Run: 2026-11-11-01M75PP89AHHEZHFWKVB946T33

Run Details

Duration:
4m 28s
Cost:
$0.174706
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil parted with the wet snap of splitting rind. Frost and London fog vanished behind Rory's heels. Heat wrapped around her face—thick, syrupy, heavy with roasted nutmeg and crushed figs. Beneath her jacket collar, the thumbnail-sized crimson gemstone on its silver chain pulsed against her collarbone, its fever subsiding into a steady scarlet glow. Rory raised her gaze. No clouds drifted across the vault. No sun hung at the zenith. Warm amber sky stretched from horizon to horizon, bathing terraced hillsides in honeyed radiance. Straight black hair clung to her damp neck as she took three paces onto the path, boots sinking into soil dark and rich as crumbled chocolate. "Tell me the dirt isn't made of cocoa." Behind her, the rift in the Barrier narrowed to a hairline ripple in the air. A ribbon of black smoke detached from the shade of a gnarled olive trunk, uncoiling until Nyx stood six feet tall beside the trail. Living darkness drank the amber glare, featureless save for two glowing violet eyes burning within the silhouette. Wind rustled through unseen reeds as Nyx's whisper brushed Rory's ear. "Keep your tongue behind your teeth, Carter. Taste a handful of Belphegor's loam and you will chew until dusk." Isolde glided past them along the slope. Waist-length silver hair caught the golden light, shimmering like spun sugar. Rory glanced at the dark earth behind the Half-Fae's bare heels. Crushed thyme and wild saffron stood unbent; Rory's heavy soles carved deep ruts into the turf, while Isolde left zero footprints in the moss. Pale lavender eyes swept the sprawling orchards. "Where the sky pours honey, an empty stomach courts drowning. Guard your palms, little crow, lest the garden mistake you for harvest." They descended a staircase of rose-veined quartz wedged into the hillside. On both sides, trellises of braided bronze towered above the balustrade, strangled by vines thick as anchor chains. Rory tilted her head to inspect the clusters dangling from the crossbeams. Each orb swelled to the size of a swan's egg. Through translucent skins, golden juice churned around dark seeds that glowed like hearth coals. A warm gust rolled across the valley, knocking the fruit against one another. Crystal chimes rang through the terrace. "The grapes make music. People sell their souls for fruit?" Nyx drifted down the quartz steps, their shadowy legs dissolving into trailing mist before knitting into solid form on the landing. Violet eyes narrowed at a flock of tiny birds—plump, featherless creatures with glazed, golden-brown skin—flitting between the vines. "Mortals sign blood contracts for a single truffle from these hills. Master chefs trade eternity for access to pantries older than Babylon." At the bottom of the stairs, a narrow channel curved between banks of emerald moss. Rory crouched beside the carved stone lip. Dark ruby liquid rushed over smooth river stones, kicking pink foam against the masonry and releasing the punch of fermented cherries, cinnamon bark, and hot iron. Steam curled from the current, coating Rory's cheeks in sweet moisture. "Mulled wine. A whole river of spiced claret." She stood and wiped her damp palms on her jeans. Beneath her ribs, a sharp cramp twisted her gut. She had finished a generous bowl of Yu-Fei's beef noodles an hour before entering Richmond Park. Despite that meal, an insistent void hollowed her stomach. Saliva flooded her mouth, hot and demanding. They followed the steaming wine-channel into an orchard of bizarre, towering trees. Trunks of flaking, pastry-pale bark spiraled toward the amber zenith, bleeding golden sap into hammered copper basins hung from iron hooks. Along the next bend, boughs sagged under fruit shaped like pleated lanterns; split rinds revealed glistening crimson segments that dripped syrup onto broad, platter-shaped leaves. Beetles with shells of emerald stained glass crawled from blossom to blossom. Their wings thrummed a drowsy bass note that vibrated inside Rory's jaw. Isolde halted beneath an archway woven from blooming vanilla vines. She angled her chin toward the valley basin. "Ten thousand blades strike the block, yet no blood stains the grass." Rory listened past the drone of the glass beetles and the gurgle of the crimson brook. Beyond the orchard ridges rose a vast, rhythmic clatter—cleavers drumming timber, iron skillets scraping grates, stone furnaces roaring as bellows pumped. Plumes of saffron and violet smoke climbed toward the amber vault miles downrange, layering the fruit-heavy air with the rich tang of seared duck fat, charred marrow, and blistered garlic. "Those aren't bonfires. That's a line of kitchens." Nyx's silhouette rippled, edges fraying into smoke under the pervasive golden glare before snapping into sharp focus. "Grand feasts run without pause in Dymas. Helbound cooks peel, butcher, and baste until their fingers wear to stubs, chasing flavors that turn to ash on their tongues." Past the vanilla arch, the orchard path opened onto a circular courtyard paved with hexagonal tiles of cream marble. Wicker baskets lined with velvet moss sat stacked beside a stone workbench. Rory crossed the tiles, bright blue eyes scanning tools arranged across a clean linen cloth. Silver pruning shears rested beside badger-bristle brushes and wax-sealed vials. She lifted a tarnished brass tally-tag from the corner of the table. Block letters marked the metal: G. Marchand — Lyon, 1782. "Someone abandoned this station mid-shift. That crust on the blades is caramelized sugar." She set the brass tag on the linen. In the middle of the courtyard stood a lone tree encircled by a low wall of rough pink salt-blocks. Unlike the flaking cinnamon trunks outside the clearing, its limbs gleamed pale as bleached bone, draped in long tendrils of spun-sugar moss. A single pear-shaped fruit with skin of hammered gold hung from the lowest fork. Rory stepped toward the salt ring. At her approach, the golden fruit shuddered on its stem. Crimson petals at its crown peeled open, exhaling a warm cloud of yellow pollen scented with browned butter, roasted hazelnuts, and sweet cream. The cramp in Rory's stomach sharpened into a gnawing ache. Muscle answered scent before thought intervened; her left hand rose toward the gilded rind. Amber light glinted off the small crescent scar on her left wrist. One pinch of warm pulp promised to silence the emptiness clawing at her ribs. Above her head, windless bone-white branches dipped toward the salt blocks. Filaments of spun-sugar moss drifted toward her black hair like greedy fingers. Isolde stood motionless at the courtyard rim, silver locks spilling over her shoulders. "Gold gilds the bait, daughter of clay, and the hook sprouts roots inside the tongue." Nyx lunged across the marble, shadow-talons stretching, violet gaze blazing through the pollen haze. "Drop your hand, Rory!" The icy whisper sliced through the buttery fog wrapping Rory's mind. Refusing to flinch, she slammed her right palm onto the hilt at her hip. Freezing cold lanced through her skin, racing along her arm and shattering the trance. She wrenched the Fae-Forged Blade clear of its sheath. Slender moonsilver gleamed with pale, winter-moon luminescence against the honeyed glare. A bone-white bough snapped toward her throat. Sticky sugar-tendrils whipped around Rory's left forearm, searing across her crescent scar like boiling caramel. Rory swung the leaf-shaped dagger in a clean arc. Moonsilver sheared through pale wood without resistance. No sap burst from the cut; thick, steaming custard spilled from the severed branch, splattering across the cream tiles with a rich hiss. The tree recoiled, branches clattering like dry bones as they coiled around the golden pear. Rory scraped the scalding sugar threads from her wrist with her knuckles, keeping the freezing blade leveled. Beneath her shirt, the crimson pendant rested cool and dormant against her chest, untouched by the orchard's snare. "Hands off the local produce. Message received." Nyx halted beside the salt ring, shadowy chest rising and falling as they stared at the custard congealing on the marble. "Hold that Fae silver bare. This trail enters the lower paddocks, and the game in those pastures runs on hooves." Rory stepped clear of the tiles, following Isolde through the opposite arch where bronze trellises gave way to a broad boulevard bordered by hedges sculpted into towering banquet platters. Past the ridge, a wider expanse of Dymas stretched across the valley floor: fields of violet wheat rippling beside lakes glossy as melted butter, glass-domed conservatories flashing amber light, and sprawling stone pavilions where hundreds of white-aproned figures bustled around roaring roasting pits. Flagstones the hue of toasted brioche radiated gentle warmth through Rory's boot soles as the trio started down the avenue. Along the verge, miniature fountains carved into the likeness of weeping cherubs spouted arcs of fragrant olive oil into alabaster basins. A metallic snipping drew Rory's attention to a sunken flowerbed on their left. A gaunt man in a stained chef's coat knelt among bushes of crystallized ginger, a heavy iron chain linking his ankle to a bronze stake driven into the loam. His gaze stayed fixed on his hands as he trimmed translucent sugar-leaves with bone-handled scissors, dropping each clipping into a copper pan that sizzled without fire. Sweat carved tracks through the flour dusting his sunken cheeks. "He hasn't blinked. Does he know we're on the path?" Nyx stepped between Rory and the sunken bed, their living shadow stretching across the ginger bushes. The kneeling chef neither flinched nor glanced at the darkness touching his knuckles; his scissors snipped in an unbroken, mechanical tempo. "His contract binds his eyes to the garnish. Until Prince Belphegor praises the dish, the world beyond that copper pan ceases to exist for him." Rory swallowed, the lingering hollowness in her gut turning cold. Beyond the ginger bed, a herd of tall, long-legged stags wearing porcelain masks trotted along a cross-path, silver soup tureens fused into the forks of their antlers, steaming broth sloshing over ivory brims before the creatures vanished behind a hedge of candied rosemary. Rory tightened her grip on the freezing moonsilver hilt. "Soup bowls fused to deer skulls. Nothing in this valley has an off switch." Isolde glided along the toasted flagstones, her bare feet disturbing zero saffron dust as she passed beneath a colonnade of carved marrow-bone arches spanning the avenue. "The platter carries itself in the house of excess. Keep to the stones where the rosemary burns." Rory stepped beneath the pale bone arch beside Nyx, bright blue eyes tracking a flock of glazed songbirds banking over the violet wheat toward the smoke-wreathed pavilions.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:22:38.133Z" 11/11/2026, 4:22:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1738
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1738
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count3
3
word"churned"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"roaring"
count2
9
word"marble"
count3
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"crystallized"
count1
17
word"mechanical"
count1
18
word"porcelain"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"whisper"
2"stomach"
3"churned"
4"crystal"
5"glistening"
6"vibrated"
7"rhythmic"
8"roaring"
9"marble"
10"velvet"
11"scanning"
12"silence"
13"racing"
14"searing"
15"warmth"
16"crystallized"
17"mechanical"
18"porcelain"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1735
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1473
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
London1
Rory24
Barrier1
Nyx8
Half-Fae1
Isolde6
Yu-Fei1
Richmond1
Park1
Lyon1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Dymas1
persons
0"Veil"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Half-Fae"
4"Isolde"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Blade"
7"Dymas"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Lyon"
globalScore0.685
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.576
wordCount1735
matches
0"neither flinched nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean36.91
std24.59
cv0.666
sampleLengths
059
156
28
367
419
560
622
784
810
939
1022
1159
128
1351
1482
1518
1612
1767
188
1917
2028
2178
2213
2363
2463
2549
2613
2715
2814
294
3059
3176
3235
337
3421
3520
3672
3754
3865
3910
4037
4125
4262
4314
4426
4517
4627
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs246
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences116
ratio0.078
matches
0"Heat wrapped around her face—thick, syrupy, heavy with roasted nutmeg and crushed figs."
1"Crushed thyme and wild saffron stood unbent; Rory's heavy soles carved deep ruts into the turf, while Isolde left zero footprints in the moss."
2"Violet eyes narrowed at a flock of tiny birds—plump, featherless creatures with glazed, golden-brown skin—flitting between the vines."
3"Along the next bend, boughs sagged under fruit shaped like pleated lanterns; split rinds revealed glistening crimson segments that dripped syrup onto broad, platter-shaped leaves."
4"Beyond the orchard ridges rose a vast, rhythmic clatter—cleavers drumming timber, iron skillets scraping grates, stone furnaces roaring as bellows pumped."
5"Marchand — Lyon, 1782."
6"Muscle answered scent before thought intervened; her left hand rose toward the gilded rind."
7"No sap burst from the cut; thick, steaming custard spilled from the severed branch, splattering across the cream tiles with a rich hiss."
8"The kneeling chef neither flinched nor glanced at the darkness touching his knuckles; his scissors snipped in an unbroken, mechanical tempo."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1508
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"broad, platter-shaped leaves."
1"single pear-shaped fruit"
2"windless bone-white branches"
3"tall, long-legged stags"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.007294429708222812
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000663129973474801
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean14.96
std7.33
cv0.49
sampleLengths
014
18
213
324
44
56
66
714
826
98
1015
1124
1217
1311
1419
157
1611
1711
1824
197
2022
2111
2218
2312
2410
2514
2613
276
2810
2921
3018
3122
3215
337
3426
3511
368
3710
389
3916
409
417
4212
4321
4425
4512
4612
4710
488
4912
98.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6120689655172413
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners71
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences98
matches
0"They descended a staircase of"
1"She stood and wiped her"
2"She had finished a generous"
3"They followed the steaming wine-channel"
4"Their wings thrummed a drowsy"
5"She angled her chin toward"
6"She lifted a tarnished brass"
7"She set the brass tag"
8"She wrenched the Fae-Forged Blade"
9"His gaze stayed fixed on"
ratio0.102
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences98
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"Heat wrapped around her face—thick,"
2"Rory raised her gaze."
3"A ribbon of black smoke"
4"Wind rustled through unseen reeds"
5"Isolde glided past them along"
6"Waist-length silver hair caught the"
7"Rory glanced at the dark"
8"They descended a staircase of"
9"Rory tilted her head to"
10"Each orb swelled to the"
11"A warm gust rolled across"
12"Crystal chimes rang through the"
13"Nyx drifted down the quartz"
14"Violet eyes narrowed at a"
15"Rory crouched beside the carved"
16"Steam curled from the current,"
17"She stood and wiped her"
18"She had finished a generous"
19"Saliva flooded her mouth, hot"
ratio0.653
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
88.61% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences79
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Through translucent skins, golden juice churned around dark seeds that glowed like hearth coals."
1"Along the next bend, boughs sagged under fruit shaped like pleated lanterns; split rinds revealed glistening crimson segments that dripped syrup onto broad, pla…"
2"Their wings thrummed a drowsy bass note that vibrated inside Rory's jaw."
3"Freezing cold lanced through her skin, racing along her arm and shattering the trance."
4"His gaze stayed fixed on his hands as he trimmed translucent sugar-leaves with bone-handled scissors, dropping each clipping into a copper pan that sizzled with…"
5"Beyond the ginger bed, a herd of tall, long-legged stags wearing porcelain masks trotted along a cross-path, silver soup tureens fused into the forks of their a…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.3165%