Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98FR4CM1BEMH5B3QS0Y

Run Details

Duration:
1m 56s
Cost:
$0.002046
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory's boots crunched on the gravel path as she entered the moonlit grove, the ancient standing stones casting long shadows across the clearing. Isolde's grove in Richmond Park had always been a place of refuge for her, a secret haven she stumbled upon during one of her many aimless wanderings after moving to London. But tonight, something felt different. The air was thick and heavy, an unsettling stillness hanging over the wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their colors muted in the pale light. She reached up, her fingers brushing against the deep crimson gemstone that hung around her neck. The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly with warmth, as if sensing the strange energy that crackled in the atmosphere. A gift from an unknown benefactor, she had quickly learned that its strange behavior often heralded the presence of forces beyond her understanding. As she ventured deeper into the grove, the feeling of unease only intensified. The shadows seemed to writhe and twist, and she could have sworn she saw movement out of the corner of her eye. But whenever she turned to look, there was nothing there. Just the silent stones, the ghostly flowers, and the silver moonlight. "Get a grip, Carter," she muttered to herself, her voice sounding oddly flat in the still air. "There's no one here but you and the squirrels." But even as she spoke the words, she knew they were a lie. She could feel it in her bones—the grove was not empty tonight. Something else lurked here, something that did not belong. Rory quickened her pace, suddenly desperate to reach the center of the clearing. She told herself it was just her imagination running wild, the product of too many late nights spent poring over the strange books and artifacts that had come into her possession since she'd fled to London. But the tightness in her chest and the prickle of goosebumps on her skin told another story. At last, she reached the heart of the grove, where a circle of flat stones surrounded a small, still pool. She sank down onto one of the rocks, trying to steady her breathing and calm her racing heart. But as she looked down at the water, she froze. The surface of the pool was not still after all. In the moonlight, she could see ripples spreading out from the center, as if something had just disturbed the water from below. And in the depths, a faint, eerie glow pulsed in time with the beating of the Heartstone against her skin. Rory scrambled to her feet, her heart pounding in her ears. She took a step back from the pool, unable to tear her gaze away from the unsettling light beneath the surface. And as she watched, a dark shape began to emerge from the water, rising up from the depths like a figure materializing out of mist. She wanted to run, to flee the grove as fast as her legs could carry her. But she was rooted to the spot, her body refusing to obey her mind's frantic commands. The figure continued to rise, water streaming off its form, until it stood waist-deep in the pool, its features still obscured by shadow. "Who's there?" Rory called out, her voice trembling. "What do you want?" There was no answer. The figure simply stood there, silent and motionless, as if waiting for something. And then slowly, agonizingly slowly, it began to turn towards her. Rory's breath caught in her throat as the moonlight fell upon the figure's face, revealing features that were at once familiar and utterly alien. It was the face of someone she knew, someone she had once trusted—but it was twisted now, warped by an expression of malice and hunger that made her blood run cold. "Evan?" she whispered, her voice barely audible above the thundering of her heart. "Is that you?" The figure smiled then, a slow, predatory grin that sent shivers down her spine. And as it began to move towards her, stepping out of the pool with eerie, unnatural grace, Rory knew that whatever this thing was, it was not her ex. It was something else entirely, something that wore his face like a mask. She stumbled backward, her feet tangling in the undergrowth, as the figure advanced upon her. She could see its eyes now, glittering in the moonlight like chips of ice, and she knew with sudden, sickening certainty that it intended to do her harm. Rory's hand flew to the Heartstone pendant, and she felt it pulse beneath her fingers, its warmth surging through her like a jolt of electricity. And in that moment, she knew what she had to do. She closed her eyes, taking a deep, shuddering breath, and then she reached deep inside herself, calling upon the strange, otherworldly power that she had only just begun to understand. The pendant blazed with sudden, searing heat, and she felt the energy coursing through her veins like liquid fire. When she opened her eyes again, the figure was almost upon her, its hands outstretched like claws. But Rory was no longer afraid. She stood her ground, the Heartstone's light washing over her, and faced the creature with newfound strength. "Go back to whatever hell you crawled out of," she snarled, her voice echoing through the grove with a power she had never known she possessed. "You have no claim on me." The figure shrieked, a sound like nails on a chalkboard, and recoiled as if burned. It staggered backward, its form flickering and wavering in the light of the pendant, and then with a final, earsplitting screech, it vanished, leaving nothing behind but a faint, sour smell like rotting leaves. Rory sank to her knees, shaking with exhaustion and relief. She knew that this was only the beginning, that there would be more battles to come. But for now, she was alive, and she was free. And as she looked down at the Heartstone, its deep crimson glow fading to a soft, gentle warmth, she knew that whatever lay ahead, she had the power to face it. She was Aurora Carter. And she would not be broken.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"quickened"
count1
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"depths"
count2
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"streaming"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"sent shivers down"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"otherworldly"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"newfound"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"wavering"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"could feel"
3"quickened"
4"racing"
5"depths"
6"pounding"
7"streaming"
8"familiar"
9"sent shivers down"
10"pulse"
11"otherworldly"
12"searing"
13"newfound"
14"echoing"
15"wavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
96.26% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences58
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"the feeling of unease"
19.70% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1026
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount988
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Heartstone5
Rory9
Aurora1
Carter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Heartstone"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if sensing the strange energy that crackled in the atmosphere"
1"as if waiting for something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.975
wordCount1026
matches
0"no one here but"
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences62
matches
0"learned that its"
1"knew that whatever"
2"power that she"
3"knew that this"
4"knew that whatever"
58.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean44.61
std15.75
cv0.353
sampleLengths
082
157
256
326
434
566
648
752
857
955
1012
1128
1255
1316
1456
1543
1636
1749
1840
1932
2049
2136
2241
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"was rooted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences62
ratio0.032
matches
0"She could feel it in her bones—the grove was not empty tonight."
1"It was the face of someone she knew, someone she had once trusted—but it was twisted now, warped by an expression of malice and hunger that made her blood run cold."
98.84% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount992
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04133064516129032
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.016129032258064516
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean16.55
std8.13
cv0.491
sampleLengths
023
131
25
323
416
518
623
713
822
910
1011
1117
129
1313
1412
159
1613
1736
1817
1920
2018
2110
2210
2322
2420
2511
2621
2725
2816
2916
3023
318
324
334
3413
3511
3624
3731
3813
393
4014
4129
4213
4315
4428
4525
4611
4730
4819
4917
57.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3548387096774194
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners22
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Just the silent stones, the"
ratio0.017
95.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences58
matches
0"She reached up, her fingers"
1"she muttered to herself, her"
2"She could feel it in"
3"She told herself it was"
4"She sank down onto one"
5"She took a step back"
6"She wanted to run, to"
7"It was the face of"
8"she whispered, her voice barely"
9"It was something else entirely,"
10"She stumbled backward, her feet"
11"She could see its eyes"
12"She closed her eyes, taking"
13"She stood her ground, the"
14"she snarled, her voice echoing"
15"It staggered backward, its form"
16"She knew that this was"
17"She was Aurora Carter."
ratio0.31
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences58
matches
0"Rory's boots crunched on the"
1"Isolde's grove in Richmond Park"
2"The air was thick and"
3"She reached up, her fingers"
4"The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly"
5"A gift from an unknown"
6"The shadows seemed to writhe"
7"she muttered to herself, her"
8"She could feel it in"
9"Something else lurked here, something"
10"Rory quickened her pace, suddenly"
11"She told herself it was"
12"She sank down onto one"
13"The surface of the pool"
14"Rory scrambled to her feet,"
15"She took a step back"
16"She wanted to run, to"
17"The figure continued to rise,"
18"Rory called out, her voice"
19"The figure simply stood there,"
ratio0.638
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The air was thick and heavy, an unsettling stillness hanging over the wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their colors muted in the pale light."
1"She reached up, her fingers brushing against the deep crimson gemstone that hung around her neck."
2"The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly with warmth, as if sensing the strange energy that crackled in the atmosphere."
3"She told herself it was just her imagination running wild, the product of too many late nights spent poring over the strange books and artifacts that had come i…"
4"In the moonlight, she could see ripples spreading out from the center, as if something had just disturbed the water from below."
5"The figure simply stood there, silent and motionless, as if waiting for something."
6"Rory's breath caught in her throat as the moonlight fell upon the figure's face, revealing features that were at once familiar and utterly alien."
7"It was the face of someone she knew, someone she had once trusted—but it was twisted now, warped by an expression of malice and hunger that made her blood run c…"
8"It was something else entirely, something that wore his face like a mask."
9"She closed her eyes, taking a deep, shuddering breath, and then she reached deep inside herself, calling upon the strange, otherworldly power that she had only …"
10"It staggered backward, its form flickering and wavering in the light of the pendant, and then with a final, earsplitting screech, it vanished, leaving nothing b…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she muttered, her voice sounding oddly flat in the still air"
1"Rory called out, her voice trembling"
2"she whispered, her voice barely audible above the thundering of her heart"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory called out (call out)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she snarled (snarl)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
69.0356%