Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMF0PM6RXB6Q2CKYPET4HW5

Run Details

Duration:
7.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed the heavy brass door of The Raven’s Nest and felt the green neon flicker above the entrance, a thin blade of light that cut through the dimness like a promise. The smell of stale beer and cheap perfume curled around her, and the low hum of conversations rose in a steady, indifferent tide. She slipped the coat from her shoulders, the black fabric whispering against the worn wooden floor, and scanned the room with her bright blue eyes, the color catching the occasional glint from the wall‑hung photographs. The bar was a museum of forgotten places. Old maps, their edges frayed, clung to the brick walls, each line a memory of a world she had never visited. Black‑and‑white photographs of men in trench coats and women with cigarette smoke lingered in the shadows, their eyes following her as she moved. The low‑lit lamps threw amber pools onto the polished oak, and a soft jazz record spun in the background, its notes too distant to be heard clearly. She made her way to a battered wooden stool at the far end, the one that faced the back wall where a bookshelf of dog‑eared paperbacks stood like a silent guard. The bartender—Silas Blackwood—was polishing a glass with a rag that seemed to have seen more nights than any of the patrons. He was taller than she remembered, his grey‑streaked auburn hair now flecked with silver, a neatly trimmed beard framing a face that carried the weight of years in its lines. His hazel eyes flicked up, and for a heartbeat she thought she saw a flicker of recognition, a spark that had been smothered by time. Aurora’s hand moved to the small crescent‑shaped scar on her left wrist, the one she’d gotten from a childhood accident when she’d tried to climb the garden fence. The scar was a reminder of the past, a thin line that had healed but never vanished. She pressed her thumb against it, feeling the faint raised texture, as if the skin itself could tell her the story she kept pushing aside. Silas set the glass down with a soft clink, his left leg giving a slight limp as he shifted his weight. The limp had always been there, a reminder of a botched operation in Prague, but now it seemed more pronounced, as if the years had added a new layer of weariness to his gait. He lifted his right hand, the silver signet ring catching the dim light, the emblem on it a secret she never saw up close. “Rory,” he said, the name rolling out of his mouth like a well‑worn key. “It’s been… a long time.” She stared at the word, at the way it seemed to echo against the walls of the bar, and felt a sudden rush of images: a girl with a notebook, a boy with a bike, the night they’d both run away from the rain in Cardiff, the way they’d promised to meet again someday. The promise had been a thin thread, frayed by the years and the distance that grew between them like a river. “Silas,” she replied, her voice steady, the words landing on the wood with a soft thud. “I didn’t expect to find you here.” He gave a half‑smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “The Nest has a way of pulling people back. You know that.” She looked around, taking in the bar’s details: the cracked mirror behind the bar, the faint smell of tobacco that clung to the leather stools, the way the neon sign threw a green hue over the polished floor. The secret back room behind the bookshelf was a myth among regulars, a place for clandestine meetings, a place she had never entered. Now it seemed like a metaphor for the hidden parts of their lives, the rooms they kept locked away. “Do you ever wonder why we end up where we do?” she asked, her words slipping out before she could weigh them. “I left home, left everything, and now I’m delivering food for a Chinese restaurant, living above a bar I never thought I’d be part of.” Silas’s eyes softened for a moment, the hazel turning a shade darker, as if the memory of his own past was being pulled to the surface. “I was a field agent once,” he said, his voice low, “a man who thought the world was a chessboard. Then a botched operation in Prague left me with a limp and a lot of ghosts. I opened this place to have a front, a place to meet people who needed a quiet ear. It’s not the life I imagined, but it’s the one I have.” She could hear the crackle of his words, the way each syllable seemed to carry a weight she could almost feel on her shoulders. The scar on her wrist pulsed faintly, as if it were a metronome ticking to the rhythm of their conversation. “Do you regret it?” she asked, the question hanging between them like a thin thread of smoke. Silas stared at the glass he was polishing, the silver ring catching the light and throwing a tiny flash onto the wood. “Regret is a luxury,” he said, his tone dry, “for people who think they can change the past. I’ve learned to live with the choices I made. The Nest is my compromise.” She thought of the days when she’d sit in the courtyard of her parents’ house, listening to her mother’s Welsh lullabies, her father’s legal arguments, the way the world seemed to be a set of rules she could learn to navigate. She had once imagined a future where she’d be a barrister, a voice for the voiceless, not a delivery person weaving through traffic with a bag of takeout. The city had taken her, the streets had reshaped her, and now she was a woman who could disappear into a crowd and reappear in a dimly lit bar, her bright blue eyes searching for something she could not name. Silas lifted his glass, the amber liquid catching the neon green, and set it down with a soft thud. “You’ve always been good at thinking outside the box,” he said, a hint of admiration in his voice. “Even when you were twelve, you’d find a way to get out of the garden fence. You still have that spark, Rory.” She smiled, a thin line that didn’t quite reach her eyes. “And you’ve always been the one who kept the box locked,” she replied, the words tinged with both admiration and a sting of old resentment. “You taught me to be cautious, to think two steps ahead. I guess I never thanked you for that.” Silas’s gaze lingered on her, his hazel eyes softening into something like pity. “You were always the one who wanted to run, Rory. I tried to keep you grounded. I guess I failed.” The conversation fell into a brief silence, the kind that stretched between two people who had not spoken for years, each holding onto a different version of the past. The bar’s neon sign flickered again, casting a green glow on the scar on her wrist, as if the light itself were trying to illuminate the hidden parts of her story. She took a sip of the cheap whiskey that Silas had poured for her, the burn of the alcohol spreading through her throat, the taste of regret and relief mingling on her tongue. The glass was warm, the liquid a reminder that some things could be tasted, even if they could not be changed. “Do you ever think about that night in Cardiff?” she asked, the words barely audible over the jazz record. Silas’s eyes flicked to the back wall, where a photograph of a rain‑slicked street hung, a man in a trench coat looking down a foggy alley. “I think about it sometimes,” he said, his voice low, “about how we promised to meet again, how we thought time would be kind.” She pressed her thumb against the scar again, feeling the faint raised texture, as if the skin itself could tell her the story she kept pushing aside. “Time isn’t kind,” she whispered, the words slipping out like a confession. “It takes what we have and gives us something else. I thought I could outrun it, but I’m still here, with this scar and this bar.” Silas’s limp seemed to settle a little more as he leaned against the bar, his silver signet ring glinting in the green light. “We all carry scars,” he said, his voice soft, “some are visible, some are not. The important thing is what we do with them.” She looked at him, at the lines on his face, the way his hair had turned silver, the way his eyes held a mixture of fatigue and resolve. He was older now, his body bearing the marks of a life lived in shadows, his mind perhaps haunted by secrets she could never know. Yet the man she remembered, the friend who had once shown her a map of the city, still lingered in the dim light. “Do you ever wish you could go back?” she asked, the question a thin thread that pulled at the core of her being. Silas’s eyes softened, the hazel turning a shade lighter, as if the memory of his past was being pulled to the surface. “I wish I could have made different choices,” he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper. “But the past is a closed door. All we have is the present, and the way we choose to walk through it.” She thought of the delivery routes she took each night, the streets of London that seemed endless, the way the city’s lights flickered like a constellation of possibilities. She thought of the bar, its green neon sign a beacon in the night, the secret back room behind the bookshelf that no one ever entered. She thought of the weight of time, how it pressed down on her shoulders like a heavy coat she could not shed. Silas reached for his glass, his left leg giving a subtle shift as he steadied himself. “You’ve always been good at finding a way out,” he said, his tone gentle, “but sometimes the way out is not a door, it’s a window.” She stared at the glass, the amber liquid reflecting the green neon, the way the light danced on the surface like a memory that refused to settle. “And what if the window is broken?” she asked, her voice barely audible. Silas smiled, a faint, almost imperceptible curl of his lips. “Then you have to pick up the pieces and make something new,” he said, his words hanging in the air, a promise and a warning alike. The jazz record swelled, the saxophone wailing a mournful note that seemed to echo the unspoken regrets that lay between them. Aurora felt a tear slip down her cheek, the salty sting mixing with the whiskey on her tongue. She didn’t know whether it was sorrow for the years lost, for the choices made, or for the friend she had once been. Silas placed his glass down, the clink resonating like a bell tolling in the quiet. “You’re welcome to stay as long as you like,” he said, his voice a soft invitation. “The Nest is always open for old friends.” She looked around the bar, the green neon sign casting a surreal glow on the maps, the photographs, the scar on her wrist, and the silver ring on Silas’s hand. The secret back room behind the bookshelf seemed to whisper, a promise of hidden conversations and concealed truths. She felt the weight of time settle on her shoulders like a familiar coat, heavy but comforting in its familiarity. “I think I’ll stay a while,” she said, her voice steady, the words a bridge across the years that had stretched between them. “There’s a lot I need to think about.” Silas nodded, his hazel eyes softening. “Take all the time you need,” he said, his voice a quiet anchor in the sea of neon and shadows. The bar hummed around them, the low murmur of patrons a backdrop to the unspoken words that lingered like smoke. Aurora felt the past and present intertwine, the scar on her wrist a reminder of a childhood accident, the signet ring on Silas’s hand a symbol of his hidden past. The weight of time pressed down, but in that dimly lit space, amidst the green glow and the quiet jazz, there was a sliver of hope—a chance to bridge the gap between who they were and who they had become.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
95.2852% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2121
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2121
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"surreal"
count1
8
word"clandestine"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count2
10
word"weight"
count6
11
word"amidst"
count1
12
word"echo"
count2
13
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"tinged"
2"flickered"
3"flicker"
4"flicked"
5"glint"
6"glinting"
7"surreal"
8"clandestine"
9"unspoken"
10"weight"
11"amidst"
12"echo"
13"navigate"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of recognition"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"have that spark"
84.4770% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean55.74
std24.84
cv0.446
sampleLengths
090
179
2107
370
479
519
675
723
822
980
1047
1192
1244
1317
1454
15109
1659
1755
1833
1960
2054
2119
2250
2365
2447
2576
2623
2760
2876
2942
3040
3136
3262
3339
3468
3531
3626
3790
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"been smothered"
1"being pulled"
2"being pulled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs253
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was polishing"
2"were trying"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1695
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.024188790560471976
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00471976401179941
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean23.02
std9.38
cv0.407
sampleLengths
032
123
235
38
421
523
627
731
821
930
1025
1128
1217
1325
1421
1534
1624
1714
185
1954
2021
2116
227
2310
2412
2538
2623
2719
2822
2925
3026
3166
3224
3320
3417
3522
3632
3741
3828
3940
4019
4118
4222
4311
4425
4519
4613
4720
4829
4931
45.6522% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2608695652173913
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners24
87.5000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he said, the name rolling out of his mouth like a well‑worn key (say, roll out like)"
1"she replied, her voice steady, the words landing on the wood with a soft thud (reply, land)"
2"she replied, the words tinged with both admiration and a sting of old resentment (reply, tinged)"
3"she whispered, the words slipping out like a confession (whisper, slipping out like)"
4"he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper (admit)"
5"he said, his words hanging in the air, a promise and a warning alike (say, hang)"
6"she said, her voice steady, the words a bridge across the years that had stretched between them (say, stretch)"
88.9950%