Run: 2026-11-11-01M75QKXX9NB8WJRNQRQBDKB2T

Run Details

Duration:
3m 41s
Cost:
$0.149774
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rust flaked from the cast-iron banister beneath Detective Harlow Quinn’s gloved palm. One hundred and sixty spiral steps bored through London clay, sealing Camden High Street behind three feet of Victorian brick and damp earth. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Six-fourteen. Morning sun warmed the pavements on the surface, yet inside the shaft, stagnant chill clung to the ironwork. Quinn halted on the bottom landing, shoulders squared with military precision. She angled her torch across the final three risers. Grey dust coated the metal treads like untouched felt, broken by four sets of boot prints—two heavy patrol soles and two ribbed forensics overshoes. Nothing beyond those four trails marred the grime. "Mind your head on the lintel, Ma'am." Detective Sergeant Miller ducked beneath a corroded service archway, holding a yellow cable guard clear of a puddle at the threshold. Sweat darkened his collar under the glare of the portable floodlamps. "You pulled me off the North Circular before six, Miller. This had better beat copper thieves." Quinn stepped onto the abandoned Tube platform, her five-foot-nine frame clearing the rusted iron canopy by inches. No train had run through this subterranean spur since nineteen-twenty-four. Halogen tripods bleached the soot-streaked cream tiles, casting sharp shadows into the dry pit where calcified silt swallowed the corroded rails. The air tasted wrong. No diesel exhaust, no sour sewer damp. Burnt resin, scorched copper, and crushed bitter almonds coated the back of her tongue. Three years had passed since she smelled that exact chemical marriage inside a locked Rotherhithe warehouse, standing beside DS Morris's body while senior brass blamed an electrical arc. Miller gestured toward the centre of the concourse, where a white tarpaulin covered a prone figure. "The night watchman at Camden Lock heard rattling on a welded ventilation grate at four-thirty. Uniform sheared the street padlock from the spiral stair hatch, descended, and found our John Doe cold on the tiles. Classic underground rave gone sour." Quinn’s brown eyes tracked across the limestone floor. Eighteen years of decorated service in the Met taught her to read footfalls before faces. Hundreds of overlapping prints churned the pale dust along a sixty-yard stretch of concourse—heavy combat treads, narrow Oxford brogues, delicate pointed heels, hobnailed boots. "Uniform cut the street padlock from the outside." Miller flipped open his notepad, tapping a lined page with his biro. "Welded with rust since the seventies. The promoters brought the crowd through a maintenance junction along the Northern Line." Quinn walked to the coping stones at the platform edge and swept her torch beam forty yards into the dark tunnel mouth. Smooth, crusted silt blanketed the wooden sleepers from wall to wall, unbroken by a single heel mark or dragged power cable. "Nothing has cracked that crust in decades, Sergeant." Miller frowned, leaning past the yellow line before shrugging one shoulder. "Camden sits on a honeycomb of Victorian storm drains and brewery chutes. Urban explorers map new crawlspaces every month. Once a dealer pulls a bad batch of synthetics at an unlicensed party, three hundred kids scatter through whatever rat-hole brought them in." "Carrying their sound stacks, their generators, and every empty bottle?" Quinn crouched beside the white sheet and lifted the polythene corner. A man in his late forties stared at the vaulted brick ceiling, pupils blown wide, sharp features waxen under the halogen glare. He wore a charcoal cashmere overcoat buttoned over a silk waistcoat. No tunnel mud stained his cuffs; no limestone dust greyed his knees. Fine purple capillaries webbed his throat and jawline, though the skin bore zero contusions or needle punctures. "No wallet, no phone, no keys, no tailor's label." Miller pointed his biro at a scatter of thick violet glass near the dead man's right heel. Inside the shards pooled a viscous silver residue, hardened along its rim like cold solder. "Designer narcotics in hand-blown ampoules. Whoever robbed him emptied his pockets and bolted." Quinn rose, her sharp jaw set as she scanned the tiled wall behind the corpse. Crisp white chalk divided the platform into uniform ten-by-ten squares running parallel to the track pit. Within individual squares lay droplets of black beeswax, spilled saffron-coloured ash, and distinct rectangular dents where wooden trestle legs had bitten into the grit. "Ravers don't dance inside gridded ten-foot booths, Miller. Look at the geometry—six-foot central aisle, measured plots along both walls, tally marks chalked on the glaze at eye level. You're standing in a market." Leather creaked near the shadow of the old mahogany ticket kiosk. A young woman stood behind the blue crime-scene tape, hugging a worn leather satchel stuffed with thick bound books against her ribs. Barely twenty-six and standing five-foot-four, she had curly red hair framing a freckled complexion. Round glasses sat crooked on her nose as she watched Quinn inspect the chalk tallies. "Identify the civilian, Sergeant." Miller lowered his notebook, motioning toward the kiosk. "Eva Kowalski, research assistant from the British Museum. Forensics pulled inscribed bone disks and antique brass from the dead man's coat, plus unfamiliar script chalked across the eastern arch. Night-duty inspector suspected an antiquities fencing ring and rang Bloomsbury for a rush read." Eva tucked a loose red curl behind her left ear, green eyes flicking from Quinn's cropped salt-and-pepper hair to the warrant badge clipped at her belt. "The restricted archives. I hold an Oxford Master's in Ancient History, Detective. Your inspector asked whether the archway script matched Roman curse tablets or Near Eastern cuneiform." Quinn crossed the concourse in measured strides and stopped beside the stainless-steel evidence table. "Does it?" Eva nudged her round glasses onto the bridge of her nose, fingers tightening around the worn strap of her satchel. "Throwback theatrics. Late-Victorian occult societies invented composite alphabets to impress wealthy initiates. Secret supper clubs and gothic roleplayers copy those manuals every weekend. None of the chalk symbols belong to a historical language." Quinn studied the clear evidence pouches laid beneath the desk lamp. Inside the first bag rested a smooth, coin-sized token carved from dense pale bone, its rim notched with asymmetric grooves darkened by thumb oil. "Forensics pulled this from his outer ticket pocket, Miss Kowalski?" Eva tucked that stray curl behind her left ear a second time. "Carved cattle femur. Gaming counters from nineteenth-century taverns turn up in Thames mud at low tide. Collectors polish them as curiosities." "Collectors wrap fragile curiosities in tissue. Commuters keep transit passes loose in an outer ticket pocket." Quinn lifted the second evidence bag by its heat-sealed corner. Inside sat a small brass compass coated in a flaky patina of green verdigris. No stamped degrees or maker's marks ringed the bezel; angular protective sigils coiled across the tarnished face where cardinal letters belonged. The metalwork defied factory tooling—seamless, devoid of solder joints or lathe striations. Miller craned his neck over the tray. "Broken theatrical prop. Needle's corroded to its pin. Magnetic north sits behind the spiral stairs toward Chalk Farm, and that pointer's jammed facing east." Quinn balanced the bagged compass flat across her open palm. Keeping her wrist level, she pivoted ninety degrees toward the silent track bed. Inside the brass casing, the dark needle glided across the etched sigils without friction, tracing a counter-clockwise arc until its tip locked onto the eastern end of the platform. "Corroded needles don't track when you rotate the housing, Sergeant." Eva's grip shifted on her satchel, a heavy reference volume sliding against the leather flap. Neither officer spoke as Quinn paced ten yards toward the tunnel mouth, then ten yards toward the kiosk, holding the polythene pouch at waist height. From every angle on the concourse, the needle ignored magnetic north and aimed like a rifle barrel at a bricked archway beneath a rusted *Way Out* enamel sign. Quinn walked down the central chalk aisle toward that sealed exit. With each stride, the scattered prints from the market booths merged into a dense, trampled funnel. Brogues, combat boots, pointed heels—hundreds of soles pressed shoulder-to-shoulder into a six-foot corridor terminating against red brickwork. Miller followed at her elbow, playing his torch beam across the masonry. "Borough engineers bricked the pedestrian subway in nineteen-thirty-eight during the sewer expansion. Three courses of engineering brick backed by packed clay. Dead end." Quinn dropped to one knee on the grit-strewn tiles. She laid her torch flat against the floor so its grazing light threw every ridge of chalk dust into stark relief. Deep parallel ruts from heavy wheeled trunks scored the grime, running into the bottom course of brick and cutting off flush against the lime mortar. Beside the left rut, wedged beneath the chipped Victorian skirting, gleamed a splintered crescent of notched pale bone—a twin to the token from the dead man's overcoat. "Look at the tread angles, Miller." Miller knelt beside her, shining his lamp across the bottleneck. "Heavy foot traffic. Crowd bottled into the alcove." "Show me one heel pivot. Show me where a single pair of boots walked to this wall, met dead brick, and turned around." Miller swept his light across six feet of trampled limestone dust. Toe boxes pointed into the masonry; crisp heel crescents bit deep behind them, angled in full stride. Half of the prints marched from the mortar line toward the chalk stalls, while the remaining half marched into the bricks and vanished mid-step. Zero lateral scuffs bridged the two tracks. Miller lowered his torch an inch, his voice losing its brisk cadence. "There aren't any turnarounds. The trunk ruts stop cold against dry mortar." Quinn held the bagged brass compass two inches from the soot-stained masonry. Beneath the verdigris-crusted glass, the dark needle trembled, humming with a rapid, silent vibration that pulsed through the polythene into her thumb. She checked the moon-phase subdial on her worn watch—hours past the full moon—before rising to study the chalked lintel above the bricks and the silent archivist standing rigid beside the ticket booth. "Nobody came down those stairs, Miller, and nobody danced on this platform. Three hundred people packed up a market before dawn, dropped a bone fare at this arch, and walked past that mortar without turning around."
created_at"2026-11-11T16:38:50.751Z" 11/11/2026, 4:38:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1696
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1696
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"churned"
count1
2
word"blown wide"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"dance"
count1
6
word"measured"
count2
7
word"magnetic"
count2
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"churned"
2"blown wide"
3"silk"
4"scanned"
5"dance"
6"measured"
7"magnetic"
8"etched"
9"tracing"
10"stark"
11"trembled"
12"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1687
ratio0.001
matches
0"Way Out"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1184
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow1
Quinn17
London1
Camden1
High1
Street1
Victorian2
Sergeant1
Miller11
Tube1
Rotherhithe1
Morris1
Met1
Oxford1
Eva4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Victorian"
3"Sergeant"
4"Miller"
5"Morris"
6"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Oxford"
globalScore0.782
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1687
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean27.66
std18.56
cv0.671
sampleLengths
064
152
27
332
416
548
653
716
840
947
108
1112
1219
1343
148
1511
1642
1710
1873
199
2032
2113
2255
2333
2462
254
268
2743
2826
2927
3014
312
3220
3333
3435
3510
3612
3721
3816
3957
407
4124
4223
4329
4410
4568
4644
4712
4823
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs187
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences102
ratio0.088
matches
0"Grey dust coated the metal treads like untouched felt, broken by four sets of boot prints—two heavy patrol soles and two ribbed forensics overshoes."
1"Hundreds of overlapping prints churned the pale dust along a sixty-yard stretch of concourse—heavy combat treads, narrow Oxford brogues, delicate pointed heels, hobnailed boots."
2"No tunnel mud stained his cuffs; no limestone dust greyed his knees."
3"No stamped degrees or maker's marks ringed the bezel; angular protective sigils coiled across the tarnished face where cardinal letters belonged."
4"The metalwork defied factory tooling—seamless, devoid of solder joints or lathe striations."
5"Brogues, combat boots, pointed heels—hundreds of soles pressed shoulder-to-shoulder into a six-foot corridor terminating against red brickwork."
6"Beside the left rut, wedged beneath the chipped Victorian skirting, gleamed a splintered crescent of notched pale bone—a twin to the token from the dead man's overcoat."
7"Toe boxes pointed into the masonry; crisp heel crescents bit deep behind them, angled in full stride."
8"She checked the moon-phase subdial on her worn watch—hours past the full moon—before rising to study the chalked lintel above the bricks and the silent archivist standing rigid beside the ticket booth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1220
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"smooth, coin-sized token"
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.004918032786885246
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001639344262295082
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean16.54
std8.5
cv0.514
sampleLengths
012
123
210
31
418
511
69
724
88
97
1021
1111
1216
1317
1410
1521
164
177
1814
1928
2016
2140
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2315
2424
258
2612
2719
2822
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308
3111
3242
3310
3411
3522
3611
3712
3817
399
4017
4115
4213
4315
4416
4524
4633
4711
4822
4914
99.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6078431372549019
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners62
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Barely twenty-six and standing five-foot-four,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences74
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"She angled her torch across"
2"He wore a charcoal cashmere"
3"She laid her torch flat"
4"She checked the moon-phase subdial"
ratio0.068
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences74
matches
0"Rust flaked from the cast-iron"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"Morning sun warmed the pavements"
3"Quinn halted on the bottom"
4"She angled her torch across"
5"Nothing beyond those four trails"
6"Detective Sergeant Miller ducked beneath"
7"Sweat darkened his collar under"
8"Quinn stepped onto the abandoned"
9"Halogen tripods bleached the soot-streaked"
10"The air tasted wrong."
11"Miller gestured toward the centre"
12"Quinn’s brown eyes tracked across"
13"Hundreds of overlapping prints churned"
14"Miller flipped open his notepad,"
15"Quinn walked to the coping"
16"Miller frowned, leaning past the"
17"Quinn crouched beside the white"
18"A man in his late"
19"He wore a charcoal cashmere"
ratio0.649
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.6837%