Run: 2026-11-11-01M75PC5BFF3RQ4VSJXQQGMKFZ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 18s
Cost:
$0.084894
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Mist clung to the bracken of Richmond Park, soaking through the cuffs of Rory's jeans. Ahead, ancient oak standing stones jutted from the turf like blackened molars. She thumbed the volume button on her phone and ducked between two monoliths pitted with dry lichen. "Tell me again why you didn't chuck the note in Yu-Fei's bin and go home to bed." Eva's voice crackled through the speaker, tinny against the vast dark of the parkland. Rory swept her beam across the boundary markers and stepped into the clearing. "Because whoever slipped it into my thermal bag while I locked up the moped drew an exact replica of this necklace, down to the nick in the silver bail." Rory hooked a finger beneath her collar and tugged the chain free. The deep crimson stone, no bigger than her thumbnail, rested cold against her palm. Deep within its facets, a dim ember smoldered. "Silas keeps a cricket bat behind the taps. Why didn't you bring backup instead of marching into the woods at midnight?" "The note specified Isolde's turf, solo. Dragging a bartender into Fae territory uninvited turns a simple delivery question into a blood feud." Rory halted three paces past the oak pillars. White light spilled over a carpet of bluebells, scarlet poppies, and tall foxgloves. They bloomed in dense tangles despite the late autumn frost biting the rest of London, yet every petal hung slack. No night breeze stirred their stems. Not a single moth fluttered through the cone of light. "Hang on, Eva. Something's wrong with the air in here." Silence stretched down the line. Rory lowered the phone and squinted at the glass. One bar of signal pulsed in the corner. The clock read 00:04. When she glanced up, the ambient orange haze of London's streetlamps beyond the perimeter had vanished, swallowed by an encircling canopy twenty feet taller than the park oaks outside. "Rory? Where the hell did you go?" Eva's tone sharpened, stripped of teasing warmth. "Nowhere. I took three steps past the stones." "Your line went silent for forty minutes. I called your flat twice before this reconnected—what is that scraping noise?" Rory froze. Her boots stood planted in thick, damp clover. Around her, the clearing held the suffocating stillness of a sealed vault. She stilled her lungs, listening for the distant hum of the A3 or the rustle of deer in the fern beds. Nothing reached her ears save the thud of blood in her own throat. "Nobody's moving, Ev. Zero wind." "Not wind. Like fingernails dragging down wet bark, an inch from your mic. Stop winding me up, Carter, who's standing next to you?" Gooseflesh pebbled Rory's forearms, lifting the straight black hair at her nape. She swung the light in a tight, controlled arc. Left: chest-high meadowsweet, motionless. Ahead: the sunken grass hollow at the heart of the Grove, empty. Right: the ring of ancient oak standing stones. "Nobody's in the clearing." The speaker spat a burst of static. When Eva spoke again, the Grove's warped currents dragged each syllable into a low, mechanical groan, dropping two octaves until the human cadence dissolved. "Don't—turn—your—light—" The screen flashed like a magnesium flare and died. Darkness slammed down over her peripheral vision, leaving a narrow tunnel of white glare against the weeds. Rory shoved the dead phone into the pocket of her Golden Empress jacket, her thumb brushing the small crescent scar on her left wrist. Grease and fried ginger lingered on the nylon fabric, a mundane anchor clashing with the stench rising from the turf. The wildflowers held no honeyed scent. The soil beneath them reeked of stagnant cellar water and corroded iron. "Isolde!" Her shout hit the surrounding trees without an echo, swallowed by leaves thick and deadened like velvet drapes. "I brought the Heartstone, like your courier asked. Come out and claim your five minutes before I walk." Against her collarbone, the thumbnail-sized gem twitched. Rory hissed through her teeth and grabbed the silver chain before the stone seared her skin. Warmth radiated through her fingers—not a steady heat, but a rhythmic, heavy throb matching a resting pulse. Her bright blue eyes narrowed on the crimson glow bleeding between her knuckles. Fae glamour felt like static and crushed mint; this artifact answered a subterranean pull, waking near tears that bled down into Hel. Isolde's sanctuary had no business triggering it. Snap. The sound cracked from the northern edge of the clearing, sharp as winter kindling breaking beneath a heavy heel. Rory pivoted, aligning her beam with her eyeline. Lush grass and soft moss covered the northern quadrant. Not a single fallen branch lay on that turf to produce so brittle a noise. Light washed over clusters of pale dog-roses and the gnarled base of an oak boundary stone. She stopped breathing. Nine oak monoliths ringed the pocket realm, spaced six strides apart. She swept the beam from left to right, counting under her breath. "Seven, eight, nine, ten." Between the fourth and fifth markers stood an extra vertical shape, darker than the lichen-crusted wood and narrower at the base. As the edge of her beam grazed it, the silhouette didn't scatter light like rough bark. It drank the glare. Before she aimed the lens at the gap, her bulb flickered twice, plunging the distant tree line into ink, then flared bright upon empty space between the fourth and fifth stones. "Cute trick with the shadows. Did you drag me out of bed to lurk in the weeds?" She kept her chin high and her voice crisp, backing toward the southern gap where she had entered. Her heel sank into cold mud instead of firm clover. She glanced down for half a second, checking her footing, and caught motion at the extreme left margin of her vision. Ten yards off, a patch of tall white foxgloves bowed toward the earth. One stalk bent flat, then the next, and the next, depressed in a neat line curving around her flank. Invisible weight crushed each bloom into the sod, holding it down for two beats before lifting to press the adjacent cluster. The unseen tread paced clockwise, cutting a clean arc between Rory and the southern exit. She whipped the light left. Every foxglove stood straight, bells hanging limp in the dead air, undamaged. Heat surged from the Heartstone, searing a welt onto her sternum through her cotton shirt. Red light leaked over the zipper of her delivery jacket, tinting her knuckles the shade of fresh rust. From the unlit grass to her right came a wet, clicking inhalation. Rory locked her knees to keep from bolting. Sprinting blind through Fae-touched woods invited a snapped ankle or a wrong turn that spat a runner out next week. She rotated her shoulders an inch at a time, bringing the beam around at chest height. Empty wildflowers met the glare. Then a second breath rasped through the dark—three feet behind her left ear, angled downward from well over six feet off the ground. Damp, frigid air stirred the ends of her shoulder-length hair, carrying the metallic tang of butcher's sawdust. "Back off." The whisper that answered didn't come from behind her. It rose from the clover between her boots, wearing the tinny, recorded cadence of Eva's voice. "Who's standing next to you?" Rory lunged four paces ahead, putting open turf between herself and the sound before spinning with her back toward the middle of the clearing. Her carotid throbbed hard against her damp collar, drowning out calculation. Around the perimeter, the dark gaps between the oak standing stones narrowed as long, attenuated shadows detached from the tree trunks without any shifting light source to cast them. In her pocket, her dead phone buzzed once against her thigh. She snatched it out with her free hand, desperate for a second glow, a signal, a clock that obeyed rules. The cracked display lit up with zero bars and an incoming call from her own number. Across the top of the glass, the digits blurred—03:19 jumping to 11:58, rewinding to 00:04—while out in the knee-high poppies beyond her fading beam, six separate patches of blossoms flattened toward her in unison.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:17:07.45Z" 11/11/2026, 4:17:07 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"mechanical"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"sanctuary"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"silence"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"mechanical"
5"echo"
6"velvet"
7"rhythmic"
8"throb"
9"pulse"
10"sanctuary"
11"flickered"
12"weight"
13"searing"
14"whisper"
15"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1361
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1148
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory13
London2
Grove2
Eva4
Golden1
Empress1
Hel1
Heartstone1
Fae-touched1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Grove"
2"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Hel"
4"Fae-touched"
globalScore0.934
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like static and crushed mint; this"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.735
wordCount1361
matches
0"not a steady heat, but a rhythmic, heavy throb matching a resting pulse"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"on that turf"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean28.35
std22.77
cv0.803
sampleLengths
044
117
227
329
434
521
622
757
810
955
107
117
128
1319
1456
155
1623
1745
184
1931
201
2126
2262
231
2418
2518
2682
271
2819
2948
303
3123
324
3372
3417
3549
3668
3717
3833
3912
4044
415
4240
432
4425
455
4664
4781
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
30.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences102
ratio0.039
matches
0"Warmth radiated through her fingers—not a steady heat, but a rhythmic, heavy throb matching a resting pulse."
1"Fae glamour felt like static and crushed mint; this artifact answered a subterranean pull, waking near tears that bled down into Hel."
2"Then a second breath rasped through the dark—three feet behind her left ear, angled downward from well over six feet off the ground."
3"Across the top of the glass, the digits blurred—03:19 jumping to 11:58, rewinding to 00:04—while out in the knee-high poppies beyond her fading beam, six separate patches of blossoms flattened toward her in unison."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1158
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.017271157167530225
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean13.34
std7.17
cv0.537
sampleLengths
015
112
217
317
414
513
629
712
814
98
1021
1122
128
1313
1420
156
1610
1710
185
199
208
214
2229
237
247
258
2619
272
288
2912
3021
3113
325
3323
3412
359
364
3712
388
394
407
4124
421
439
4417
4524
4620
476
4812
491
95.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5784313725490197
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners59
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Light washed over clusters of"
1"Then a second breath rasped"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences82
matches
0"She thumbed the volume button"
1"They bloomed in dense tangles"
2"Her boots stood planted in"
3"She stilled her lungs, listening"
4"She swung the light in"
5"Her shout hit the surrounding"
6"Her bright blue eyes narrowed"
7"She stopped breathing."
8"She swept the beam from"
9"It drank the glare."
10"She kept her chin high"
11"Her heel sank into cold"
12"She glanced down for half"
13"She whipped the light left."
14"She rotated her shoulders an"
15"It rose from the clover"
16"Her carotid throbbed hard against"
17"She snatched it out with"
ratio0.22
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences82
matches
0"Mist clung to the bracken"
1"She thumbed the volume button"
2"Eva's voice crackled through the"
3"Rory swept her beam across"
4"Rory hooked a finger beneath"
5"The deep crimson stone, no"
6"Rory halted three paces past"
7"They bloomed in dense tangles"
8"Silence stretched down the line."
9"Rory lowered the phone and"
10"The clock read 00:04."
11"Eva's tone sharpened, stripped of"
12"Her boots stood planted in"
13"She stilled her lungs, listening"
14"Nothing reached her ears save"
15"Gooseflesh pebbled Rory's forearms, lifting"
16"She swung the light in"
17"The speaker spat a burst"
18"The screen flashed like a"
19"Darkness slammed down over her"
ratio0.61
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Before she aimed the lens"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Fae glamour felt like static and crushed mint; this artifact answered a subterranean pull, waking near tears that bled down into Hel."
1"Sprinting blind through Fae-touched woods invited a snapped ankle or a wrong turn that spat a runner out next week."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.9904%