Run: 2026-11-11-01M75RVASJD5A0C9V00754AVNY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 49s
Cost:
$0.055218
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled through the rain-streaked glass of The Raven's Nest, tinting the puddle beneath Rory’s boots the colour of bruised mint. She peeled off her cycling gloves, finger by stiff finger, and slapped them onto the mahogany bar. The synthetic leather exhaled the ghosts of thirty Soho deliveries: charred ginger, soy glaze, exhaust fumes, November drizzle. "Yu-Fei kept you past ten." Silas stood behind the brass taps, a linen cloth twisted inside a crystal tumbler. He shifted his weight onto his right hip to spare his ruined left knee. Overhead bulbs picked out the iron-grey streaks in his auburn hair and matching beard, though his hazel eyes remained shadowed beneath his brow. The silver signet ring on his right hand chimed against the rim of the glass. "A banquet order in Fitzrovia. Fourth floor, broken lift, tip in loose copper." Rory hooked her thumb under the strap of her helmet and unbuckled the clasp. A pale, crescent-shaped scar notched the underside of her left wrist, stark against a smear of bicycle chain grease. She reached for the soda water waiting on a cardboard mat. "People with town houses hoard their pennies. Drink up. The radiator in the hall died at six, so your flat will feel like the Baltic." "I grew up in Wales, Si. Damp plaster is a birthright." The street door swung open, admitting a gust of wind that rattled the framed monochrome photographs lining the entrance. Three men shook out black umbrellas on the coir matting. Wool overcoats, bespoke pinstripes, leather briefcases fat with bound briefs. Temple refugees straying west into Soho in search of dark wood and cheap whiskey. Two of them claimed a booth beneath a yellowed nautical chart of the Baltic Sea, near the towering oak bookshelf that concealed the bar's private parlour. The third man approached the counter, sliding a leather wallet from his breast pocket. Rory kept her gaze on the bubbles clinging to the inside of her glass. Men in charcoal worsted belonged to another lifetime, a dead geography two hundred miles west along the M4. "Three double Macallans, neat. Keep the tab open on this card, would you?" Rory’s fingers tightened around her tumbler. Ice cracked. The voice possessed the rounded vowels of the Vale of Glamorgan, sanded smooth by years of elocution lessons and pupil-room politics. She turned her head an inch. Straight black hair swung across her jaw, parting to reveal the sharp angle of her cheekbone. Thomas Vaughan stood two stools away. At twenty-six, he looked forty. Silver cufflinks winked at his wrists; the knot of his burgundy silk tie sat snug against his Adam's apple. When he glanced down the counter, expecting another bored Soho regular, he met Rory's bright blue eyes. The credit card slipped from his fingers and skittered across the varnished mahogany. "Aurora?" Nobody in London knew that name. Rory’s pulse gave one heavy thud against her ribs, then settled into ice. Silas paused mid-polish. His gaze flicked from Thomas’s blanched face to Rory’s stillness. Without a word, Silas scooped up the fallen plastic, turned to the back-bar optics, and dragged his stiff left leg toward the far end of the counter to measure out the scotch. Thomas stared at the waterproof jacket bunched around Rory’s shoulders, the neon reflective strips peeling at the seams, the battered helmet occupying the stool between them. His mouth opened, closed, and tried the shape of her name a second time, softer, as if testing counterfeit coin. "It's Rory." She took a sip of flat soda water and set the glass back inside its wet ring. "God in heaven. Three years." Thomas lifted her helmet by its chin strap, placed it on the floorboards, and lowered himself onto the vacated stool. Cologne drifted off his coat—bergamot and cedar, expensive armour. He searched her face with the forensic intensity that had won him the Lord Justice Watkins Mooting Shield in their second year at Cardiff. "You vanished. Easter term, six weeks before finals. One Monday your seat in Tort Law was empty, and by Friday your flatmate had packed your books into banana boxes." "I had a train to catch." "Without your degree? Without telling a soul?" Thomas leaned an elbow on the wood, angling his body to shut out the rest of the room. Behind him, his colleagues laughed at something on a phone screen beneath a photograph of post-war Berlin. "Your father came down to the law faculty that May. I passed him on the steps of the library. Brendan Carter, sharpest silk on the Wales and Chester Circuit, looking ten years older in three weeks. He asked me where you went." "And what did you tell my father, Tom?" "That I hadn't spoken to you since the semi-finals in February." Silence stretched between them, punctuated by the hiss of rain on the pavement outside and the clink of Silas setting three heavy tumblers onto a brass tray. Silas shot Rory a flat, questioning look. Rory tapped two fingers once against the bar top—her signal to stand down. Silas lifted the tray and limped across the worn floorboards toward the booth by the bookcase. Thomas watched the older man leave, taking in the scarred furniture, the crooked maps of forgotten borders, the green neon washing Rory’s skin in ghost light. His eyes dropped to her hands. Short nails, raw knuckles chapped by wind, a nick across her thumb from a jagged foil takeaway tray. "What is this place? What are you doing in biker gear on a Tuesday night?" "Earning rent. Fried dumplings and crispy duck from Wardour Street to Mayfair." A muscle feathered in Thomas’s jaw. Disbelief warred with a strange, fastidious revulsion—the reaction of a man watching a thoroughbred hitched to a coal cart. "You had a seventy-eight average in Contract. Professor Davies called your essay on promissory estoppel the cleanest piece of undergraduate reasoning he'd read in a decade. Gray's Inn had a scholarship waiting with your initials pencilled onto the ledger." "Pencils rub out." "Don't do that." Sharpness cut through his courtroom polish. Thomas gripped the edge of the counter until his knuckles whitened. "Don't play the cynic with me. We spent two hundred hours across a library table dissecting House of Lords judgments until the security guards kicked us into Cathays Park. I knew your mind, Aurora. You wanted the Bar." "My father wanted the Bar. My mother wanted quiet Sunday roasts where nobody threw a decanter. You wanted a mooting partner who could write the respondent's skeleton argument while you charmed the bench." Rory rotated her tumbler a quarter-turn. Her tone stayed level, stripped of heat, cold as river slate. "And what did I want? By that last winter, I wanted to walk down Queen Street without checking shop windows to see who followed six paces behind me." Color drained from Thomas’s cheekbones, leaving faint blotches near his collar. He looked down at his immaculate cuffs. "Evan." "Give the pupil barrister a silk gown." "I didn't know how bad things were." Rory tilted her head, studying the neat part in his hair, the tiny razor nick beneath his jaw, the posture trained to project candour to twelve strangers in a jury box. "January nineteenth. The rehearsal round in Law Building Three." Thomas froze. Across the room, Silas returned to the bar, stepping behind the partition near the sink, out of sight yet close enough to hear glass break. "I wore a turtleneck sweater under my blazer in an overheated room. When I reached across the lectern for the bundle of authorities, the sleeve rode up." Rory lifted her left arm onto the mahogany and pulled back her waterproof cuff, exposing the pale crescent scar alongside three inches of unblemished skin where purple thumbprints had once bloomed. "You looked right at my wrist, Tom. Then you looked at your watch, packed your laptop, and emailed the clerk the next morning to request a new partner for the spring rounds because my 'personal commitments' created scheduling conflicts." "He waited outside the union building every night in that silver Golf." Thomas’s voice dropped to a scrape. He pressed his thumb and forefinger against the bridge of his nose, shielding his eyes from the amber bar lights. "He cornered me in the car park after Christmas. Told me you were fragile, taking pills to sleep, failing your modules, and that pushing you through competition prep would put you in hospital. I was twenty-one. I thought—" "You thought trouble smears off on anyone standing close to the dock. Smart career move. Look at the pinstripes." "I got tenancy at Fountain Court in October." He dropped his hand. No pride lived in the statement; the words landed on the wood between them like lead weights. "Commercial litigation. Shipping disputes and Cayman trusts. Twelve hours a day reading disclosure documents in a windowless room off the Strand, earning enough to buy coats I hate, drinking scotch with men I wouldn't trust to hold my keys." He looked at her then—past the cheap nylon jacket and the chain oil, straight into the steady, unblinking blue eyes that held zero pity for him and zero nostalgia for the girl buried back in Cardiff. "Every October, when the new pupils arrive from the Welsh universities, I scan the list for Carter. Four autumns in a row. I told myself you deferred, took a year abroad, switched to solicitors' practice in Bristol. Anything except—" He gestured at the rain-darkened window, the green neon reflection trembling across Rory's shoulder, the bicycle helmet resting in a puddle of dirty rainwater by her ankles. "Except living." Rory drained the melting ice at the bottom of her glass, letting the cold burn her throat. "You look at me and see a wreck, Tom. I look at that coat and see a prison sentence with good tailoring." From the booth beneath the Baltic map, one of the men in pinstripes raised two fingers and called out. "Vaughan! Leave the locals alone and bring your wallet, your round's getting warm!" Thomas didn't turn toward the booth. His hand hovered half an inch above the bar top, fingers curled toward Rory's scarred wrist, suspended across a gulf three years wide and insurmountable. "Does Brendan know you're alive?" "Eva sends my mother a postcard from a different coastal town every Christmas. No return address. That's more than they earned, and all they get." "Evan took a job with a property firm in Swansea. Married a magistrate's daughter last June." Rory’s expression didn't flicker. Not a flinch, not a sigh of relief—just the cool assimilation of data, filed away behind a locked door. "Good luck to Swansea." Thomas swallowed, his gaze snagging on the stairs visible through the beaded curtain behind the bar, leading up into the dark residential landing above the pub. "Tell me you're alright, Rory. Not the armour. Just one true thing before those bastards drag me back to talk about charterparty breaches." Rory slid two pound coins from her pocket and laid them beside her empty tumbler, the brass edges clicking against the mahogany.
created_at"2026-11-11T17:00:21.713Z" 11/11/2026, 5:00:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1854
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1854
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"synthetic"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"silk"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"synthetic"
1"crystal"
2"weight"
3"stark"
4"silk"
5"pulse"
6"flicked"
7"intensity"
8"silence"
9"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1849
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1145
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory19
Soho3
November1
Baltic2
Sea1
Vale1
Glamorgan1
Vaughan1
Adam1
London1
Thomas13
Silas7
Lord1
Justice1
Watkins1
Mooting1
Shield1
Cardiff2
Berlin1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Glamorgan"
4"Vaughan"
5"Adam"
6"Thomas"
7"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Berlin"
globalScore0.67
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if testing counterfeit coin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1849
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"knew that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean24.01
std15.96
cv0.665
sampleLengths
057
15
266
313
444
525
611
753
840
932
1013
118
1243
1347
1413
151
1619
1745
1846
192
2017
215
2253
2329
246
257
2635
2742
288
2911
3063
3150
3215
3312
3425
3539
363
373
3817
3938
4033
4117
4228
4318
441
457
467
4731
489
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences116
ratio0.06
matches
0"Silver cufflinks winked at his wrists; the knot of his burgundy silk tie sat snug against his Adam's apple."
1"Cologne drifted off his coat—bergamot and cedar, expensive armour."
2"Rory tapped two fingers once against the bar top—her signal to stand down."
3"Disbelief warred with a strange, fastidious revulsion—the reaction of a man watching a thoroughbred hitched to a coal cart."
4"No pride lived in the statement; the words landed on the wood between them like lead weights."
5"He looked at her then—past the cheap nylon jacket and the chain oil, straight into the steady, unblinking blue eyes that held zero pity for him and zero nostalgia for the girl buried back in Cardiff."
6"Not a flinch, not a sigh of relief—just the cool assimilation of data, filed away behind a locked door."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1160
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pale, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.011206896551724138
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean15.94
std10.06
cv0.631
sampleLengths
022
117
218
35
414
514
623
715
813
914
1019
1111
1225
1311
1419
1510
1610
1714
1826
1914
2014
2118
2213
236
242
2521
266
2716
286
295
3019
3117
3213
331
346
3513
363
3710
3832
3926
4020
412
4217
435
4420
459
4624
4729
486
497
85.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5172413793103449
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences72
matches
0"She peeled off her cycling"
1"He shifted his weight onto"
2"She reached for the soda"
3"She turned her head an"
4"His gaze flicked from Thomas’s"
5"His mouth opened, closed, and"
6"She took a sip of"
7"He searched her face with"
8"His eyes dropped to her"
9"Her tone stayed level, stripped"
10"He looked down at his"
11"He pressed his thumb and"
12"He dropped his hand."
13"He looked at her then—past"
14"He gestured at the rain-darkened"
15"His hand hovered half an"
ratio0.222
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences72
matches
0"She peeled off her cycling"
1"The synthetic leather exhaled the"
2"Silas stood behind the brass"
3"He shifted his weight onto"
4"The silver signet ring on"
5"Rory hooked her thumb under"
6"A pale, crescent-shaped scar notched"
7"She reached for the soda"
8"The street door swung open,"
9"Wool overcoats, bespoke pinstripes, leather"
10"Temple refugees straying west into"
11"The third man approached the"
12"Rory kept her gaze on"
13"Men in charcoal worsted belonged"
14"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
15"The voice possessed the rounded"
16"She turned her head an"
17"Thomas Vaughan stood two stools"
18"The credit card slipped from"
19"Nobody in London knew that"
ratio0.778
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The street door swung open, admitting a gust of wind that rattled the framed monochrome photographs lining the entrance."
1"Two of them claimed a booth beneath a yellowed nautical chart of the Baltic Sea, near the towering oak bookshelf that concealed the bar's private parlour."
2"His mouth opened, closed, and tried the shape of her name a second time, softer, as if testing counterfeit coin."
3"He searched her face with the forensic intensity that had won him the Lord Justice Watkins Mooting Shield in their second year at Cardiff."
4"He looked at her then—past the cheap nylon jacket and the chain oil, straight into the steady, unblinking blue eyes that held zero pity for him and zero nostalg…"
5"Thomas swallowed, his gaze snagging on the stairs visible through the beaded curtain behind the bar, leading up into the dark residential landing above the pub."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0484%