| 90.91% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said firmly [firmly]" | | 1 | "Eva asked suddenly [suddenly]" | | 2 | "Rory asked gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.309 | | leniency | 0.618 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.109 | |
| 57.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1188 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "gently" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1188 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sanctuary" | | 1 | "foreboding" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "solace" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "tinged" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "unspoken" | | 15 | "glistening" | | 16 | "firmly" | | 17 | "comfortable" | | 18 | "sense of" | | 19 | "comforting" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "the weight of unspoken words" |
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| 94.88% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "d in surprise" | | 1 | "d with regret" | | 2 | "a sense of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1188 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 823 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 6 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 3 | | Nest | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 23 | | Silas | 11 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Eva | 21 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Blackwood" | | 6 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.103 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It was as if no time had passed at all, and yet, everything had changed" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.842 | | wordCount | 1188 | | matches | | 0 | "not glamorous, but it's a life" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 22 | | std | 16.49 | | cv | 0.75 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was more than just a bar; it was a home." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 826 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.029055690072639227 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015738498789346248 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 9.82 | | std | 5.63 | | cv | 0.573 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 55.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally, Eva broke the silence." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She had spent many nights" | | 1 | "She needed to speak with" | | 2 | "He moved with a slight" | | 3 | "His hazel eyes, sharp and" | | 4 | "he greeted, his voice a" | | 5 | "she replied, sliding onto a" | | 6 | "he said with a wry" | | 7 | "she said, her eyes scanning" | | 8 | "she said, taking a sip" | | 9 | "She turned, her breath catching" | | 10 | "It was Eva, her childhood" | | 11 | "Her once vibrant red hair" | | 12 | "They sat in silence for" | | 13 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 14 | "They fell into a comfortable" | | 15 | "It was as if no" | | 16 | "They sat together, the weight" | | 17 | "he asked, his eyes flicking" | | 18 | "They had all changed, but" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 45.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was a" | | 1 | "The green neon sign buzzed" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 3 | "The familiar creak of the" | | 4 | "She had spent many nights" | | 5 | "Tonight, she was here for" | | 6 | "She needed to speak with" | | 7 | "Silas Blackwood stood behind the" | | 8 | "He moved with a slight" | | 9 | "His hazel eyes, sharp and" | | 10 | "he greeted, his voice a" | | 11 | "she replied, sliding onto a" | | 12 | "he said with a wry" | | 13 | "she said, her eyes scanning" | | 14 | "Silas nodded and poured her" | | 15 | "she said, taking a sip" | | 16 | "The warmth of the liquor" | | 17 | "Silas's eyes softened." | | 18 | "She turned, her breath catching" | | 19 | "It was Eva, her childhood" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 65.79% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside, the dim lighting and the scent of aged whiskey created an atmosphere that was both inviting and foreboding." | | 1 | "Eva glanced around the bar, her eyes lingering on Silas for a moment before returning to Rory." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "he greeted, his voice a low rumble" | | 1 | "she said, her eyes scanning the room" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "Eva asked suddenly, her eyes searching Rory's" | | 5 | "he asked, his eyes flicking between the two women" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.036 | |