Run: 2026-11-11-01M75QBN08DNHQ2FC1E3V5VV3C

Run Details

Duration:
3m 8s
Cost:
$0.115008
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain sluiced down the leaded panes of The Raven's Nest, fracturing the emerald glow of the green neon sign above the entrance into slick ribbons across the floorboards. Rory pushed through the oak door with her shoulder. Her moped helmet swung by its strap from her knuckles, dripping Soho gutter water onto the coir mat. Six hours of hauling Yu-Fei Cheung's paper bags through West End gridlock clung to her nylon jacket—a persistent perfume of charred scallions, black bean sauce, and diesel exhaust. Behind the mahogany counter, Silas lifted his gaze from a leather-bound ledger. Low amber bulbs hung from brass chains above his head, picking out the grey streaks in his auburn hair and trim matching beard. He closed the book, the silver signet ring on his right hand clicking against the cover, and shifted his six-foot-one frame toward the soda gun. His left leg dragged a fraction as his bad knee locked on the turn. "Parcel came for your flat upstairs. Heavy box. Postmarked Cardiff." Rory unzipped her wet collar, shaking straight black hair loose where the damp ends grazed her shoulders, and set the helmet on an empty stool beside the brass rail. "My mother's damson jam, or my father's spare copies of Halsbury's Statutes. Toss a coin on which weighs more." Silas filled a highball glass with soda water and three wedges of lime, his hazel eyes flicking past her toward the center of the room. Yellowed maps of defunct empires and black-and-white photographs of European plazas covered the plaster walls, absorbing the chatter of four men gathered beside the cast-iron radiator. Wet wool overcoats steamed on the bentwood stand behind them. Silk ties, gold cufflinks, leather briefcases propped against table legs like obedient hounds. An October squall had driven a pack of Inns of Court regulars west into Soho. One of the men broke from the group, gathering four empty tumblers between manicured fingers. He navigated the narrow gap between two round tables, carrying himself with the practiced ease of someone accustomed to oak benches and attentive juries. He set the glasses on the mahogany twelve inches from Rory's elbow. "Four more when you have a moment, mate. Two Laphroaigs, a soda splash, and—" His voice snagged. He turned his head an inch, then his whole torso, his gaze dropping from Rory's rain-darkened fringe to the bright blue eyes beneath, settling on the cracked yellow dragon of *Golden Empress* stitched over her breast pocket. At five-foot-six in flat riding boots, her chin barely cleared the top of his bespoke lapel. Rory kept her left hand wrapped around the cold condensation of her glass. Where the waterproof cuff had bunched at her joint, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist sat pale under the amber bulb. "Aurora?" Nobody inside the M25 owned that name. Aurora belonged to lecture theatres in Cathays Park, to crisp linen blouses ironed on Sunday evenings, to Brendan Carter's dining table in Pontcanna. "Hello, Toby." Toby Pritchard stared, the courtroom briskness draining from his face to leave the round-cheeked boy who used to borrow her Pre-Law notes twenty minutes before seminars. Four years had chiselled his jaw and put forty-pound haircuts on his head, erasing the blue biro smudges he used to carry along his thumb. "Look at you. Standing in Soho." Silas paused with a fresh bottle of Islay malt in his grip. Quiet authority settled into the set of his shoulders as his hazel gaze measured Toby's tailored wool, then shifted to Rory. A silent offer hung in the tilt of his chin: one nod and the barrister would drink rain on the pavement. Rory tapped two fingers against her glass. Stand down. Silas uncorked the scotch and limped toward the far end of the counter, leaving six feet of scarred timber to them. Toby let out a short, breathless laugh that died between them, gesturing at her heavy waterproof trousers and scuffed toe-caps. "Tell me there's a chambers treasure hunt happening on Wardour Street." "Thirty-two pork dumplings to a sound engineer on Greek Street, four duck pancakes to a club promoter on Frith. Tipped three quid in loose copper." Toby stared at the helmet resting on the stool—scratched polycarbonate, peeling reflective tape across the visor. His mouth opened, closed, then compressed into a thin line. "You vanished." "I moved." "Mid-term. Two weeks before the spring moot." He leaned a hip against the brass rail, forgetting his three colleagues beside the radiator, whose laughter rose and fell beneath a framed photograph of pre-war Prague. "Jenkins read the withdrawal sheet three times before calling the reserves to the lectern. I ended up inheriting your respondent brief. Won the silver inkwell." Rory lifted her lime soda and drank, letting the sharp citrus cut the fryer grease coating the back of her throat. "Congratulations. You coveted that thing from fresher's week." "I wanted to beat you for it." Tendons blanched along the ridge of his hand where he gripped the mahogany edge. "Winning because Aurora Carter walked out of the building felt like finding a trophy in a skip. We rang your mobile for a month. Dead tone. Your flat on Richmond Road had strangers' bicycles chained to the railings by April." "Eva had a spare sofa in Hackney." "Eva? The girl from your comprehensive who flunked A-level chemistry?" Rory's mouth curved without warmth. That old Cardiff taxonomy—measuring human worth by exam boards and pupillage offers. Four years ago, she spoke that dialect without an accent. "She builds theatrical wigs at the National now. Kept a roof over my head for six months without asking for rent." Toby glanced toward the rear wall, where a tall bookcase of worn leather spines stood flush against the dark panelling, then returned his gaze to her face. "I saw your father at the Wales and Chester Circuit dinner last autumn. Sat three seats from him." Rory's thumb traced a bead of water down the seam of her glass. "How was the claret?" "Château Musar. Brendan told the table you were consulting for an institute in Geneva. International arbitration." "Geneva sounds cleaner over roast pheasant than a part-time moped shift in Soho." "Your mother sent her regards through Gareth's aunt at a teachers' union conference in Swansea, too. Same story. Alps and diplomatic passes." Hearing the extent of her parents' fiction tightened Rory's jaw. Brendan the Irish silk and Jennifer the Welsh schoolteacher, constructing a pristine European ghost out of whole cloth rather than admit their daughter hauled foil trays through London drizzle. Beside the radiator, one of the suited men caught Toby's eye and mimed tilting a tumbler. Toby lifted a palm without turning, dismissing the summons. His shoulders dropped an inch, shedding the barrister's poise. "Evan drank in the student union every Friday that spring." Rain ticked against the leaded glass, filling the pause between them while Silas stacked clean pint mugs near the till. "Did he." "Sat in the corner booth wearing your old college scarf. Told everyone you left your keys on the draining board while he was in a tort lecture. No letter. Half your wardrobe hanging in the cupboard." "Three coats, seven dresses, and my grandmother's pearl studs. Leaving them saved ten minutes while he was at the shop buying tonic water." Toby's brow creased, his trained legal mind catching a snag in the chronology. "Tort lectures were Tuesday mornings. You left on a Thursday night." "Thursday at nine-fifteen. Eva drove four hours down the M4 and idled in the lane behind Crwys Road with her headlights off while he walked to the off-licence for Schweppes." Toby's gaze dropped to her left hand—past the small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood fall onto a garden frame, fixing on the rigid set of her tendon, the habit of keeping her forearm pressed against her ribs in crowded rooms. Memory worked behind his eyes, sorting old exhibits with four years of professional precision. "Your twenty-first birthday." Rory chewed a sliver of ice from the bottom of her glass. "You cooked lamb tagine in that narrow kitchen with the yellow lino. Four of us round the folding table. The earthenware dish shattered before pudding." "Olive oil on my palms. That was the line." "Evan gave the explanation before you came through the doorway with the dustpan." Color drained from around Toby's nostrils, carving two pale brackets beside his mouth. "You wore a black roll-neck jumper to the Constitutional exam that May. Twenty-five degrees under the gymnasium skylight, fans rattling at both ends of the hall, and you kept the wool pulled over your knuckles across three essay booklets." "Took top marks on that paper. My father framed the transcript in his study." Toby pressed his thumb and forefinger into the corners of his eyes, fracturing the polished composure he had carried in from the street. When his hand fell, the boy from Cathays Park was gone, hollowed by the sudden recalculation of an entire youth. "We bought him pints, Rory. All summer. Me, Gareth, Chloe. Took turns walking him home so he wouldn't sit in that flat on his own. Whenever someone called you ruthless—Brendan Carter's girl shedding dead weight before moving up—I gave a nod." "Evan had a gift for closing arguments. He knew the exact pitch to make the back row lean in." "Why didn't you knock on my door? Five streets across town. Ten minutes on foot." Rory looked at him—at the crisp chalk-stripe cuff peeking from his coat sleeve, the unblemished hands that had never scrubbed soy sauce from nylon in a bathroom basin above a Soho bar, the straight trajectory of a life that had proceeded from pillar to post without catching fire in the middle. "Because you would have asked for corroboration, Toby. The way Brendan Carter's star pupils are taught." Beside the radiator, a chair scraped across the floorboards as one of his colleagues stood, checking a steel wristwatch. Silas set four brimming tumblers onto a tin tray at the far end of the counter, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching a glint of amber light as he slid the drinks toward the edge of the wood. Toby made no move for his wallet or the waiting tray. His fingers remained splayed on the damp varnish between Rory's scratched helmet and her empty glass.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:34:19.282Z" 11/11/2026, 4:34:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1726
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1726
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"silk"
count2
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"navigated"
2"practiced ease"
3"measured"
4"warmth"
5"traced"
6"pristine"
7"shattered"
8"weight"
9"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1719
ratio0.001
matches
0"Golden Empress"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Four years ago, she spoke that dialect without an accent."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1118
uniqueNames29
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Toby"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho3
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
West1
End1
Silas6
European2
October1
Inns1
Court1
Rory13
Cathays2
Park2
Sunday1
Brendan2
Carter1
Pontcanna1
Pritchard1
Pre-Law1
Islay1
Toby12
Prague1
Cardiff1
Irish1
Jennifer1
Welsh1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
6"Brendan"
7"Carter"
8"Pritchard"
9"Toby"
10"Jennifer"
places
0"Soho"
1"West"
2"End"
3"Cathays"
4"Park"
5"Pontcanna"
6"Prague"
7"Cardiff"
8"London"
globalScore0.919
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1719
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"owned that name"
1"spoke that dialect"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean25.28
std21.2
cv0.839
sampleLengths
083
174
210
329
419
589
639
712
814
956
1035
111
1230
132
1451
156
1684
1720
1811
1925
2026
212
222
237
2427
2525
2621
278
287
2914
3040
317
3210
3327
3421
3527
3618
3713
384
3916
4013
4122
4239
4334
4410
4520
462
4736
4823
4913
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences100
ratio0.05
matches
0"Six hours of hauling Yu-Fei Cheung's paper bags through West End gridlock clung to her nylon jacket—a persistent perfume of charred scallions, black bean sauce, and diesel exhaust."
1"Toby stared at the helmet resting on the stool—scratched polycarbonate, peeling reflective tape across the visor."
2"That old Cardiff taxonomy—measuring human worth by exam boards and pupillage offers."
3"Toby's gaze dropped to her left hand—past the small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood fall onto a garden frame, fixing on the rigid set of her tendon, the habit of keeping her forearm pressed against her ribs in crowded rooms."
4"Rory looked at him—at the crisp chalk-stripe cuff peeking from his coat sleeve, the unblemished hands that had never scrubbed soy sauce from nylon in a bathroom basin above a Soho bar, the straight trajectory of a life that had proceeded from pillar to post without catching fire in the middle."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1061
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.007540056550424128
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000942507068803016
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean17.19
std10.11
cv0.588
sampleLengths
028
19
218
328
412
523
625
714
810
929
1019
1125
1226
1310
1413
1515
1615
1724
1812
1914
203
2137
2216
2313
2422
251
267
2723
282
2926
3025
316
3212
3321
3421
357
362
3721
3820
3911
4025
4116
4210
432
442
457
4627
4725
4821
498
98.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences60
matches
0"Her moped helmet swung by"
1"He closed the book, the"
2"His left leg dragged a"
3"He navigated the narrow gap"
4"He set the glasses on"
5"His voice snagged."
6"He turned his head an"
7"His mouth opened, closed, then"
8"He leaned a hip against"
9"His shoulders dropped an inch,"
10"His fingers remained splayed on"
ratio0.183
93.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences60
matches
0"Rain sluiced down the leaded"
1"Rory pushed through the oak"
2"Her moped helmet swung by"
3"He closed the book, the"
4"His left leg dragged a"
5"Rory unzipped her wet collar,"
6"Silas filled a highball glass"
7"Silk ties, gold cufflinks, leather"
8"An October squall had driven"
9"He navigated the narrow gap"
10"He set the glasses on"
11"His voice snagged."
12"He turned his head an"
13"Rory kept her left hand"
14"Nobody inside the M25 owned"
15"Aurora belonged to lecture theatres"
16"Toby Pritchard stared, the courtroom"
17"Silas paused with a fresh"
18"A silent offer hung in"
19"Rory tapped two fingers against"
ratio0.733
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Low amber bulbs hung from brass chains above his head, picking out the grey streaks in his auburn hair and trim matching beard."
1"Toby Pritchard stared, the courtroom briskness draining from his face to leave the round-cheeked boy who used to borrow her Pre-Law notes twenty minutes before …"
2"Toby let out a short, breathless laugh that died between them, gesturing at her heavy waterproof trousers and scuffed toe-caps."
3"Rory looked at him—at the crisp chalk-stripe cuff peeking from his coat sleeve, the unblemished hands that had never scrubbed soy sauce from nylon in a bathroom…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.9186%