Run: 2026-11-11-01M75PCHXGCRDMAB82KE6BH23V

Run Details

Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.043308
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third brass deadbolt slid back with a heavy clack, and Rory yanked the door inward against the security chain, then unhooked the brass link when a familiar silhouette filled the narrow landing. Lucien Moreau stood under the flickering stairwell bulb. Rain darkened the shoulders of his tailored charcoal suit, plastering a stray lock of platinum blond hair across his forehead, out of place from its slick sweep. One amber eye and one pitch-black eye locked onto hers. Rory kept her boot wedged against the base of the door. The warm updraft of roasted cumin, fenugreek, and frying onions drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house below, colliding with the crisp scent of rain and bergamot clinging to his lapels. "Eva is in Prague until Tuesday." "I am not looking for Eva." "Then you wasted a trip to Brick Lane. My flat is south of the river." "Your flat above Silas' bar has an uncollected stack of takeaway menus wedged in the letterbox, and your scooter is chained to the lamppost downstairs." Rory tightened her grip on the painted wood. Four months of radio silence, and he turned up on a wet Thursday night reading her habits like one of his ledger sheets. "State your rate and your business, Luc, or take the stairs back down. My shift at the Golden Empress ran late and my feet ache." Lucien shifted his weight. His gloved right hand whitened around the ivory handle of his cane. Beneath the dark wool of his lapel, a glossy stain spread across the crisp white linen of his shirt, dark as plum skin. "I require twenty minutes off the street, Aurora. Nothing more." Use of her full name scraped across her nerves. Nobody in East London called her that except him, rolling the vowels with the ghosts of Marseille salt and smoke. Rory dropped her gaze to his ribs, then back to the sharp cut of his jaw. A muscle ticked near his ear. Half-demons bled slow unless iron or Avaros ash opened the vein. She stepped back and pulled the door wide. Lucien crossed the threshold. The cramped one-bedroom flat shrank the instant he entered, his broad shoulders brushing a towering stack of translated grimoires balanced on a battered armchair. Scrolls rolled in butcher paper jutted from milk crates along the skirting boards. Loose parchment notes covered the radiator, the tiny dining table, and the top of the miniature fridge. Rory slammed the door and threw all three deadbolts. Metal slammed home in triplicate. When she turned, Ptolemy dropped from the top of an overflowing bookcase, landing with a soft thud beside Lucien's polished Oxford shoes. The tabby cat arched his striped back and rubbed his chin against the ferrule of the cane. "Traitor. I bought you the salmon tins." Lucien bent a fraction to scratch behind Ptolemy's torn ear, wincing mid-reach. His fingers snapped back to his ribs. "At least someone in this postcode retains decent manners." "Ptolemy doesn't know you vanish out of back windows before sunrise." The strike landed. Lucien straightened, his black eye absorbing the dim amber light of the desk lamp while his golden one sharpened on her face. Straight black hair brushed Rory's collarbones as she crossed her arms over her delivery fleece, refusing to give him an inch of the narrow rug between the sofa and the kitchenette. "I left sufficient funds on the nightstand to cover the ward repairs." "Keep talking about money, Moreau. See how fast those deadbolts unlatch." She stalked past him into the galley kitchen, hip bumping a precarious tower of Latin dictionaries. Clearing a space on the counter meant shoving three inked scrolls onto the draining board. She yanked open the cupboard above the kettle, grabbed Eva's battered tin of witch-hazel salves and sterile gauze, and set it down with a sharp metallic ring. "Jacket off. Sit on the stool before you drip Avaros filth onto Eva's Persian rug. She'll flay us both." Lucien hooked the crook of his cane over the edge of the book-laden table. His movements lacked their usual fluid precision as he shrugged out of the wet charcoal wool. Folded lining-out, the jacket landed atop a pile of census records. His waistcoat followed. White linen clung to his torso, soaked crimson along the left flank. The tear in the fabric smoked at the edges, carrying the bitter tang of cold-forged slag. He lowered himself onto the wooden stool wedged beside the stove. Rory grabbed the kitchen shears from the ceramic mug by the sink and stepped between his knees. There was nowhere else to stand; the fridge pressed against her spine if she backed up, and the radiator boxed him in on the left. "Cinder-blade?" "A courier from the Seventh Ward took exception to my audit of his employer's shipping manifests." Rory slipped the cold steel blade of the shears into the tear of his shirt and sliced upward to the collar seam. Linen parted. Heat radiated off his skin, hotter than any human fever, raising gooseflesh along her bare forearms. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light as she peeled the ruined fabric back from his ribs. Four jagged furrows scored the muscle beneath his pectoral, crusted with black soot that hissed against his pale skin. Beneath the fresh damage, faint silver marks from older bargains mapped his torso—lines her palms knew by memory from a freezing November night in his Spitalfields townhouse. Lucien caught her left wrist before she reached for the kettle. His bare fingers wrapped around her pulse point, thumb brushing right over the pale crescent scar. Skin met skin with a jolt of dry heat. "Leave the water cold. Boiling draws the slag deeper." Rory stared down at his thumb resting against her scar, then met his heterochromatic gaze. Four inches separated their mouths. His breath smelled of winter rain and cloves. "Let go of my arm, Luc." "You are shaking." "I am furious. There is a difference." He released her wrist, though his hand lingered mid-air for a beat before dropping to brace against the edge of the counter beside her hip, caging her in without touching her. Rory turned to the tap, soaked a square of gauze in frigid Thames water, and wrung it out with enough force to turn her knuckles white. She pressed the wet pad against the uppermost furrow. Lucien inhaled through his teeth. His ribs expanded against the heel of her palm, iron-hard beneath the slick heat of blood. "Why here, Lucien? You have three safe houses between Whitechapel and Soho, and a surgeon on retainer in Clerkenwell." "Dr. Vance reports to the brokerage syndicate. If the syndicate learns an Avaros hound tagged me tonight, five contracts dissolve by dawn." "Right. Business. Everything comes back to the ledger." Rory scrubbed a crust of black slag from the cut, watching fresh red blood flush the toxin out—a clean crimson that meant the demon half of his bloodline was taking over the repair. She tossed the blackened gauze into the sink and tore open a second packet. "Four months ago in Spitalfields, you told me the Marseille cartel was dead in the water. We celebrated. Or I thought we did, until I woke up to cold sheets, my father's shipping queries missing from my coat pocket, and word on the street that the Frenchman caught the morning Eurostar." "Your father's queries had Brendan Carter's chambers stamped across the letterhead, Rory. Had the Marseille enforcers found a Cardiff barrister's daughter sniffing around their docks, a scooter and three deadbolts would not have kept your throat intact." "So you stole my notes and ran my life from across the Channel." "I burned the trail." "You made me a mark who couldn't hold her liquor or keep hold of her own files!" She slammed the fresh gauze against his side. Lucien flinched, his right hand shooting up to close over hers, pinning her fingers flat against his bare chest, three inches above the wound. His heartbeat hammered against her palm—fast, uneven, stripping away the untouchable broker veneer he wore like armour. "You think I left that bed cleanly?" His voice dropped, rough as gravel dragged underfoot, losing its polished cadence. "You think boarding a train while your scent was still on my skin was a simple calculation?" Rory froze, her bright blue eyes locked onto the mismatched depths of his. Heat soaked through the thin cotton of his sliced shirt where it bunched against her knuckles. Downstairs, the muffled bass of a radio thumped through the ceiling plaster, followed by the clatter of metal pans in the restaurant kitchen, worlds away from the suffocating quiet of Eva's flat. "You didn't leave a note, Luc. Not a word. After Evan, you knew what waking up to a gutted room does to my head, and you walked out anyway." Pain flickered across Lucien's features—raw, unguarded, cracking the marble composure clean in half. His thumb stroked once across her blood-streaked knuckles. "Evan broke things to make himself tall. I vanished because staying meant dragging Avaros straight to your door." "That wasn't your call to make." "When a half-breed from the pits finds one clean thing in this city, he does not hand it over to his father's hounds." His free hand rose from the counter, fingers sliding into the straight black hair at the nape of her neck. His palm cupped the base of her skull, warm and trembling with the strain of the slag-burn or the four months stretched taut between them. Rory didn't pull back. Her fingers curled slightly against the bare skin of his chest, feeling the scrape of crisp hair and the violent thud of his pulse. "I am not clean, Lucien. And I am not glass." "No." He tilted her chin up a fraction, his amber eye blazing in the dim kitchen light, his mouth close enough that the heat of his words brushed her lower lip. "You are a blade without a scabbard, chérie, and I have been bleeding from the memory of you since November." Rory's breath caught in her throat as her hand slid up from his ribs to fist in the torn linen at his collarbone, pulling him forward an inch instead of shoving him off the stool. His forehead dropped to rest against hers, platinum hair brushing her brow, the scent of smoke and bergamot drowning out the spices below. "If you walk out of this flat before morning, Moreau, don't bother coming back to London." "Lock the bolts from the inside and swallow the key if it pleases you." His thumb traced the sharp line of her cheekbone, smeared with a faint crescent of his own blood, while his mouth hovered a breath above hers, waiting for her to close the last fraction of space.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:17:20.319Z" 11/11/2026, 4:17:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1809
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1809
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"depths"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"marble"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"depths"
5"flickered"
6"marble"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1806
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1276
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Moreau1
Thursday1
East1
London1
Marseille1
Avaros1
Ptolemy2
Lucien11
Oxford1
Latin1
Eva2
November1
Spitalfields1
Thames1
Four3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"Oxford"
4"Latin"
5"Thames"
globalScore0.951
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1806
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean26.96
std19.93
cv0.739
sampleLengths
033
145
244
36
46
515
625
731
825
939
1010
1162
128
1358
1453
157
1619
179
1811
1956
2012
2111
2258
2319
2472
2553
261
2716
2861
2946
3036
319
3228
336
343
357
3657
379
3821
3919
4022
418
4247
4351
4437
4513
464
4717
4849
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was taking"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences115
ratio0.043
matches
0"There was nowhere else to stand; the fridge pressed against her spine if she backed up, and the radiator boxed him in on the left."
1"Beneath the fresh damage, faint silver marks from older bargains mapped his torso—lines her palms knew by memory from a freezing November night in his Spitalfields townhouse."
2"Rory scrubbed a crust of black slag from the cut, watching fresh red blood flush the toxin out—a clean crimson that meant the demon half of his bloodline was taking over the repair."
3"His heartbeat hammered against her palm—fast, uneven, stripping away the untouchable broker veneer he wore like armour."
4"Pain flickered across Lucien's features—raw, unguarded, cracking the marble composure clean in half."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1292
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.020123839009287926
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0007739938080495357
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean15.7
std9.26
cv0.589
sampleLengths
033
18
227
310
411
533
66
76
815
925
108
1123
1225
134
1412
1523
1610
179
1820
1916
206
2111
228
234
2424
2513
2617
279
285
2922
3017
317
3212
337
349
3511
363
3722
3831
3912
4011
4116
4215
4327
4419
4514
4616
4711
483
4912
74.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.45217391304347826
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences77
matches
0"His gloved right hand whitened"
1"She stepped back and pulled"
2"His fingers snapped back to"
3"She stalked past him into"
4"She yanked open the cupboard"
5"His movements lacked their usual"
6"His waistcoat followed."
7"He lowered himself onto the"
8"His bare fingers wrapped around"
9"His breath smelled of winter"
10"He released her wrist, though"
11"She pressed the wet pad"
12"His ribs expanded against the"
13"She tossed the blackened gauze"
14"She slammed the fresh gauze"
15"His heartbeat hammered against her"
16"His voice dropped, rough as"
17"His thumb stroked once across"
18"His free hand rose from"
19"His palm cupped the base"
ratio0.312
63.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences77
matches
0"The third brass deadbolt slid"
1"Lucien Moreau stood under the"
2"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
3"Rory kept her boot wedged"
4"The warm updraft of roasted"
5"Rory tightened her grip on"
6"Lucien shifted his weight."
7"His gloved right hand whitened"
8"Nobody in East London called"
9"Rory dropped her gaze to"
10"A muscle ticked near his"
11"She stepped back and pulled"
12"Lucien crossed the threshold."
13"The cramped one-bedroom flat shrank"
14"Scrolls rolled in butcher paper"
15"Rory slammed the door and"
16"Metal slammed home in triplicate."
17"The tabby cat arched his"
18"Lucien bent a fraction to"
19"His fingers snapped back to"
ratio0.792
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Four jagged furrows scored the muscle beneath his pectoral, crusted with black soot that hissed against his pale skin."
1"He released her wrist, though his hand lingered mid-air for a beat before dropping to brace against the edge of the counter beside her hip, caging her in withou…"
2"Rory scrubbed a crust of black slag from the cut, watching fresh red blood flush the toxin out—a clean crimson that meant the demon half of his bloodline was ta…"
3"Rory's breath caught in her throat as her hand slid up from his ribs to fist in the torn linen at his collarbone, pulling him forward an inch instead of shoving…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.8860%