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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98FAKJCSPAM40CZKRPZ
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Model:
Cohere Command R+ (Aug. 2024)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
2m 33s
Cost:
$0.030775
Provider:
Cohere
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
The ancient oak trees
loomed
tall, their gnarled branches reaching towards a starless sky, as Rory stepped
cautiously
into the heart of the Fae Grove. The air hung heavy with the scent of wildflowers, a cloying sweetness that clung to her senses, making her distinctly uneasy. The Grove, a place she had sought
eagerly
with a promise of answers, now felt like a trap, its boundaries marked by the ancient standing stones, a silent warning. Tall grasses rustled in a non-existent breeze, their whispers carrying secrets Rory couldn't decipher. The quiet
was unsettling
, the lack of birdsong or even the distant hum of London eerily noticeable. She felt the
weight
of isolation settle on her shoulders like a physical burden, her heart thumping a nervous rhythm against her ribs. The Heartstone Pendant around her neck
throbbed
in time, its crimson glow seeming to pulse under her shirt, a secret
beacon
in the darkness. She scanned the clearing, her eyes piercing the shadows for any sign of the person she believed
was waiting
for her. A faint crunch of leaves underfoot made her whip around, her breath catching in her throat as she stared into the inky blackness. The forest
seemed to
be holding its breath, all movements and sounds abruptly ceased. "Is there someone there?" she called, her voice trembling despite her efforts at control. The silence mocked her, heavy and
oppressive
. Rory took a tentative step forward, her eyes straining to adjust to the dim light. A trickle of sweat trailed down her spine, cold and insidious, as her hand tightened on the pendant. Its warmth, which usually provided comfort, felt strangely uncomfortable here, as if it were a dead
weight
drawing her downward. As she advanced further, a soft glow became visible ahead, distinct from the pendant's pulsating glow. The source was small and flickering, offering a fragile promise of hope to the desolate night. She quickened her pace, the rustle of her
footsteps
on the fallen leaves seemingly unnaturally loud in the stifling silence. The soft light, she soon realized,
was emanating
from a small campfire, its flames
dancing
in the still air as if buoyed by invisible spirits. A figure, seated cross-legged next to the fire, remained shrouded in shadow. The crackle of burning wood and the occasional snap of a log, the only interruptions to the night's eerie quietude. "Hello?" Rory tried again, her voice louder this time but equally swallowed by the unnerving stillness. The figure, robed and hooded, made no acknowledgment, their gaze fixed on the leaping flames. As Rory drew closer, the figure lifted a hand, a small, deliberate movement, to adjust the hood, revealing a hint of pale skin and dark hair. The chiaroscuro effect of light and darkness played tricks on her mind, as the person's features
seemed to
shift and rearrange, as if they were part of the
dancing
flames. "Your presence here is an offering," the figure whispered, a voice that could belong to a man or a woman, "a sacrifice. You've given up your safety for a chance at knowledge and power." Rory's grip on the pendant tightened further, the familiar heat now a soothing contrast to the creeping chill of the Grove. "I... I was invited," she stammered, her voice cracking, "a mutual exchange of information." A chuckle, dry as ancient bones, emerged from within the hood, its tone one of gentle mockery. "Oh, but weren't you warned? Knowledge is power, young one. And power, in the wrong hands, is a perilous thing." Heart thundering in her ears, Rory's eyes darted around the clearing, her pulse racing in a frenzied rhythm. She had been foolish to come alone. The
weight
of her delivery bag
seemed to
mock her, a reminder of her
normalcy
, of the everyday life that now felt miles away. "W-who are you?" she asked, her voice steadier than her trembling hands. "What is this place?" The figure stood, the movement fluid, like a shadow stretching and reshaping. As they stepped closer to the fire, Rory realized with a jolt that they were smaller in stature than she'd anticipated, their features androgynous, seemingly neither male nor female. "Call me Isolde," came the deep, resonant voice. "And this place is the threshold, the between-space where Fae-touched mortals can glimpse what lurks within." Isolde's gaze
flicked
to the pendant, and they added
softly
, "Your gift was a sign, a symbol of your willingness to embrace the darkness." Rory touched the pendant defensively, the velvety warmth of the gem like a lifeline connecting her to the world she had left behind. "I seek help, not power," she said, swallowing the fear that threatened to choke her. "I only want to protect my friends." Isolde let out a sigh, filled with a vast sense of weariness. "The desire for protection is noble but perhaps misguided. It's the ones we
love that bring
us the most pain, is it not?" Rory's throat constricted as the words struck a chord deep within her. "How so?" she croaked. "Think, child," Isolde coaxed. "What drives you here, to this forsaken place, under the pretense of nightfall? What fears push you forward when caution would have you hide?" Rory's eyes closed as memories washed over her: the threatening text messages, the feelings of being watched, and the sense of her
sanctuary
being violated
. She had ignored the signs, chalking them up to paranoia, until the day she found her flat broken into and her belongings strewn on the floor. The feeling of invasion stayed with her, a persistent, insidious dread. "The gift was a test, a means to weed out the weak and ill-prepared," Isolde continued as if reading her mind. "Your acceptance and arrival, a sign of your readiness." "My acceptance of what?" Rory demanded, her fear twisting into anger. "I was assured help in exchange for my services!" Isolde laughed, the sound hollow and unsettling. "Oh, you shall have your help. But know that in this place, nothing is given freely. There are always debts to be paid, sometimes with blood." The words
sent a chill down
Rory's spine. Her breath quickened, and the urge to flee surged through her veins. But her gaze, locked with Isolde's, held her transfixed, unable to move or look away. Isolde took a step forward, the fire's light washing over their features, revealing sharp cheekbones and eyes as dark and fathomless as the night sky. "Time, young one, is not at a stillstand within these borders. What seems like moments to you might be hours or days without. Your world moves on without you, ignorant of your plight." Rory's panic surged as she realized the implication. She thought of Eva, alone in her flat, and Silas, oblivious in his bar downstairs. Time, here, was a currency that could be spent or wasted. A sacrifice she hadn't bargained for. "My world will go on," she whispered, her voice hoarse. "Just as it always has." Isolde's eyes twinkled with silent laughter. "Your certainty is but a fleeting comfort. The tide of time shifts, and nothing remains forever unchanged." At that moment, a faint rustle in the underbrush made Rory jump. She spun around, eyes darting, searching for a source, but found nothing. An uneasy silence followed, the fire crackling merrily, a
stark
contrast to the growing tension. "See for yourself," Isolde urged, a hand gesturing towards the edges of the clearing. "The night holds truths beyond your imagination." Slowly, her body protesting, Rory walked to where she'd heard the sound. The shadows
seemed to
deepen, twining around her like sentient fingers. The night air whispered in her ears, carrying taunting
echoes
of her name. "Rory... RORY... AURORA..." The voices, her mother's, her father's, Evan's, and so many others, all spoke in unison, their tones filled with sorrow, grief, and accusation. The
weight
of their pain bore down upon her, pushing her to her knees. "What's happening?" Rory gasped, clinging to her sanity, her eyes squeezed shut. "Face them," Isolde's voice commanded, distant and yet close. "To survive this night, you must confront the ghosts of your past." Rory opened her eyes, and the Grove lay before her, twisted and distorted. The trees had become tall,
sinister
figures, their branches reaching towards her, beckoning. Her parents' voices wailed from within the trees, their cries
echoing
through the night. "You left us, Aurora," they lamented. "Our little Rory, gone without a trace..." A chill coursed through her body, the cold of self-reflection, as she realized the truth of their words. The decision to flee from them, from home, from Evan, without a single word, was a wound that still bled for them all. "I had to," she whispered, her voice hoarse with emotion. "I had no choice..." Isolde's shadow fell over her as they stepped closer. "We all have choices, Rory. But sometimes our desires, our fears, and our past decisions blind us to the right path." Another figure, silent and brooding, emerged from within the trees, its face half-hidden in shadow. A cold dread coursed through her veins as she recognized the man whose image had
been etched
in her memories—her ex, Evan. "He hurt you, my love," his voice deep and accusing. "And yet, you care so deeply for him. Why, Rory? Can't you see his love for you?" Rory's
heart hammered in her chest
, the pendant pressed against her palm, a silent comfort in the face of her past. "I know his love," she said, her voice breaking. "I saw it in his fists, in the bruises on my skin. It's fear I feel, not love." In a swift movement, the Evan-figure reached out, grasping at her, fingers curling around her wrists. Rory gasped, feeling the familiar pain, the bite of his grip. The Shadow Evan leaned close, his breath hot in her ear as he whispered, "You were never worthy, Rory. Your world is better off without you." She struggled, her body resisting, her mind flooding with the memories of his abuse and the pain of leaving without saying goodbye. "Is that what you believe?" Isolde asked, their voice calm but filled with a
simmering
power. "That you are unworthy?" The figure of Evan, now mere inches from her face,
seemed to
shimmer and blur. The image shifted, morphing into the faces of her friends, Eva's concern, and Silas's quiet strength. Their voices, a chorus of love and support, swelled around her like a protective shield. "He would have killed you, Rory," Eva's voice was fierce with conviction. "You're alive because you are strong and clever." Silas's voice, deep and comforting, murmured, "You're more than worthy, my friend." Rory's tears fell freely, washing away the pain, sorrow, and guilt that had accumulated over the years. The figures, her companions, were the voices of hope and the strength she needed to hear. "But they suffer," Isolde's voice, soft and insistent, cut through her
newfound
peace. "For every choice and action, there are consequences. For each life touched, there's a price. That, Rory, is the true cost of living." The Grove shifted once more, the trees pulling back, revealing a portal of swirling darkness. "The truth waits for you there, Rory. Enter and you shall know your path. But remember, your time here is finite. Every second that passes without is a minute, an hour, or a day." Rory nodded, understanding the gravity of her decision. Gripping her pendant, she stood resolute, her determination fierce and unyielding. Taking a deep breath, she stepped into the swirling shadows, a silent prayer on her lips for strength and wisdom. The portal swirled around her, the rhythm of her heartbeat the only constant. Time was a malleable force, a reminder of the transience of life and the
weight
of her choices. Through the darkness, she discerned a thread of faint light and, focusing on it, allowed herself to be pulled forward. As she stepped out, the Grove lay quiet and peaceful, the air heavy with the scent of the living forest. Isolde stood waiting, a specter of both promise and danger. "You've made it through, Aurora Carter," they said, their voice rich with approval. "The first trial is complete. The heart of your quest awaits but remember, time is neither friend nor foe. It is the eternal judge, the keeper of debts." Rory nodded, her gaze fixed on the pendant, its inner glow now a reminder of the darkness within and the choices that lay ahead. "I understand," she said, her voice steady. "I'm not done yet."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
26
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Isolde's gaze flicked to the pendant, and they added softly [softly]"
1
"The Shadow Evan leaned close, his breath hot in her ear as he whispered, [close]"
80.9251%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
2097
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"eagerly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"eagerly"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
2097
totalAiIsms
22
found
0
word
"beacon"
count
1
1
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
2
word
"throbbed"
count
1
3
word
"simmering"
count
1
4
word
"flicked"
count
1
5
word
"oppressive"
count
1
6
word
"sinister"
count
1
7
word
"loomed"
count
1
8
word
"stark"
count
1
9
word
"newfound"
count
1
10
word
"normalcy"
count
1
11
word
"weight"
count
5
12
word
"dancing"
count
2
13
word
"footsteps"
count
1
14
word
"echoes"
count
1
15
word
"echoing"
count
1
16
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"beacon"
1
"sanctuary"
2
"throbbed"
3
"simmering"
4
"flicked"
5
"oppressive"
6
"sinister"
7
"loomed"
8
"stark"
9
"newfound"
10
"normalcy"
11
"weight"
12
"dancing"
13
"footsteps"
14
"echoes"
15
"echoing"
16
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart hammered in her chest"
1
"sent a chill down"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
108
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
108
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
133
matches
0
"love that bring"
82.1304%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
58
mean
35.98
std
15.74
cv
0.437
sampleLengths
0
75
1
78
2
58
3
21
4
53
5
52
6
57
7
31
8
56
9
34
10
35
11
37
12
49
13
16
14
41
15
48
16
45
17
35
18
16
19
28
20
62
21
30
22
20
23
33
24
35
25
58
26
40
27
15
28
23
29
39
30
21
31
36
32
3
33
37
34
12
35
21
36
40
37
13
38
41
39
14
40
30
41
37
42
27
43
48
44
53
45
22
46
20
47
46
48
20
49
12
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
108
matches
0
"being violated"
1
"been etched"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
244
matches
0
"was unsettling"
1
"was waiting"
2
"was emanating"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1561
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
39
adverbRatio
0.024983984625240232
lyAdverbCount
18
lyAdverbRatio
0.011531069827033953
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
133
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
133
mean
15.69
std
7.28
cv
0.464
sampleLengths
0
25
1
21
2
29
3
14
4
17
5
23
6
24
7
21
8
23
9
14
10
14
11
7
12
15
13
18
14
20
15
16
16
16
17
20
18
25
19
12
20
20
21
16
22
15
23
26
24
30
25
34
26
21
27
14
28
17
29
20
30
18
31
7
32
24
33
12
34
4
35
12
36
29
37
8
38
40
39
23
40
15
41
7
42
12
43
23
44
12
45
4
46
4
47
24
48
25
49
26
46.8672%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.3308270676691729
totalSentences
133
uniqueOpeners
44
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
26
fancyCount
21
fancyTags
0
"the figure whispered, a voice that could belong to a man or a woman (whisper, belong)"
1
"she stammered, her voice cracking (stammer, crack)"
2
"came the deep, resonant voice (come)"
3
"Isolde's gaze flicked to the pendant, and they added softly (flick add softly)"
4
"she said, swallowing the fear that threatened to choke her (say, swallow threaten)"
5
"croaked (croak)"
6
"Isolde coaxed (coax)"
7
"Isolde continued as if reading her mind (continue read)"
8
"demanded (demand)"
9
"she whispered, her voice hoarse (whisper)"
10
"Isolde urged, a hand gesturing towards the edges of the clearing (urge, gesture)"
11
"gasped (gasp)"
12
"Isolde's voice commanded, distant and yet close (command)"
13
"they lamented (lament)"
14
"she whispered, her voice hoarse with emotion (whisper)"
15
"his voice deep and accusing (his voice deep and accusing)"
16
"she said, her voice breaking (say, break)"
17
"The Shadow Evan leaned close, his breath hot in her ear as he whispered, (lean close, whisper)"
18
"Eva's voice was fierce with conviction (be)"
19
"Silas's voice, deep and comforting, murmured, (murmur)"
80.9758%