| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1422 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1422 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "porcelain" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "desire" | | 12 | "marble" | | 13 | "glistening" | | 14 | "crystallized" | | 15 | "standard" | | 16 | "pang" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "scanning" | | 19 | "looming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1420 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1273 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Shade | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Blade" | | 7 | "Fae" | | 8 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.872 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.113 | | wordCount | 1420 | | matches | | 0 | "not pebbles, she realized upon crouching, but petrified ortolan bones" | | 1 | "Not a standard pang of missed meals, but a cavernous, clawing emptiness" | | 2 | "not a scream, but the rush of air from a punctured bellows" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 30.87 | | std | 22.46 | | cv | 0.728 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 80 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 66 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 70 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 70 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 69 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Without a directional sun, the valley lacked true darkness; shadows pooled in pale, watery smudges that offered poor anchorage." | | 1 | "Rory tapped a knuckle against the glass-like bark; the crimson surge inside stuttered, then accelerated, warming beneath her touch." | | 2 | "Her boot crunched over scattered remnants half-buried in creeping thyme—not pebbles, she realized upon crouching, but petrified ortolan bones and tarnished silver goblets fused to the stone by centuries of hardened caramel sap." | | 3 | "Look closer at the stone faces, her posture suggested; the proportions of the carved skulls bore too much asymmetry for mortal chisels, down to crooked incisors and individual pores filled with golden lichen." | | 4 | "A high, whistling sigh escaped the severed stems—not a scream, but the rush of air from a punctured bellows." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 574 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.010452961672473868 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0017421602787456446 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 15.43 | | std | 7.55 | | cv | 0.489 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 96.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5760869565217391 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Its crimson gem burned like" | | 1 | "She raised her chin and" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes traced" | | 3 | "She led the descent into" | | 4 | "Her stomach contracted into a" | | 5 | "They pushed past a curtain" | | 6 | "Its basin depicted dozens of" | | 7 | "Her boot crunched over scattered" | | 8 | "Its savoury steam curled across" | | 9 | "Her fingers twitched, loosening on" | | 10 | "She dropped into a crouch" | | 11 | "Her pulse hammered against the" |
| | ratio | 0.156 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The shimmering distortion of the" | | 1 | "London’s winter drizzle vanished." | | 2 | "Heat wrapped around her shoulders," | | 3 | "Its crimson gem burned like" | | 4 | "Rory hooked a finger under" | | 5 | "She raised her chin and" | | 6 | "A dome of warm amber" | | 7 | "Rory’s boots sank ankle-deep into" | | 8 | "Waist-length silver hair cascaded down" | | 9 | "Isolde tilted her face toward" | | 10 | "A dry rasp echoed from" | | 11 | "Nyx detached from the stone’s" | | 12 | "Nyx’s fingers lengthened into smoke," | | 13 | "Rory wiped a bead of" | | 14 | "Her bright blue eyes traced" | | 15 | "She led the descent into" | | 16 | "Branches of braided copper sagged" | | 17 | "Clusters of porcelain-white berries knocked" | | 18 | "Rory halted beside a bough" | | 19 | "Each flower exhaled a visible" |
| | ratio | 0.662 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Though no water flowed from" | | 1 | "Even under the shadowless amber" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 58.11% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Waist-length silver hair cascaded down the Half-Fae’s back, catching the amber glow, while her slippers skimmed the velvet moss without bending a blade or leavi…" | | 1 | "Without a directional sun, the valley lacked true darkness; shadows pooled in pale, watery smudges that offered poor anchorage." | | 2 | "Clusters of porcelain-white berries knocked together, producing clear, melodic chimes that vibrated in Rory’s molars." | | 3 | "Each flower exhaled a visible puff of saffron-tinted pollen that smelled of fresh brioche straight from a brick oven." | | 4 | "Isolde drifted past the copper trunk, fingertips trailing half an inch above a cluster of weeping leaves that dripped clear, viscous oil onto fat emerald cabbag…" | | 5 | "Not a standard pang of missed meals, but a cavernous, clawing emptiness that turned her knees to water." | | 6 | "The remnant wrapped around her ankle went limp, shrivelling into brittle cinnamon bark that flaked apart as she kicked her foot free." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |