| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1738 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1738 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "churned" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "roaring" | | 9 | "marble" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "crystallized" | | 17 | "mechanical" | | 18 | "porcelain" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1735 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.53% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1473 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 24 | | Barrier | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Lyon | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "Blade" | | 7 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Lyon" |
| | globalScore | 0.685 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.576 | | wordCount | 1735 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 36.91 | | std | 24.59 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 84 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 82 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 67 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 78 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 63 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 59 | | 31 | 76 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 72 | | 37 | 54 | | 38 | 65 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 62 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 246 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "Heat wrapped around her face—thick, syrupy, heavy with roasted nutmeg and crushed figs." | | 1 | "Crushed thyme and wild saffron stood unbent; Rory's heavy soles carved deep ruts into the turf, while Isolde left zero footprints in the moss." | | 2 | "Violet eyes narrowed at a flock of tiny birds—plump, featherless creatures with glazed, golden-brown skin—flitting between the vines." | | 3 | "Along the next bend, boughs sagged under fruit shaped like pleated lanterns; split rinds revealed glistening crimson segments that dripped syrup onto broad, platter-shaped leaves." | | 4 | "Beyond the orchard ridges rose a vast, rhythmic clatter—cleavers drumming timber, iron skillets scraping grates, stone furnaces roaring as bellows pumped." | | 5 | "Marchand — Lyon, 1782." | | 6 | "Muscle answered scent before thought intervened; her left hand rose toward the gilded rind." | | 7 | "No sap burst from the cut; thick, steaming custard spilled from the severed branch, splattering across the cream tiles with a rich hiss." | | 8 | "The kneeling chef neither flinched nor glanced at the darkness touching his knuckles; his scissors snipped in an unbroken, mechanical tempo." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1508 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "broad, platter-shaped leaves." | | 1 | "single pear-shaped fruit" | | 2 | "windless bone-white branches" | | 3 | "tall, long-legged stags" |
| | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.007294429708222812 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.000663129973474801 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 14.96 | | std | 7.33 | | cv | 0.49 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 98.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.6120689655172413 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 71 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "They descended a staircase of" | | 1 | "She stood and wiped her" | | 2 | "She had finished a generous" | | 3 | "They followed the steaming wine-channel" | | 4 | "Their wings thrummed a drowsy" | | 5 | "She angled her chin toward" | | 6 | "She lifted a tarnished brass" | | 7 | "She set the brass tag" | | 8 | "She wrenched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 9 | "His gaze stayed fixed on" |
| | ratio | 0.102 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The shimmering distortion of the" | | 1 | "Heat wrapped around her face—thick," | | 2 | "Rory raised her gaze." | | 3 | "A ribbon of black smoke" | | 4 | "Wind rustled through unseen reeds" | | 5 | "Isolde glided past them along" | | 6 | "Waist-length silver hair caught the" | | 7 | "Rory glanced at the dark" | | 8 | "They descended a staircase of" | | 9 | "Rory tilted her head to" | | 10 | "Each orb swelled to the" | | 11 | "A warm gust rolled across" | | 12 | "Crystal chimes rang through the" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted down the quartz" | | 14 | "Violet eyes narrowed at a" | | 15 | "Rory crouched beside the carved" | | 16 | "Steam curled from the current," | | 17 | "She stood and wiped her" | | 18 | "She had finished a generous" | | 19 | "Saliva flooded her mouth, hot" |
| | ratio | 0.653 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 88.61% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Through translucent skins, golden juice churned around dark seeds that glowed like hearth coals." | | 1 | "Along the next bend, boughs sagged under fruit shaped like pleated lanterns; split rinds revealed glistening crimson segments that dripped syrup onto broad, pla…" | | 2 | "Their wings thrummed a drowsy bass note that vibrated inside Rory's jaw." | | 3 | "Freezing cold lanced through her skin, racing along her arm and shattering the trance." | | 4 | "His gaze stayed fixed on his hands as he trimmed translucent sugar-leaves with bone-handled scissors, dropping each clipping into a copper pan that sizzled with…" | | 5 | "Beyond the ginger bed, a herd of tall, long-legged stags wearing porcelain masks trotted along a cross-path, silver soup tureens fused into the forks of their a…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |