Run: 2026-11-11-01M75S6E3PBPXVKY7EW61G4AFX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.057026
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil sealed behind Rory with the hiss of grease hitting a hot pan. London’s winter drizzle vanished. Heat wrapped around her shoulders, thick with the aroma of roasted cloves, browned butter, and bruised plums. Beneath her collar, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her skin. Its crimson gem burned like a banked coal on its silver chain before subsiding to a slow, rhythmic warmth. Rory hooked a finger under the chain to ease the heat from her collarbone, her thumb grazing the pale crescent scar on her left wrist. She raised her chin and surveyed the horizon. No sun hung in the heavens, nor any cloud. A dome of warm amber stretched across the firmament, casting a rich, honeyed radiance from every angle at once. Rory’s boots sank ankle-deep into soil the colour of dark chocolate. Golden liquid welled around her soles with a wet squelch, releasing a sharp burst of fermented peach. Beside her, Isolde glided across the mire. Waist-length silver hair cascaded down the Half-Fae’s back, catching the amber glow, while her slippers skimmed the velvet moss without bending a blade or leaving a single print in the mud. "The sky bleeds syrup, yet no bee builds a hive." Isolde tilted her face toward the canopy ahead, pale lavender eyes reflecting the endless gold above. A dry rasp echoed from a cluster of twisted boulders to their left, the sound of autumn wind scraping through dead reeds. Nyx detached from the stone’s leeward side. At six feet two inches, the Shade towered over both women, though their humanoid silhouette rippled and frayed at the edges. Without a directional sun, the valley lacked true darkness; shadows pooled in pale, watery smudges that offered poor anchorage. Glowing violet eyes narrowed within the shifting mass of living midnight. "This radiance presses from every side." Nyx’s fingers lengthened into smoke, curling and reforming into solid talons as they tested the air. "It starves the corners. Nothing hides under a ceiling made of lanterns." Rory wiped a bead of sweat from her temple, tucking a lock of straight black hair behind her ear. Her bright blue eyes traced the slope descending from their ridge into a sprawling labyrinth of orchards and terraced vineyards. "Save your strength and stay close to the tree trunks. The canopy thickens at the bottom of the hill." She led the descent into the grove. With every dozen paces, earthly geometry surrendered to excess. Gnarled trees rose forty feet overhead, their bark translucent as blown amber glass. Beneath those glossy surfaces, thick burgundy sap pumped in sluggish surges, mimicking the rhythm of a sleeper’s pulse. Branches of braided copper sagged under the weight of impossible fruit. Translucent gourds the size of lanterns swayed in a warm draft, their interiors swirling with luminescent violet liqueur. Clusters of porcelain-white berries knocked together, producing clear, melodic chimes that vibrated in Rory’s molars. Rory halted beside a bough draped in blossoms the colour of seared venison. Each flower exhaled a visible puff of saffron-tinted pollen that smelled of fresh brioche straight from a brick oven. Saliva flooded her tongue. Her stomach contracted into a tight, demanding fist, despite the noodle broth she had eaten an hour prior in Silas’ flat. "Keep your mouth shut when the saffron blooms sigh." Isolde drifted past the copper trunk, fingertips trailing half an inch above a cluster of weeping leaves that dripped clear, viscous oil onto fat emerald cabbages below. "A breath of the baker’s ghost hollows the ribs to make room for a feast that turns to ash." Rory clamped her lips together and breathed shallowly through her nose, though the air itself carried weight, coating the back of her throat like warm cream. At her hip, the moonsilver scabbard housed Isolde’s gift. Rory rested her palm on the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade. Crisp, winter-night cold bled through her leather glove, anchoring her focus against the sluggish languor creeping into her limbs. "These trees have veins." Rory tapped a knuckle against the glass-like bark; the crimson surge inside stuttered, then accelerated, warming beneath her touch. "Are they flora, or something else?" Nyx glided beneath the interlocking boughs, their silhouette darkening into denser obsidian where the broad, platter-sized leaves blocked the amber zenith. "Contracted soil. Nothing in Prince Belphegor’s domain grows from dirt and rain alone. Desire feeds the taproots." They pushed past a curtain of silver ivy heavy with pods shaped like miniature pheasants. Beyond the foliage lay a sunken circular courtyard paved in cracked white marble. Ancient stone banquet tables ringed the perimeter, half-swallowed by creeping briars and shelf fungi glistening with crystallized sugar. At the centre of the ruin stood a dry fountain carved from rose quartz. Its basin depicted dozens of entwined revellers, mouths stretched wide toward a central spout shaped like an inverted horn of plenty. Though no water flowed from the horn, a pool of thick, amber jelly rested in the bottom tier, bubbling at intervals and releasing waves of roasted garlic and spiced mulled wine. Rory descended the three marble steps into the courtyard. Her boot crunched over scattered remnants half-buried in creeping thyme—not pebbles, she realized upon crouching, but petrified ortolan bones and tarnished silver goblets fused to the stone by centuries of hardened caramel sap. An ache tore through her abdomen. Not a standard pang of missed meals, but a cavernous, clawing emptiness that turned her knees to water. That bubbling amber jelly in the quartz basin promised immediate relief. Its savoury steam curled across the cracked flagstones, wrapping around her face like velvet hands. Her fingers twitched, loosening on the moonsilver hilt. "The table lacks chairs, yet the guests remain." Isolde halted on the top step, lavender gaze fixed on the quartz revellers. Look closer at the stone faces, her posture suggested; the proportions of the carved skulls bore too much asymmetry for mortal chisels, down to crooked incisors and individual pores filled with golden lichen. Rory swallowed hard, her throat clicking. "Those aren't statues." "Leftovers." Nyx’s whisper scraped across her eardrums as the Shade flowed across the flagstones, positioning their tall, shadowy bulk between Rory and the steaming basin. "Old ones, from an age before the kitchens built walls. Step off the thyme, Rory." Rory glanced at her boots. Thick, meat-red tendrils hidden beneath the aromatic herbs had uncoiled at the heat of her calves. Smooth and warm as muscular tongues, two vines looped around her left ankle, tightening with a gentle, coaxing tug toward the rose-quartz fountain. Where the plant brushed the bare skin above her sock, a pleasant numbness bloomed, erasing the ache in her belly and replacing it with drowsy contentment. Cold logic cut through the haze. Rory drew the leaf-shaped dagger from her hip. Even under the shadowless amber dome, the moonsilver metal held a pale, lunar luminescence. Ice radiated from the slender blade, raising gooseflesh along her forearm. She dropped into a crouch and sliced across the meat-red tendrils binding her boot. The Fae metal parted the thick flesh without resistance. A high, whistling sigh escaped the severed stems—not a scream, but the rush of air from a punctured bellows. Dark spiced wine spurted across the white marble, sizzling and turning to grey frost wherever droplets struck the moonsilver edge. The remnant wrapped around her ankle went limp, shrivelling into brittle cinnamon bark that flaked apart as she kicked her foot free. Across the courtyard, the entire carpet of creeping thyme rippled in unison, withdrawing three inches from the flagstones around her boots. "Sharp teeth spoil the chef’s broth." Isolde stepped around a toppled candelabra overgrown with translucent white truffles, skirting the edge of the courtyard toward an archway of braided bone and grapevine on the far side. Rory wiped the spotless moonsilver against her trousers, though nothing clung to the freezing metal, and kept the weapon bare in her right hand. Her pulse hammered against the warm crimson stone at her throat. Beyond the bone archway, the orchard gave way to towering trellises the height of cathedral naves, draped in vines bearing grapes the size of human hearts, each skin stretched taut over glowing golden juice. Nyx drifted beside the archway, violet eyes scanning the cavernous rows of the vineyard where pale violet mist curled between roots thick as fallen pillars. "The sap runs warmer down the slope. Something ahead breathes." Rory adjusted her grip on the icy hilt, stepped over a threshold of fused silver spoons, and followed the Shade beneath the looming trellises.
created_at"2026-11-11T17:06:25.539Z" 11/11/2026, 5:06:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"porcelain"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"desire"
count1
12
word"marble"
count3
13
word"glistening"
count1
14
word"crystallized"
count1
15
word"standard"
count1
16
word"pang"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"scanning"
count1
19
word"looming"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"rhythmic"
2"warmth"
3"velvet"
4"echoed"
5"traced"
6"pulse"
7"weight"
8"porcelain"
9"vibrated"
10"stomach"
11"desire"
12"marble"
13"glistening"
14"crystallized"
15"standard"
16"pang"
17"whisper"
18"scanning"
19"looming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1420
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1273
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Rory16
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Isolde6
Half-Fae1
Shade3
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Fae3
Nyx5
persons
0"Veil"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Isolde"
4"Half-Fae"
5"Shade"
6"Blade"
7"Fae"
8"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.872
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.113
wordCount1420
matches
0"not pebbles, she realized upon crouching, but petrified ortolan bones"
1"Not a standard pang of missed meals, but a cavernous, clawing emptiness"
2"not a scream, but the rush of air from a punctured bellows"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean30.87
std22.46
cv0.728
sampleLengths
039
162
228
366
410
516
680
76
816
912
1039
1119
1247
1344
1457
159
1627
1719
1865
194
2019
216
2221
2317
2446
2566
2642
2758
288
2946
306
313
321
3324
3415
3570
3614
3739
3870
3921
406
4129
4269
4325
4410
4524
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs204
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences92
ratio0.054
matches
0"Without a directional sun, the valley lacked true darkness; shadows pooled in pale, watery smudges that offered poor anchorage."
1"Rory tapped a knuckle against the glass-like bark; the crimson surge inside stuttered, then accelerated, warming beneath her touch."
2"Her boot crunched over scattered remnants half-buried in creeping thyme—not pebbles, she realized upon crouching, but petrified ortolan bones and tarnished silver goblets fused to the stone by centuries of hardened caramel sap."
3"Look closer at the stone faces, her posture suggested; the proportions of the carved skulls bore too much asymmetry for mortal chisels, down to crooked incisors and individual pores filled with golden lichen."
4"A high, whistling sigh escaped the severed stems—not a scream, but the rush of air from a punctured bellows."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount574
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.010452961672473868
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0017421602787456446
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean15.43
std7.55
cv0.489
sampleLengths
018
14
217
310
419
525
68
79
819
911
1017
117
1231
1310
1416
1522
167
1721
1819
1911
206
2116
2212
2319
2420
2519
267
279
2813
2918
3011
3118
3215
3313
3419
354
3621
379
3827
3919
4026
419
4211
4319
444
4519
466
4721
4817
4915
96.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5760869565217391
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences77
matches
0"Its crimson gem burned like"
1"She raised her chin and"
2"Her bright blue eyes traced"
3"She led the descent into"
4"Her stomach contracted into a"
5"They pushed past a curtain"
6"Its basin depicted dozens of"
7"Her boot crunched over scattered"
8"Its savoury steam curled across"
9"Her fingers twitched, loosening on"
10"She dropped into a crouch"
11"Her pulse hammered against the"
ratio0.156
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences77
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"London’s winter drizzle vanished."
2"Heat wrapped around her shoulders,"
3"Its crimson gem burned like"
4"Rory hooked a finger under"
5"She raised her chin and"
6"A dome of warm amber"
7"Rory’s boots sank ankle-deep into"
8"Waist-length silver hair cascaded down"
9"Isolde tilted her face toward"
10"A dry rasp echoed from"
11"Nyx detached from the stone’s"
12"Nyx’s fingers lengthened into smoke,"
13"Rory wiped a bead of"
14"Her bright blue eyes traced"
15"She led the descent into"
16"Branches of braided copper sagged"
17"Clusters of porcelain-white berries knocked"
18"Rory halted beside a bough"
19"Each flower exhaled a visible"
ratio0.662
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Though no water flowed from"
1"Even under the shadowless amber"
ratio0.026
58.11% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Waist-length silver hair cascaded down the Half-Fae’s back, catching the amber glow, while her slippers skimmed the velvet moss without bending a blade or leavi…"
1"Without a directional sun, the valley lacked true darkness; shadows pooled in pale, watery smudges that offered poor anchorage."
2"Clusters of porcelain-white berries knocked together, producing clear, melodic chimes that vibrated in Rory’s molars."
3"Each flower exhaled a visible puff of saffron-tinted pollen that smelled of fresh brioche straight from a brick oven."
4"Isolde drifted past the copper trunk, fingertips trailing half an inch above a cluster of weeping leaves that dripped clear, viscous oil onto fat emerald cabbag…"
5"Not a standard pang of missed meals, but a cavernous, clawing emptiness that turned her knees to water."
6"The remnant wrapped around her ankle went limp, shrivelling into brittle cinnamon bark that flaked apart as she kicked her foot free."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9852%