Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC984EMJ5SJDQRE9VYA31

Run Details

Duration:
19.4s
Cost:
$0.027730
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was a sanctuary of shadows and whispers, a place where secrets felt at home. The green neon sign buzzed faintly above the entrance, casting an eerie glow on the cobblestone street below. Inside, the dim lighting and the scent of aged whiskey created an atmosphere that was both inviting and foreboding. Old maps and black-and-white photographs adorned the walls, each telling a story of a world long past. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, pushed open the heavy wooden door and stepped inside. The familiar creak of the floorboards beneath her feet brought a small, nostalgic smile to her lips. She had spent many nights here, seeking solace in the dim corners of the bar. Tonight, she was here for a different reason. She needed to speak with Silas. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the low light. He moved with a slight limp, a reminder of a life lived on the edge. His hazel eyes, sharp and observant, flicked up as Rory approached. "Rory," he greeted, his voice a low rumble. "It's been a while." "Too long, Si," she replied, sliding onto a barstool. "How's the knee?" "Still creaky, but it gets me where I need to go," he said with a wry smile. "What brings you here tonight?" "Just needed a familiar face," she said, her eyes scanning the room. "And maybe a drink." Silas nodded and poured her a glass of whiskey, sliding it across the bar. "On the house." "Thanks," she said, taking a sip. The warmth of the liquor spread through her, easing some of the tension in her shoulders. "How's business?" "Steady," he replied. "The usual crowd. Though we did have a bit of excitement last week. Some bloke tried to start a fight. Didn't end well for him." Rory chuckled. "I can imagine. You always did have a way of handling trouble." Silas's eyes softened. "And you always had a way of finding it." Before Rory could respond, the door to the bar creaked open again. She turned, her breath catching in her throat as she saw who had entered. It was Eva, her childhood friend, the one who had convinced her to flee to London all those years ago. But Eva looked different now. Her once vibrant red hair was now a muted auburn, and there was a hardness in her eyes that hadn't been there before. "Eva?" Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper. Eva's eyes widened in surprise. "Rory? Is that really you?" "It's me," Rory said, standing up. "It's been a long time." Eva approached slowly, as if unsure whether to believe her eyes. "I can't believe it. I thought you were still in Cardiff." "I left," Rory said, her voice tinged with regret. "I had to get away." Eva nodded, her expression unreadable. "I understand. I just... I didn't expect to see you here." "Neither did I," Rory admitted. "What brings you to The Raven's Nest?" Eva glanced around the bar, her eyes lingering on Silas for a moment before returning to Rory. "I was looking for someone. But it seems I've found someone else instead." Rory gestured to the barstool beside her. "Sit. Let's catch up." Eva hesitated for a moment before taking the seat. Silas, sensing the need for privacy, moved to the other end of the bar, giving them space. "So," Rory began, unsure of where to start. "How have you been?" Eva sighed, running a hand through her hair. "It's been... complicated. After you left, things changed. I changed." Rory nodded, understanding all too well. "I know the feeling." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of unspoken words hanging between them. Finally, Eva broke the silence. "Do you remember the last time we saw each other?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Rory nodded, her throat tight. "How could I forget? It was the night I left Cardiff. You told me to run, to get away from Evan." Eva's eyes softened. "I was so scared for you. I didn't know what else to do." "You did the right thing," Rory said, reaching out to squeeze Eva's hand. "You saved me." Eva looked down at their joined hands, her eyes glistening with unshed tears. "I just wish I could have done more." "You did enough," Rory said firmly. "More than enough." Eva took a deep breath, composing herself. "What about you? How have you been?" Rory shrugged, a small smile playing on her lips. "I've been getting by. Working part-time at a restaurant, living above Silas's bar. It's not glamorous, but it's a life." Eva nodded, a hint of a smile on her lips. "I'm glad you're safe." They fell into a comfortable silence, the years of separation slowly melting away. It was as if no time had passed at all, and yet, everything had changed. "Do you ever think about going back?" Eva asked suddenly, her eyes searching Rory's. Rory shook her head. "Cardiff isn't home anymore. London is. Besides, there's nothing for me there." Eva nodded, understanding. "I feel the same way. I've been moving around a lot, trying to find my place." "Have you found it?" Rory asked gently. Eva sighed. "Not yet. But I'm getting closer." Rory smiled. "That's all we can do, isn't it? Keep moving forward, one step at a time." Eva returned the smile, a sense of peace settling over her. "Yeah. One step at a time." They sat together, the weight of the past slowly lifting. There were still scars, still wounds that hadn't fully healed, but they were together again. And that was enough. Silas returned, his presence a comforting anchor. "Everything alright here?" he asked, his eyes flicking between the two women. Rory nodded. "Yeah, Si. Everything's alright." Eva looked at Silas, a hint of curiosity in her eyes. "You must be Silas. Rory's told me about you." Silas smiled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "All good things, I hope." Eva chuckled. "Mostly." Silas laughed, a deep, rumbling sound. "I'll take it." Rory looked at her two friends, a sense of contentment washing over her. For the first time in a long time, she felt at peace. The Raven's Nest had always been a place of refuge, a place where she could find herself. And now, it was a place where she could reconnect with the people who mattered most. As the night wore on, the three of them talked and laughed, sharing stories and memories. The weight of time and unspoken regret slowly faded, replaced by a sense of hope and possibility. They had all changed, but in the end, they were still the same. And that was enough. The green neon sign outside buzzed softly, casting its glow on the cobblestone street. Inside, the warmth of friendship and the promise of new beginnings filled the air. The Raven's Nest was more than just a bar; it was a home. And for Rory, Eva, and Silas, it was a place where they could find their way back to each other, one step at a time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said firmly [firmly]"
16.1074% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count4
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
4"barely above a whisper"
5"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"foreboding"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"solace"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"tinged"
2"flicked"
3"glistening"
4"foreboding"
5"unspoken"
6"unreadable"
7"solace"
8"weight"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"the weight of unspoken words"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences83
matches
0"a sense of hope"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean22
std16.49
cv0.75
sampleLengths
071
163
240
312
412
522
616
717
824
928
1014
1112
1274
139
1410
1511
1622
1714
1816
1912
2030
2111
2226
2312
2418
2510
2620
2718
2826
2916
3016
3121
329
3314
3429
3514
3628
3714
3816
3919
407
418
4217
4317
4429
4519
466
4720
4813
493
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount826
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.029055690072639227
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.015738498789346248
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean9.82
std5.63
cv0.573
sampleLengths
017
118
219
317
417
517
615
78
86
914
1015
1111
128
134
149
153
1617
175
1812
194
2014
213
226
2316
242
253
2625
272
2812
293
309
3112
3214
3320
345
3523
369
375
385
396
405
4111
4211
439
445
455
4611
475
487
4917
55.6474% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners44
27.9412% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"he greeted, his voice a low rumble (greet)"
1"she replied, sliding onto a barstool (reply, slide)"
2"she said, her eyes scanning the room (say, scan)"
3"she said, taking a sip (say, take)"
4"Rory said, standing up (say, stand up)"
5"Rory said, her voice tinged with regret (say, tinged)"
6"Rory admitted (admit)"
7"Rory began, unsure of where to start (begin, unsure start)"
8"Rory said, reaching out to squeeze Eva's hand (say, reach out)"
9"Rory said firmly (say firmly)"
80.3743%