| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1368 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1368 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fluttered" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "mechanical" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "sanctuary" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1361 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1148 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | London | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Eva | 4 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Fae-touched" |
| | globalScore | 0.934 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like static and crushed mint; this" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.735 | | wordCount | 1361 | | matches | | 0 | "not a steady heat, but a rhythmic, heavy throb matching a resting pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 28.35 | | std | 22.77 | | cv | 0.803 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 62 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 82 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 72 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 49 | | 36 | 68 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 44 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 64 | | 47 | 81 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "Warmth radiated through her fingers—not a steady heat, but a rhythmic, heavy throb matching a resting pulse." | | 1 | "Fae glamour felt like static and crushed mint; this artifact answered a subterranean pull, waking near tears that bled down into Hel." | | 2 | "Then a second breath rasped through the dark—three feet behind her left ear, angled downward from well over six feet off the ground." | | 3 | "Across the top of the glass, the digits blurred—03:19 jumping to 11:58, rewinding to 00:04—while out in the knee-high poppies beyond her fading beam, six separate patches of blossoms flattened toward her in unison." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1158 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.017271157167530225 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 13.34 | | std | 7.17 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 95.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5784313725490197 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Light washed over clusters of" | | 1 | "Then a second breath rasped" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She thumbed the volume button" | | 1 | "They bloomed in dense tangles" | | 2 | "Her boots stood planted in" | | 3 | "She stilled her lungs, listening" | | 4 | "She swung the light in" | | 5 | "Her shout hit the surrounding" | | 6 | "Her bright blue eyes narrowed" | | 7 | "She stopped breathing." | | 8 | "She swept the beam from" | | 9 | "It drank the glare." | | 10 | "She kept her chin high" | | 11 | "Her heel sank into cold" | | 12 | "She glanced down for half" | | 13 | "She whipped the light left." | | 14 | "She rotated her shoulders an" | | 15 | "It rose from the clover" | | 16 | "Her carotid throbbed hard against" | | 17 | "She snatched it out with" |
| | ratio | 0.22 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Mist clung to the bracken" | | 1 | "She thumbed the volume button" | | 2 | "Eva's voice crackled through the" | | 3 | "Rory swept her beam across" | | 4 | "Rory hooked a finger beneath" | | 5 | "The deep crimson stone, no" | | 6 | "Rory halted three paces past" | | 7 | "They bloomed in dense tangles" | | 8 | "Silence stretched down the line." | | 9 | "Rory lowered the phone and" | | 10 | "The clock read 00:04." | | 11 | "Eva's tone sharpened, stripped of" | | 12 | "Her boots stood planted in" | | 13 | "She stilled her lungs, listening" | | 14 | "Nothing reached her ears save" | | 15 | "Gooseflesh pebbled Rory's forearms, lifting" | | 16 | "She swung the light in" | | 17 | "The speaker spat a burst" | | 18 | "The screen flashed like a" | | 19 | "Darkness slammed down over her" |
| | ratio | 0.61 | |
| 60.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she aimed the lens" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Fae glamour felt like static and crushed mint; this artifact answered a subterranean pull, waking near tears that bled down into Hel." | | 1 | "Sprinting blind through Fae-touched woods invited a snapped ankle or a wrong turn that spat a runner out next week." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |