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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98A5EMF5QC3NP00BHBX
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.001647
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The moon hung heavy in the sky, a pale specter peering through the skeletal branches of the ancient oaks that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove. Aurora Carter, known to her friends simply as Rory, stood at the edge of the clearing, the
weight
of the Heartstone Pendant nestled between her breasts, its deep crimson glow a
stark
contrast to the silver chain that held it.
The air was thick with
the scent of wildflowers, an impossible fragrance in the dead of night, yet here they bloomed in defiance of the season. Rory's breath came out in misty puffs, the chill of the autumn air seeping through her leather jacket. She had come to the Grove on the insistence of a cryptic note left at her flat, a note that promised answers about the strange artifact she wore and the forces that
seemed to
be gathering around her. She stepped over the threshold, the ground beneath her boots shifting from the hard pack of Richmond Park to the spongy loam of the Grove. The change was immediate, the sounds of the city fading to a distant whisper, replaced by the eerie
symphony
of nocturnal creatures that called this place home. Rory's bright blue eyes scanned the clearing, the moonlight casting long, twisted shadows that danced with her e
very
movement. The note had mentioned a stone circle at the heart of the Grove, a place where she could supposedly commune with the spirits of the Fae and learn more about the power that pulsed within the Heartstone. As she ventured deeper into the grove, the air grew colder, the hair on the back of her neck standing on end. She could feel a presence, a watchful gaze that
seemed to
follow her e
very
step. The sounds of the night became muted, as if the Grove itself
was holding
its breath. A low, mournful wail pierced the silence, an
otherworldly
cry that
seemed to
come from e
very
where and nowhere at once. Rory's pulse quickened, her hand instinctively reaching for the pendant, its warmth a comforting presence against her skin. She pressed on, the stone circle now visible through the tangled underbrush. The ancient stones stood like
sentinels
, their surfaces slick with moss and time. As she approached, the Heartstone
began to
pulse with a rhythm that matched the beating of her own heart. Rory entered the circle, the air inside noticeably warmer, the stones radiating an energy that prickled against her skin. She took a deep breath, closing her eyes as she centered herself, reaching out with her senses, searching for the connection the note had promised. A rustle of leaves behind her caused Rory's eyes to snap open, her body tensing as she turned to face the intrusion. But there was nothing there, only the shifting shadows cast by the restless trees. The wail came again, closer this time, and with it, a chill that
seemed to
seep into her
very
bones. Rory's breath caught in her throat as she realized she was not alone. Figures emerged from the treeline, their forms little more than darker patches against the night, their eyes glowing with an eerie, unnatural light. She could feel the Heartstone's warmth intensifying, its glow now visible even through the fabric of her shirt. The figures drew closer, their movements silent and fluid, their features obscured by the darkness. Rory's mind raced, her fight-or-flight instinct kicking in. She had come to the Grove seeking answers, but now she found herself besieged by questions. Who were these beings, and what did they want with her? One of the figures stepped forward, its eyes locking onto hers. There was an intelligence there, ancient and unfathomable, a depth that made Rory's head swim. The figure raised a hand, beckoning her forward, its movements slow and deliberate. The Heartstone pulsed harder, its light now a
beacon
in the darkness. Rory could feel its power coursing through her veins, a wild, untamed force that threatened to overwhelm her. She took a step back, her instincts screaming at her to flee, but her body felt rooted to the spot, held in place by an unseen force. The figure tilted its head, curiosity flickering in its glowing eyes. It spoke, its voice a melody of whispered secrets, a language that Rory should not have understood, yet somehow, she did. "Aurora Carter," it intoned, her name a sacred incantation on its lips. "Bearer of the Heartstone, child of two worlds. What seek you in the dwelling of the ancient ones?" Rory swallowed hard, her voice steady despite the fear that gripped her. "I seek understanding," she replied, her words
echoing
through the Grove. "I seek the truth of who I am and what I carry." The figure inclined its head, a gesture of acknowledgment. "The Heartstone does not grant its secrets
lightly
," it said. "You stand upon the cusp of revelation, but be warned, the path you tread is fraught with peril." As it spoke, the other figures
began to
circle the stone circle, their movements hypnotic, their eyes never leaving her. Rory could feel the air around her charging with energy, the hairs on her arms standing on end as the Grove itself
seemed to
come alive with
anticipation
. The figure before her extended its hand, and in its palm lay a small, silver key, its
intricate
design
glinting
in the moonlight. "This is the Key of Dymas," it said, its voice resonating with power. "With it, you may unlock the Heartstone's true potential, but know this, Aurora Carter, once the seal is broken, there is no going back. The path you choose this night will alter the fabric of your existence." Rory's hand
trembled
as she reached out, her fingers brushing against the cool metal of the key. She could feel the rightness of it, the undeniable pull that
seemed to
align with the
very
core of her being. With a deep breath, she closed her hand around the key, its presence a solid
weight
in her palm. The Heartstone pulsed once, twice, and then, with a burst of crimson light, it shattered the silence of the Grove, its power unfurling like the petals of a blooming flower. The figures recoiled, their forms dissolving into the night as the Grove erupted into chaos. The ground shook, the stones of the circle groaning as they
were imbued
with the released energy. Rory fell to her knees, the key still clutched in her hand, her body wracked with the force of the Heartstone's awakening. When the tremors subsided, and the light dimmed, Rory found herself alone once more, the stone circle now a ring of charred earth, the air heavy with the scent of ozone and burnt grass. She rose to her feet, the Heartstone now a dormant
weight
against her chest, its glow extinguished, its warmth a mere memory. The Key of Dymas lay at her feet, its purpose fulfilled, its power spent. Rory
look
ed around the deserted Grove, the silence deafening after the
cacophony
of moments before. She had come seeking answers, and though she was far from understanding the full extent of the power she now wielded, she knew one thing with absolute certainty—her life would never be the same. With a last, lingering
look
at the stone circle, Rory turned and walked back toward the boundary of the Grove, the moonlight guiding her away from the place where her destiny had irrevocably shifted. The Fae Grove, with all its mystery and danger, would forever be
etched
into her memory, a reminder of the night she embraced her true nature and the heavy burden of the Heartstone.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
76.5074%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1277
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
2
highlights
0
"lightly"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1277
totalAiIsms
15
found
0
word
"cacophony"
count
1
1
word
"symphony"
count
1
2
word
"beacon"
count
1
3
word
"sentinels"
count
1
4
word
"glinting"
count
1
5
word
"trembled"
count
1
6
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
7
word
"intricate"
count
1
8
word
"stark"
count
1
9
word
"anticipation"
count
1
10
word
"weight"
count
3
11
word
"echoing"
count
1
12
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"cacophony"
1
"symphony"
2
"beacon"
3
"sentinels"
4
"glinting"
5
"trembled"
6
"otherworldly"
7
"intricate"
8
"stark"
9
"anticipation"
10
"weight"
11
"echoing"
12
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"The air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
60
matches
(empty)
86.9565%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
60
filterMatches
0
"look"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
64
matches
(empty)
38.1645%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
27
mean
47.19
std
13.38
cv
0.284
sampleLengths
0
67
1
82
2
52
3
56
4
53
5
38
6
44
7
44
8
36
9
56
10
33
11
35
12
39
13
57
14
32
15
30
16
35
17
37
18
48
19
73
20
38
21
49
22
54
23
34
24
36
25
49
26
67
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
60
matches
0
"were imbued"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
173
matches
0
"was holding"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1173
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.02557544757033248
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.005967604433077579
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
64
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
98.2903%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
64
mean
19.91
std
7.88
cv
0.396
sampleLengths
0
27
1
40
2
26
3
18
4
38
5
25
6
27
7
19
8
37
9
22
10
15
11
16
12
20
13
18
14
12
15
13
16
19
17
19
18
25
19
22
20
14
21
20
22
13
23
23
24
18
25
15
26
8
27
16
28
11
29
11
30
15
31
13
32
12
33
18
34
27
35
11
36
21
37
12
38
18
39
12
40
11
41
12
42
9
43
10
44
18
45
20
46
28
47
23
48
13
49
37
40.6250%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.28125
totalSentences
64
uniqueOpeners
18
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"it intoned, her name a sacred incantation on its lips (intoned, name)"
1
"she replied, her words echoing through the Grove (reply, echo)"
2
"it said, its voice resonating with power (say, resonate)"
78.8555%