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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98FR4CM1BEMH5B3QS0Y
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
1m 56s
Cost:
$0.002046
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
Rory's boots crunched on the gravel path as she entered the moonlit grove, the ancient standing stones casting long shadows across the clearing. Isolde's grove in Richmond Park had always been a place of refuge for her, a secret haven she stumbled upon during one of her many aimless wanderings after moving to London. But tonight, something felt different. The air was thick and heavy, an unsettling stillness hanging over the wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their colors muted in the pale light. She reached up, her fingers brushing against the deep crimson gemstone that hung around her neck. The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly with warmth, as if sensing the strange energy that crackled in the atmosphere. A gift from an unknown benefactor, she had
quickly
learned that its
strange behavior often heralded the presence of forces beyond her understanding. As she ventured deeper into the grove, the feeling of unease only intensified. The shadows
seemed to
writhe and twist, and she could have sworn she saw movement out of the corner of her eye. But whenever she turned to look, there was nothing there. Just the silent stones, the ghostly flowers, and the silver moonlight. "Get a grip, Carter," she muttered to herself, her voice sounding oddly flat in the still air. "There's no one here but you and the squirrels." But even as she spoke the words, she knew they were a lie. She could feel it in her bones—the grove was not empty tonight. Something else lurked here, something that did not belong. Rory quickened her pace,
suddenly
desperate to reach the center of the clearing. She told herself it was just her imagination running wild, the product of too many late nights spent poring over the strange books and artifacts that had come into her possession since she'd fled to London. But the tightness in her chest and the prickle of goosebumps on her skin told another story. At last, she reached the heart of the grove, where a circle of flat stones surrounded a small, still pool. She sank down onto one of the rocks, trying to steady her breathing and calm her racing heart. But as she looked down at the water, she froze. The surface of the pool was not still after all. In the moonlight, she could see ripples spreading out from the center, as if something had just disturbed the water from below. And in the depths, a faint, eerie glow pulsed in time with the beating of the Heartstone against her skin. Rory scrambled to her feet, her heart pounding in her ears. She took a step back from the pool, unable to tear her gaze away from the unsettling light beneath the surface. And as she watched, a dark shape
began to
emerge from the water, rising up from the depths like a figure materializing out of mist. She wanted to run, to flee the grove as fast as her legs could carry her. But she
was rooted
to the spot, her body refusing to obey her mind's frantic commands. The figure continued to rise, water streaming off its form, until it stood waist-deep in the pool, its features still obscured by shadow. "Who's there?" Rory called out, her voice trembling. "What do you want?" There was no answer. The figure simply stood there, silent and motionless, as if waiting for something. And then
slowly
, agonizingly
slowly
, it
began to
turn towards her. Rory's breath caught in her throat as the moonlight fell upon the figure's face, revealing features that were at once familiar and
utterly
alien. It was the face of someone she knew, someone she had once trusted—but it was twisted now, warped by an expression of malice and hunger that made her blood run cold. "Evan?" she whispered, her voice barely audible above the thundering of her heart.
"Is that you?"
The figure smiled then, a slow, predatory grin that sent shivers down her spine. And as it
began to
move towards her, stepping out of the pool with eerie, unnatural grace, Rory
knew that whatever
this thing was, it was not her ex. It was something else entirely, something that wore his face like a mask. She stumbled backward, her feet tangling in the undergrowth, as the figure advanced upon her. She could see its eyes now, glittering in the moonlight like chips of ice, and she knew with sudden, sickening certainty that it in
tended to
do her harm. Rory's hand flew to the Heartstone pendant, and she felt it pulse beneath her fingers, its warmth surging through her like a jolt of electricity. And in that moment, she knew what she had to do. She closed her eyes, taking a deep, shuddering breath, and then she reached deep inside herself, calling upon the strange,
otherworldly
power that she
had only just begun to understand. The pendant blazed with sudden,
searing
heat, and she felt the energy coursing through her veins like liquid fire. When she opened her eyes again, the figure was almost upon her, its hands outstretched like claws. But Rory was no longer afraid. She stood her ground, the Heartstone's light washing over her, and faced the creature with
newfound
strength. "Go back to whatever hell you crawled out of," she snarled, her voice
echoing
through the grove with a power she had never known she possessed. "You have no claim on me." The figure shrieked, a sound like nails on a chalkboard, and recoiled as if burned. It staggered backward, its form flickering and
wavering
in the light of the pendant, and then with a final, earsplitting screech, it vanished, leaving nothing behind but a faint, sour smell like rotting leaves. Rory sank to her knees, shaking with exhaustion and relief. She
knew that this
was only the beginning, that there would be more battles to come. But for now, she was alive, and she was free. And as she looked down at the Heartstone, its deep crimson glow fading to a soft, gentle warmth, she
knew that whatever
lay ahead, she had the power to face it. She was Aurora Carter. And she would not be broken.
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2/17/2026, 1:47:27 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she muttered to herself, her voice sounding oddly flat in the still air [oddly]"
51.4563%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1030
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
2
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
3
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"slowly"
2
"suddenly"
3
"utterly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
51.4563%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1030
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"searing"
count
1
1
word
"wavering"
count
1
2
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
3
word
"newfound"
count
1
4
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"searing"
1
"wavering"
2
"otherworldly"
3
"newfound"
4
"echoing"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
58
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
58
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
2
"tended to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
6
totalSentences
62
matches
0
"learned that its"
1
"\"Is that you?\""
2
"knew that whatever"
3
"power that she"
4
"knew that this"
5
"knew that whatever"
58.0027%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
23
mean
44.61
std
15.75
cv
0.353
sampleLengths
0
82
1
57
2
56
3
26
4
34
5
66
6
48
7
52
8
57
9
55
10
12
11
28
12
55
13
16
14
56
15
43
16
36
17
49
18
40
19
32
20
49
21
36
22
41
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
58
matches
0
"was rooted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
167
matches
(empty)
98.8357%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
992
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
41
adverbRatio
0.04133064516129032
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.016129032258064516
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
62
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
62
mean
16.55
std
8.13
cv
0.491
sampleLengths
0
23
1
31
2
5
3
23
4
16
5
18
6
23
7
13
8
22
9
10
10
11
11
17
12
9
13
13
14
12
15
9
16
13
17
36
18
17
19
20
20
18
21
10
22
10
23
22
24
20
25
11
26
21
27
25
28
16
29
16
30
23
31
8
32
4
33
4
34
13
35
11
36
24
37
31
38
13
39
3
40
14
41
29
42
13
43
15
44
28
45
25
46
11
47
30
48
19
49
17
57.5269%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.3548387096774194
totalSentences
62
uniqueOpeners
22
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"she muttered to herself, her voice sounding oddly flat in the still air (mutter sound oddly)"
1
"whispered (whisper)"
2
"she snarled, her voice echoing through the grove with a power she had never known she possessed (snarl, echo does not never know possess)"
80.4281%