Run: 2026-11-11-01M75QSRVESJYKFYVERV9WM0NP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 24s
Cost:
$0.046936
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil parted with the hiss of tearing silk. Rory stepped across the threshold, boots sinking ankle-deep into dark, yielding loam. Behind her, the rift snapped shut, trading London’s grey drizzle for a wall of thick, spiced heat. Against her collarbone, the Heartstone pulsed on its silver chain, the thumbnail-sized crimson gem radiating a fierce warmth triggered by the tear between realms. Rory drew a breath and coughed. Crushed cloves, roasted figs, and fermented honey coated the back of her throat. Above them stretched an immense vault of warm amber, unbroken by clouds or stars. No sun anchored the heavens; the atmosphere itself glowed like the inside of a lantern, swirling with lazy currents of ochre and molten gold. "The air tastes like mulled wine." Nyx spilled through the fading shimmer at Rory's back, a six-foot silhouette of living shadow solidifying against the golden gloom. Because light fell from every inch of the amber sky at once, the trees and stones cast no shadows of their own. Nyx stood out like a tear in canvas, violet eyes burning inside a face sculpted from midnight. "Breathe shallow, Rory. Even the wind in Dymas fattens the soul for the table." Nyx’s voice brushed past her ear, dry as autumn wind funneling through cracked stone. Isolde stepped clear of the boundary last. Waist-length silver hair cascaded down her back, catching the amber radiance until she shone like a pillar of tarnished gilt. Her pale lavender eyes swept the horizon without blinking. She walked past Rory over a carpet of saffron-colored moss; where Rory’s heavy soles gouged dark crescents into the turf, the moss beneath Isolde’s heels remained upright and untouched. "A garden without winter knows no rest, yet everything rooted here dreams of teeth." Rory brushed damp strands of black hair from her cheek and rested her palm on the hilt at her belt. Even through the leather scabbard, the moonsilver of the Fae blade bit into her fingers with unyielding frost. She welcomed the sting. The ambient heat of Prince Belphegor’s realm seeped through her jacket, coaxing her muscles to slacken. "Keep moving. Standing near the rift makes a target of us." They descended a gentle slope into an ancient orchard that defied earthly geometry. Titanic trees twisted skyward, their trunks braided from smooth, copper-hued wood that pulsed with a visible, sluggish rhythm. Rory stepped close to the nearest bole. Beneath a translucent skin of bark, thick veins of ruby sap pumped upward toward the canopy. High overhead, broad leaves made of thin, brittle amber chimed together in the breeze, filling the glade with the constant ring of crystal goblets touched in a toast. From the lower boughs hung clusters of bloated, pearlescent gourds. As Rory passed beneath one, its pale rind expanded, held for three heartbeats, and contracted with a wet sigh, venting a plume of vanilla-scented spore-mist. Rory jerked back, fingers tightening on her icy hilt, her left wrist flashing the small crescent scar above her cuff. "The fruit is breathing." Nyx drifted ahead, their solid legs dissolving into ribbons of black smoke that coiled around a gnarled root before reforming on the far side. "Grafted from memory and craving. Touch the skin, and it ripens to match whatever flavor haunts your childhood." "And if you eat it?" Isolde paused beside a thicket of bone-white briars heavy with berries the size of plums. Each berry held a tiny, glowing ember at its center, illuminating veins as intricate as a human eye. "One bite buys a second. A second buys an eternity of empty bowls." Rory tore her bright blue gaze away from the glowing brambles. Despite having eaten an hour before entering Richmond Park, a hollow ache knotted beneath her ribs. Her mouth watered, sharp and involuntary. She swallowed hard and focused on the chill of the moonsilver dagger against her hip, using the cold to anchor her senses. With each hundred yards they put between themselves and the invisible tear in the Veil, the crimson pendant at her throat cooled, settling into a steady, faint inner glow. The orchard gave way to a winding ravine paved with smooth, rose-veined marble. Centuries of untamed growth had cracked the masonry. Vines thick as pythons strangled carved balustrades, bursting with trumpet-shaped blossoms of deep indigo. Clear liquid welled up from fissures in the stone path, braiding into warm rills that trickled beside their boots. Rory crouched at the edge of a shallow basin where the runoff pooled. Tiny luminescent motes drifted upward from the liquid’s surface like sparks rising from a forge. The aroma hit her nose—butter,焦-caramelized pears, dark wine aged in charred oak. Beside the pool, clusters of translucent mushrooms grew in concentric rings, their gills humming a low, resonant chord that vibrated through the soles of her boots. "Listen to the stone." Nyx tilted their shadowy head toward the ravine walls. Rory stilled. Beneath the glass-chime of the canopy and the drone of the fungi, a deeper sound pulsed through the marble. A rhythmic grinding, vast and subterranean, echoed up through the bedrock like distant millstones turning in the dark. "Is that machinery?" "Appetite has its own engines. The soil below us digests what the banquets discard." Nyx extended a shadowy hand toward one of the indigo trumpet-blossoms draping a shattered pillar. Before the dark fingers made contact, the velvet petals trembled, curled inward, and snapped shut with the wet crunch of breaking cartilage. Clear, sweet-smelling syrup wept from the sealed seam, dripping onto the marble with a soft hiss that etched tiny pits into the rose-veined stone. Rory rose from her crouch, wiping dampness from her palms onto her jeans. Acid disguised as sugar. The whole valley operated on a single, seductive trap. "Charming flora. Keep your hands inside your pockets." "Pockets hold little when the eyes themselves feast." Isolde glided down a wide flight of terraced steps where the ravine opened onto a sunken amphitheater of staggering scale. Rory followed, breath catching in her chest despite her wariness. Tier upon tier of overgrown vineyards dropped away into a sea of golden mist. Instead of wooden stakes, the ancient vines clung to trellises carved from gleaming ivory, spiraling thirty feet into the warm amber air. Colossal statues flanked the terraces—robed figures sculpted from dark basalt, seated on stone couches with bowls raised to faces worn completely smooth, devoid of eyes or noses, leaving nothing behind except wide, cavernous mouths carved open in perpetual expectation. Streams of foaming golden nectar poured from aqueducts high on the cliffs, cascading directly through the statues' open jaws to feed the irrigation channels below. Flocks of tiny, six-winged creatures no larger than wrens darted through the mist above the trellises. Their bodies gleamed like spun sugar, scattering sparkling dust across the heavy purple grapes as they wheeled in synchronized ribbons. Rory stepped onto the first wide terrace. Here, a banquet table hewn from a single slab of green jade stretched fifty paces between the ivory trellises. Moss thick as fleece blanketed half its length, dotted with saffron blossoms and fossilized platters of tarnished silver. Goblets fused to the jade by centuries of crystallized wine caught the ambient amber glow, throwing prisms of orange and scarlet across Rory’s boots. Nyx slipped into the shade beneath an ivory arch, their form flickering between sharp edges and trailing wisps of dark vapor as they scanned the lower tiers. "Old ground. The chefs abandoned these terraces centuries ago when the soil grew too wild to harvest." Rory walked the length of the jade table, trailing the cold pommel of her Fae blade over a silver platter encrusted with sugar-crystals as hard as quartz. A low breeze rolled up from the mist-choked valley floor, warm against her face, carrying the distant, echoing clang of bronze bells and the rich scent of roasting marrow. "Abandoned doesn't mean empty. Look at the dust on the steps." She pointed toward the wide marble stair descending into the next tier of vineyards. Across the golden pollen blanketing the stone, something heavy had dragged a furrow three feet wide, crushing the glowing fungi into pale luminescence that bled fresh light across the ancient risers.
created_at"2026-11-11T16:42:01.979Z" 11/11/2026, 4:42:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"marble"
count4
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"gleaming"
count1
16
word"cascading"
count1
17
word"synchronized"
count1
18
word"crystallized"
count1
19
word"scanned"
count1
20
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"gloom"
4"crystal"
5"intricate"
6"chill"
7"marble"
8"vibrated"
9"rhythmic"
10"echoed"
11"shattered"
12"velvet"
13"trembled"
14"etched"
15"gleaming"
16"cascading"
17"synchronized"
18"crystallized"
19"scanned"
20"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
95.43% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0.012
matches
0"The aroma hit her nose—butter,焦-caramelized pears, dark wine aged in charred oak."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1364
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1205
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil2
London1
Heartstone1
Rory17
Isolde4
Fae2
Prince1
Belphegor1
Richmond1
Park1
Flocks1
Nyx7
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Prince"
3"Belphegor"
4"Nyx"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Flocks"
globalScore0.795
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1364
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean34.1
std26.1
cv0.765
sampleLengths
066
157
26
359
414
514
665
714
858
911
1082
1135
1220
134
1424
1518
165
1733
1813
1984
2054
2166
224
239
2439
253
2614
2761
2826
298
308
3130
32100
3336
3468
3527
3617
3756
3811
3945
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
9.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences86
ratio0.047
matches
0"No sun anchored the heavens; the atmosphere itself glowed like the inside of a lantern, swirling with lazy currents of ochre and molten gold."
1"She walked past Rory over a carpet of saffron-colored moss; where Rory’s heavy soles gouged dark crescents into the turf, the moss beneath Isolde’s heels remained upright and untouched."
2"The aroma hit her nose—butter,焦-caramelized pears, dark wine aged in charred oak."
3"Colossal statues flanked the terraces—robed figures sculpted from dark basalt, seated on stone couches with bowls raised to faces worn completely smooth, devoid of eyes or noses, leaving nothing behind except wide, cavernous mouths carved open in perpetual expectation."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1015
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"smooth, copper-hued wood"
1"steady, faint inner glow."
2"smooth, rose-veined marble."
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.016748768472906402
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002955665024630542
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean15.86
std7.43
cv0.468
sampleLengths
013
112
217
324
46
513
614
724
86
920
1022
1117
1214
1314
147
1520
169
1729
1814
1920
2018
214
2216
2311
2413
2518
267
2716
2828
2910
3025
3120
324
3324
3418
355
3615
3718
3813
3911
4016
416
4222
4329
4413
458
4614
4719
4813
4915
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6162790697674418
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners53
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Instead of wooden stakes, the"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her pale lavender eyes swept"
1"She walked past Rory over"
2"She welcomed the sting."
3"They descended a gentle slope"
4"Her mouth watered, sharp and"
5"She swallowed hard and focused"
6"Their bodies gleamed like spun"
7"She pointed toward the wide"
ratio0.114
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences70
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"Rory stepped across the threshold,"
2"Rory drew a breath and"
3"Nyx spilled through the fading"
4"Nyx stood out like a"
5"Nyx’s voice brushed past her"
6"Isolde stepped clear of the"
7"Waist-length silver hair cascaded down"
8"Her pale lavender eyes swept"
9"She walked past Rory over"
10"Rory brushed damp strands of"
11"She welcomed the sting."
12"The ambient heat of Prince"
13"They descended a gentle slope"
14"Rory stepped close to the"
15"Rory jerked back, fingers tightening"
16"Nyx drifted ahead, their solid"
17"Isolde paused beside a thicket"
18"Each berry held a tiny,"
19"Rory tore her bright blue"
ratio0.671
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"Because light fell from every"
1"Even through the leather scabbard,"
2"Before the dark fingers made"
ratio0.043
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"They descended a gentle slope into an ancient orchard that defied earthly geometry."
1"Nyx drifted ahead, their solid legs dissolving into ribbons of black smoke that coiled around a gnarled root before reforming on the far side."
2"Clear liquid welled up from fissures in the stone path, braiding into warm rills that trickled beside their boots."
3"Beside the pool, clusters of translucent mushrooms grew in concentric rings, their gills humming a low, resonant chord that vibrated through the soles of her bo…"
4"Clear, sweet-smelling syrup wept from the sealed seam, dripping onto the marble with a soft hiss that etched tiny pits into the rose-veined stone."
5"Nyx slipped into the shade beneath an ivory arch, their form flickering between sharp edges and trailing wisps of dark vapor as they scanned the lower tiers."
6"A low breeze rolled up from the mist-choked valley floor, warm against her face, carrying the distant, echoing clang of bronze bells and the rich scent of roast…"
7"Across the golden pollen blanketing the stone, something heavy had dragged a furrow three feet wide, crushing the glowing fungi into pale luminescence that bled…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.6685%