Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMEYNWFR3F0BTDRRBZYEAZG

Run Details

Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter slipped the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant over her head, feeling the cool metal kiss the back of her neck. The tiny crimson gem rested against her skin, a faint inner glow pulsing in time with her heartbeat. She had followed the map scribbled on a napkin—an address that led her past the familiar neon of Yu‑Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, past the clatter of Silas’ bar, and into the winding paths of Richmond Park. The night was thick with humidity, the kind that made the air feel like a damp blanket pressed against her lungs. The oak trees loomed ahead, their trunks gnarled and ancient, each one bearing a stone standing stone at its base. The stones were covered in moss, their surfaces slick with dew and the faint, metallic scent of earth. Aurora paused, eyes scanning the runes etched into the stones. They were older than any language she knew, a language of the Fae whispered in the rustle of leaves. She had read about the Grove in a forum thread, a place where time folded on itself, where an hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She had come for a reason—a promise made by an unknown benefactor, a promise that the Heartstone would guide her to a portal that could change everything. A wind slipped through the canopy, scattering a handful of wildflowers across the path. The blossoms glowed faintly in the moonlight, their colors unnaturally vivid: blues that seemed to pulse, yellows that flickered like candle flames. Aurora crouched, the scar on her left wrist catching a sliver of moonlight. It was a crescent‑shaped reminder of a childhood accident, a reminder that she could survive a fall, a reminder that she could survive more. She stepped into the clearing. The Grove opened like a breath held too long. The ancient oak standing stones formed a rough circle, their trunks rising like sentinels. The ground was a carpet of soft moss, damp and spongy under her boots. The air smelled of pine and something sweeter, like honey left to ferment. The moon filtered through the leaves, casting silver shafts that danced across the stones. Aurora felt the pendant’s pulse quicken, a warmth spreading from the gem into her chest, as if the stone itself were breathing. She moved forward, the hem of her coat brushing the moss. The sound of her own footsteps was swallowed by the night, leaving only the faint rustle of leaves and a distant, almost imperceptible hum. It was a low, resonant tone that seemed to emanate from the stones themselves, a tone that vibrated in her bones. She pressed the palm of her hand against the nearest stone, feeling the coolness of the bark and the faint thrum beneath. “Okay,” she whispered to herself, voice barely louder than the wind. “If this is a portal, it should be... here.” She glanced at the pendant, the crimson gem now glowing a shade brighter, as if it sensed the proximity of whatever lay beyond. A sudden crack split the night, sharp as a twig snapping underfoot. Aurora’s head snapped toward the edge of the clearing, where the darkness seemed to thicken. A shape moved—nothing solid, just a flicker of shadow that dissolved into the night as quickly as it appeared. She swallowed, the scar on her wrist pulsing with a faint ache, and forced herself to keep walking. The wind shifted, carrying with it a faint, metallic scent—like blood, but not quite. Aurora’s breath caught. She could hear, far beyond the stones, a low murmur, a chorus of voices that seemed to rise from the earth itself. It was not human speech; it was a susurrus of syllables she could not parse, a language that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up. She stopped, listening. The hum from the stones deepened, resonating with the murmur, and the Heartstone’s glow flared, casting a crimson halo around her. The pendant’s warmth seeped into her skin, a comforting heat that belied the chill that crept down her spine. A rustle came from the edge of the clearing, a soft shuffling that could have been a fox, could have been something else. Aurora’s eyes strained, trying to pierce the darkness. The wildflowers at the periphery seemed to sway without wind, their petals trembling as if in response to a silent command. She could feel the weight of unseen eyes, a pressure that settled over her like a blanket. She took a step back, then another, her mind racing. “It’s a portal,” she thought, “but it’s not a doorway. It’s a… a threshold.” She remembered the old stories about the Fae: that they liked to play with mortals, to lure them into places where time bent and reality thinned. She had always dismissed them as folklore, but the pendant’s pulse was undeniable. A sudden, sharp crack of a branch snapping echoed, and a cold wind whipped through the clearing, scattering a spray of pollen that glittered like dust motes in the moonlight. Aurora’s eyes widened as she saw a figure at the far side of the circle—a silhouette of a woman, tall, draped in a gown woven from midnight and moonbeams. The figure’s hair fell in black waves, matching Aurora’s own, and its eyes were a deep, unsettling violet that seemed to absorb the light around them. Aurora’s breath hitched. She raised her hand, the scar on her wrist catching the moonlight, and the pendant flared brighter, as if reacting to the presence. The violet eyes fixed on her, unblinking, and the air grew heavy with a scent of wilted roses. “Who’s there?” Aurora called, her voice steadier than she felt. The words seemed to dissolve into the night, swallowed by the hum. The figure did not answer. Instead, it lifted a hand, and from its fingertips spilled a cascade of tiny, glowing motes—like fireflies, but each one pulsed with a faint, crimson light. They swirled around Aurora, dancing in the air like a living constellation. Aurora felt the motes brush against her skin, a tingling sensation that made her pulse race. She clenched her jaw, the scar on her wrist throbbing as if it were a second heartbeat. “What do you want?” she asked, more to herself than to the apparition. The figure’s mouth opened, but no sound emerged. Instead, the air rippled, and a low, resonant chord vibrated through the stones, through the ground, through Aurora’s bones. The Heartstone’s glow intensified, casting long shadows that stretched across the clearing, turning the wildflowers into silhouettes of unseen creatures. A sudden gust tore through the grove, ripping the pendant from Aurora’s neck. It spun in the air, a tiny comet of crimson light, and landed with a soft thud on the moss. Aurora lunged, her hand closing over the chain, but as she lifted it, the pendant’s glow dimmed, and the warmth that had steadied her evaporated. She stared at the pendant, now inert, and felt a cold dread settle into her gut. The figure’s violet eyes flickered, and in that flicker Aurora saw a flash of something else—a hallway of endless stone, a labyrinth of standing stones that stretched into darkness, a place where time seemed to fold upon itself like a sheet of paper. The hum from the stones grew louder, a cacophony that threatened to shatter her thoughts. Aurora’s mind raced, recalling the stories her mother had whispered about the Fae: that they could trap a mortal’s soul in a loop, that they could bend reality until the victim could not tell night from day. She felt the weight of centuries pressing down on her, the weight of the Grove’s ancient magic. A low, guttural laugh echoed from the shadows, not a human laugh but a sound that seemed to come from the earth itself. The figure’s form wavered, its edges blurring as if it were made of mist. Aurora’s eyes darted to the standing stones; each one seemed to pulse in rhythm with the laugh, their surfaces rippling like water. She took a step back, her breath shallow, her heart hammering against her ribs. “You’re not real,” she whispered, trying to convince herself. “You’re a trick of the mind.” The figure’s violet eyes narrowed, and a single word formed on its lips—unintelligible, yet somehow familiar. Aurora’s mind flashed to the night she had fled from Evan, the bruised knuckles, the taste of cheap whiskey, the feeling of being trapped in a loop of abuse. She had escaped that, but now the Grove seemed to offer a different kind of trap—one that promised to erase the past, but at the cost of her present. The pendant thumped against her chest as she pressed it to her skin, a faint pulse returning, a heartbeat in the darkness. She felt the warmth seep back, a gentle pressure that steadied her breath. She closed her eyes, listening to the hum, to the rustle of leaves, to the distant murmur of the Fae. She opened her eyes to find the figure gone, the violet gaze replaced by the dim, indifferent stare of the oak trees. The motes that had swirled around her dissipated, floating away like ash on a wind. The standing stones stood silent, their ancient faces unchanging. Aurora stood alone in the clearing, the night pressing in around her. She felt the strange distortion of time—a sensation that minutes stretched into hours, that seconds lingered like droplets of water on a leaf. She glanced at her watch, a cheap digital thing that read 2:13 a.m., and wondered if the time outside the Grove matched the time inside. She raised the Heartstone, its crimson glow now a steady, low ember. The warmth returned, a comforting heat that steadied her trembling hands. She could feel the pulse of the stone aligning with her own, as if the two were now synchronized, a rhythm that promised a way out. A rustle from the edge of the clearing caught her attention again. This time, it was not a shadow but a small, white rabbit, its fur glistening with dew, its eyes reflecting the moon. It hopped toward her, pausing at the base of a standing stone. Aurora knelt, extending a hand. The rabbit sniffed her fingers, then nudged the pendant with its nose. The stone’s glow flared, a brief flash that illuminated the clearing in a crimson wash. Aurora’s breath caught. She realized the rabbit was not a rabbit; it was a messenger, a familiar of the Fae, a guide perhaps. She lifted the pendant, feeling the warmth surge, and whispered, “What do I need to do?” The rabbit twitched its ears, then bounded away, disappearing into the thicket of wildflowers. Aurora followed, her steps cautious, her mind racing. She reached the edge of the clearing, where the ancient oak stones gave way to a narrow path shrouded in mist. The path seemed to pulse, the air humming with the same low chord that had filled the Grove. She hesitated, the scar on her wrist throbbing, a reminder of past injuries, of survival. She thought of the promise made by the unknown benefactor, of the chance to change something, to maybe undo a mistake. She thought of the night she had fled from Evan, of the delivery routes that had taken her through the city’s veins, of the flat above Silas’ bar that had become her sanctuary. She took a breath, feeling the cool night air fill her lungs, and stepped onto the path. The mist swallowed her, the standing stones receding behind her as if they had never been there. The Heartstone’s glow dimmed to a soft ember, a quiet beacon in the darkness. The path wound deeper into the forest, the trees closing in like the walls of a cathedral. Aurora’s footsteps were muffled by the soft moss, the only sound the occasional rustle of leaves and the distant, faint hum that seemed to follow her. She felt the time stretch, minutes turning into an unmeasurable stretch of darkness. Her mind, however, remained sharp, the cool-headedness that had earned her the nickname Rory still intact. She reached a small clearing within the clearing, a circle of stones half-buried in the earth, each one etched with runes that glowed faintly in the moonlight. In the center lay a shallow pool, water black as obsidian, reflecting the stars above. Aurora knelt, the pendant resting against her chest, its glow now a steady pulse. She whispered, “Show me.” The water rippled, and a faint image rose—a doorway of light, a vortex of swirling colors, a portal that seemed to breathe. The Heartstone’s glow surged, matching the rhythm of the portal’s pulse. Aurora felt a tug, a pull that resonated with the scar on her wrist, as if the wound itself were a conduit for the magic. She placed her hand on the stone, feeling the coldness of the water seep into her skin, the warmth of the pendant counterbalancing it. The portal widened, a tear in the fabric of night, a seam where the Fae realm brushed against Earth. She hesitated, the weight of the unknown pressing upon her. She could step through and perhaps find answers, could perhaps find a way to rewrite the past. She could also remain, trapped in a place where time stretched and the night never truly ended. She thought of the delivery routes, of the city lights, of the flat above Silas’ bar, of the friends who would worry if she didn’t return. She took a deep breath, the cool night air filling her lungs, the scar on her wrist throbbing in time with the portal’s pulse. She felt the Heartstone’s warmth surge, a gentle pressure that seemed to say, “Go.” She stepped forward, the pendant’s glow flaring as she crossed the threshold. The world around her dissolved into a cascade of crimson light, the scent of wildflowers mingling with the metallic tang of ancient stone. The humming grew louder, a choir of unseen voices singing in a language she could not comprehend. For a heartbeat, Aurora felt weightless, as if she were suspended between two worlds. Then the light faded, and she found herself standing on a stone platform, surrounded by towering oaks that stretched into a sky of violet twilight. The air was thick with the scent of rain and something sweet, like honeyed incense. Shadows moved at the edge of her vision, shapes that flickered like candle flames in a draft. She turned, looking back at the portal, now a shimmering veil of light. The Heartstone hung around her neck, its glow steady, a compass pointing her forward. She felt the scar on her wrist, a reminder that she had survived before, that she could survive again. She took a step onto the platform, the ancient oak stones beneath her feet humming in resonance with the Heartstone. The night around her seemed to hold its breath, the wrongness that had crept into the Grove now a distant echo. She was alone, but not alone—she was surrounded by a world that whispered promises and threats in the same breath. She inhaled deeply, the cool air filling her lungs, and felt a strange certainty settle over her. The horror of the Grove had been a test, a thin veil of dread that had forced her to confront the unknown. The real horror, she realized, would be the choices she would make in this place where time bent and reality thinned. She tightened her grip on the pendant, feeling its warmth pulse in time with her own heart. The violet‑eyed figure was gone, the rabbit’s message delivered, the standing stones silent. The night was still, the wildflowers swaying gently, the air humming with an ancient song. She lifted her gaze to the horizon, where the violet twilight met the darkness, and whispered, “Let’s see what this world has to offer.” The Heartstone’s glow intensified, a crimson beacon against the night, and Aurora Carter—Rory—stepped forward, the scar on her wrist a silent testament to the past, the pendant around her neck a promise of what might come. The Grove faded behind her, its wrongness slipping into memory, replaced by the quiet, unsettling promise of a world where every rustle could be a warning, every shadow a secret, and every heartbeat a step toward an unknown destiny.
created_at"2026-02-17T00:10:50.82174+00:00" 2/17/2026, 12:10:50 AM
model"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
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tokens_prompt812
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native_tokens_prompt721
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num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
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finish_reason"stop"
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usage0
router(null)
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api_type"completions"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
96.2963% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she whispered to herself, voice barely louder than the wind [barely]"
89.0511% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2740
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"quickly"
2"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2740
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"cacophony"
count1
1
word"testament"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count2
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"resonated"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count3
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"weight"
count4
13
word"dancing"
count1
14
word"footsteps"
count2
15
word"echo"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count2
17
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"cacophony"
1"testament"
2"beacon"
3"sanctuary"
4"sentinels"
5"resonated"
6"resonance"
7"flickered"
8"flicker"
9"glistening"
10"wavered"
11"loomed"
12"weight"
13"dancing"
14"footsteps"
15"echo"
16"echoed"
17"etched"
33.3333% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"clenched her jaw"
3"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
99.2949% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount16
narrationSentences148
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
56.4573% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean59.26
std20.6
cv0.348
sampleLengths
098
1121
273
35
486
578
643
764
868
943
1069
1163
1285
1344
1422
1559
1630
1747
1858
1959
2069
2159
2229
2374
2455
2546
2660
2749
2878
2939
3061
3169
3248
3372
3456
3537
3668
3770
3838
3952
4071
4146
4261
4360
4445
4599
97.2973% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences148
matches
0"were covered"
1"was swallowed"
2"were made"
3"being trapped"
4"were muffled"
5"were suspended"
6"was surrounded"
7"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs422
matches
0"were breathing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2686
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.017498138495904692
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0037230081906180195
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean18.3
std8.11
cv0.443
sampleLengths
023
118
236
321
420
518
610
719
827
927
1014
1122
1213
1324
145
159
1614
1714
1813
1914
2022
2111
2224
2321
2422
2511
2632
2712
2815
2919
3018
3114
323
3322
3429
353
3621
3719
3823
398
4021
4117
4210
4340
4413
4530
4629
4726
483
4923
26.5101% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats35
diversityRatio0.12080536912751678
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners18
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she whispered to herself, voice barely louder than the wind (whisper voice barely)"
1"she thought, She remembered the old stories about the Fae: that they liked to play with mortals, to lure them into places where time bent and reality thinned (think, remember like play time thin)"
2"she whispered, trying to convince herself (whisper, try convince)"
3"She lifted the pendant, feeling the warmth surge, and whispered, (lift feel whisper)"
4"She whispered, The water rippled, and a faint image rose—a doorway of light, a vortex of swirling colors, a portal that seemed to breathe. (whisper, ripple, swirl seem breathe)"
5"She felt the Heartstone’s warmth surge, a gentle pressure that seemed to say, (feel seem say)"
6"She lifted her gaze to the horizon, where the violet twilight met the darkness, and whispered, The Heartstone’s glow intensified, a crimson beacon against the night, and Aurora Carter—Rory—stepped forward, the scar on her wrist a silent testament to the past, the pendant around her neck a promise of what might come. (lift meet whisper, intensify, step come)"
76.3671%