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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC988514NE39N0HJ0ZP7R
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Model:
Ministral 3B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
10.8s
Cost:
$0.000141
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Messages
Meta
AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of old wood and the faintest trace of whiskey, the kind that clung to the air like a memory. Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—stood at the bar, her fingers brushing the cool glass of a gin and tonic before she took a sip. The neon sign above the door
flickered
, casting a greenish glow over the room, the same hue that had once been her favorite color. She hadn’t been here in years. Not since the day she’d left London, not since the man who’d called himself Evan had left her with a bruise on her ribs and a promise she’d never make again. Silas Blackwood, Si to his friends, was leaning against the counter, his silver signet ring catching the light as he tapped it against the edge of a whiskey glass. His auburn hair
was streaked
with gray now, his beard neatly trimmed but with the faintest hint of stubble along his jawline. He looked up as she approached, his hazel eyes sharp with something like recognition before he forced a smile. “Rory,” he said, his voice low. “You look… different.” She didn’t answer right away. The change in him wasn’t just the gray in his hair—it was the way his shoulders were broader, the way his posture carried an
unspoken
weight
. He’d always been tall, but now there was something in his stance, like he
was carrying
the world on his shoulders. The bar
was crowded
, the usual hum of conversation thick in the air, but neither of them
seemed to
notice. “You look the same,” she said, finally. “Same old Si.” Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been a laugh if it weren’t so tight. “You’re still the same Rory.” She took another sip of her drink, the ice cold against her tongue. “I’m not sure I am.” A waiter in a crisp black shirt passed by, his eyes lingering on Rory before moving on. Silas watched him, his gaze sharp. “You’re working here?” “No,” she said, shaking her head. “I’m delivering for Yu-Fei Cheung’s.” Silas’s expression didn’t change, but his fingers tightened around his glass. “You’re not in pre-law anymore?” She didn’t answer that either. Instead, she leaned against the bar, the scar on her left wrist—small as it
was—pulsing
faintly with the memory of the accident that had left her with it. “I left Cardiff. Fled London.” Silas’s jaw tightened. “Evan.” She didn’t look away from him. “Evan.” The silence between them was thick, the kind that settled in your bones. The bar’s dim light cast long shadows across the walls, where old maps and black-and-white photographs hung in a haze of dust. Rory knew what he was going to say before he said it. “You should have told me.” She turned to him, her blue eyes bright with something she
tried to
hide. “I didn’t want to.” Silas’s voice was quiet, almost gentle. “You should have.” She shook her head. “I didn’t want to talk about it.” “You should have.” The waiter returned with their drinks, but Rory didn’t reach for hers. Instead, she watched Silas as he sipped his whiskey, the amber liquid catching the light. “I’m not the same person I was,” she said
softly
. “You’re not either.” Silas looked at her,
really
looked at her, and for the first time in years, she saw the man she’d known—the one who’d been her friend, her confidant, the one who’d helped her through the worst of it. But there was something else now, something heavier, something that made his eyes darken. “You’re a lawyer now,” he said. She didn’t deny it. “I’m not.” “You’re working for Yu-Fei Cheung’s.” “No, I’m not.” Silas’s gaze
flicked
to the scar on her wrist, then back to her face. “You’re not the same person who left me.” She wanted to argue, but the words stuck in her throat. Instead, she took a breath, her fingers tightening around the glass. “I’m not.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his expression
unreadable
. Then,
slowly
, he reached out and tapped the signet ring on his finger against the edge of the bar. “I’m not either.” The bar was quiet again, the hum of conversation fading into the background. Rory looked around, her eyes taking in the familiar details—the way the maps hung crooked on the wall, the way the photographs
seemed to
watch her like old friends. She thought of the life she’d left behind, the life she’d
tried to
escape. “You know,” she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
, “I used to think I was running from something. But I think I was running *toward* it.” Silas didn’t answer right away. He
was watching
her, his expression
unreadable
, his gaze intense. Then,
slowly
, he reached out and took her hand in his, his fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist. “You’re still running,” he said. She looked down at their hands, the
weight
of his touch heavy in her palm. “I don’t know anymore.” Silas’s thumb brushed against the scar, his voice soft. “You should know.” She looked back up at him, her eyes filled with something she
tried to
hide. “I don’t want to.” Silas released her hand, his fingers lingering for a moment before he stepped back. The bar’s dim light
flickered
, casting long shadows across the walls, the same shadows that had once been her refuge. Rory took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. “You’re not the same person I knew,” she said. Silas nodded, his expression heavy with something she couldn’t quite name. “No,” he said. “I’m not.” The waiter returned with their drinks, but Rory didn’t reach for hers. Instead, she watched Silas as he sipped his whiskey, the amber liquid catching the light. She thought of the life she’d left behind, the life she’d
tried to
escape. “You know,” she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
, “I used to think I was running from something. But I think I was running *toward* it.” Silas didn’t answer right away. He
was watching
her, his expression
unreadable
, his gaze intense. Then,
slowly
, he reached out and took her hand in his, his fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist. “You’re still running,” he said. She looked down at their hands, the
weight
of his touch heavy in her palm. “I don’t know anymore.” Silas’s thumb brushed against the scar, his voice soft. “You should know.” She looked back up at him, her eyes filled with something she
tried to
hide. “I don’t want to.” The bar was quiet again, the hum of conversation fading into the background. The neon sign above the door
flickered
, casting a greenish glow over the room, the same glow that had once been her favorite color. Rory took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. Silas released her hand, his fingers lingering for a moment before he stepped back. The
weight
of their conversation settled between them, heavy and
unspoken
. Rory looked around, her eyes taking in the familiar details—the way the maps hung crooked on the wall, the way the photographs
seemed to
watch her like old friends. “You’re not the same person I knew,” she said. Silas nodded, his expression heavy with something she couldn’t quite name. “No,” he said. “I’m not.” She exhaled, the breath escaping her in a slow, shaky release. The bar’s dim light
flickered
, and for a moment, she was back in Cardiff, standing in the hallway after a long night of drinking, Evan’s voice ringing in her ears. She was back in London, standing in the flat above Silas’s bar, the
weight
of her past pressing down on her like a physical force. “You’re not the same person I knew,” she repeated, her voice
barely above a whisper
. Silas’s gaze was steady, his expression unyielding. “No,” he said again, his voice quiet but firm. “I’m not.” She looked at him,
really
looked at him, and for the first time in years, she saw the man she’d known—the one who’d been her friend, her confidant. But there was something else now, something heavier, something that made his eyes darken with something she couldn’t quite name. “You know,” she said, her voice soft, “I used to think I was running from something. But I think I was running *toward* it.” Silas didn’t answer right away. He
was watching
her, his expression heavy with something she couldn’t quite read. Then,
slowly
, he reached out and took her hand in his, his fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist. “You’re still running,” he said. She looked down at their hands, the
weight
of his touch heavy in her palm. “I don’t know anymore.” Silas’s thumb brushed against the scar, his voice gentle. “You should know.” She looked back up at him, her eyes filled with something she
tried to
hide. “I don’t want to.” The bar’s dim light
flickered
, casting long shadows across the walls, the same shadows that had once been her refuge. Rory took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. Silas released her hand, his fingers lingering for a moment before he stepped back. The silence between them was heavy, the kind that settled in your bones. Rory looked around, her eyes taking in the familiar details—the way the maps hung crooked on the wall, the way the photographs
seemed to
watch her like old friends. “You’re not the same person I knew,” she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. Silas nodded, his expression heavy with something she couldn’t quite name. “No,” he said. “I’m not.” She exhaled, the breath escaping her in a slow, shaky release. The neon sign
flickered
once more, and for a moment, she was back in the past, standing in the same bar, the same room, the same
weight
of
unspoken
words pressing down on her. “You know,” she said, her voice soft, “I used to think I was running from something. But I think I was running *toward* it.” Silas didn’t answer right away. He
was watching
her, his gaze intense, his expression unyielding. Then,
slowly
, he reached out and took her hand in his, his fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist. “You’re still running,” he said. She looked down at their hands, the
weight
of his touch heavy in her palm. “I don’t know anymore.” Silas’s thumb brushed against the scar, his voice gentle. “You should know.” She looked back up at him, her eyes filled with a mix of regret and something else, something she couldn’t quite define. The bar’s dim light
flickered
, the neon sign casting a greenish glow over the room, the same glow that had once been her comfort. “You’re not the same person I knew,” she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. Silas nodded, his expression heavy with something she couldn’t quite read. “No,” he said. “I’m not.” The silence stretched between them, the
weight
of their conversation pressing down on them like a physical force. Rory took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. “You know what?” she said, her voice soft but firm. “I think I’m done running.” Silas looked at her, his expression
unreadable
. “You’re sure?” She nodded, her eyes meeting his. “I am.” Silas studied her for a moment, his gaze intense. Then,
slowly
, he reached out and took her hand in his, his fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist once more. “Good,” he said, his voice quiet but filled with something she couldn’t quite understand. “Good.” The bar’s dim light
flickered
once more, casting long shadows across the walls. Rory looked around, her eyes taking in the familiar details—the way the maps hung crooked on the wall, the way the photographs
seemed to
watch her like old friends. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. “I’m not the same person I was,” she said. Silas nodded, his expression heavy with something she couldn’t quite name. “No,” he said. “I’m not.” And in that moment, between the flickering neon sign and the
weight
of their
unspoken
words, Rory knew she was finally home.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
27
adverbTagCount
9
adverbTags
0
"she said, finally [finally]"
1
"she said softly [softly]"
2
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
3
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
4
"she repeated, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
5
"he said again, his voice quiet but firm [again]"
6
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
7
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
8
"he said, his voice quiet but filled with something she couldn’t quite understand [quite]"
31.5738%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
2046
totalAiIsmAdverbs
14
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
6
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
5
3
adverb
"really"
count
2
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"softly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
3
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
2046
totalAiIsms
27
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
8
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"unspoken"
count
4
3
word
"unreadable"
count
4
4
word
"weight"
count
10
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"flicked"
2
"unspoken"
3
"unreadable"
4
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
132
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
11
narrationSentences
132
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
175
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
82
mean
24.77
std
19.16
cv
0.774
sampleLengths
0
110
1
70
2
9
3
72
4
10
5
23
6
18
7
26
8
11
9
16
10
38
11
4
12
7
13
47
14
5
15
18
16
9
17
11
18
3
19
40
20
52
21
6
22
6
23
5
24
3
25
22
26
24
27
32
28
56
29
27
30
35
31
5
32
19
33
12
34
19
35
45
36
9
37
16
38
41
39
27
40
35
41
5
42
19
43
12
44
19
45
48
46
54
47
9
48
16
49
66
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
132
matches
0
"was streaked"
1
"was crowded"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
6
totalVerbs
289
matches
0
"was carrying"
1
"was—pulsing"
2
"was watching"
3
"was watching"
4
"was watching"
5
"was watching"
89.7984%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1741
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"ice cold against her"
adverbCount
78
adverbRatio
0.04480183802412407
lyAdverbCount
18
lyAdverbRatio
0.010338885697874785
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
175
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
175
mean
11.61
std
8.26
cv
0.712
sampleLengths
0
23
1
26
2
24
3
6
4
31
5
29
6
22
7
19
8
6
9
3
10
5
11
26
12
21
13
20
14
7
15
3
16
18
17
5
18
13
19
5
20
17
21
6
22
3
23
6
24
5
25
11
26
5
27
5
28
28
29
5
30
3
31
1
32
6
33
1
34
13
35
22
36
12
37
5
38
14
39
4
40
6
41
3
42
4
43
7
44
3
45
12
46
15
47
10
48
3
49
38
48.2857%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.10857142857142857
totalSentences
175
uniqueOpeners
19
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
27
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"she said, shaking her head (say, shake)"
1
"she said softly (say softly)"
2
"she repeated, her voice barely above a whisper (repeat)"
3
"he said again, his voice quiet but firm (say again)"
4
"he said, his voice quiet but filled with something she couldn’t quite understand (say, fill does not quite understand)"
81.8753%