Run: 2026-11-11-01M75PZS91RZ9ECEZ3ZA1K8333

Run Details

Duration:
2m 28s
Cost:
$0.065468
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist as she stepped out of the unmarked Vauxhall into the thin Camden drizzle. Six forty-two. Last night’s full moon still hung pale as a washed bone above the chimney pots of Chalk Farm Road, reluctant to yield the sky to morning. Ahead of her, blue-and-white Met tape fluttered across the recessed archway of a disused London Underground entrance. The oxblood Leslie Green tiles were cracked and blackened with decades of exhaust soot, the wrought-iron gates usually padlocked and welded shut. Transport for London maintenance crews only went down into this dead spur of the Northern Line once a quarter to check the Victorian brickwork for subsidence. Twenty minutes ago, two engineers had found the weld cleanly sheared and a dead man lying on the eastbound platform a hundred feet below the street. Quinn squared her shoulders with the brisk military precision that eighteen years on the job had hammered into her spine. At five-foot-nine, with closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair and a sharp jaw set against the damp chill, she cut a neat, severe path through the uniformed constables holding the perimeter. She was reaching into her coat pocket for her warrant card when a flash of copper across the narrow street caught her brown eyes. Beneath the striped awning of a shuttered record shop stood a young woman. She was small—no more than five-foot-four—half-hidden behind a cast-iron bollard. Even through the misting rain, Quinn recognized the unruly halo of curly red hair, the freckled complexion gone stark white in the grey dawn, and the round glasses sliding down the bridge of a narrow nose. A worn leather satchel, its gussets straining with the square, heavy outlines of hardback books, hung cross-body against her hip, pulling her coat askew. Eva Kowalski. Twenty-six. Master’s in Ancient History from Oxford, currently employed in the British Museum’s restricted archives, and a permanent fixture on the unofficial pinboard locked inside Quinn’s home study. Across two lanes of slick tarmac, their gazes collided. Behind the round lenses, Eva’s green eyes widened. Her hand flew up in an unconscious, fluttering motion, tucking a wet lock of red hair behind her left ear. Quinn didn't break stride, pivoting on her heel toward the kerb. A delivery lorry chose that exact second to grind past in low gear, belching diesel smoke. When its tail-lift cleared the sightline three seconds later, the space beneath the awning was empty. Only the swinging brass bell on the side alley gate betrayed which way Eva had bolted. Quinn stood at the edge of the pavement for three measured breaths. Eva lived in Bloomsbury and worked in Great Russell Street. She had no conceivable reason to be loitering outside a sealed subterranean shaft in Camden before seven in the morning—unless the little clique of twenty-somethings Quinn had been quietly tracking for four months was up to its neck in whatever waited downstairs. Turning back to the cordon, Quinn signed the scene log, pulled on white Tyvek overshoes and nitrile gloves, and ducked under the tape. The spiral emergency stairs smelled of wet rust at the top, the air thick with street damp. Yet by the time Quinn had descended ninety steps into the London clay, the dampness vanished. That was the first wrong note. Abandoned tunnels beneath north London seeped groundwater year-round; they smelled of stagnant sump water, rat droppings, and black mould. Down here, the air felt desert-dry against her cheekbones and carried a faint, biting tang—charred beeswax, crushed bitter herbs, and the sharp metallic prickle of ozone. Her throat tightened. She hadn't smelled ozone like that since a locked Rotherhithe warehouse three years ago, the night DS Morris had died with his service radio melted in his fist and not a mark on his skin. Quinn forced the memory down and stepped out into the subterranean intermediate landing, where a row of 1920s iron turnstiles stood encrusted with flaking green paint. Forensics had strung portable LED work lights along the vaulted ceiling, washing the grime in harsh white glare. She paused beside the central turnstile. The iron rotor was rusted immobile, yet a narrow slot in the mahogany ticket housing beside it gleamed raw and smooth where the dark varnish had been worn away by recent friction. Quinn knelt, angling her pen-torch into the gap beneath the brass kickplate. Wedged against the skirting was a flat, pale disc the size of an old florin. Using steel forceps from her kit pocket, she teased it free. It wasn't plastic or metal. Under her torchlight, fine Haversian canals showed in the polished grain. Cut bone, bleached white and incised on both faces with a tiny, interlocking geometric knot. Someone had dropped their ticket at the gate. She slipped it into an evidence bag, labelled it, and continued down the stagnant escalator shaft to the platform. DS Callum Reid was waiting near the mouth of the eastbound tunnel, hands shoved deep into his parka, watching a scene photographer flash shots of the body. Reid was thirty, ambitious, and fond of neat paperwork. "Morning, Guv," Reid said, stepping aside so Quinn could view the body. "TfL lads didn't touch him, thank Christ. Backed straight out and rang it in." The victim lay sprawled on his back three feet from the yellow platform edge. White male, late forties, dressed in a tailored wool greatcoat that cost more than Reid’s monthly rent, though his pockets had been turned inside out. His eyes were wide, milky with petechial haemorrhaging, and dark, branching discolourations crawled up the side of his neck from beneath his collar, like frost patterns on a windowpane. "Pathologist is twenty minutes out," Reid offered, gesturing down the hundred-yard curve of the tiled platform with his clipboard. "Looks like a county lines stash house ambush, or an unlicensed rave setup that went sideways before they could bring the rigs in. Look at the floor." Quinn turned slowly, letting her gaze rake the grime-caked concrete from wall to wall. "Walk me through the rave, Callum," she said evenly. "Well, full moon last night, dry weather, classic night for urban explorers or squat-party promoters to pop a welded grate," Reid said, warming to his theory. "There’s foot traffic from dozens of people—hundreds, maybe—all up and down the concourse. Heavy crate drag marks near the stairs. And over by the old tobacco kiosk, SOCO flagged broken glass vials and chemical spills. Precursors, probably. Somebody tried to rip off the supplier before the punters arrived, scuffle broke out, victim took a stun gun to the neck—hence the burns—and hit the deck." "A stun gun," Quinn repeated. "High-voltage cattle prod, maybe. You see them with the north London firms now." Reid nodded toward the broken vials twenty feet away. "Cut-and-dried turf dispute." "Where are the generators?" Quinn asked. Reid blinked. "Sorry?" Quinn pointed up at the vaulted tunnel roof, where ancient porcelain insulators hung empty, their copper wiring stripped out decades ago when the station closed. "There’s no mains power down here, Callum. If a crew spent hours hauling heavy crates down a hundred and forty spiral stairs in pitch blackness, how did they see? Where are the diesel fumes from portable gennies? Where are the cable ruts?" Reid frowned, glancing toward the dark mouth of the tunnel. "Battery lamps, maybe. Headtorches." "For two hundred people?" Quinn walked six paces down the platform, keeping to the narrow taped path SOCO had cleared, and crouched beside the tiled wall. She shone her torch obliquely across the concrete floor, skimming the beam an inch above the surface so the shadows jumped into sharp relief. The dust wasn't churned into the chaotic slush of a dancefloor or a gang brawl. Along both the platform wall and the lip of the empty track bed, rectangular patches of bare, swept concrete repeated at precise intervals. Eight feet wide, six feet deep, separated by neat three-foot alleys. At the corners of each rectangle, droplets of unbleached tallow wax had hardened into yellowish pearls on the stone. "No beer cans," Quinn murmured, rising. "No nitrous canisters, no cigarette ends, no zip-ties. Look at the footwear impressions in the central aisle, Callum. You don’t just have trainers and combat boots. There are leather-soled brogues, narrow women’s heels, bespoke riding boots. And they weren't dancing. They were queuing." Reid stepped closer, his certainty faltering as he followed the beam of her torch. "Queuing for what?" "Stalls," Quinn said, her voice dropping into the quiet register that always made junior detectives nervous. "Thirty or forty temporary booths, pitched along both walls. Lit by tallow candles. Set up cleanly, traded through the night, and dismantled down to the last trestle plank before dawn, with someone taking a stiff broom to the mortar joints on the way out." She moved to the yellow evidence markers clustered around the shattered vials near the rotted wooden frame of the old kiosk. Dropping to one haunch, she wafted the air above a dark, oily stain soaking into the concrete. Not acetone. Not methylamine or battery acid. It smelled of wormwood, sulphur, and something dense and metallic that made the fillings in her back teeth ache. The glass shards themselves were thick, uneven, and dark olive—hand-blown apothecary phials sealed with red wax, not mass-produced labware. "Nobody cooks MDMA in hand-blown glass," Quinn said. "Then what the hell were they selling down here?" Reid asked, rubbing the back of his neck. "Antiques? Stolen art?" Quinn didn't answer. She walked back to the dead man. Everyone else was looking at his face and his turned-out coat pockets, reading a robbery. Quinn looked at the dust beneath his heels and the angle of his right arm. Scuff marks trailed from the dead man’s Oxford shoes—not toward the exit stairs where a mugging victim would flee, but *away* from them. After collapsing, he had dragged himself four feet on his belly across the grit toward the edge of the platform, extending his right arm over the yellow coping stone. His stiffened fingers were curled downward, scraping the vertical drop above the empty track bed. He hadn't been trying to escape his killer. With his throat freezing over and his lungs failing, he had used his last three seconds of consciousness to shove something out of sight. Quinn lay flat on her stomach on the cold concrete, ignoring the grit pressing through her coat, and leaned her shoulders out over the dark pit where the rails had once run. Running beneath the overhang of the platform lip was a narrow ceramic cable ledge, thick with decades of undisturbed coal soot. Six inches below the dead man’s fingertips, the soot had been wiped clean. Tucked into a gap between two glazed bricks glinted a dull, corroded curve of metal. "Give me an evidence bag," Quinn said over her shoulder. "Medium." Reid hurried over, holding the clear plastic open while Quinn reached down carefully. She pinched the object by its outer rim and lifted it into the harsh wash of the floodlights. It was a small brass compass, heavy for its size, no wider than the palm of her gloved hand. Age and dampness had crusted its bevelled casing with a mottled green patina of verdigris, though the hinged lid was missing. Beneath the thick bevelled crystal, the brass dial bore no cardinal letters—no N, S, E, or W. Instead, the face was etched with concentric rings of microscopic, razor-sharp sigils, spiky geometric script that coiled inward around the central pivot like barbed wire. Quinn had seen script very much like it photocopied in a stack of restricted monographs she’d subpoenaed—unsuccessfully—from Eva Kowalski’s department two months ago. "Camden Lock tat," Reid muttered, peering down over her shoulder. "Goth trinket. Half the stalls up on the High Street sell steampunk rubbish like that to tourists." "Hold your torch steady," Quinn told him. She stood up, holding the compass flat on her left palm, inches from her worn leather watch. Beside the brass casing, the thin silver second hand of her watch stuttered. It ticked forward, hung frozen for two full heartbeats, twitched backward a fraction, and froze altogether. A phantom chill crawled up Quinn’s forearm, raising every hair beneath her shirt cuff. Three years ago, when the coroner had handed her DS Morris’s effects in a plastic property bag, his watch had been dead at two-seventeen, every steel gear inside magnetized into a solid lump. Quinn stared down at the verdigris-stained dial. She knew north London’s subterranean geography by heart. The tunnel bore here ran straight northwest toward Chalk Farm; magnetic north lay thirty degrees off the portside rail wall. Any working compass needle in this station had to point past the escalator shaft toward Hampstead. The slender black needle beneath the sigil-etched glass wasn't pointing northwest. It wasn't even wobbling. Pulled taut as a harp string, humming softly enough that Quinn felt the vibration through two layers of nitrile and leather, the needle pointed dead east—straight across the narrow platform toward a solid, windowless alcove of Victorian glazed brick ten yards away. Quinn raised her eyes to that blank wall. There was no door there, no ventilation grille, not even a hairline structural crack. Yet in the mild, bone-dry air of the deep-level tube, a faint shimmer of white rime frost coated the mortar in an arch seven feet high and four feet wide, melting drop by slow drop under the heat of the police floodlights. Slowly, deliberately, Quinn lowered the compass into Reid’s plastic bag and sealed the tamper-evident strip across the top. "Have SOCO swab that brick alcove for trace residue before the condensation washes it clean," Quinn said, her voice steady, betraying nothing of the cold certainty settling into her chest. "Then pull every TfL traffic camera and shopfront CCTV feed within four hundred yards of the street entrance from midnight until zero-six-forty." Reid blinked, pen poised over his notebook. "Looking for a van, Guv? Heavy transit for the stalls?" Quinn glanced back up the dark throat of the escalator shaft, seeing again the flash of curly red hair in the rain, the heavy leather satchel, the nervous hand tucking a curl behind an ear. "No vans," Quinn said, turning toward the stairs. "Look for pedestrians carrying bone tokens. And start with a small woman in a dark coat heading south toward Bloomsbury."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said evenly [evenly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.515
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
87.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2407
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
2"very"
3"softly"
4"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2407
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"porcelain"
count1
5
word"churned"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"crystal"
count1
11
word"etched"
count2
12
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"chill"
2"stark"
3"measured"
4"porcelain"
5"churned"
6"chaotic"
7"dancing"
8"shattered"
9"stomach"
10"crystal"
11"etched"
12"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
96.40% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords2393
ratio0
matches
0"away"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions96
wordCount1970
uniqueNames33
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Reid"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn35
Vauxhall1
Camden2
Chalk2
Farm2
Road1
Met1
London5
Underground1
Leslie1
Green1
Northern1
Line1
Victorian2
Kowalski2
Ancient1
History1
Oxford2
British1
Museum1
Eva5
Bloomsbury1
Great1
Russell1
Street1
Tyvek1
Rotherhithe1
Morris2
Haversian1
Callum1
Reid15
Hampstead1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Leslie"
3"Green"
4"Victorian"
5"Kowalski"
6"Museum"
7"Eva"
8"Morris"
9"Callum"
10"Reid"
places
0"Vauxhall"
1"Camden"
2"Chalk"
3"Farm"
4"Road"
5"London"
6"Ancient"
7"Oxford"
8"British"
9"Bloomsbury"
10"Great"
11"Russell"
12"Street"
13"Hampstead"
globalScore0.612
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.418
wordCount2393
matches
0"not toward the exit stairs where a mugging victim would flee, but *away* from them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean41.26
std25.7
cv0.623
sampleLengths
053
191
249
324
483
530
637
759
864
923
1084
1138
1244
1365
1469
1536
1626
1768
1846
1914
209
2190
225
2325
246
253
2667
2714
2850
2968
3049
3117
3260
3383
348
3520
3640
3767
3832
3953
4028
4111
4231
43105
4427
457
4617
4776
487
4944
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences123
matches
0"were cracked"
1"was rusted"
2"been worn"
3"been turned"
4"were curled"
5"been wiped"
6"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs290
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was looking"
2"wasn't pointing"
3"wasn't even wobbling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences139
ratio0.072
matches
0"She was small—no more than five-foot-four—half-hidden behind a cast-iron bollard."
1"She had no conceivable reason to be loitering outside a sealed subterranean shaft in Camden before seven in the morning—unless the little clique of twenty-somethings Quinn had been quietly tracking for four months was up to its neck in whatever waited downstairs."
2"Abandoned tunnels beneath north London seeped groundwater year-round; they smelled of stagnant sump water, rat droppings, and black mould."
3"Down here, the air felt desert-dry against her cheekbones and carried a faint, biting tang—charred beeswax, crushed bitter herbs, and the sharp metallic prickle of ozone."
4"The glass shards themselves were thick, uneven, and dark olive—hand-blown apothecary phials sealed with red wax, not mass-produced labware."
5"Scuff marks trailed from the dead man’s Oxford shoes—not toward the exit stairs where a mugging victim would flee, but *away* from them."
6"Beneath the thick bevelled crystal, the brass dial bore no cardinal letters—no N, S, E, or W."
7"Quinn had seen script very much like it photocopied in a stack of restricted monographs she’d subpoenaed—unsuccessfully—from Eva Kowalski’s department two months ago."
8"The tunnel bore here ran straight northwest toward Chalk Farm; magnetic north lay thirty degrees off the portside rail wall."
9"Pulled taut as a harp string, humming softly enough that Quinn felt the vibration through two layers of nitrile and leather, the needle pointed dead east—straight across the narrow platform toward a solid, windowless alcove of Victorian glazed brick ten yards away."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2012
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"desert-dry against her"
1"microscopic, razor-sharp sigils,"
2"mild, bone-dry air"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.021371769383697812
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.010437375745526839
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean17.22
std10.67
cv0.62
sampleLengths
025
12
226
317
422
526
626
720
829
924
1013
1110
1236
1324
142
151
1627
179
188
1920
2011
2116
2216
2316
2412
2510
2642
2723
2817
2916
306
3119
3226
333
3435
3526
3618
376
3832
3912
4015
4111
425
4311
4415
458
4619
4727
489
4912
95.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5827338129496403
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners81
86.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences115
matches
0"Only the swinging brass bell"
1"Instead, the face was etched"
2"Slowly, deliberately, Quinn lowered the"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences115
matches
0"She was reaching into her"
1"She was small—no more than"
2"Her hand flew up in"
3"She had no conceivable reason"
4"Her throat tightened."
5"She hadn't smelled ozone like"
6"She paused beside the central"
7"It wasn't plastic or metal."
8"She slipped it into an"
9"His eyes were wide, milky"
10"she said evenly"
11"She shone her torch obliquely"
12"She moved to the yellow"
13"It smelled of wormwood, sulphur,"
14"She walked back to the"
15"His stiffened fingers were curled"
16"He hadn't been trying to"
17"She pinched the object by"
18"It was a small brass"
19"She stood up, holding the"
ratio0.2
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences115
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn checked the"
1"The oxblood Leslie Green tiles"
2"Quinn squared her shoulders with"
3"She was reaching into her"
4"She was small—no more than"
5"A worn leather satchel, its"
6"Master’s in Ancient History from"
7"Her hand flew up in"
8"Quinn didn't break stride, pivoting"
9"A delivery lorry chose that"
10"Quinn stood at the edge"
11"Eva lived in Bloomsbury and"
12"She had no conceivable reason"
13"The spiral emergency stairs smelled"
14"That was the first wrong"
15"Her throat tightened."
16"She hadn't smelled ozone like"
17"Quinn forced the memory down"
18"Forensics had strung portable LED"
19"She paused beside the central"
ratio0.67
43.48% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"Even through the misting rain,"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences84
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A worn leather satchel, its gussets straining with the square, heavy outlines of hardback books, hung cross-body against her hip, pulling her coat askew."
1"DS Callum Reid was waiting near the mouth of the eastbound tunnel, hands shoved deep into his parka, watching a scene photographer flash shots of the body."
2"White male, late forties, dressed in a tailored wool greatcoat that cost more than Reid’s monthly rent, though his pockets had been turned inside out."
3"Instead, the face was etched with concentric rings of microscopic, razor-sharp sigils, spiky geometric script that coiled inward around the central pivot like b…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
1"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
2"Reid muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.182
87.4933%