| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1469 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1469 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "mechanical" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "sanctuary" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "lilt" | | 10 | "magnetic" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1461 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.85% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1330 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 16 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Silas | 3 | | Southwark | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | London | 3 | | Seiko | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Eight | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Seiko" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Eight" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Southwark" | | 3 | "Heathrow" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "London" | | 7 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.898 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though straining against a gale blowing from the center of the glade" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1461 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 29.82 | | std | 25.19 | | cv | 0.845 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 99 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 68 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 79 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 58 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 105 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 62 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "Outside this circle, November ruled the park—rotting leaves, bare bone-white birch limbs, the distant low rumble of night freight descending into Heathrow." | | 1 | "No nightjar called from the surrounding oaks; no stag barked on the ridges." | | 2 | "Rory lowered her messenger bag from her shoulder, keeping the strap wound twice around her fist—an old London habit from midnight deliveries down unlit estates." | | 3 | "Not one thread of steam from Rory’s breath drifted sideways; the white plume hung motionless in front of her lips before sinking straight to her boots." | | 4 | "Isolde’s boundary held eight oak markers—four for the cardinal points, four for the cross-quarters." | | 5 | "With her left, she tucked the scalding Heartstone back beneath her collar so the crimson glare wouldn't ruin her night vision—and wouldn't paint a target on her chest." | | 6 | "Pitch-perfect, carrying the faint Cardiff lilt she had spent three years in London sanding down, yet stripped of all human cadence—tinny and hollow, like magnetic tape stretched across rusty rollers." | | 7 | "The instant she shifted her focus left, stems snapped to her right—heavy, deliberate crunches closing the distance by ten paces in the span of a single blink." | | 8 | "Neither disturbed a single petal once Rory’s peripheral awareness locked onto them, yet the moment her eyeballs twitched a fraction of a millimeter to verify their outlines, both vanished into the dark between the oaks—and the dry crunch of flattened stems jumped five feet nearer." | | 9 | "Six paces in front of her boots, unseen weight pressed down into the turf—one deep, circular indentation flattening the poppies, then a second, striding straight toward her face while that eight-second, rattling inhale began again right beside her left ear." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1358 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "bare bone-white birch" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "right—heavy, deliberate crunches" |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.014727540500736377 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0014727540500736377 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 13.16 | | std | 9.93 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 92.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5675675675675675 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 63 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Normally, the thumbnail-sized crimson stone" | | 1 | "Somewhere inside a warded Fae" | | 2 | "Just the petrified trunks framing" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She hitched her canvas courier" | | 1 | "She tugged a strand free" | | 2 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 3 | "Her screen flashed violet and" | | 4 | "She coughed once into her" | | 5 | "Her voice died two feet" | | 6 | "Her bright blue eyes swept" | | 7 | "She raised her left arm," | | 8 | "She narrowed her eyes, tracking" | | 9 | "Her breath snagged in her" | | 10 | "She dragged her gaze counterclockwise," | | 11 | "She squatted on one knee," | | 12 | "She kept her shoulders square," | | 13 | "She stopped turning her head." |
| | ratio | 0.161 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Frost-stiffened bracken snapped beneath Rory’s" | | 1 | "She hitched her canvas courier" | | 2 | "Static hissed down the line," | | 3 | "Rory ducked beneath a low-hanging" | | 4 | "She tugged a strand free" | | 5 | "Rory reached the perimeter." | | 6 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 7 | "Air pressure slammed inward against" | | 8 | "Her screen flashed violet and" | | 9 | "Rory slipped the dead handset" | | 10 | "Summer blooms carpeted the earth" | | 11 | "Crimson poppies, dog violets, and" | | 12 | "Rory inhaled, expecting the Grove’s" | | 13 | "She coughed once into her" | | 14 | "Her voice died two feet" | | 15 | "The clearing swallowed the syllables" | | 16 | "Rory lowered her messenger bag" | | 17 | "Her bright blue eyes swept" | | 18 | "Every flower in the clearing" | | 19 | "She raised her left arm," |
| | ratio | 0.598 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "To her far left, a" | | 1 | "To her right, forty feet" | | 2 | "To her left, thirty feet" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Thousands of stems bowed hard toward the ring of oak stones, petals flattened horizontally as though straining against a gale blowing from the center of the gla…" | | 1 | "She raised her left arm, pulling back her cuff to check her analogue watch, her thumb brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist." | | 2 | "She squatted on one knee, keeping her chin up and her gaze roving the treeline as she unfastened the canvas flap." | | 3 | "A wet, cavernous inhalation that lasted eight full seconds, rattling over loose phlegm, drawing gallons of stagnant air into something vast crouched beneath the…" | | 4 | "Fixing her gaze straight ahead on the frost-blackened spiral at the Grove's heart, she widened her focus, letting her peripheral vision drink in the dim margins…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |