Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98DXYRFYV41PJXJXP7A

Run Details

Duration:
33.8s
Cost:
$0.000637
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The crescent moon hung low in the sky, casting an eerie blue light over Richmond Park. Aurora shivered despite the mild night, her breath misting in front of her face. The ancient oak trees seemed to loom taller than usual, their branches reaching towards the dark heavens like the fingers of some skeletal behemoth. She'd come here for a reason, driven by curiosity and perhaps something more — a sense of destiny, of inevitability. The Heartstone Pendant weighed heavy against her chest, its deep crimson gem pulsing with a faint inner glow that matched the quickening beat of her heart. Aurora had never seen the standing stones before, but she knew exactly where to find them, as if the knowledge had always been tucked away in the back of her mind, waiting for the right moment to reveal itself. They marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, a hidden clearing that existed in a pocket between her world and the realm of the Fae. Time moved differently here; an hour inside could be mere minutes or endless days outside. The wrongness of the place crept over her slowly, like a chill seeping into her bones. The sounds of the night — the rustling leaves, the distant hoot of an owl, the whispering breeze — they were all familiar, and yet not quite right. There was something off about the quality of the sounds, as if they were being filtered through water or played back at a slightly different speed. A flicker of movement caught her eye, and she whirled around, but there was nothing there. Just the shadows playing tricks on her tired mind. Aurora shook her head, trying to dispel the growing feeling of unease. She was here for a purpose, and she wouldn't let her imagination get the better of her. She stepped closer to the standing stones, their gnarled surfaces seeming to writhe beneath the moonlight. The air was thicker here, heavy with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed year-round in the grove. Aurora reached out a hand, her fingers brushing against the rough bark of one of the oaks. A sharp crack echoed through the clearing, and she snatched her hand back with a yelp, cradling it against her chest. That was when she heard it — a soft rustling from behind the stones, like the swish of fabric or the scrape of a foot against the ground. Aurora's heart leapt into her throat, and she spun around, her eyes wide and searching. There, just at the edge of her vision, she caught a glimpse of something moving. A shadowy figure, tall and slender, with long, spindly limbs that seemed to bend and twist unnaturally. "I know you're there," she called out, her voice trembling despite her best efforts to keep it steady. "Show yourself." For a long moment, there was nothing but the stillness of the night and the pounding of her own heartbeat in her ears. Then, slowly, the figure emerged from behind the standing stones, stepping into the moonlight with a fluid grace that was at once beautiful and deeply unsettling. It was taller than any human, its limbs elongated and its features sharp and delicate. Its eyes glowed a brilliant gold, seeming to pierce right through Aurora as it fixed its gaze on her. The Fae creature tilted its head, a silent question on its lips, and Aurora felt a strange compulsion to answer, to reveal her purpose in coming here. "The Heartstone," she whispered, her hand closing around the pendant at her throat. "I was sent to bring it back to you." The creature's lips curled into a smile, sharp teeth glinting in the moonlight. It held out a hand, long fingers beckoning her closer. Aurora felt her feet moving before her mind had fully processed the action, drawn towards the Fae as if by some invisible force. She was close enough now to see the intricate patterns woven into the fabric of its robes, swirling lines that seemed to move and change before her very eyes. The scent of wild heather and honey filled her nostrils, intoxicating and overwhelming. "Give it to me," the creature whispered, its voice like silk brushing against her skin. "Give me the Heartstone, and I will grant you a boon beyond your wildest dreams." Aurora's hand shook as she reached up to unclasp the pendant from her neck. The gemstone pulsed with warmth, seeming to resist her touch even as she felt the pull of the Fae's words tugging at her very soul. She hesitated for just a moment, her resolve wavering in the face of the creature's promise. But then she thought of her friends, of Eva and Silas and all the others who had helped her along the way, and she knew that she could not betray them, no matter how tempting the offer might be. "No," she said softly, her voice trembling but her words clear and certain. "I won't give it to you. The Heartstone belongs to the mortal realm, and that's where it will stay." The Fae's eyes narrowed, its smile twisting into a sneer. It took a step closer to her, its presence seeming to fill the entire clearing, and Aurora felt herself shrinking back, her courage faltering in the face of its power. "You foolish girl," it hissed, its voice now like the scrape of metal against stone. "You dare defy me? You dare to keep what is rightfully mine?" Aurora's hand tightened around the pendant, her knuckles turning white with the force of her grip. She looked up at the Fae, meeting its golden gaze with a trembling but determined blue one of her own. "I'm not giving you the Heartstone," she repeated, her voice growing stronger with each word. "I don't care what you do to me. I won't let you have it." The creature stared at her for a long moment, its expression unreadable. Then, with a sudden movement, it turned on its heel and vanished behind the standing stones, leaving nothing but a faint shimmer in the air and the distant echo of its laughter. Aurora stood frozen for a moment, hardly daring to breathe. Then, with a shuddering sigh, she released her grip on the pendant and stumbled back from the boundary of the grove, her heart hammering in her chest. She had done it. She had faced the Fae and survived. But as she made her way back through the dark forest, the echo of its laughter seemed to follow her, a haunting reminder of the danger she had barely escaped and the price she might yet have to pay for her defiance.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
22.2222% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she whispered, her hand closing around the pendant at her throat [around]"
1"she said softly, her voice trembling but her words clear and certain [softly]"
45.8484% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1108
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.7473% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1108
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"wavering"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"processed"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"echo"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"glinting"
2"wavering"
3"silk"
4"processed"
5"unreadable"
6"intricate"
7"echo"
8"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"knew that she"
56.8311% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean46.29
std16.15
cv0.349
sampleLengths
054
146
279
370
454
571
675
720
849
961
1022
1146
1242
1330
1439
1555
1632
1740
1827
1936
2029
2144
2237
2353
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"been tucked"
1"being filtered"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1017
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03736479842674533
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011799410029498525
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean18.52
std8.11
cv0.438
sampleLengths
016
114
224
320
426
539
625
715
816
928
1026
1116
129
1312
1417
1516
1617
1717
1821
1928
2015
2115
2217
2318
242
2523
2626
2715
2819
2927
3013
319
3213
3310
3423
3529
3613
3715
3815
3914
4025
4116
4239
4313
4419
4510
4630
4715
4812
4916
41.1111% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.31666666666666665
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners19
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she called out, her voice trembling despite her best efforts to keep it steady (call out, tremble keep)"
1"she whispered, her hand closing around the pendant at her throat (whisper, close around)"
2"the creature whispered, its voice like silk brushing against her skin (whisper, brush)"
3"she said softly, her voice trembling but her words clear and certain (say softly, tremble clear)"
4"it hissed, its voice now like the scrape of metal against stone (hiss, like)"
5"she repeated, her voice growing stronger with each word (repeat, grow)"
75.0447%