Run: 2026-11-11-01M75PKNZ5VRQ4RKG2A83KH7ZP

Run Details

Duration:
2m 26s
Cost:
$0.071854
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost-stiffened bracken snapped beneath Rory’s boots as she climbed the wooded rise at the heart of Richmond Park. Ahead, ancient oak standing stones jutted from the winter scrub like blackened molars, untouched by the silver wash of the moon. She hitched her canvas courier bag higher onto her shoulder and pressed her mobile tighter against her ear. "I have eyes on the boundary markers." Static hissed down the line, competing with the distant clatter of glasses from Silas’s bar back in Southwark. "Turn around and walk back to the bike, Rory. Yu-Fei doesn't pay you enough to play courier for the gentry at three in the morning." Rory ducked beneath a low-hanging yew bough, straight shoulder-length black hair catching on the dry needles. She tugged a strand free and tucked it behind her ear. "This isn't a Golden Empress run. Isolde wired four months' rent into my account at midnight and asked for the lead box out of your cellar safe by name. Five minutes inside, hand it off, back over the river before four." "She hasn't answered a summons in three weeks." "Which is why she needs whatever you kept locked in salt down there." Rory reached the perimeter. Eight petrified oak monoliths ringed the hidden hollow, their bark fossilized into iron-hard ridges carved with weather-worn spirals. Outside this circle, November ruled the park—rotting leaves, bare bone-white birch limbs, the distant low rumble of night freight descending into Heathrow. Between the two tallest trunks, darkness hung thick as grease. "Stepping through now. Signal's going to drop." "Rory, wait—" She crossed the threshold. Air pressure slammed inward against her eardrums, popping them hard. In her ear, Silas’s voice plummeted two octaves, stretching into a slow, wet grind like boot leather dragged across gravel. "Rooo-ryyy... dooon't..." Her screen flashed violet and died. Rory slipped the dead handset into her jacket pocket and halted three paces inside the Fae Grove. Summer blooms carpeted the earth around her boots. Crimson poppies, dog violets, and pale meadowsweet crowded the glade, oblivious to the frost twenty yards behind her. Above the clearing, London’s sodium-orange sky had vanished, replaced by a starless vault of bruised indigo. Rory inhaled, expecting the Grove’s familiar tang of crushed mint and thunderstorm ozone. Stagnant pond water and scorched hair coated the back of her tongue instead. She coughed once into her fist. Not a single cricket chirped in the tall grass. No nightjar called from the surrounding oaks; no stag barked on the ridges. Silence packed her ears like wet wool, heavy and suffocating. "Isolde!" Her voice died two feet past her teeth. No echo bounced off the boundary markers. The clearing swallowed the syllables whole, flat and dead as a padded room. Rory lowered her messenger bag from her shoulder, keeping the strap wound twice around her fist—an old London habit from midnight deliveries down unlit estates. Her bright blue eyes swept the waist-high flora. Every flower in the clearing leaned outward. Thousands of stems bowed hard toward the ring of oak stones, petals flattened horizontally as though straining against a gale blowing from the center of the glade. Yet the air stood dead calm. Not one thread of steam from Rory’s breath drifted sideways; the white plume hung motionless in front of her lips before sinking straight to her boots. She raised her left arm, pulling back her cuff to check her analogue watch, her thumb brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. The luminous green second hand spasmed. Three ticks forward. Four ticks backward. A violent judder at the twelve, followed by dead stillness at 3:09. Time inside the Grove always stretched or compressed, turning minutes into hours or days into heartbeats, yet her father’s old mechanical Seiko had never stalled or reversed its gears here before. Heat pricked the skin above her collarbone. Rory set her jaw, hooking two fingers beneath the silver chain at her throat, and hauled the Heartstone Pendant out over her zip-up thermal. Normally, the thumbnail-sized crimson stone held a muted, ember-like glimmer. Tonight, scarlet light bled between her knuckles, staining her chin and jacket front the color of an open vein. Heat pulsed from the facets in frantic, irregular beats, warming her palm toward a blister. A Hel portal. Somewhere inside a warded Fae sanctuary, a fissure to the underworld stood wide open. "Isolde, if you're hurt, make a sound!" To her far left, a patch of darkness detached from the northernmost oak monolith. Rory whipped her head around. Nothing stood among the flattened violets. Just the petrified trunks framing the hollow in stark, jagged silhouettes. She narrowed her eyes, tracking the perimeter clockwise from the gap where she had entered. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Seven. Eight. Nine. Her breath snagged in her throat. Isolde’s boundary held eight oak markers—four for the cardinal points, four for the cross-quarters. Rory had sheltered between them a dozen times since fleeing Cardiff. She dragged her gaze counterclockwise, counting each silhouette against the indigo gloom. Eight. Whatever ninth vertical shape had stood between the eastern and southeastern pillars a blink ago was gone. Rory didn't bolt for the exit. Panic got people killed in places with crooked rules. Moving with deliberate economy, she unclipped the heavy hardened-steel D-lock from the side of her courier bag, slid four fingers through the narrow shackle like a knuckle-duster, and gripped the thick crossbar in her right hand. With her left, she tucked the scalding Heartstone back beneath her collar so the crimson glare wouldn't ruin her night vision—and wouldn't paint a target on her chest. "I'm setting the box on the turf and walking out." She squatted on one knee, keeping her chin up and her gaze roving the treeline as she unfastened the canvas flap. Fifty feet ahead, at the dead middle of the Grove, the meadowsweet lay crushed into a wide, slick spiral, blackened with frostbite despite the mild pocket air. From the darkness beyond that spiral came a sharp metallic click. Like a fingernail tapping a coin. Rory froze, fingers splayed over the lead box inside her bag. "Stepping through now. Signal's going to drop." Ice locked Rory’s spine rigid. The voice came from the eastern edge of the clearing, twenty yards out in the black grass. Pitch-perfect, carrying the faint Cardiff lilt she had spent three years in London sanding down, yet stripped of all human cadence—tinny and hollow, like magnetic tape stretched across rusty rollers. Between the words came a sound no human throat possessed. A wet, cavernous inhalation that lasted eight full seconds, rattling over loose phlegm, drawing gallons of stagnant air into something vast crouched beneath the poppies. Rory rose to her feet without scraping a boot sole. She kept her shoulders square, angling her body thirty degrees toward the entry stones behind her while refusing to take her eyes off the eastern tallgrass. At the extreme outer edge of her left eye, one of the oak stones bent in the middle. A long, starved silhouette folded downward at an angle no spine or knee allowed, sinking on jointed limbs into the violets. Rory snapped her head left. Empty blossoms. Unmoving ancient timber. The instant she shifted her focus left, stems snapped to her right—heavy, deliberate crunches closing the distance by ten paces in the span of a single blink. She stopped turning her head. Fixing her gaze straight ahead on the frost-blackened spiral at the Grove's heart, she widened her focus, letting her peripheral vision drink in the dim margins of the clearing. Shapes swam in the blurs at both sides of her sight. To her right, forty feet out, a vertical smear of pitch-black taller than the monoliths paced sideways through the poppies, limbs jointed backward like a cellar spider's, sliding closer whenever her eyelids flickered. To her left, thirty feet away, a second figure crouched low among the crushed stems, head cocked upside down on a boneless neck. Neither cast a shadow. Neither disturbed a single petal once Rory’s peripheral awareness locked onto them, yet the moment her eyeballs twitched a fraction of a millimeter to verify their outlines, both vanished into the dark between the oaks—and the dry crunch of flattened stems jumped five feet nearer. "Rooo-ryyy..." Silas’s warped, subterranean baritone leaked from the dark grass behind her heels, straight between the two entry stones blocking her sole path back to Richmond Park. Under her thermal shirt, the Heartstone Pendant surged from fever-hot to searing, branding a thumbnail-sized coal into the hollow of her sternum. Six paces in front of her boots, unseen weight pressed down into the turf—one deep, circular indentation flattening the poppies, then a second, striding straight toward her face while that eight-second, rattling inhale began again right beside her left ear.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:21:13.84Z" 11/11/2026, 4:21:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1469
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1469
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"lilt"
count1
10
word"magnetic"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"echo"
3"mechanical"
4"pulsed"
5"sanctuary"
6"stark"
7"gloom"
8"perfect"
9"lilt"
10"magnetic"
11"flickered"
12"searing"
13"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1461
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1330
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
Richmond2
Park2
Silas3
Southwark1
November1
Heathrow1
Fae2
Grove5
London3
Seiko1
Heartstone3
Pendant2
Hel1
Cardiff2
Eight3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"November"
3"Seiko"
4"Pendant"
5"Eight"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Southwark"
3"Heathrow"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
6"London"
7"Cardiff"
globalScore0.898
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though straining against a gale blowing from the center of the glade"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1461
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean29.82
std25.19
cv0.845
sampleLengths
057
17
218
325
427
541
68
713
854
97
102
1134
122
1323
1455
1551
161
1728
1899
1948
2031
217
2268
2317
247
2514
2637
278
281
2943
301
3117
3279
3310
3448
3517
3611
377
3852
3935
4036
4118
4258
4334
4411
45105
461
4726
4862
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences111
ratio0.09
matches
0"Outside this circle, November ruled the park—rotting leaves, bare bone-white birch limbs, the distant low rumble of night freight descending into Heathrow."
1"No nightjar called from the surrounding oaks; no stag barked on the ridges."
2"Rory lowered her messenger bag from her shoulder, keeping the strap wound twice around her fist—an old London habit from midnight deliveries down unlit estates."
3"Not one thread of steam from Rory’s breath drifted sideways; the white plume hung motionless in front of her lips before sinking straight to her boots."
4"Isolde’s boundary held eight oak markers—four for the cardinal points, four for the cross-quarters."
5"With her left, she tucked the scalding Heartstone back beneath her collar so the crimson glare wouldn't ruin her night vision—and wouldn't paint a target on her chest."
6"Pitch-perfect, carrying the faint Cardiff lilt she had spent three years in London sanding down, yet stripped of all human cadence—tinny and hollow, like magnetic tape stretched across rusty rollers."
7"The instant she shifted her focus left, stems snapped to her right—heavy, deliberate crunches closing the distance by ten paces in the span of a single blink."
8"Neither disturbed a single petal once Rory’s peripheral awareness locked onto them, yet the moment her eyeballs twitched a fraction of a millimeter to verify their outlines, both vanished into the dark between the oaks—and the dry crunch of flattened stems jumped five feet nearer."
9"Six paces in front of her boots, unseen weight pressed down into the turf—one deep, circular indentation flattening the poppies, then a second, striding straight toward her face while that eight-second, rattling inhale began again right beside her left ear."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1358
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"bare bone-white birch"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"right—heavy, deliberate crunches"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.014727540500736377
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0014727540500736377
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean13.16
std9.93
cv0.755
sampleLengths
018
121
218
37
418
525
616
711
841
98
1013
114
1218
1322
1410
157
162
174
1810
1920
202
216
2217
238
2418
2516
2613
2713
286
299
3013
3110
321
338
347
3513
3625
378
387
3927
406
4126
4224
436
443
453
4612
4731
487
4924
92.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5675675675675675
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"Normally, the thumbnail-sized crimson stone"
1"Somewhere inside a warded Fae"
2"Just the petrified trunks framing"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences87
matches
0"She hitched her canvas courier"
1"She tugged a strand free"
2"She crossed the threshold."
3"Her screen flashed violet and"
4"She coughed once into her"
5"Her voice died two feet"
6"Her bright blue eyes swept"
7"She raised her left arm,"
8"She narrowed her eyes, tracking"
9"Her breath snagged in her"
10"She dragged her gaze counterclockwise,"
11"She squatted on one knee,"
12"She kept her shoulders square,"
13"She stopped turning her head."
ratio0.161
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences87
matches
0"Frost-stiffened bracken snapped beneath Rory’s"
1"She hitched her canvas courier"
2"Static hissed down the line,"
3"Rory ducked beneath a low-hanging"
4"She tugged a strand free"
5"Rory reached the perimeter."
6"She crossed the threshold."
7"Air pressure slammed inward against"
8"Her screen flashed violet and"
9"Rory slipped the dead handset"
10"Summer blooms carpeted the earth"
11"Crimson poppies, dog violets, and"
12"Rory inhaled, expecting the Grove’s"
13"She coughed once into her"
14"Her voice died two feet"
15"The clearing swallowed the syllables"
16"Rory lowered her messenger bag"
17"Her bright blue eyes swept"
18"Every flower in the clearing"
19"She raised her left arm,"
ratio0.598
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"To her far left, a"
1"To her right, forty feet"
2"To her left, thirty feet"
ratio0.034
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Thousands of stems bowed hard toward the ring of oak stones, petals flattened horizontally as though straining against a gale blowing from the center of the gla…"
1"She raised her left arm, pulling back her cuff to check her analogue watch, her thumb brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist."
2"She squatted on one knee, keeping her chin up and her gaze roving the treeline as she unfastened the canvas flap."
3"A wet, cavernous inhalation that lasted eight full seconds, rattling over loose phlegm, drawing gallons of stagnant air into something vast crouched beneath the…"
4"Fixing her gaze straight ahead on the frost-blackened spiral at the Grove's heart, she widened her focus, letting her peripheral vision drink in the dim margins…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
93.3441%