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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98E6MNAKYBXWB5CX5E9
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
34.5s
Cost:
$0.001864
Provider:
Novita
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The Raven's Nest, with its green neon sign casting a
spectral
glow over the cobblestone alley, was a refuge for the weary and the lost. Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of aged wood and spilled beer, a
testament
to countless nights that had seeped into the floorboards. Aurora Carter, known to the regulars as Rory, pushed open the door, the familiar jingle of the bell above her head a small comfort after the day she'd had. She made her way to the bar, her eyes adjusting to the dim light. The walls, adorned with maps of far-off places and photographs of strangers from another time,
seemed to
watch her as she moved. Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner,
was polishing
a glass behind the counter, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light as he worked. "Rory, love," Silas greeted her with a warm smile that didn't quite reach his hazel eyes. "The usual?" She nodded, peeling off her jacket and revealing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a memento from a childhood she'd rather forget. As Silas poured her a pint, she allowed herself a moment to scan the room, her gaze falling on a figure seated alone at a corner table. The man
was hunched
over a glass of whiskey, his once-vibrant auburn hair now shot through with grey. A neatly trimmed beard followed the contours of his jaw, and despite the slight limp in his left leg, he carried himself with an air of quiet authority. Rory's heart skipped a beat. It couldn't be. Silas followed her line of sight and chuckled
softly
. "An old friend of yours just walked in. Goes by the name of Brendan Carter." Rory felt the breath leave her lungs. Brendan Carter, her father's oldest friend and her childhood protector, a man who had vanished from her life as abruptly as he had entered it. She hadn't seen him since she was a teenager, since before everything had changed. With a sense of
trepidation
, she approached the table. Brendan looked up, and for a moment, his eyes, the same bright blue as her own, widened in surprise. Then, a slow smile spread across his face, revealing the familiar creases at the corners of his mouth. "Rory," he said, his voice a rich baritone that stirred memories long buried. "Is it
really
you?" She nodded, finding her voice with difficulty. "It's me, Brendan. It's been a long time." "Too long," he agreed, gesturing for her to sit. As she did, she noticed the silver signet ring on his right hand, a new addition to the man she thought she knew. They sat in silence for a moment, the
weight
of the years between them hanging heavy in the air. Rory took a sip of her pint, the bitter taste grounding her in the present. "You've changed," Brendan finally said, his gaze lingering on the scar on her wrist. Rory laughed, a sound that came out more bitter than she intended. "Haven't we all?" Brendan's smile faded, and he looked down at his hands. "I suppose we have. I heard about Evan... I'm sorry I wasn't there for you." Rory felt a
pang
of old hurt. "You disappeared, Brendan. One day you were there, and the next you were gone. No note, no explanation. Just... gone." He winced, the lines on his face deepening. "I had my reasons, Rory. I never meant to hurt you. I thought it was for the best." "For the best?" she
echoed
, her voice rising despite her best efforts to keep it even. "How could leaving be for the best?" Brendan looked up at her, his eyes filled with a sorrow that took her aback. "I made a mistake, Rory. A big one. And I had to leave to protect you and your family." Rory felt a chill run down her spine. "Protect us? From what?" Brendan hesitated, his gaze darting to Silas, who
was pretending
to be engrossed in cleaning a glass. "From my past. From things I can't even begin to explain here." Rory leaned back in her chair, her mind racing. "Try me," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. Brendan took a deep breath, his fingers tracing the rim of his glass. "I was involved in something... dangerous. Something that followed me to Cardiff. I couldn't risk it touching you or your parents." Rory thought of her father, the barrister with a penchant for justice, and her mother, the teacher who believed in the goodness of people. The thought of them being in danger because of Brendan made her
feel
sick. "So, you just left," she said, the words tasting like ash in her mouth. "I had to," Brendan insisted, his voice
barely above a whisper
. "I thought about reaching out, but the further I stayed away, the safer you all were." Rory shook her head, a sense of disbelief washing over her. "And what about now? Why are you here, Brendan? Why now, after all these years?" He looked at her, his expression one of
profound
weariness. "I'm dying, Rory. Cancer. I came back to make amends, to see the faces of the people I care about one last time." The air
seemed to
vacate the room, leaving Rory struggling to breathe. She reached out, her hand covering his, the coolness of the signet ring against her skin. "I'm sorry," she whispered, her eyes stinging with unshed tears. "I didn't know." Brendan gave her hand a reassuring squeeze. "How could you? I kept so many secrets. But I want you to know, you were like a daughter to me. Leaving you was the hardest thing I've ever done." They sat there, two old friends bound by a shared past and the
unspoken
regrets that came with it. Rory felt the walls she had built around her heart beginning to crumble, the anger and hurt she had harbored for so long giving way to a deep, aching sadness. "I missed you, Brendan," she admitted, her voice barely audible. "Even after everything, I still missed you." Brendan's eyes glistened in the dim light, and he nodded, a silent acknowledgment of the bond they still shared. "I missed you too, Rory. More than you'll ever know." As the night wore on, they talked of old times, of the dreams they had once shared, and the paths their lives had taken. Rory found herself laughing at Brendan's stories, marveling at the man he had become, and grieving for the time they had lost. When it was time to leave, Brendan stood with some difficulty, the toll of his illness evident in the way he moved. He reached into his pocket and handed Rory a small, worn envelope. "I've been holding onto this for a long time," he said. "I think it's time you had it." Rory took the envelope, her name scrawled across the front in a familiar hand. She looked up at Brendan, questions brimming in her eyes, but he merely smiled and placed a hand on her shoulder. "Goodbye, Rory," he said, his voice thick with emotion. "Remember, no matter what, you'll always be my brave, beautiful girl." With that, he turned and walked out of The Raven's Nest, leaving Rory alone with her thoughts and the envelope clutched
tightly
in her hand. She watched him go, the green neon sign casting long shadows across the empty street. As she made her way back to the bar, Silas gave her a knowing look, his hand resting on the counter. "He's a good man, Rory. Just... lost his way for a while." Rory nodded, her throat too tight to speak. She opened the envelope and found an old photograph of herself as a child, her arms thrown around Brendan's neck, her bright blue eyes alight with joy. On the back, in Brendan's neat handwriting, was a simple message: "For the road not taken." She tucked the photograph back into the envelope and signaled for another pint. The night was young, and The Raven's Nest, with its maps of far-off places and photographs of strangers,
seemed to
hold the promise of new beginnings. Rory raised her glass to the empty chair across from her, a silent toast to the past and the future, to the roads taken and those left unexplored. In the end, it wasn't the destination that mattered, but the journey and the connections forged along the way.
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"2026-02-17T01:46:05.7942+00:00"
2/17/2026, 1:46:05 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
12.1212%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"Silas greeted her with a warm smile that didn't quite reach his hazel eyes [quite]"
1
"Brendan finally said, his gaze lingering on the scar on her wrist [finally]"
2
"Brendan insisted, his voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
3
"she admitted, her voice barely audible [barely]"
71.6714%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1412
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"tightly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
3
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
43.3428%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1412
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"testament"
count
1
1
word
"pang"
count
1
2
word
"spectral"
count
1
3
word
"unspoken"
count
1
4
word
"profound"
count
1
5
word
"trepidation"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
1
7
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"testament"
1
"pang"
2
"spectral"
3
"unspoken"
4
"profound"
5
"trepidation"
6
"weight"
7
"echoed"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
70
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
70
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
93
matches
(empty)
83.9387%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
44
mean
31.98
std
14.19
cv
0.444
sampleLengths
0
79
1
58
2
18
3
51
4
54
5
24
6
46
7
46
8
17
9
15
10
32
11
34
12
14
13
15
14
25
15
27
16
26
17
23
18
34
19
12
20
29
21
20
22
34
23
38
24
14
25
27
26
26
27
33
28
28
29
13
30
37
31
49
32
17
33
29
34
46
35
34
36
18
37
35
38
20
39
40
40
33
41
51
42
39
43
47
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
70
matches
0
"was hunched"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
173
matches
0
"was polishing"
1
"was pretending"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1089
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
21
adverbRatio
0.01928374655647383
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.0073461891643709825
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
93
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
93
mean
15.13
std
7.08
cv
0.468
sampleLengths
0
25
1
25
2
29
3
14
4
22
5
22
6
16
7
2
8
24
9
27
10
18
11
28
12
5
13
3
14
9
15
15
16
7
17
25
18
14
19
9
20
19
21
18
22
13
23
4
24
7
25
8
26
9
27
23
28
19
29
15
30
14
31
12
32
3
33
10
34
15
35
7
36
20
37
8
38
18
39
16
40
7
41
15
42
19
43
8
44
4
45
17
46
12
47
9
48
11
49
13
55.9140%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.3548387096774194
totalSentences
93
uniqueOpeners
33
15.9091%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"Silas greeted her with a warm smile that didn't quite reach his hazel eyes (greet does not quite reach)"
1
"he said, his voice a rich baritone that stirred memories long buried (say, bury)"
2
"he agreed, gesturing for her to sit (agree, gesture sit)"
3
"Brendan finally said, his gaze lingering on the scar on her wrist (finally say, linger)"
4
"Brendan insisted, his voice barely above a whisper (insist)"
5
"she whispered, her eyes stinging with unshed tears (whisper, stinging)"
6
"she admitted, her voice barely audible (admit)"
80.9939%