Run: 2026-11-11-01M75QT6ZAQ1PD0AQH5ACXQXM8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 44s
Cost:
$0.055038
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third brass deadbolt slid clear of its housing, and Aurora pulled the scarred timber door inward. Lucien Moreau stood beneath the stairwell's buzzing fluorescent tube. Rain darkened the shoulders of his tailored charcoal coat, turning the fine wool slate-black. One amber eye and one pitch-black eye fixed on her face, unblinking beneath slicked-back platinum hair that held its shape despite the East End downpour. Aurora planted her palm flat against the wood and shoved the door toward his chest. The tip of his ivory-handled cane wedged into the gap an inch above her trainer, halting the heavy oak with a dull thud. "That is a poor greeting after nine weeks, chérie." Aurora leaned her weight into the panel, the small crescent scar on her left wrist whitening with the strain of her grip. "Take your foot out of Eva's doorframe before I test how demon bone holds up against cast-iron hinges." Lucien shifted his stance, closing the distance until the damp scent of London rain and crushed bergamot cut through the rising aromas of toasted cumin and fenugreek from the curry house downstairs. "Pull the cane back and we can test it together, though the three tracking hounds circling Spitalfields Market will reach the bottom of these stairs before you throw the first bolt." Aurora froze, her bright blue eyes dropping from his face to the dark stairwell behind him, then catching on the three-inch slice ruining the left rib of his coat. Beneath the parted wool, dark crimson stained the pale linen of his shirt. "You brought hounds to Brick Lane?" "They picked up the trail on Commercial Street." "Why bring them here instead of your fortified townhouse in Mayfair?" Lucien's fingers tightened over the smooth ivory handle of his cane, a muscle flexing along his jaw. "Because the scent they are hunting belongs to two people, Rory, and Yu-Fei told me twenty minutes ago that you finished your deliveries for the Golden Empress and headed east instead of going home to Silas's bar." She stared at him for two heartbeats, reading the rigid line of his shoulders, before stepping back from the threshold. Lucien crossed into the cramped flat without waiting for a second invitation. He pivoted, leaned his cane against a teetering tower of leather-bound encyclopaedias, and threw all three deadbolts himself. As the final lock clicked home, faint silver runes etched into the doorframe flared once and died, sealing Eva's wards. Ptolemy dropped from the top of the refrigerator, landing with a soft thump between stacks of translated Aramaic scrolls. The striped tabby trotted straight across the scuffed floorboards and wound himself around Lucien's damp trouser legs, purring like a faulty radiator. Aurora folded her arms over her faded cotton jumper, watching the cat rub his cheek against five-hundred-pound Italian leather. "Traitor." Lucien crouched, scratching behind Ptolemy's notched ear with long, steady fingers. The movement pulled his slit coat tighter across his torso, and a fresh bead of maroon welled against his shirt. Straightening to his full height, he surveyed the cramped room. Every horizontal inch—the saggy sofa, the windowsill rattling with autumn wind, the crooked dining table—disappeared beneath mountains of yellowed parchment, uncapped inkwells, and Eva's frantic research notes. "Eva is still in Prague, then." "Until Tuesday." "And she leaves you playing caretaker." "Ptolemy prefers me to kennels, and the curry house sends up leftover saag paneer at midnight." Aurora backed toward the narrow kitchenette, putting a stack of taxidermy manuals between them. Straight black hair brushed her shoulders as she tilted her chin up, refusing to yield an inch of territory despite the walls pressing them within arm's reach. "Talk, Luc. Whose hounds, and what scent?" Lucien unbuttoned his ruined coat. He slid it off his shoulders with deliberate precision, wincing once when the wet lining tugged at the gash over his ribs. Draping the wool over the back of a wooden chair buried in loose-leaf maps, he rolled his left shirtsleeve to the elbow. "Malkor's pack out of Avaros. Someone in Whitechapel bought the remnant ash from the Rotherhithe warehouse." The air in the tiny room thinned. Rotherhithe meant fog off the Thames, shattered glass, and the cramped back room of Lucien's safe house afterward—where shaking hands had turned into his mouth against her throat, his fingers tangled in her hair, her pulse hammering against his palm until dawn crept over the river. It meant waking up on his Chesterfield sofa to cold tea, an empty flat, and a motorbike courier handing her a thick manila envelope stuffed with fifties outside Silas's pub six hours later. No note. Disconnected phone numbers. Nine weeks of silence. Aurora turned toward the chipped enamel sink and twisted the cold tap. Water drummed against stacked mugs. "Rotherhithe burned to the waterline. There was nothing left to buy." "Blood soaked into the wharf timbers before the fire caught. Mine and yours, mixed." Aurora shut the tap off. Her knuckles popped against the brass faucet before she turned back around, leaning her hips against the counter. "Then go bleed in the Thames and throw them off. Eva's wards hold until sunrise, which means you have six hours of safety you didn't earn." Lucien's mismatched eyes darkened, the amber iris catching the warm glow of Eva's desk lamp while the black one swallowed the light whole. He stepped around a precarious pile of rolled star charts, shrinking the narrow strip of clear floor between them. "If you stepped out to grab milk before morning, they would have torn your throat out on the pavement before you reached Hanbury Street. Did you expect me to send a text message?" "A courier with cash worked well enough last time." The strike landed clean. Lucien stopped two feet away, close enough that heat radiated off his damp shirt, mingling with the sharp tang of iron from his side. "That money was your cut of the ledger recovery." "Keep telling yourself that in four languages and see if it starts sounding honest." "What did you want from me that morning, Aurora? Coffee and promises?" "Basic respect would have covered it." She pushed off the counter, closing the remaining gap rather than letting him tower over her. At five-foot-six, she had to tip her head back, blue eyes blazing cold and clear. "I fled Cardiff to get away from a man who decided what I was allowed to think, feel, and handle on my own. Evan used his fists and his temper; you used a disappearing act and an envelope of bank notes. Do not stand on my friend's rug acting like my saviour when you treated me like an inconvenience you paid off." Lucien's hand came up, pausing an inch from the edge of the counter beside her hip, fingers curling inward until the tendons stood out along the back of his wrist. "You think I left that flat because you were an inconvenience?" "You vanished, Luc. Nine weeks without a word while we work the same streets." "I left because for three hours in Rotherhithe I stopped calculating exits and started calculating what I would burn down in London if anyone touched you." His voice dropped, stripping away the smooth Marseilles polish until raw gravel scraped beneath the vowels. "In my business, leverage gets people carved into pieces and mailed back in hatboxes. My father's kin in Avaros look for soft spots the way sharks look for thrashing water. Walking away from that sofa was the cleanest favour I ever did you." Aurora's gaze dropped to the crimson patch spreading across his white linen ribs, now wide as an open palm. Demon heritage knitted shallow cuts fast; if he was bleeding through tailored cotton twenty minutes after taking the hit, the blade or claw had carried cold iron or grave-salt. Without looking at his face, she reached past his elbow, snatched a clean dish towel off the oven rail, and grabbed a brown glass bottle of witch-hazel from Eva's cluttered spice rack. "Sit on the arm of the sofa. Do not crush the Babylonian tablets." "It will clot on its own." "It smells like grave-salt and rust, and you are dripping on Eva's Persian runner. Sit, or I open those three bolts and whistle for the dogs." Lucien studied her face—the set of her mouth, the pulse ticking at the hollow of her collarbone—before backing two steps and perching on the leather sofa arm, nudging a stack of Latin lexicons aside with his thigh. Ptolemy jumped up beside him, sniffing at his elbow until Aurora shooed the cat toward the bedroom alcove. She stepped between Lucien's knees because the cramped layout offered nowhere else to stand, towers of brittle folio paper boxing her calves on both sides. Setting the witch-hazel on top of a dictionary, she reached for the bottom buttons of his bloodied shirt. Her fingertips brushed warm skin beneath the wet linen, and Lucien sucked in a sharp breath through his teeth—nowhere near the cut. Aurora kept her eyes trained on the tiny mother-of-pearl buttons, working them free of their stitched holes with steady thumbs, though the crescent scar on her wrist brushed against the flat plane of his stomach with each movement. "Claw or knife?" "Broker's stiletto coated in cemetery lime. He tried to buy your address off me in an alley behind Whitechapel Station before the hounds caught up." Aurora paused on the fourth button, fabric parted over pale, lean muscle and the jagged, blackened furrow scoring his lower ribs. Slowly, she lifted her eyes to meet his mismatched stare. "And where is the broker now?" "Floating under a barge in Shadwell Basin." His right hand rose, clean fingers wrapping around her left wrist—not forcing her away, thumb settling straight over the pale crescent of her childhood scar, his skin burning hot against her pulse. "He knew about Silas's bar, Rory. Which means someone inside our circle sold the Rotherhithe ledger." Aurora did not pull her wrist free. Beneath her right palm, his ribs rose and fell in short, shallow beats, close enough that a half-inch lean forward would press her mouth against the hollow of his throat. Uncapped witch-hazel stung the air between them, sharp over ginger and rain. "Then stop bleeding on my hands so you can tell me whose door we are kicking in at sunrise." Lucien's thumb stroked once across the raised line of her scar, his dark eye holding hers at point-blank range while rain lashed harder against the Brick Lane glass. "Letting you anywhere near this ledger puts a target between your shoulder blades." "The target is already drawn, Frenchman. Hand me the towel."
created_at"2026-11-11T16:42:16.44Z" 11/11/2026, 4:42:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1779
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1779
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"calculating"
count2
6
word"grave"
count2
7
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"etched"
2"shattered"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"calculating"
6"grave"
7"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1772
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1164
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Moreau1
East1
End1
London1
Eva4
Aramaic1
Lucien15
Italian1
Ptolemy3
Thames1
Chesterfield1
Silas1
Marseilles1
Latin1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Aramaic"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Silas"
places
0"East"
1"End"
2"London"
3"Thames"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
globalScore0.856
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1772
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean24.61
std17.54
cv0.712
sampleLengths
017
148
215
323
49
522
618
732
831
942
106
118
1211
1317
1437
1520
1650
1741
1819
191
2068
216
222
236
2416
2541
267
2749
2816
2995
3017
3111
3214
3323
3426
3542
3633
379
3828
399
4014
4112
426
4331
4462
4530
4611
4714
4826
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was bleeding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences100
ratio0.07
matches
0"Every horizontal inch—the saggy sofa, the windowsill rattling with autumn wind, the crooked dining table—disappeared beneath mountains of yellowed parchment, uncapped inkwells, and Eva's frantic research notes."
1"Rotherhithe meant fog off the Thames, shattered glass, and the cramped back room of Lucien's safe house afterward—where shaking hands had turned into his mouth against her throat, his fingers tangled in her hair, her pulse hammering against his palm until dawn crept over the river."
2"\"I fled Cardiff to get away from a man who decided what I was allowed to think, feel, and handle on my own. Evan used his fists and his temper; you used a disappearing act and an envelope of bank notes. Do not stand on my friend's rug acting like my saviour when you treated me like an inconvenience you paid off.\""
3"Demon heritage knitted shallow cuts fast; if he was bleeding through tailored cotton twenty minutes after taking the hit, the blade or claw had carried cold iron or grave-salt."
4"Lucien studied her face—the set of her mouth, the pulse ticking at the hollow of her collarbone—before backing two steps and perching on the leather sofa arm, nudging a stack of Latin lexicons aside with his thigh."
5"Her fingertips brushed warm skin beneath the wet linen, and Lucien sucked in a sharp breath through his teeth—nowhere near the cut."
6"His right hand rose, clean fingers wrapping around her left wrist—not forcing her away, thumb settling straight over the pale crescent of her childhood scar, his skin burning hot against her pulse."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1190
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.023529411764705882
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008403361344537816
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean17.72
std10.79
cv0.609
sampleLengths
017
19
214
325
415
523
69
722
818
932
1031
1129
1213
136
148
1511
1617
1737
1820
1912
2018
2120
2219
2322
2419
251
2611
2720
2810
2927
306
312
326
3316
3414
3527
367
375
3822
3922
4016
417
4246
4333
442
453
464
4712
485
4911
89.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.55
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners55
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Slowly, she lifted her eyes"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences60
matches
0"She stared at him for"
1"He pivoted, leaned his cane"
2"He slid it off his"
3"It meant waking up on"
4"Her knuckles popped against the"
5"He stepped around a precarious"
6"She pushed off the counter,"
7"His voice dropped, stripping away"
8"She stepped between Lucien's knees"
9"Her fingertips brushed warm skin"
10"His right hand rose, clean"
ratio0.183
76.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences60
matches
0"The third brass deadbolt slid"
1"Lucien Moreau stood beneath the"
2"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
3"Aurora planted her palm flat"
4"The tip of his ivory-handled"
5"Aurora leaned her weight into"
6"Lucien shifted his stance, closing"
7"Aurora froze, her bright blue"
8"Lucien's fingers tightened over the"
9"She stared at him for"
10"Lucien crossed into the cramped"
11"He pivoted, leaned his cane"
12"Ptolemy dropped from the top"
13"The striped tabby trotted straight"
14"Aurora folded her arms over"
15"Lucien crouched, scratching behind Ptolemy's"
16"The movement pulled his slit"
17"Every horizontal inch—the saggy sofa,"
18"Aurora backed toward the narrow"
19"Lucien unbuttoned his ruined coat."
ratio0.767
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"One amber eye and one pitch-black eye fixed on her face, unblinking beneath slicked-back platinum hair that held its shape despite the East End downpour."
1"Rotherhithe meant fog off the Thames, shattered glass, and the cramped back room of Lucien's safe house afterward—where shaking hands had turned into his mouth …"
2"His right hand rose, clean fingers wrapping around her left wrist—not forcing her away, thumb settling straight over the pale crescent of her childhood scar, hi…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.0306%