Run: 2026-11-11-01M75QH891QDANE4X57MBEE9JC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.044754
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost crunched under Rory’s boots until her toe crossed the line between the two tallest oak monoliths. "I’m at the boundary markers right now, Eva. Give me ten minutes to drop the tin and I’ll head straight back to the flat." Static chewed through the speaker against her ear, chopping her friend's reply into metallic confetti. "Wait—don't hang up, the signal's dropping—" A low pop vibrated against Rory’s cheekbone. The screen went black. Not the dead-battery icon, not the spinning wheel of a lost London network—glass gone dark as slate, cold enough to sting her fingertips. She shoved the handset into her jacket pocket and exhaled. No plume of white mist left her mouth. Behind her, beyond the ring of petrified oak standing stones, November gripped Richmond Park in frozen mud and skeletal bracken. Two paces forward, inside the Grove, knee-high meadowsweet and scarlet poppies brushed her jeans. Unfurling petals gleamed wet with summer dew. That shift never bothered her on previous runs; Isolde’s pocket of turf operated on its own calendar, indifferent to Greenwich Mean Time or English winters. The silence bothered her. Every past visit greeted Rory with a thick wall of noise: fat bumblebees drunken on midnight pollen, crickets sawing in the grass, leaves gossiping overhead. Tonight, the clearing swallowed sound whole. Her boot heels sank into lush moss without a whisper. Black hair hung motionless against her collarbones, untouched by any draft. Even the distant, permanent bass-note of Heathrow flight paths and ring-road traffic had vanished, sheared off cleanly at the oak perimeter. "Isolde?" Her voice died three feet past her teeth. No bounce off the timber pillars, no rustle from the treeline. It sounded like shouting into a closet packed with wool coats. Rory shifted the waxed-canvas parcel under her arm and thumbed the small crescent scar on her left wrist. Three ridges of pale tissue, smooth as river glass. She kept her breathing level, counting four beats in, four beats out, letting her blue eyes adjust rather than blinding herself with a torch beam right away. Deliveries for Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress taught a person how to read bad postcodes after midnight; surviving Evan had taught her how to read a room before the first swing landed. This clearing had teeth bared. "You asked for courier rates before two, Isolde. Parcel’s going on the center stump if you don't show in sixty seconds." Heat pricked the hollow of her throat. At first, it felt like a bead of sweat sliding beneath her thermal shirt. Then the metal bit in. Rory hooked a finger under the silver chain around her neck and dragged the Heartstone free of her collar. Rough-cut crimson, no larger than her thumbnail, the gem held an ember at its core. Warmth pulsed against her calloused palm—one beat, pause, another beat, out of sync with her own carotid artery. Rory’s jaw tightened. The benefactor’s warning about the pendant wasn't complicated: crimson fire meant a tear into Hel sat close enough to bleed through the dirt. Yet this was Fae ground. Ancient, warded by twisted heartwood that predated Roman roads. Hel portals didn't open in Fae pockets any more than saltwater boiled in a freezer. *Clack.* Rory froze, fingers curling around the hot gem so its red bleed wouldn't give away her hands. The noise came from her left, out near the easternmost boundary oak. Not a snapping twig. Not a deer hoof striking root. It carried the wet, hollow resonance of two heavy billiard balls kissing—or knuckles cracking inside a leather glove. *Clack. Shhhk.* Iron scraping across wet flagstones. A long, deliberate drag, four seconds from start to finish, ending with a dull tap. There were no flagstones in the Grove. Seventy yards of unbroken wildflower turf stretched from the southern oaks to the northern thicket. "Who's out there?" Silence rushed back in to plug the hole her words tore. Rory pivoted forty degrees, keeping her knees unlocked, weight balanced over the balls of her feet. Six ancient oak standing stones ringed the meadow. Twisted columns of blackened wood hardened into mineral over centuries, each one thick as a postbox and twice her height. She knew their spacing by heart. One at twelve o'clock, two flanking the entrance behind her at five and seven, three spaced across the northern curve. Seven dark verticals stood against the starless canopy. Her gaze snapped toward ten o'clock. Six. Just the split-crown marker leaning over a drift of white anemones, flanked by empty, waist-high grass. She stared straight at the gap between the ten-o'clock pillar and its neighbor. Nothing moved. Petals hung limp on their stalks. Yet the moment she shifted her focus back toward the center stump, the dark mass at the edge of her left eye grew taller, unbending like a spine straightening out of a crouch. Rory didn't whip her head around a second time. Predators tracked panic; smart prey used peripheral rods instead of cones. She stared dead ahead at the flat-topped oak stump in the clearing's heart and watched the edges of the world warp. Twenty yards out, a cluster of tall purple foxgloves bowed toward the turf. No breeze touched the poppies beside them. One square foot of stems folded flat, crushed under an invisible weight, holding the shape of a broad depression before springing half-way upright with bruised stalks. Three paces clockwise, a patch of oxeye daisies vanished into the moss. Pause. Another patch flattened, five feet closer to the center. Whatever walked the circle wasn't aiming straight for her throat. It paced the perimeter between her and the exit oaks, herding, testing the width of the cage. Rory reached into her coat pocket with her free hand, bypassing her dead phone to wrap her knuckles around her moped key, slotting the jagged brass shaft between her middle and ring fingers. Pitiful against anything tall enough to match the monoliths, better than bare skin. "Keep your parcel, then. Tell Isolde the surcharge doubled." She set the waxed package onto the damp turf between her boots without taking her eyes off the dark space ahead, straightened up, and took one measured step backward toward the southern gap. Behind her right shoulder, three paces away in empty air, lungs let out a long, rattling sigh. Warm rot washed over the back of Rory’s neck—stagnant pond water and copper pennies. Strands of her black hair lifted away from her cheek, stirred by a draft that came from six feet off the ground, angling downward. The Heartstone seared her palm, crimson light leaking through the seams between her clenched fingers, staining the cuffs of her jacket dark red. *Clack.* That wet, bony percussion sounded again. Not from the eastern treeline this time. From her left. And an answering *clack* echoed two beats later from the six-o'clock gap where she had entered five minutes ago. Two of them. Or something wide enough to span thirty feet of meadow in the dark. Rory ground her back teeth together, forcing her heels to stay planted rather than bolting blind into the tall grass where roots waited to catch an ankle. She thumbed the torch clipped to her belt, aimed it down toward the trampled daisies rather than up into her own night vision, and clicked the switch. White LED glare sliced across the year-round blooms. Every flower within ten yards of her boots was gray. Not shadowed—drained to ash, curling inward at the edges where invisible soles had kissed the soil. Leading straight through those dead, crisp petals, two parallel grooves scored the moss like dragged crowbars, curving from the boundary oaks right up to the heel of her left boot. Rory raised the beam three inches. Between the twin entrance oaks, blocking the frost-rimmed grass of Richmond Park, stood an eighth monolith that possessed no bark, swaying from side to side in time with the burning pulse against her palm.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:37:22.86Z" 11/11/2026, 4:37:22 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1320
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1320
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"silence"
2"whisper"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"resonance"
6"weight"
7"measured"
8"echoed"
9"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"start to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords5
totalWords1314
ratio0.004
matches
0"Clack."
1"Clack. Shhhk."
2"Clack."
3"clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1250
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
London1
November1
Richmond2
Park2
Grove2
Isolde1
Greenwich1
Mean1
Time1
English1
Heathrow1
Yu-Fei1
Golden1
Empress1
Evan1
Heartstone2
Hel2
Fae2
Roman1
Iron1
persons
0"Rory"
1"November"
2"Isolde"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Empress"
5"Evan"
6"Heartstone"
7"Roman"
8"Iron"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Grove"
4"Greenwich"
5"Time"
6"Fae"
globalScore0.98
windowScore1
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like shouting into a closet packed"
1"felt like a bead of sweat sliding benea"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1314
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean25.76
std20.78
cv0.807
sampleLengths
017
124
215
36
434
518
666
74
873
91
1030
1184
125
1321
147
1538
1633
1755
181
1917
2040
212
2220
2322
243
2511
2670
278
2823
2954
3041
3113
3233
3312
341
359
3627
3746
389
3933
4017
4138
4223
431
4435
4516
4654
478
4856
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"wasn't aiming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences101
ratio0.079
matches
0"Not the dead-battery icon, not the spinning wheel of a lost London network—glass gone dark as slate, cold enough to sting her fingertips."
1"That shift never bothered her on previous runs; Isolde’s pocket of turf operated on its own calendar, indifferent to Greenwich Mean Time or English winters."
2"Deliveries for Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress taught a person how to read bad postcodes after midnight; surviving Evan had taught her how to read a room before the first swing landed."
3"Warmth pulsed against her calloused palm—one beat, pause, another beat, out of sync with her own carotid artery."
4"It carried the wet, hollow resonance of two heavy billiard balls kissing—or knuckles cracking inside a leather glove."
5"Predators tracked panic; smart prey used peripheral rods instead of cones."
6"Warm rot washed over the back of Rory’s neck—stagnant pond water and copper pennies."
7"Not shadowed—drained to ash, curling inward at the edges where invisible soles had kissed the soil."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1270
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"empty, waist-high grass."
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.023622047244094488
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0015748031496062992
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean13.01
std8.5
cv0.654
sampleLengths
017
124
215
36
47
54
623
710
88
920
1014
117
1225
134
1425
156
1610
1711
1821
191
208
2111
2211
2318
249
2527
2630
275
2821
297
3014
315
3219
3315
3418
353
3623
375
389
3915
401
4117
4212
434
446
4518
461
471
485
4915
99.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6138613861386139
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners62
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"Even the distant, permanent bass-note"
1"Then the metal bit in."
2"Just the split-crown marker leaning"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences88
matches
0"She shoved the handset into"
1"Her boot heels sank into"
2"Her voice died three feet"
3"It sounded like shouting into"
4"She kept her breathing level,"
5"It carried the wet, hollow"
6"She knew their spacing by"
7"Her gaze snapped toward ten"
8"She stared straight at the"
9"She stared dead ahead at"
10"It paced the perimeter between"
11"She set the waxed package"
12"She thumbed the torch clipped"
ratio0.148
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences88
matches
0"Frost crunched under Rory’s boots"
1"Static chewed through the speaker"
2"A low pop vibrated against"
3"The screen went black."
4"She shoved the handset into"
5"That shift never bothered her"
6"The silence bothered her."
7"Every past visit greeted Rory"
8"Tonight, the clearing swallowed sound"
9"Her boot heels sank into"
10"Her voice died three feet"
11"It sounded like shouting into"
12"Rory shifted the waxed-canvas parcel"
13"She kept her breathing level,"
14"Deliveries for Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress"
15"This clearing had teeth bared."
16"Heat pricked the hollow of"
17"Rory hooked a finger under"
18"Warmth pulsed against her calloused"
19"Rory’s jaw tightened."
ratio0.534
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Between the twin entrance oaks, blocking the frost-rimmed grass of Richmond Park, stood an eighth monolith that possessed no bark, swaying from side to side in …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.0484%