| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 992 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 992 | | totalAiIsms | 41 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "pounding" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "scanned" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "sentinels" | | 17 | "racing" | | 18 | "hulking" | | 19 | "reminder" | | 20 | "oppressive" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a shiver ran down her spine" | | 1 | "eyes narrowed" | | 2 | "a sense of dread" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of dread" | | 1 | "d with warmth" |
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| 36.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 992 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 981 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.735 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a struggle, as if the very ai" |
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| 99.19% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.008 | | wordCount | 992 | | matches | | 0 | "not to go, but Rory had waved off their concerns" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 66.52% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 36.74 | | std | 14.06 | | cv | 0.383 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "were conspiring" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 981 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.034658511722731905 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017329255861365953 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 90.62% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 14.38 | | std | 5.41 | | cv | 0.377 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 50.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3188405797101449 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the eerie silence pressing" | | 1 | "Slowly, Rory turned back towards" | | 2 | "Carefully, she began to make" | | 3 | "Only the relentless pulsing of" | | 4 | "Finally, she burst out of" |
| | ratio | 0.077 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for" | | 1 | "Her friends had begged her" | | 2 | "She could handle herself." | | 3 | "She was always the one" | | 4 | "She strained to peer into" | | 5 | "she called out, her voice" | | 6 | "It seemed to loom over" | | 7 | "She shivered again, and the" | | 8 | "It had become a familiar" | | 9 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 10 | "She reached out, her fingertips" | | 11 | "She whirled, searching frantically for" | | 12 | "she called out, her voice" | | 13 | "She had to get out" | | 14 | "She took a step backwards," | | 15 | "She turned and ran, heart" |
| | ratio | 0.246 | |
| 90.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove was silent" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "She had come here for" | | 4 | "Something about a message, a" | | 5 | "Her friends had begged her" | | 6 | "She could handle herself." | | 7 | "She was always the one" | | 8 | "The night felt unnaturally still," | | 9 | "That had to be her" | | 10 | "Rory's gaze swept the clearing," | | 11 | "The standing stones, their surfaces" | | 12 | "A twig snapped somewhere in" | | 13 | "She strained to peer into" | | 14 | "she called out, her voice" | | 15 | "It seemed to loom over" | | 16 | "She shivered again, and the" | | 17 | "Rory's fingers trailed along the" | | 18 | "It had become a familiar" | | 19 | "A faint rustling, barely audible," |
| | ratio | 0.738 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It seemed to loom over her, its branches reaching down like grasping claws." | | 1 | "But now, its gentle glow only served to highlight the encroaching darkness, the growing sense of wrongness that pressed in around her." | | 2 | "The pendant's warmth against her skin was a steady, reassuring presence, but it did little to ease the growing unease that gnawed at her." | | 3 | "The pendant bounced against her chest, its warmth a constant reminder of the danger that lurked in the shadows." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice sounding small and uncertain in the vast stillness" | | 1 | "she called out, her voice cracking with uncertainty" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |