Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98ATSRDCKAHJD3Z0ECB

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Duration:
33.7s
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$0.001827
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the murmur of evening conversation, a symphony of clinking glasses, and the occasional burst of laughter. The green neon sign above the entrance cast a sickly glow over the cobblestone street outside, a beacon for the lost and weary souls of Soho. Inside, the walls were a tapestry of yesteryear, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that whispered tales of adventure and intrigue. Aurora Carter, known to her friends simply as Rory, wound her way through the crowd, balancing a tray of empty pint glasses. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair swayed with each deft maneuver, and her bright blue eyes scanned the patrons for any who might need her services next. The bar was her second home, a sanctuary from the relentless pace of London life, and Silas Blackwood, the owner, was the gruff but kind guardian of this sanctum. As she reached the bar, she caught sight of Silas polishing a glass with a clean rag, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim light. His hazel eyes, always sharp and observant, met hers, and he offered her a nod of approval. Rory returned the gesture with a smile, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist twinging slightly as she set the tray down. It was then that the door swung open, and a gust of cool night air swept into the room. The chime of the entrance bell was lost in the cacophony, but Rory's attention was drawn to the man who entered. He was tall, with a presence that seemed to command the room despite his slight limp. His hair was a distinguished grey, neatly combed, and his eyes, a piercing blue, swept over the bar as if searching for something—or someone. Rory's heart skipped a beat. She knew that gaze, had seen it reflected in her own mirror during moments of introspection. It was a gaze that had once held warmth and mischief, but now seemed burdened with unspoken tales of a life led far from the cobblestone streets of their shared past. "Evan?" Rory's voice was barely above a whisper, but it carried across the bar, catching the man's attention. His eyes locked onto hers, and for a moment, the world stood still. Evan's face broke into a wide, almost relieved smile, the lines around his eyes deepening. "Rory," he said, his voice rich with nostalgia. "I can't believe it's you." Silas watched the exchange, his hand stilling on the glass. He recognized the name, had heard Rory speak of Evan in hushed, painful tones late at night when the bar was empty and the weight of memory grew too heavy to bear alone. Evan made his way to the bar, his limp more pronounced as he navigated the crowded room. Rory felt a mixture of emotions roil within her—surprise, anger, and an aching sadness that she had thought long buried. She had left Cardiff, left Evan, to escape the shadow he had cast over her life. And yet, here he was, standing before her as if no time had passed at all. "What brings you to London?" Rory asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. "Business," Evan replied, his eyes never leaving hers. "And perhaps a chance to right some old wrongs." Silas cleared his throat, setting the polished glass on the shelf behind him. "Can I get you something to drink, Evan?" he asked, extending a hand in greeting. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light, a silent testament to his own chequered past. Evan nodded, shaking Silas' hand. "A whiskey, neat. The best you've got." Silas poured the drink, sliding it across the bar with a practiced ease. "You two know each other, then?" he inquired, his tone casual, but his eyes sharp. "We do," Evan said, raising his glass in a mock salute. "Rory and I go way back. Don't we, love?" Rory bristled at the endearment, a stark reminder of the control he once held over her. "We did," she corrected, her voice cool. "A long time ago." Evan's smile faltered, and for a moment, Rory saw a flicker of the man she had once known—vulnerable, unsure. "I've thought about you often, Rory," he confessed, his gaze dropping to the scar on her wrist. "I've regretted—everything." The air between them crackled with tension, a testament to the history they shared. Rory's mind raced, memories flooding back unbidden—laughter that had turned to tears, promises that had crumbled to dust. She had rebuilt her life piece by piece, had found solace in the chaos of the city and the quiet wisdom of Silas. She was no longer the girl who had fled Cardiff in the dead of night. "Regret is a heavy burden, Evan," Rory said softly, her eyes meeting his with a steady resolve. "But we all have to carry our own." Evan's shoulders sagged, the bravado draining from him as he acknowledged the truth in her words. "You're right," he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper. "I suppose I'm here hoping for forgiveness. Or at least a chance to make amends." Silas watched the exchange, his hand resting on the bar. He had seen this dance before—the push and pull of old wounds and the fraught search for redemption. He knew better than to interfere, understood that some things had to be worked out in the quiet spaces between words. Rory took a deep breath, her eyes never leaving Evan's. "Maybe, in time, we can find some semblance of closure," she offered, her voice laced with a cautious optimism. "But it won't be easy, and it won't be quick." Evan nodded, the weight of his regret evident in the slump of his shoulders. "I understand," he said, his voice thick with emotion. "I'll take it—whatever you're willing to give." As the night wore on, the crowd thinned, leaving Rory, Silas, and Evan in a quiet corner of the bar. The tension that had initially filled the air softened, replaced by a tentative truce. They spoke of times gone by, of the paths their lives had taken since they had last parted ways. Rory listened as Evan recounted his travels, his triumphs and failures, and she found herself sharing her own stories—of her work at the Golden Empress, of the flat above the bar, and of the peace she had found in the rhythm of her new life. As the hours slipped by, the green neon sign outside flickered and dimmed, signaling the end of another night at The Raven's Nest. Evan finished his drink and rose to leave, his gaze lingering on Rory for a moment longer than necessary. "Thank you, Rory," he said, his voice sincere. "For listening, for considering the possibility of forgiveness. It means more to me than you could know." Rory nodded, a small smile playing on her lips. "Take care of yourself, Evan," she replied, her tone genuine. "Life's too short for lingering shadows." Evan offered a final nod to both Rory and Silas before turning to leave. The chime of the entrance bell sang out once more, a solitary note in the stillness of the early morning. As the door closed behind him, Rory let out a breath she hadn't realized she was holding. Silas poured them each a drink, pushing one towards her with a knowing look. "To old ghosts and new beginnings," he toasted, raising his glass. Rory lifted her own, the amber liquid catching the light as she mirrored his gesture. "To old ghosts and new beginnings," she echoed, the weight of the past settling into a place of quiet acceptance within her heart. They drank in silence, the maps on the walls seeming to whisper of journeys yet to be taken, and the photographs observing the quiet celebration of a battle hard-won. In the warmth of The Raven's Nest, with Silas by her side, Rory felt the threads of her past weave into the tapestry of her future—a future that, while forever marked by the shadow of regret, was also bright with the promise of healing and the strength of resilience.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said softly, her eyes meeting his with a steady resolve [softly]"
1"he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
70.7602% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"cacophony"
count1
1
word"symphony"
count1
2
word"tapestry"
count2
3
word"testament"
count2
4
word"beacon"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"solitary"
count1
11
word"solace"
count1
12
word"weight"
count3
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"cacophony"
1"symphony"
2"tapestry"
3"testament"
4"beacon"
5"sanctuary"
6"flickered"
7"flicker"
8"unspoken"
9"stark"
10"solitary"
11"solace"
12"weight"
13"dance"
14"echoed"
15"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"knew that gaze"
1"understood that some"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean42.28
std22.2
cv0.525
sampleLengths
069
177
265
380
452
531
628
743
869
914
1017
1147
1212
1328
1420
1527
1638
1770
1825
1941
2049
2139
2230
2398
2442
2525
2625
2734
2831
2911
3038
3178
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"was lost was drawn"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was, standing"
1"was holding"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1195
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0200836820083682
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007531380753138075
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean16.3
std8.07
cv0.495
sampleLengths
021
126
222
322
426
529
625
717
823
919
1021
1116
1224
135
1416
1531
1618
1713
1815
198
205
2110
2233
2317
2420
2516
2616
2714
288
299
3013
3115
3219
335
347
3513
3615
3711
389
3916
407
414
4219
4317
442
4514
4618
4723
4815
4917
53.0120% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3614457831325301
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners30
18.7500% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Evan replied, his eyes never leaving hers (reply, do not never leave)"
1"inquired (inquire)"
2"Evan said, raising his glass in a mock salute (say, raise)"
3"she corrected, her voice cool (correct)"
4"he confessed, his gaze dropping to the scar on her wrist (confess, drop)"
5"Rory said softly, her eyes meeting his with a steady resolve (say softly, meet)"
6"he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper (admit)"
7"she offered, her voice laced with a cautious optimism (offer, lace)"
8"he toasted, raising his glass (toast, raise)"
9"she echoed, the weight of the past settling into a place of quiet acceptance within her heart (echo, settle)"
84.0111%