Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98BYH5JQY305WWT2GDD

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Duration:
1m 53s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The dim lights of The Raven's Nest cast long shadows across Silas Blackwood's face as he wiped down the glossy surface of the mahogany bar. His movements were unhurried, the years having etched a calm reserve into his features. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted in the soft light as he worked, a small reminder of the life he'd left behind. But the past has a way of finding you, even in the quiet moments. "Evening, Si," came a familiar voice from the doorway, a wry smile shaping itself around the words. Silas looked up, his hazel eyes widening for a moment before he regained his composure. "Aurora Carter. It's been too long," he replied, his voice a low, steady rumble as if the years between them were nothing more than a thin sheet of paper, easily ripped through. Rory stepped further into the bar, letting the door close softly behind her. She'd changed since the last time they'd been in the same room—her black hair was shorter, her blue eyes harder. A small, crescent-shaped scar was now a part of the landscape of her left wrist, a map of new stories and harsher roads traveled. She slid onto a bar stool, their eyes locking across the expanse of wood and glass. "You look good, Si. Retirement obviously agrees with you," she said, her tone light but her gaze searching, trying to read the lines time had etched into him. Silas chuckled, the sound low and deep. "You look like you've been through a war, Rory. But there's a fire in you now, brighter than what the years have taken." Rory laughed, the sound unexpectedly sharp, brittle. "Oh, you have no idea, old friend." They lapsed into silence, the weight of the unspoken pressing against them like a physical thing. Rory glanced around the bar, noting the old maps, the black-and-white photographs that hadn't been there the last time. Silas watched her, read the tension in her shoulders, the way her fingers tapped an erratic beat against the bar top. "Why don't you tell me what's brought you back here?" Silas asked, his words an invitation rather than a question. Rory sighed, a long, tired sound that seemed to carry the weight of worlds. "All roads lead back to the places we started, don't they? I needed to remind myself of where I came from. Of what I was fighting for." Silas nodded, knowingly. He'd been down those roads himself, more times than he cared to count. "And what was the verdict?" She met his gaze, unflinching. "That the world's a harder place than I thought it was. That maybe the dreams we had were just that—dreams. But then..." She hesitated, her fingers tracing the rim of the glass Silas had placed in front of her without her noticing. "Then I realized, it's not about how hard the world is. It's about how much we're willing to fight for the dreams, no matter what." Silas leaned against the bar, closer to her, his voice low, intense. "That's the mark of who you are, Rory. A fighter. Always have been." She smiled then, really smiled, and for a moment, the years between them slipped away. "You always had a way of making things clear, Si." "Time gives us that clarity, if we're willing to listen." He paused, considering his next words carefully. "You're not here just for philosophical discussions, Rory. What do you need?" Rory gathered her thoughts, her determination solidifying in front of him. "I need a job. Something off-the-books. You still got connections in that world?" Silas studied her for a long moment, the weight of their shared past, of the lives they'd left behind, hanging heavy between them. "I might be retired, but the world doesn't stop turning. There's always work for someone with your particular set of skills." Rory nodded, a flicker of relief passing over her face, quickly masked. "I hoped you'd say that." "One condition," Silas said, his voice firm, leaving no room for argument. "You keep the job and your past in this world separate. The moment they bleed together is the moment everything falls apart." Rory started to protest but Silas cut her off with a look, the steel in his eyes a reminder of the man he'd once been. "Non-negotiable, Rory. You want my help, those are the terms." She relented, a smirk tugging at the corner of her mouth. "Deal." They shook hands, the signet ring on Silas' hand cold against her skin, a seal on their agreement. The bar was quiet around them, an island of stillness in the chaos of the city outside. "I have a delivery job tomorrow for Yu-Fei," Rory said, changing the subject with an ease born of long practice. "Want to come along for old times' sake?" Silas smiled, the ghosts of their younger selves flitting across his face. "Wouldn't miss it for the world." And just like that, the years slipped away once more, leaving them in a moment that was both new and familiar, heavy with the memories of what was and the promise of what could be. As the night wrapped around The Raven's Nest, Silas and Rory found a fragile peace in the quiet corners of the past, and the promise of the future. Outside, London hummed with a life of its own, oblivious to the reunion taking place within the dimly lit bar. But within its walls, a new chapter was unfurling, one full of old friends, new dreams, and the unyielding determination to fight for the world they wanted to see.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.7778% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he replied, his voice a low, steady rumble as if the years between them were nothing more than a thin sheet of paper, easily ripped through [more easily]"
47.0339% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount944
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"knowingly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"knowingly"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
4"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.8475% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount944
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"flicker"
1"unspoken"
2"weight"
3"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"like that, the"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean35.96
std18.27
cv0.508
sampleLengths
078
132
232
373
428
530
614
756
820
941
1021
1172
1225
1325
1429
1524
1644
1717
1834
1935
2012
2135
2228
2318
2463
2549
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"were unhurried"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs98
matches
0"was unfurling"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount662
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"unspoken pressing against them"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03172205438066465
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012084592145015106
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean16.7
std8.36
cv0.501
sampleLengths
025
114
225
314
417
515
632
713
820
924
1016
1128
127
1323
147
157
1616
1719
1821
1920
2014
2127
223
2313
245
255
2642
2725
2812
2913
3015
3110
3217
3312
3411
3513
3623
3721
3812
395
4012
4122
4225
4310
4411
451
4618
4717
4820
498
80.3571% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.48214285714285715
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners27
8.3333% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"came a familiar voice from the doorway, a wry smile shaping itself around the words (come shape)"
1"he replied, his voice a low, steady rumble as if the years between them were nothing more than a thin sheet of paper, easily ripped through (reply, be easily rip)"
2"she said, her tone light but her gaze searching, trying to read the lines time had etched into him (say, search, try read time etch)"
3"Rory said, changing the subject with an ease born of long practice (say, change)"
83.9617%