Run: 2026-11-11-01M75S3ADTP3RP49H6CS6VQP2T

Run Details

Duration:
2m 50s
Cost:
$0.113666
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil sealed behind Rory with a wet snap, severing the damp chill of Richmond Park. Heat filled her lungs. Air thick as syrup coated her tongue with notes of burnt sugar, roasted marrow, and overripe figs bursting on hot stone. Beneath the collar of her jacket, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her sternum. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem radiated a sharp warmth through its silver chain, an inner ember answering the rift at their backs before subsiding to a steady, muted glow as Rory took three steps forward. She swept straight, shoulder-length black hair off her damp neck and tipped her chin up. An expanse of warm amber sky stretched overhead, unbroken by clouds or sun. Golden light poured from every direction at once, bathing terraced hills that rolled outward into infinity. Vineyards wrapped the slopes in emerald ribbons. Beyond the hills, orchards of copper-barked trees gave way to manicured gardens so vast her bright blue eyes lost their borders in a haze of saffron mist. Nyx solidified beside a twisted grapevine, drawing up to their full six-foot-two height. Without a directional sun, their humanoid silhouette drank in the ambient gold, edges fraying into tendrils of living smoke. Violet eyes gleamed within the dark void of their face. When they spoke, the sound brushed Rory's ears like a whisper carried on an autumn wind. "No sun. Darkness hides inside the roots here. Everything on the surface exists to be seen, and eaten." Isolde glided past them both. Silver hair spilled down to her waist, catching the honeyed radiance until each strand shone like spun glass. Rory's scuffed boots sank half an inch into the pitch-black loam, leaving deep treads, while the moss beneath Isolde's bare feet remained upright and untouched. The Half-Fae paused at the edge of the terrace, pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon. "A gilded cage needs no iron bars when the prisoner starves for the bait." Rory rubbed the small crescent scar on her left wrist, studying the rows of vines flanking their path. Crushed mother-of-pearl paved the walkway, crunching beneath her heels like crystallized sugar. "Keep your hands to yourselves, then. We came to cross the border, not sample the menu." They descended the pearl path into the thick of the vineyard. Up close, the flora defied mortal botany. Stalks thick as a man's thigh coiled around trellises carved from veined alabaster. Sap pulsed beneath the bark in visible, rhythmic waves, pumping upward into clusters of grapes the size of goose eggs. Rory leaned within a foot of a hanging bunch, squinting through the taut violet skin of the fruit. Inside each orb, topaz liquid swirled around a single seed shaped like a miniature, ticking gear. A drop of nectar wept from the bottom of the cluster. It struck a broad leaf below with a hiss, releasing a plume of spiced vapor. A sharp breath pulled the vapor straight down Rory's throat. Moisture pooled under her tongue. Her stomach knotted with a violent, hollow cramp, starved raw despite the meal she had eaten in London an hour ago. Her right hand twitched, fingers curling toward the plump cluster. The skin of the fruit shone, promising warmth and an end to every ache in her bones. She slapped her palm onto the hilt at her belt. Even through leather, the Fae-Forged Blade bit into her skin with winter frost. Rory drew the slender, leaf-shaped dagger an inch from its scabbard. Moonsilver caught the ochre light, refusing to warm. Perpetual chill raced up her fingers and shocked her mind clear. She shoved the blade home, jaw tight, and stepped back onto the pearl gravel. "The air is drugged. Even the weeds pull at your gut." Nyx melted from solid form into a flat ribbon of shadow, skimming over the mother-of-pearl before rising between two towering stone urns twenty paces ahead. "Not poison. Desire, distilled into pollen. Mortals breathe this for an hour and chew through their own tongues when the platters run dry." Isolde drifted beside the stone urns, tilting her head toward a low aqueduct running parallel to the path. "Water quenches thirst. In Dymas, every stream teaches the throat a deeper drought." Rory peered into the carved channel as she caught up. No water ran over the smooth basalt bed. Instead, a thick claret current surged downhill, frothing rose-pink against the curves and saturating the air with the sharp bouquet of fermented cherries, cloves, and warm blood-orange peel. Small, six-legged crabs with shells of clear rock candy clung to the stone walls, snapping pincers at frothy bubbles as the current rushed toward the valley floor. They followed the aqueduct through an archway of braided brass vines into an ancient orchard. Here, the scale of the landscape shifted from cultivated rows to wild, towering opulence. Trees soared sixty feet overhead, their trunks twisted like pulled taffy in shades of bronze and mahogany. No leaves grew on the upper boughs. Thousands of bell-shaped blossoms hung upside down, their petals thick and waxy as clotted cream. As a warm gust rolled down from the terraced hills, the orchard came alive with sound. Glass-skinned pomegranates knocked against one another on lower branches, chiming in resonant minor chords. Beneath the chimes thrummed a deeper vibration rising through the soles of Rory's boots—the distant, percussive roar of ten thousand cleavers striking butcher blocks in unison. Rory slowed her pace, threading between roots that arched above the black soil like the ribs of sunken ships. Bulbous truffles split open at the crown nestled in the dirt, glowing with chartreuse spores that drifted upward like embers. "Listen to that rhythm." She tilted her ear toward the valley. Fast, bright violin strings wove beneath the chimes and the distant chopping, punctuated by the roar of open furnaces. Nyx shifted half-solid beside a bronze trunk, violet eyes narrowing at a gap in the orchard canopy. "Look below the ridge." Rory stepped out onto a natural balcony of white marble jutting from the hillside. Isolde joined her on the left, weightless on the stone. The orchard dropped away into a sprawling basin carved into concentric amphitheaters of pale granite and gleaming copper. Gardens filled the outer rings—acres of violet cabbages the size of carriage wheels, ponds shimmering with golden oil where scaled eels leaped through hoops of tame fire, and glass conservatories steaming under the amber sky. Movement drew Rory's gaze to a terraced grove a hundred yards below their perch. Two dozen figures in pristine white double-breasted coats worked among trees bearing fruit that burned like miniature lanterns. Even from the ridge, Rory made out the flash of long curved knives. A man at the front sliced a glowing melon from its stem. The severed vine whipped back, spraying luminescent juice across his sleeves. He did not flinch or wipe his face. He tucked the blazing fruit into a wicker pannier and sprinted toward towering brass doors built into the canyon wall, where plumes of cardamom-scented smoke billowed from colossal chimneys. A bronze bell mounted above the brass doors swung once. The toll rolled across the basin, heavy enough to rattle the loose gravel at Rory's feet. Down in the grove, every white-coated figure froze, then doubled their pace, scrambling over terraced walls with manic urgency, baskets clutched to their chests. "Earthborn." Nyx's wind-whisper voice carried a cold edge as shadow tendrils coiled around their wrists. "I taste the mortal salt under all that saffron and rendered fat. Helbound souls, contracted to the kitchens." Isolde folded slim hands before her waist, silver hair lifting in the spiced updraft rising from the canyon. "They signed away their breath for mastery of the blade and the pan. Now they harvest fruit that blisters the skin, racing a clock with no hands, serving Prince Belphegor's endless table." Rory watched a woman in a stained apron stumble on the stone steps below, catching herself on bleeding knees to shield a basket of crystalline fungi before hurrying through the brass doors. Rory rested her thumb against the cold moonsilver hilt at her hip. Her stomach no longer growled; the sweet, rich air coated the back of her throat like warm tallow. "There's a path winding down the east wall, away from the kitchens. Move." She turned from the marble railing, descending a narrow stair cut into rugged obsidian rock. As they rounded a bend screened by towering stalks of ruby-red sugarcane, the path widened into a secluded circular courtyard. Rory halted, throwing an arm out. Nyx dissolved into the shade of the cane stalks, while Isolde glided to a stop beside a fountain spouting thick golden honey. A banquet table forty feet long occupied the center of the courtyard, draped in damask linen unmarked by a single stain. No diners sat in the gilded chairs. No servants stood watch. Platters of hammered electrum and porcelain towered end to end, groaning under a feast prepared minutes ago. Whole peacocks roasted in their iridescent plumage rested beside pyramids of dark plums, bowls of pearls fizzing in spiced wine, and spun-sugar castles rotating on clockwork pedestals. Steam curled upward from crusty loaves split down the middle, oozing butter flecked with gold leaf. Rory stepped onto the checkered flagstones, keeping five paces clear of the linen. Bright blue eyes darted from the untouched goblets to a stone archway on the far side of the courtyard, where dense foliage swallowed the continuation of the trail. "No guards. No guests. Just hot bread sitting out in the wild." Isolde skirted the honey fountain, keeping her gaze fixed on the dark archway ahead rather than the steaming platters. "A snare needs no huntsman beside it once the spring is set." Nyx reformed at the foot of the table, leaning their shadowy visage over a porcelain tureen filled with shimmering violet broth. No reflection met them in the liquid. "Wards woven into the salt. Take one sip, sit in one chair, and the linen binds you to the wood until bone shows through your wrists." Rory gave the banquet a wide berth, pressing close to the rustling sugarcane. Each stalk hummed a low, resonant note where her jacket brushed the red rind. At her chest, the Heartstone Pendant rested cool and quiet against her skin, the portal far behind them now. "Single file past the fountain. Watch the flagstones." She drew the moonsilver dagger into her palm, letting its chill bite into her calluses as she led the way beneath the stone archway. Beyond the threshold, giant vanilla orchids arched over a sunken stair, their pale, fleshy petals twitching toward the warmth of her bare skin as she stepped between them.
created_at"2026-11-11T17:04:43.462Z" 11/11/2026, 5:04:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1778
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1778
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"chill"
count3
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"crystallized"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"pumping"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count2
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"desire"
count1
12
word"marble"
count2
13
word"gleaming"
count1
14
word"pristine"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"crystalline"
count1
17
word"porcelain"
count2
highlights
0"chill"
1"throbbed"
2"warmth"
3"whisper"
4"scanning"
5"crystallized"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
8"pumping"
9"stomach"
10"raced"
11"desire"
12"marble"
13"gleaming"
14"pristine"
15"racing"
16"crystalline"
17"porcelain"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach knotted"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1776
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1551
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Rory20
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Isolde7
Half-Fae1
London1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx6
persons
0"Veil"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Isolde"
4"Half-Fae"
5"Blade"
6"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.855
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1776
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean33.51
std24.79
cv0.74
sampleLengths
020
172
215
363
458
518
663
714
830
916
1085
1126
1263
1310
1457
1511
1625
1723
1818
1913
2073
2129
2295
2339
244
2526
2617
274
2824
2953
3014
3191
3210
3340
341
3514
3618
3718
3832
3962
4013
4135
4228
4392
4441
4512
4619
4712
4828
4926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs241
matches(empty)
67.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences113
ratio0.027
matches
0"Beneath the chimes thrummed a deeper vibration rising through the soles of Rory's boots—the distant, percussive roar of ten thousand cleavers striking butcher blocks in unison."
1"Gardens filled the outer rings—acres of violet cabbages the size of carriage wheels, ponds shimmering with golden oil where scaled eels leaped through hoops of tame fire, and glass conservatories steaming under the amber sky."
2"Her stomach no longer growled; the sweet, rich air coated the back of her throat like warm tallow."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1578
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
1"warm blood-orange peel."
2"Small, six-legged crabs"
3"pristine white double-breasted coats"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.016476552598225603
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean15.72
std6.96
cv0.443
sampleLengths
020
14
221
313
434
515
613
716
87
927
1013
1119
1210
1316
1418
155
1618
1725
1815
1914
2018
2112
2216
2311
247
2513
2620
2718
2816
2911
3015
3110
325
3321
3410
3517
3610
3713
3811
398
4011
4114
4211
4325
4423
4518
4613
4710
488
4928
84.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5309734513274337
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners60
68.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Instead, a thick claret current"
1"Bright blue eyes darted from"
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences97
matches
0"She swept straight, shoulder-length black"
1"They descended the pearl path"
2"It struck a broad leaf"
3"Her stomach knotted with a"
4"Her right hand twitched, fingers"
5"She slapped her palm onto"
6"She shoved the blade home,"
7"They followed the aqueduct through"
8"She tilted her ear toward"
9"He did not flinch or"
10"He tucked the blazing fruit"
11"Her stomach no longer growled;"
12"She turned from the marble"
13"She drew the moonsilver dagger"
ratio0.144
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences97
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"Heat filled her lungs."
2"The thumbnail-sized crimson gem radiated"
3"She swept straight, shoulder-length black"
4"An expanse of warm amber"
5"Vineyards wrapped the slopes in"
6"Nyx solidified beside a twisted"
7"Violet eyes gleamed within the"
8"Isolde glided past them both."
9"Rory's scuffed boots sank half"
10"The Half-Fae paused at the"
11"Rory rubbed the small crescent"
12"They descended the pearl path"
13"Stalks thick as a man's"
14"Sap pulsed beneath the bark"
15"Rory leaned within a foot"
16"A drop of nectar wept"
17"It struck a broad leaf"
18"A sharp breath pulled the"
19"Moisture pooled under her tongue."
ratio0.66
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Even through leather, the Fae-Forged"
1"Even from the ridge, Rory"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences83
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
93.6366%