Run: 2026-11-11-01M75Q40HSAKYKNK9JVVYWXC48

Run Details

Duration:
3m 15s
Cost:
$0.104086
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tear in the Veil snapped shut behind them with the crack of splitting ice. Heat slammed into Rory's chest. Beneath her jacket collar, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her skin, the thumbnail-sized crimson gem searing like a live coal on its silver chain before settling into a warm, rhythmic beat. Rory shielded her bright blue eyes and squinted at the sky. No sun hung overhead. Instead, an unbroken dome of warm amber light stretched from horizon to horizon, thick and luminous as melted beeswax. Her boots sank ankle-deep into scarlet moss. Each shift of her weight ruptured tiny bladders hidden in the turf, sending up plumes of steam rich with charred cinnamon and overripe figs. Three paces ahead, Isolde glided into the clearing. Silver hair spilled to the Half-Fae's waist, catching copper glints under the honeyed glare. Beneath her bare soles, the scarlet moss stood tall and uncrushed, bearing zero trace of her passage. To Rory's left, Nyx towered above the brush. The six-foot silhouette of living shadow frayed at the shoulders, dark edges curling like ink dropped into warm water as the amber radiance pressed against them. Two violet eyes flared inside the featureless head. "Richmond Park never smelled like mulled wine and hot brass." Nyx tilted their head toward the amber vault. Shadowy ribs expanded, drawing in the dense atmosphere. When the Shade spoke, the sound brushed Rory's ear like a draft sliding through a rusted keyhole. "The air carries marrow in it. Take shallow breaths, Carter, or drown on dry land." Isolde paused beside an outcrop veined with rose quartz, turning pale lavender eyes toward the terraced slopes rising ahead. "Where appetite wears a crown, the soil drinks first and asks the cup's name last." Rory tucked a lock of straight black hair behind her ear and stepped onto a sunken flagstone path. Cyclopean terraces climbed the valley walls in sweeping curves, constructed from blocks of porous white stone that resembled bleached honeycomb. Immense trees erupted from the black loam of each tier. Their trunks twisted skyward like braided copper wire, bark splitting at the knots to weep thick golden resin into the grass. A hot breeze rolled down the gorge, setting the orchard canopy in motion. Thousands of gourds hung from the boughs, their skins blown thin as venetian glass. Inside each translucent rind, dark purple juice sloshed around clusters of glowing white seeds. As the gourds knocked together, clear musical notes chimed across the slope, high and sweet, laid over a deeper vibration trembling through Rory's boot soles—a slow, subterranean thudding, like iron pestles striking stone mortars miles underground. Rory trailed her left hand above a waist-high parapet flanking the stone steps, the small crescent scar on her wrist stark pale under the amber sky. A narrow trough ran carved into the top of the masonry wall. Dark, bubbling liquid coursed down the channel, steaming in the heat, saturating the staircase with scents of cloves, crushed plums, and roasted bone marrow. "Plumbing full of hot claret. Subtle." She leaned over the stone lip to inspect the channel. Gold leaf clung to the wet grooves, polished smooth by centuries of flowing vintage. Saliva flooded Rory's mouth. Her stomach twisted into a tight knot, hollowed out by a sudden ache sharp enough to buckle her knees. Every nerve in her body screamed for one swallow from that dark stream. Her fingers twitched, dipping toward the steaming vintage. Cold shadow clamped around her wrist and wrenched her arm clear of the trough. Nyx solidified into dense mass beside her, blocking the channel with a broad shoulder of woven night. "Keep your hands inside your pockets." Rory squeezed her eyes shut, chest heaving, then opened them. The hollow craving dulled to a persistent scrape behind her ribs. She dropped her right hand to her hip and wrapped her fingers around the hilt of her dagger. Through the scabbard leather, the moonsilver weapon bit her palm with winter frost, severing the stupor clinging to her thoughts. "My throat felt fine ten seconds ago." She slid the Fae-Forged Blade an inch from its sheath before clicking it home, anchoring her focus on the chill creeping up her forearm. Ahead of them, Isolde drifted beneath a bough weighted with velvet-skinned peaches the size of human skulls. "Dymas asks no coin at the gate. It collects its toll from the hollow beneath the breastbone." They descended the winding flagstones into an ancient amphitheater half-swallowed by untamed growth. Fluted alabaster pillars ringed a circular courtyard, half the columns tilted at drunken angles, pried out of their stone sockets by tree roots thick as draft horses. Boots crunching over crystallized sugar that coated the ground like rime, Rory crossed a cracked mosaic floor inlaid with mother-of-pearl and garnet. At the middle of the courtyard stood a banquet table hewn from a single slab of petrified oak. Living grapevines strangled its legs, threading through fissures in the timber to spill across the surface. Clusters of midnight-blue grapes swelled beside tarnished silver platters fused into the fossilized grain. From an overturned crystal ewer, amber honey oozed over scattered gemstones where blind white beetles with opalescent shells grazed in sluggish circles. Rory rounded the petrified bench. Near the table's foot, bulbous ivory fungi sprouted from the split belly of a silver tureen. As Rory's shadow fell over them, vertical slits parted along their caps. Moist, gill-lined vents flared wide, exhaling golden spores on a wet sigh that echoed a sleeper turning in silk sheets. Rory pivoted clear of the drifting spores and drew the leaf-shaped moonsilver dagger into open air. Condensation froze into white frost along the slender edge, steaming where the humid heat met Fae metal. "Those mushrooms breathed at me." Nyx dissolved from the waist down, gliding across the sugar-crusted tiles toward an archway on the courtyard's rim. As the Shade passed through the shadow cast by a tilted alabaster column, violet sparks snapped along their forearm with the hiss of dripping tallow. Nyx recoiled into the open amber glare, solidifying with a sharp rush of wind. "The dark here is greased." Rory stepped closer, angling the cold blade toward the base of the pillar. Nothing rested on the mosaic tiles save ordinary shade, yet the air two inches above the dark patch rippled like heat haze off summer asphalt. "Wards?" Nyx flexed shadowy fingers that dripped wisps of black smoke onto the sugar crust. "Residue. Centuries of indulgence soaking into the stone until the shadows grew teeth. Slipping between realms from inside this basin would flay a Shade." Isolde glided past the petrified table and halted beneath the vine-wrapped archway where the courtyard ended at a sheer cliff. Rory joined her at the cracked balustrade, keeping the icy hilt tight in her fist. Below the drop, Belphegor's realm unfolded across a vast basin. Terraced vineyards, brass-ribbed greenhouses, and spiral orchards carpeted rolling hills without end. Rivers of pale cream and dark wine braided through the lowlands, spanned by bridges of carved bone and copper filigree. Far down in the golden mist, tiny lanterns bobbed among trellises thirty feet high, carried by stooped figures pruning the overgrowth with ceaseless precision. "Mortals who bartered tomorrow for a single sublime bite. Now they tend the immortal vine, starving beside a full platter." Rory stared at the distant pinpricks of lantern light while a hot updraft washed over the cliff face. Beneath the sugar and spice hung heavier aromas: seared duck fat, scorched rosemary, and the metallic tang of fresh blood. Beside Rory's elbow, a creeper thick with crimson buds twisted on its stem. Five meaty petals peeled open, aiming blind, nectar-slick pistils toward the pulse in Rory's neck. "Knives out it is." She pressed the flat of the moonsilver blade against the green stem. Frost spider-webbed across the plant on contact; the meaty petals curled shut with a high squeak, shrinking into the masonry cracks. To their right, twin doors of tarnished bronze stood ajar inside the cliffside rock, framed by a stone lintel carved with gaping mouths and spilling cornucopias. Rory led the way across the worn bronze sill into a vast vault cut from black basalt. Casks tall as two-story houses lined the walls, bound in hoops of hammered gold. Overhead, blown-glass conduits snaked across the rock ceiling, pumping luminescent yellow nectar that hummed like a choir of trapped hornets. Isolde drifted to the middle of the chamber and stopped beside a wide pedestal carved from translucent pink salt. Inside its shallow basin, thumb-sized silver eels wove figure-eights around heaps of sunken black pearls. Rory rapped a knuckle against the dry rim of the pedestal. A clear, crystalline chime echoed between the towering casks, scattering the silver eels through the pearls. "Rock salt. One splash of water and this whole carving melts into slush." Nyx lingered beneath a junction of glowing glass pipes, violet light pooling in the hollows of their shadowy face as they tracked the humming yellow current overhead. "No water runs in these cellars, Carter. Pure essence, distilled from a thousand stolen summers."
created_at"2026-11-11T16:30:08.976Z" 11/11/2026, 4:30:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1512
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1512
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"searing"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"constructed"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"crystallized"
count1
10
word"mosaic"
count2
11
word"crystal"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count2
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"ceaseless"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"pumping"
count1
17
word"crystalline"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"searing"
2"rhythmic"
3"weight"
4"constructed"
5"stark"
6"stomach"
7"chill"
8"velvet"
9"crystallized"
10"mosaic"
11"crystal"
12"echoed"
13"silk"
14"ceaseless"
15"pulse"
16"pumping"
17"crystalline"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1511
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1348
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Rory20
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Isolde5
Half-Fae1
Nyx7
Shade2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Fae3
Belphegor1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Shade"
5"Fae"
6"Belphegor"
places
0"Half-Fae"
globalScore0.758
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1511
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean33.58
std21.8
cv0.649
sampleLengths
051
134
231
339
442
510
633
715
819
915
1069
1177
1262
136
1424
1544
1631
176
1859
197
2041
2117
2262
2370
2453
2533
265
2757
285
2938
301
3114
3224
3335
3466
3520
3666
374
3833
3977
4034
4127
4213
4327
4415
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences98
ratio0.02
matches
0"As the gourds knocked together, clear musical notes chimed across the slope, high and sweet, laid over a deeper vibration trembling through Rory's boot soles—a slow, subterranean thudding, like iron pestles striking stone mortars miles underground."
1"Frost spider-webbed across the plant on contact; the meaty petals curled shut with a high squeak, shrinking into the masonry cracks."
70.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1371
adjectiveStacks5
stackExamples
0"together, clear musical notes"
1"beside tarnished silver platters"
2"Moist, gill-lined vents"
3"blind, nectar-slick pistils"
4"thumb-sized silver eels"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.010211524434719184
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0007293946024799417
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean15.42
std6.57
cv0.426
sampleLengths
015
15
231
311
44
519
67
724
88
914
1017
118
1226
138
1410
158
168
1717
1815
1919
2015
2118
2220
2310
2421
2513
2614
2714
2836
2926
3012
3124
326
3310
3414
354
3619
3713
388
3914
4017
416
4210
4311
4418
4520
467
4724
4817
4917
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6428571428571429
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners63
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Instead, an unbroken dome of"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her boots sank ankle-deep into"
1"Their trunks twisted skyward like"
2"She leaned over the stone"
3"Her stomach twisted into a"
4"Her fingers twitched, dipping toward"
5"She dropped her right hand"
6"She slid the Fae-Forged Blade"
7"They descended the winding flagstones"
8"She pressed the flat of"
ratio0.108
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences83
matches
0"The tear in the Veil"
1"Heat slammed into Rory's chest."
2"Rory shielded her bright blue"
3"Her boots sank ankle-deep into"
4"Each shift of her weight"
5"The six-foot silhouette of living"
6"Nyx tilted their head toward"
7"Shadowy ribs expanded, drawing in"
8"Isolde paused beside an outcrop"
9"Rory tucked a lock of"
10"Cyclopean terraces climbed the valley"
11"Their trunks twisted skyward like"
12"A hot breeze rolled down"
13"Rory trailed her left hand"
14"A narrow trough ran carved"
15"Dark, bubbling liquid coursed down"
16"She leaned over the stone"
17"Saliva flooded Rory's mouth."
18"Her stomach twisted into a"
19"Every nerve in her body"
ratio0.578
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"To Rory's left, Nyx towered"
1"To their right, twin doors"
ratio0.024
93.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Cyclopean terraces climbed the valley walls in sweeping curves, constructed from blocks of porous white stone that resembled bleached honeycomb."
1"Boots crunching over crystallized sugar that coated the ground like rime, Rory crossed a cracked mosaic floor inlaid with mother-of-pearl and garnet."
2"Moist, gill-lined vents flared wide, exhaling golden spores on a wet sigh that echoed a sleeper turning in silk sheets."
3"Nyx flexed shadowy fingers that dripped wisps of black smoke onto the sugar crust."
4"Overhead, blown-glass conduits snaked across the rock ceiling, pumping luminescent yellow nectar that hummed like a choir of trapped hornets."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
93.2547%