, and windowsill. Lucien's mismatched eyes swept the clutter before dropping toward his ankles. Ptolemy abandoned his nest atop three Latin dictionaries, trotted across the rug, and scraped his striped tabby cheek along the ferrule of Lucien's cane, inches from the seam housing a concealed steel blade. Rory scowled at the cat. "Traitor." Ptolemy rumbled a purr and wove a figure-eight around Lucien's charcoal trouser legs. Lucien peeled off his black leather gloves, tucking them into his pocket with crisp precision. "Felines recognize pedigree." Rory skirted a stack of Mesopotamian clay rubbings to put Eva's desk between them. "That cat eats mothballs and sleeps in the sink. Keep your coat on. You're not staying." She flattened the singed pink docket beneath the magnifying lens of Eva's brass lamp. Under the glass, the microscopic hooks ringing the thumbprint pulsed with a faint crimson sheen, iron filings tugged toward a lodestone. "A blood-compass tracks demonic lineage." Lucien unfastened the horn buttons of his damp overcoat, draping the heavy wool over one forearm to reveal a charcoal waistcoat cut close to broad shoulders and a lean torso. "It tracks contact with Avaros blood. The usher is sweeping every witness tied to the Rotherhithe warehouse." Rory lifted her chin from the lamp. Twenty years of listening to Brendan Carter dismantle liars over Cardiff Sunday roasts sharpened her smile into a razor. "Four dockworkers, a bribed customs clerk, and a hedge-witch from Deptford stood in that warehouse. None of them have Fourth Court aristocrats ordering duck pancakes on their delivery routes." Lucien stood motionless beside a teetering pile of alchemical charts. Below the floorboards, the restaurant extractor fan rattled into gear, vibrating through the soles of Rory's boots. "You handled the reliquary." Rory tapped a fingernail against the scorched paper. "Wearing thick leather bike gloves. Pick one of your other three languages if lying in English is giving you trouble." A muscle jumped beneath Lucien's cheekbone. He hooked the ivory handle of his cane over the lip of a bookshelf, leaving both pale hands empty at his sides. Stripped of the gentleman's prop, the polished London fixer vanished, exposing the Marseille gutter-fighter beneath the bespoke wool. "Resonance transfers through skin when pulse and heat cross a threshold. You carry mine." Anger flared behind Rory's ribs, hot and unwelcome. Six weeks of silence compressed into the narrow width of mahogany separating them. Forty-three mornings since she had woken in high-thread-count sheets in Mayfair, hipbones bruised, morning sun hitting an empty pillow and a cream envelope of fifty-pound notes propped against a silver water pitcher. "Funny. According to your accounts, I provided courier consulting for five hundred pounds. Cash upon completion. Strange how Avaros magic confuses a payroll receipt with skin contact." Lucien rounded the corner of the desk, invading the cramped channel between the drawers and a ceiling-high bookcase. Rory planted her boots, refusing to retreat an inch while the scent of rain-wet wool and dark cedar swallowed the small space. "My driver informed me you tucked five hundred pounds into his breast pocket at a red light on Piccadilly and walked to Soho in a downpour." Rory met his heterochromatic stare without blinking. "He held the umbrella and stayed until the end of the ride. Which beat his employer's record by several hours." The amber ring in Lucien's right eye narrowed around a dilating pupil, darkening to match its pitch-black twin. "My father's stewards audit every bank draft leaving London. A contractor payout buries your name inside three thousand lines of dull commerce. An unlogged woman departing my townhouse at dawn paints a target between your shoulder blades." A dry laugh escaped Rory's throat. "Spare me the noble sacrifice. I fled Wales to get clear of Evan deciding which rooms I had permission to stand in. You don't get to pull me out of my clothes at two in the morning, bolt onto the Eurostar before the kettle boils, and turn up after six weeks expecting gratitude for creative bookkeeping." Lucien closed the remaining foot of floor space. At five-eleven, his frame blocked the amber spill of the desk lamp, casting hollow shadows across his jaw. "You think Marseille was a holiday." Rory tilted her head, bright blue eyes flashing in the dimness before catching on the pink docket across the blotter. Silence stretched for two heartbeats as the missing piece clicked into place. "Hold on. Yu-Fei writes the driver rota in chalk on the pantry wall every Monday morning. No digital calendar. No phone records." Stillness locked Lucien's shoulders. Not a breath stirred his silver pocket-watch chain. "You didn't track the usher to Gerrard Street. You stood in the rain watching the kitchen door for my shift to end, and you saw him enter the dining room." A sharp Provençal curse slipped past Lucien's teeth, his gaze dropping to the hollow of her throat before lifting to meet hers. "Four times at the Gare du Nord I cancelled my ticket because my father's hounds scented the platform. On the fifth, I stopped caring whether they followed." Air snagged in Rory's chest. She raised her left hand to shove against the lapels of his waistcoat. Lucien caught her wrist in midair. Demon heat radiated from his bare palm—hotter than human blood, searing through skin to the tendons beneath. Calloused fingers wrapped around her pulse point while his thumb brushed the small, pale crescent scar at the base of her hand. Neither moved to break the hold. Rory's knuckles grazed the fine wool over his sternum; every shallow breath expanded his chest, pressing charcoal suiting against the back of her fingers. "You brought them to my doorstep." Lucien inclined his head an inch, his voice dropping to a rough scrape that vibrated through his ribs into her hand. "The usher carried your name on vellum before my train cleared Folkestone. Staying in France accomplished nothing except driving me out of my mind." Rory's shoulder blades grazed the leather spines of Eva's encyclopedias. Her pulse hammered beneath his thumb, betraying the cool tilt of her chin. "Release my wrist, Luc, or tell me how we put him in the ground." Lucien kept his grip intact, bracing his free hand against the wooden shelf beside her temple as rain lashed the grime-streaked sash window. "Kill an usher on London cobbles and my father's court locks down the Thames. We do not kill him. We burn a decoy trail onto a blank talisman." Rory's eyes narrowed at the inches of air separating their mouths. "Using what?" Lucien's thumb traced the curve of her crescent scar a second time, his black-and-amber gaze unblinking and ravenous in the half-light. "Fresh resonance. Pulse and heat, Rory, high enough to blind a blood-compass." Rory curled her free hand into the silk lining of his waistcoat lapel, tugging his collar toward hers as old fury warred with the heat pooling beneath her skin. "Convenient magic. You expect me to buy that?" Lucien slid his thumb from her scar to the frantic jump of the artery in her wrist, holding her arm suspended between their chests as proof. "Consult Eva's fourth shelf under Avaros bindings if you doubt my translation. Or check your own pulse." Rory pulled on his lapel until the tips of their noses brushed, her breath mingling with his in the spice-scented dark. "If I find a single clause in Eva's books that says blood from your palm works without the rest, I'm taking your cane to your ribs." A ghost of a grin cut across Lucien's mouth, sharp and reckless. "Check the shelf, Carter. Your pulse is doing half the work for us."
created_at"2026-11-11T16:12:20.475Z" 11/11/2026, 4:12:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1706
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1706
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"resonance"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count6
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"calloused fingers"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"resonance"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
4"searing"
5"calloused fingers"
6"vibrated"
7"traced"
8"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1704
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
45.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1098
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Oxford1
Yu-Fei1
Rory21
Brick1
Lane1
Frenchman1
Latin1
Lucien23
Mesopotamian1
Eva3
Brendan1
Carter1
Cardiff1
Sunday1
London1
Marseille1
Mayfair1
Provençal1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Frenchman"
3"Lucien"
4"Mesopotamian"
5"Eva"
6"Brendan"
7"Carter"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
globalScore0.453
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1704
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean23.34
std14.36
cv0.615
sampleLengths
042
148
212
337
49
519
630
720
824
938
1033
1152
128
1329
1478
155
161
1728
183
1914
2016
2135
225
2330
2417
2526
2629
2727
284
298
3020
3146
3214
3353
3427
3540
3626
377
3820
3918
4037
416
4256
4326
446
4532
4622
4712
4830
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences105
ratio0.029
matches
0"Beneath the bare hallway bulb, his mismatched gaze locked onto hers—one iris burning amber, the other a solid pit of ink-black shadow."
1"Demon heat radiated from his bare palm—hotter than human blood, searing through skin to the tendons beneath."
2"Rory's knuckles grazed the fine wool over his sternum; every shallow breath expanded his chest, pressing charcoal suiting against the back of her fingers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1122
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.004456327985739751
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean16.23
std8.99
cv0.554
sampleLengths
020
17
215
36
420
522
612
712
87
918
109
1119
1230
1320
1424
1516
164
1718
1833
1923
207
2110
2212
238
2415
2514
2616
2718
2811
2933
305
311
3213
3315
343
3514
3616
3714
3821
395
4030
4117
427
4319
4429
4510
4617
474
488
4920
88.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5333333333333333
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners56
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences73
matches
0"She pulled the door open"
1"She snatched the slip from"
2"Her own block capitals sat"
3"She released the handle and"
4"She flattened the singed pink"
5"He hooked the ivory handle"
6"She raised her left hand"
7"Her pulse hammered beneath his"
ratio0.11
49.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences73
matches
0"Rory twisted the top brass"
1"She pulled the door open"
2"October rain and bergamot cut"
3"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
4"Dampness darkened the shoulders of"
5"Rory threw her shoulder into"
6"A polished leather Oxford wedged"
7"Wood struck bone with a"
8"Lucien kept his face carved"
9"Lucien planted his open palm"
10"Rory braced her hip against"
11"Lucien slid two fingers inside"
12"Soot blackened one corner."
13"Goosebumps prickled along Rory's forearms"
14"She snatched the slip from"
15"Sesame oil and burnt sulfur"
16"Her own block capitals sat"
17"She released the handle and"
18"Lucien stepped across the threshold,"
19"Rory shoved the door shut"
ratio0.822
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A sharp Provençal curse slipped past Lucien's teeth, his gaze dropping to the hollow of her throat before lifting to meet hers."
1"Lucien inclined his head an inch, his voice dropping to a rough scrape that vibrated through his ribs into her hand."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5842%