Run: 2026-11-11-01M75QPWC5M2PXXSS7FFMK8CV1

Run Details

Duration:
2m 3s
Cost:
$0.069638
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled across the wet Soho pavement outside The Raven's Nest, fracturing under the tires of black cabs. Inside, brass sconces cast amber pools over framed maps of dissolved empires and monochrome photographs of streets that no longer existed. Rory pushed through the street door and propped her wet crash helmet on the brass footrail. Steam rose from the shoulders of her waterproof courier jacket, carrying the sharp ghosts of fried Sichuan peppercorns, ginger, and diesel exhaust from Gerrard Street. She peeled off her left leather glove with her teeth. Beneath the cuff of her thermal base layer, the pale crescent scar on her wrist caught the low light. "Yu-Fei kept you late." Silas stood behind the mahogany counter, six feet of quiet mass anchored on his good right leg. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he set a heavy tumbler onto a coaster. His hazel eyes tracked Rory's hands while she unfastened the chin-strap buckle—no fresh scrapes on the knuckles, steady pulse at her throat. He reached beneath the counter for the kettle, sparing his stiff left knee on the pivot, the close-cropped auburn of his beard streaked with the same iron grey as his hair. "Two corporate orders in Mayfair stiffed the afternoon rider, so I doubled up on the West End run." Rory unzipped her jacket to the sternum and hooked one boot over the rung of a corner stool, angled with a clean sightline to both the street entrance and the tall bookcase sealing off the rear wall. Straight black hair clung in damp ribbons along her jaw, ending at her collarbone. "Lapsang or the Islay?" "Lapsang. My fingers haven't thawed since Shaftesbury Avenue." Silas poured boiling water over dark leaves in a chipped porcelain pot. Before the lid settled, the street door swung open again, letting in a gust of October wind that rattled a 1920s street chart of Prague near the coat hooks. A woman stepped onto the coir mat and collapsed a long-handled black umbrella with a sharp click. She wore a tailored charcoal overcoat cut for the walk between Temple tube station and the Inns of Court, pearl studs catching at her earlobes, a calfskin satchel bulging with ribbon-tied legal bundles slung across her hip. She approached the bar, scanning the chalked gin list behind Silas's shoulder, then turned her head toward the warmth of the brass radiator at the corner. Her gaze snagged on Rory's profile. The leather strap of the satchel slipped two inches down her wool-clad shoulder. "Aurora?" The three syllables dropped onto the floorboards like cold silver. Rory's hand went still around the ceramic mug Silas had set before her. Across the wood, Silas paused mid-wipe on the drip tray, hazel eyes flicking once between the newcomer's starched silk collar and Rory's oil-speckled Cordura sleeves. Rory turned on the stool. Her bright blue eyes conducted an inventory in half a second—the manicured fingernails free of ink, the crisp creases at the elbows, the faint plum shadows earned from reading case law under halogen lamps. "Nia." Nia stepped past two empty stools, shoes clicking against the oak planks. Up close, she smelled of rainwater and expensive bergamot. Her gaze dropped from Rory's face to the mud-splattered courier trousers, then over to the battered full-face helmet resting by the footrail. "God, it is you. I walked past the window to get out of the squall and thought I was hallucinating." Silas set a chilled rocks glass on a napkin between them, resting his right palm on the bar edge so the silver signet faced outward. "What are you drinking?" "Hendrick's, tonic, slice of cucumber if you have it." Silas built the drink without haste, slid it toward Nia's gloved fingers, and pivoted down the length of the bar toward the tall bookcase, favoring his right side with each measured step until he stood out of earshot beneath a framed photograph of Checkpoint Charlie, tallying stock ledgers with a fountain pen. Nia pulled off her kidskin gloves and folded them beside her glass, remaining standing as if sitting meant committing to a jurisdiction she hadn't vetted. "Three years, Aurora. Nobody knew what county you were in, let alone what postcode." "Nobody calls me Aurora anymore. Just Rory." Nia wrapped her fingers around the sweating glass, condensation darkening the pale polish on her thumb. "Rory, then. Since when?" "Since the M4 eastbound." Nia pulled out the adjacent stool and lowered herself onto the leather seat, laying her calfskin satchel across her knees like a shield. She studied Rory's face under the unforgiving amber bulb—the leaner angle of her cheekbones, the absence of mascara, the stillness of someone who no longer filled gaps in conversation to make others comfortable. "You dropped off the register six weeks before third-year finals. Professor Vaughn read out the moot court pairings on a Tuesday morning and your name wasn't on the sheet. Your phone went straight to a disconnected tone." "I forfeited the seat. You took first in the cohort, I assume?" A tight crease formed between Nia's brows. She took a swallow of gin, setting the glass down off-center from the cardboard coaster. "Second. Owen Pritchard edged me out on the land law paper. Though everyone in the common room knew neither of us would have touched top spot if you'd sat the exam. You had the entire Law of Tort colour-coded by November." "Waste of highlighters." Nia's eyes dropped to the scuffed knuckles of Rory's left hand wrapped around the chipped tea mug, lingering on the white crescent scar at her wrist before climbing back to the reflective strips stitched across her damp shoulders. "What is all this? Fancy dress, or did your scooter break down outside chambers?" "I ride for a Cantonese kitchen five streets over. Four nights a week, six hours a shift. Tips clear faster than pupillage stipends." A short, brittle laugh escaped Nia's throat, dying when Rory's expression refused to thaw. "You're winding me up." "Ask the sixty-year-old chef who docks my pay if the prawn toast goes soggy." Nia stared at the helmet on the brass rail, her thumb rubbing the brass clasp of her satchel until the metal dulled. "I saw your father in April. Circuit dinner at the Marriott in Swansea. My pupil-master dragged the juniors along to shake hands with the Welsh bench." Rory lifted her mug and drank. The smoked tea burned clean down her throat. "How was Brendan's backhand? Still complaining about the magistrates in Newport?" "He looked older. Jennifer wasn't with him. When my pupil-master mentioned we'd been at Cardiff together, your father swirled his claret and told the entire table you were in Bloomsbury reading manuscripts for an academic press." "Publishing sounds respectable over roast lamb." "Do they even know you're hauling takeaway boxes through Soho?" "My mother has a forwarding box in Paddington. She sends Welsh cakes at Christmas; I send postcards without a return street." Nia leaned an elbow onto the mahogany, lowering her voice beneath the rumble of a passing delivery lorry rattling the front pane. "Why didn't you ring me? We shared a library carrel for thirty months. I slept on your sofa in Pontcanna when my boiler burst in second year. You vanished like you'd gone into witness protection." "Clean breaks don't work if you keep half the address book." "I wasn't Evan." The name sat on the damp wood between the gin and the tea. Down the bar, Silas turned a page of his ledger without looking up. Rory set her mug down; porcelain met mahogany without a sound. "No. You had dinner with us four nights before Eva put my suitcases in the boot of her Fiesta." Color rose along Nia's throat above the cream silk collar. She looked past Rory's shoulder toward a yellowed nautical chart of the Baltic Sea. "You burnt the risotto and we drank two bottles of Rioja. You wore a turtleneck indoors with the heating cranked to twenty-four. You laughed at every terrible impression he did of the Dean." "I was twenty-two and good at oral advocacy." Nia's fingers tightened on the satchel clasp until her knuckles blanched white. "I went round to Crwys Road ten days after you missed the contract seminar. You had my annotated copy of Anson, and finals were breathing down my neck." Rory watched her, bright blue eyes unblinking, spine straight against the curved wood of the barstool. "Did he give it back?" "He answered the door in paint-stained joggers. Told me you'd cracked under the workload, packed a rucksack while he was at rugby training, and gone to stay with an aunt in Galway to clear your head. He had a tub of polyfilla on the hall carpet and a scraper in his hand, smoothing over a hole the size of a dinner plate near the coat rack." Rory reached into her jacket pocket, pulled out a crumpled paper receipt from the Golden Empress, and smoothed its damp corners flat against her thigh. "That was a teacup. Bone china. My grandmother's. I ducked." Nia stared at the amber ring left by Rory's mug. Her posture sagged a fraction inside the structured wool coat, the courtroom poise fracturing around her mouth. "I saw the dust on his trainers. Your green mac was gone from the peg, and your boots were still sitting on the mat—the burgundy leather ones you wore to every moot. Nobody walks out in February in Wales without their boots unless they're running." "You got your textbook back, though." Nia flinched as if struck across the bridge of the nose. "He pulled it off the shelf in the front room. Your yellow sticky notes were still wedged between the chapters on misrepresentation. I stood on the pavement outside the launderette for ten minutes holding my phone with Eva's number on the screen." "She didn't get a call." "I had four exams in nineteen days and thirty thousand pounds of debt riding on a tenancy interview in London. I told myself if it was bad, Brendan Carter would have the South Wales Police kicking the door off its hinges by Friday." "Barristers hate messy disclosure, Nia. You know that by now." Nia lifted her glass; the ice cubes chimed against the crystal before she set it back down untouched. When she looked up, the neat divide between them stretched wider than the three hundred miles of motorway back to Cardiff. "I looked for your name on the Inn call lists every autumn. Inner Temple, Middle, Gray's, Lincoln's. Every November I scrolled the PDFs at my desk while everyone else went down to Fleet Street for champagne, telling myself you'd transferred to UCL or Bristol, that you'd walk into Court Four one Tuesday morning in a fresh wig and tear my skeleton argument to shreds." "Aurora Carter would have." "She was brilliant, Rory. Fierce. She wanted the silk gown before forty." "She wanted her father to look up from his brief at breakfast and couldn't tell the difference between devotion and a chokehold." Rory's thumb grazed the crescent scar on her left wrist, pressing once into the pale ridge of tissue before dropping her hand to her lap. "You think I don't miss her? Every time some drunk banker throws ten pence at my boots on Wardour Street because his dumplings are lukewarm, I remember the Latin maxims I taped to the bathroom mirror." Nia reached across the narrow gap of polished wood, her fingertips stopping an inch shy of Rory's frayed waterproof sleeve, hovering over the smell of rain and scorched wok oil. "Come by the chambers next week. Not for law—just lunch. Or let me get you out of courier work; our clerks hire paralegals off unfinished degrees all the time if a tenant vouches for—" "Stop." Nia drew her hand back, curling her fingers into her palm against her coat button. "I'm twenty-five, Nia. I pay my rent on time, nobody tracks my mileage, and when a door locks upstairs, I hold the only key. Don't offer me penance disguised as a reference letter." Rain lashed harder against the front glass, smearing the emerald reflection of the sign across the dark windowpane until the street outside dissolved into shifting green water. Nia looked down into the clear gin, her pearl earrings gleaming cold in the half-light. "I kept the sticky notes in the Anson. Never peeled them out. Your handwriting is still all over the margins on duress."
created_at"2026-11-11T16:40:27.282Z" 11/11/2026, 4:40:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2086
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2086
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"porcelain"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"silk"
count3
5
word"chilled"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"coded"
count1
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"porcelain"
2"scanning"
3"warmth"
4"silk"
5"chilled"
6"measured"
7"comfortable"
8"coded"
9"crystal"
10"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2081
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1128
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Sichuan1
Gerrard1
Street1
Rory19
October1
Prague1
Temple1
Inns1
Court1
Silas8
Cordura1
Nia18
Checkpoint1
Charlie1
Baltic1
Sea1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Nia"
4"Checkpoint"
5"Charlie"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Sichuan"
3"Gerrard"
4"Street"
5"Prague"
6"Golden"
7"Cardiff"
globalScore0.658
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if sitting meant committing to a jurisdiction she hadn't vetted"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2081
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean24.48
std18.85
cv0.77
sampleLengths
040
170
24
388
418
551
64
78
841
980
1019
111
1248
1339
141
1543
1620
1725
184
199
2052
2125
2214
237
2416
254
264
2756
2837
2912
3022
3141
323
3338
3414
3523
3614
374
3814
3922
4026
4114
4211
4336
446
4510
4621
4722
4835
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences111
ratio0.063
matches
0"His hazel eyes tracked Rory's hands while she unfastened the chin-strap buckle—no fresh scrapes on the knuckles, steady pulse at her throat."
1"Her bright blue eyes conducted an inventory in half a second—the manicured fingernails free of ink, the crisp creases at the elbows, the faint plum shadows earned from reading case law under halogen lamps."
2"She studied Rory's face under the unforgiving amber bulb—the leaner angle of her cheekbones, the absence of mascara, the stillness of someone who no longer filled gaps in conversation to make others comfortable."
3"\"My mother has a forwarding box in Paddington. She sends Welsh cakes at Christmas; I send postcards without a return street.\""
4"Rory set her mug down; porcelain met mahogany without a sound."
5"Nia lifted her glass; the ice cubes chimed against the crystal before she set it back down untouched."
6"\"Come by the chambers next week. Not for law—just lunch. Or let me get you out of courier work; our clerks hire paralegals off unfinished degrees all the time if a tenant vouches for—\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1142
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.0148861646234676
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean18.75
std12.85
cv0.686
sampleLengths
019
121
216
325
410
519
64
717
818
922
1031
1118
1237
1314
144
158
1612
1729
1817
1937
2026
216
2213
231
2410
2513
2625
275
2834
291
3012
319
3222
3320
3425
354
369
3752
3825
3914
407
4116
424
434
4423
4533
4637
4712
487
4915
68.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.43243243243243246
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences59
matches
0"She peeled off her left"
1"His hazel eyes tracked Rory's"
2"He reached beneath the counter"
3"She wore a tailored charcoal"
4"She approached the bar, scanning"
5"Her gaze snagged on Rory's"
6"Her bright blue eyes conducted"
7"Her gaze dropped from Rory's"
8"She studied Rory's face under"
9"She took a swallow of"
10"She looked past Rory's shoulder"
11"Her posture sagged a fraction"
ratio0.203
44.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences59
matches
0"Rory pushed through the street"
1"Steam rose from the shoulders"
2"She peeled off her left"
3"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
4"A silver signet ring glinted"
5"His hazel eyes tracked Rory's"
6"He reached beneath the counter"
7"Rory unzipped her jacket to"
8"Silas poured boiling water over"
9"A woman stepped onto the"
10"She wore a tailored charcoal"
11"She approached the bar, scanning"
12"Her gaze snagged on Rory's"
13"The leather strap of the"
14"The three syllables dropped onto"
15"Rory's hand went still around"
16"Rory turned on the stool."
17"Her bright blue eyes conducted"
18"Nia stepped past two empty"
19"Her gaze dropped from Rory's"
ratio0.831
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Before the lid settled, the"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Before the lid settled, the street door swung open again, letting in a gust of October wind that rattled a 1920s street chart of Prague near the coat hooks."
1"Nia pulled off her kidskin gloves and folded them beside her glass, remaining standing as if sitting meant committing to a jurisdiction she hadn't vetted."
2"Nia reached across the narrow gap of polished wood, her fingertips stopping an inch shy of Rory's frayed waterproof sleeve, hovering over the smell of rain and …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.1468%