NC Bench
Overview
About
Tests
Models
Vendors
Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMC98FTZMBP64102VEASP8
Run Details
Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
32.3s
Cost:
$0.001766
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The Raven's Nest, with its green neon sign casting a
spectral
glow on the cobblestone street, was a relic of a bygone era, nestled
amidst
the modern
cacophony
of Soho. Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of aged wood and spilled beer, a perfume as comforting to Aurora Carter as the familiar creak of the floorboards underfoot. She had come to deliver an order from the Golden Empress, her part-time employer, and perhaps to steal a moment of respite in the midst of her erratic life. The bar was quiet, the usual
cacophony
of conversation subdued to a low murmur, allowing the clink of glasses and the hum of the refrigerators to take center stage. Rory's eyes, a bright, piercing blue, scanned the room, taking in the patrons with an ease born of years spent observing rather than participating. It was then that she saw him, a figure from her past, standing near the bar, his back to her. Silas Blackwood. The Spymaster. He had not changed much; his hair was now streaked with grey, and there was a slight limp in his left leg that she did not remember. But the way he carried himself, with an air of quiet authority, was as unmistakable as the silver signet ring that glinted on his right hand. Rory approached, the
weight
of years hanging between them, a silent
testament
to the paths their lives had taken since they last parted ways. She cleared her throat, a soft sound that cut through the ambient noise like a whisper in a church. Silas turned, and for a moment, his hazel eyes held a
flicker
of confusion before recognition dawned. "Aurora Carter," he said, his voice a rich baritone that
seemed to
reverberate through the floorboards. "As I live and breathe." Rory offered a smile, the kind that didn't quite reach her eyes. "It's just Rory now," she corrected him
gently
. "And you're still Si to me." He chuckled, a warm, genuine sound that belied the coolness of his gaze. "I see time has done little to dull your edge." "And it seems to have given you a few more stories to tell," Rory replied, nodding towards his leg. Silas glanced down, as if only just remembering the injury. "An old wound," he said with a dismissive wave of his hand. "A mere souvenir from Prague." The bartender, a young man with sleeves of tattoos, placed a pint of bitter in front of Silas. Rory shook her head when he glanced her way, indicating she
was working
. Silas noted the exchange with a raised eyebrow. "Still delivering happiness in cardboard boxes, I see," he remarked, his tone light, but his eyes searching. Rory's smile tightened. "It pays the rent," she said, the simplicity of the statement hiding the complexities of her life since she had fled Cardiff and her abusive ex, Evan. She had left behind the promise of a law career for the anonymity of London, trading courtrooms for the back alleys of Soho. Silas studied her, the lines of his face
etched
with concern. "You know, Rory, this old spy's eyes don't miss much. You're not the same girl who left Cardiff." She met his gaze, her own unflinching. "People change, Si. Life happens." "Indeed," he mused, lifting his pint to his lips. "But some changes leave deeper scars than others." His eyes
flicked
to the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood accident that
seemed to
pale in comparison to the other, less visible scars she carried. Rory looked away, her gaze landing on the wall of old maps and black-and-white photographs. She remembered the girl she had been, full of dreams and ideals, so different from the woman she had become. Silas
seemed to
sense the shift in her mood. "Come, let's sit," he suggested, gesturing to a booth tucked away in the corner. "We have some catching up to do." They moved to the booth, the worn leather cool against Rory's skin. Silas leaned back, his eyes never leaving her face. "So, tell me, Rory," he began, his voice low and inviting, "what brings you to my humble establishment?" Rory hesitated, her fingers tracing the condensation on her glass of water. "Work," she said simply. "And maybe a bit of nostalgia." Silas nodded, understanding the
unspoken
layers of her answer. "Nostalgia can be a dangerous thing," he said, his gaze distant. "It tricks us into
believing that the
past was simpler, better." "And what about you, Si?" Rory asked, turning the focus away from herself. "How did you go from MI6 to pouring pints?" A shadow crossed Silas' face, there and gone in an instant. "Retirement has a way of finding you, whether you're ready for it or not," he replied, his voice
tinged
with a melancholy that hinted at
unspoken
regrets. "After Prague, I needed a change. Somewhere to channel my... particular set of skills." Rory nodded, understanding the need for reinvention. "And the Nest?" she asked, glancing around the dimly lit bar. "More than just a bar," Silas said, a hint of pride in his voice. "It's a front for my network of contacts. A place where information flows as freely as the ale." The conversation lulled, and for a moment,
the weight of unspoken words
hung between them. Rory took a sip of her water, her mind racing with memories and questions. She had always admired Silas, the way he
navigated
the world with a confidence that she had never quite
managed to
grasp. "Do you ever miss it?" she asked finally, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "The thrill of the chase, the adrenaline of the field?" Silas leaned forward, his hazel eyes locking onto hers. "Every day," he admitted, his voice filled with a raw honesty that took Rory by surprise. "But one learns to find new thrills, new chases. The game changes, but it never
truly
ends." Rory felt a
pang
of sympathy for the man before her, a warrior out of time, adrift in a world that no longer had a place for him. She reached across the table, her hand covering his, the cool metal of his signet ring pressing against her skin. "We're quite the pair, aren't we?" she said, her voice soft. "Two souls adrift, trying to make sense of a world that doesn't quite fit anymore." Silas turned his hand over, clasping hers in a gentle grip. "Perhaps," he conceded. "But remember, Rory, even the most lost of souls can find their way home." She pulled her hand away, the moment passing as
quickly
as it had come. "This is home now," she said, gesturing to the bar around them. "At least for me." Silas nodded, his expression
unreadable
. "Then make the most of it, Rory. Embrace the change, the growth. Don't let the past define you." Rory stood, her eyes meeting Silas' one last time. "I'll try, Si. I'll try." As she turned to leave, the green neon light from outside cast an
otherworldly
glow on her face, a
beacon
in the dimly lit bar. She stepped out into the night, the door closing behind her with a soft click that
seemed to
echo
the closing of a chapter in her life. Silas watched her go, his heart heavy with the knowledge that the world was full of Rorys and Silases, people who had
been shaped
and scarred by the passage of time. But as he lifted his pint to his lips, a small smile played on his lips. For in the brief encounter with his old friend, he had seen
a glimmer of hope
, a reminder that even in the darkest of times, there was always the possibility of redemption and renewal.
created_at
"2026-02-17T01:46:03.670186+00:00"
2/17/2026, 1:46:03 AM
model
"microsoft/wizardlm-2-8x22b"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
690
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
31804
tokens_prompt
870
tokens_completion
1864
native_tokens_prompt
965
native_tokens_completion
1884
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.00176638
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
id
"58d334c9-6de5-4007-864b-cbc57e58b34e"
status
200
is_byok
false
latency
690
endpoint_id
"92d0658f-b48a-4746-96e7-75ea71d5e060"
provider_name
"Novita"
model_permaslug
"microsoft/wizardlm-2-8x22b"
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771292730-ZZPEueL0cAcTH8YCDYid"
upstream_id
"58d334c9-6de5-4007-864b-cbc57e58b34e"
total_cost
0.00176638
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Novita"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
83.3333%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
20
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"she corrected him gently [gently]"
1
"he suggested, gesturing to a booth tucked away in the corner [away]"
2
"she said simply [simply]"
69.1358%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1296
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
3
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"quickly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
3
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1296
totalAiIsms
20
found
0
word
"cacophony"
count
2
1
word
"testament"
count
1
2
word
"beacon"
count
1
3
word
"pang"
count
1
4
word
"tinged"
count
1
5
word
"flicker"
count
1
6
word
"flicked"
count
1
7
word
"spectral"
count
1
8
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
9
word
"unspoken"
count
3
10
word
"unreadable"
count
1
11
word
"weight"
count
2
12
word
"amidst"
count
1
13
word
"echo"
count
1
14
word
"etched"
count
1
15
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"cacophony"
1
"testament"
2
"beacon"
3
"pang"
4
"tinged"
5
"flicker"
6
"flicked"
7
"spectral"
8
"otherworldly"
9
"unspoken"
10
"unreadable"
11
"weight"
12
"amidst"
13
"echo"
14
"etched"
15
"navigated"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
1
label
"flicker of emotion"
count
1
highlights
0
"the weight of unspoken words"
1
"a glimmer of hope"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
68
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
68
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"managed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
87
matches
0
"believing that the"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
36
mean
35.92
std
18.46
cv
0.514
sampleLengths
0
88
1
73
2
4
3
53
4
43
5
38
6
26
7
23
8
19
9
27
10
39
11
17
12
53
13
29
14
12
15
49
16
35
17
30
18
39
19
22
20
31
21
22
22
52
23
18
24
32
25
51
26
24
27
42
28
48
29
26
30
28
31
30
32
23
33
14
34
52
35
81
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"been shaped"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
155
matches
0
"was working"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
990
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
27
adverbRatio
0.02727272727272727
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.010101010101010102
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
87
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
87
mean
14.86
std
8.15
cv
0.549
sampleLengths
0
30
1
29
2
29
3
29
4
24
5
20
6
2
7
2
8
27
9
26
10
24
11
19
12
17
13
16
14
5
15
12
16
8
17
6
18
13
19
10
20
19
21
10
22
12
23
5
24
18
25
13
26
8
27
17
28
3
29
27
30
23
31
11
32
18
33
7
34
5
35
9
36
40
37
15
38
20
39
9
40
14
41
7
42
12
43
9
44
18
45
12
46
4
47
6
48
9
49
11
68.9655%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
0
diversityRatio
0.41379310344827586
totalSentences
87
uniqueOpeners
36
12.5000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
20
fancyCount
13
fancyTags
0
"he said, his voice a rich baritone that seemed to reverberate through the floorboards (say, seem reverberate)"
1
"she corrected him gently (correct)"
2
"Rory replied, nodding towards his leg (reply, nod)"
3
"he remarked, his tone light, but his eyes searching (remark, search)"
4
"she said, the simplicity of the statement hiding the complexities of her life since she had fled Cardiff and her abusive ex, Evan (say, hide flee)"
5
"he mused, lifting his pint to his lips (muse, lift)"
6
"he suggested, gesturing to a booth tucked away in the corner (suggest, gesture tuck away)"
7
"he began, his voice low and inviting (begin)"
8
"she said simply (say simply)"
9
"he replied, his voice tinged with a melancholy that hinted at unspoken regrets (reply, tinged hint)"
10
"he admitted, his voice filled with a raw honesty that took Rory by surprise (admit, fill take surprise)"
11
"he conceded (concede)"
12
"she said, gesturing to the bar around them (say, gesture)"
82.3883%