Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMCVF8TGT0C6Z8KRWXVNFP

Run Details

Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.027325
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy wooden door of The Raven's Nest, the familiar creak of the hinges a welcome sound in the otherwise bustling chaos of Soho. The green neon sign above the entrance cast a ghostly glow on the wet pavement, reflecting off the puddles left by the afternoon rain. She stepped inside, the warmth and dim light of the bar enveloping her like an old, comforting blanket. The walls were adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, relics of a world that seemed both distant and intimately familiar. She spotted Silas behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard giving him an air of distinguished authority. He was polishing a glass, his silver signet ring catching the light with each movement. "Rory," he greeted her with a nod, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "You're early." "Couldn't wait," she replied, her voice steady but her heart racing. She hadn't been back to the Nest in months, not since the last time she and Silas had a falling out over one of his clandestine operations. But tonight, she needed the familiarity, the sense of belonging that only this place could offer. She slid onto a barstool, her eyes scanning the room. It was still early, and the usual crowd hadn't yet arrived. A few regulars were scattered around, nursing their drinks and lost in their own worlds. The hidden back room, accessible through a cleverly disguised bookshelf, remained closed, its secrets safely tucked away for now. Silas set the polished glass down and poured her a drink without asking. "Whiskey, neat," he said, sliding it across the bar to her. "Thanks, Si," she murmured, taking a sip and feeling the warmth spread through her chest. She glanced at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident that seemed like a lifetime ago. The door creaked open again, and Aurora turned to see who had entered. Her breath caught in her throat as she recognized the figure standing in the doorway. It was Eva, her childhood friend, the one who had convinced her to flee to London all those years ago. But Eva looked different now, older, more worn. Her once vibrant red hair was now streaked with grey, and there was a hardness in her green eyes that hadn't been there before. "Eva?" Aurora's voice was barely a whisper, but it was enough to catch Eva's attention. Eva's eyes widened in surprise, and for a moment, the hardness melted away, replaced by a flicker of the old warmth. "Rory? Is that really you?" Aurora nodded, unable to find her voice. Eva crossed the room in a few quick strides and enveloped her in a tight hug. The scent of rain and city streets clung to her, mingling with the familiar smell of the bar. "It's been too long," Eva said, pulling back to look at her. "You look... different." "So do you," Aurora replied, her eyes searching Eva's face for the friend she once knew. "What brings you here?" Eva glanced around the bar, her gaze lingering on Silas for a moment before returning to Aurora. "I needed a drink. And maybe a bit of company." Silas, ever the observant one, had already poured a drink for Eva and set it on the bar. "On the house," he said with a nod. Eva took the glass and raised it in a silent toast before taking a long sip. She set it down and sighed, the weight of unspoken years hanging between them. "How have you been, Rory?" Eva asked, her voice softer now, almost hesitant. Aurora shrugged, tracing the rim of her glass with her finger. "I've been managing. Working part-time at the Golden Empress, living above the bar. You know, the usual." Eva's eyes flickered with something—regret, perhaps? "I heard about Evan. I'm sorry." Aurora's grip tightened on her glass, the mention of her ex stirring up memories she had tried to bury. "It's in the past," she said, her voice firmer than she felt. "What about you? What have you been up to?" Eva hesitated, her gaze dropping to her drink. "I've been... around. Doing some work here and there. Nothing too exciting." Aurora raised an eyebrow, sensing there was more to the story. "Come on, Eva. We used to tell each other everything. What's really going on?" Eva sighed, running a hand through her hair. "It's complicated, Rory. I've made some choices I'm not proud of. Burned some bridges I can't rebuild." Aurora reached out and placed a hand on Eva's arm, the old connection between them sparking to life. "We all make mistakes, Eva. But that doesn't mean we can't find a way forward." Eva looked up, her eyes meeting Aurora's. "Do you really believe that?" Aurora nodded, her bright blue eyes filled with determination. "I do. And I think you do too, deep down." Silas, who had been quietly observing their reunion, cleared his throat. "Why don't you two take a seat? Catch up properly." Aurora and Eva exchanged a glance and nodded. They moved to a corner booth, the dim light casting long shadows on the worn leather seats. They sat across from each other, the weight of time and unspoken regret hanging heavy in the air. "So," Aurora began, her voice softer now, "tell me everything." Eva took a deep breath, her eyes distant as she began to speak. "After you left, I tried to keep things together. But it wasn't easy. I got involved with some people I shouldn't have, made some bad decisions. I thought I was doing the right thing, but it all fell apart." Aurora listened, her heart aching for her friend. She could see the pain etched in Eva's face, the toll the years had taken on her. "Why didn't you reach out? I would have been there for you." Eva shook her head, a bitter smile on her lips. "I didn't want to drag you into my mess. You had enough to deal with." Aurora reached across the table and took Eva's hand, squeezing it gently. "We're in this together, remember? No matter what." Eva's eyes filled with tears, and she nodded, her grip tightening on Aurora's hand. "I missed you, Rory. More than I can say." "I missed you too," Aurora replied, her voice choked with emotion. "But we're here now. And we can figure this out together." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of their shared history settling around them. The bar buzzed with the low hum of conversation, the clinking of glasses, and the soft strains of jazz playing in the background. It was a familiar symphony, one that had played the soundtrack to many of their nights together. Silas approached their table, a knowing look in his eyes. "Everything alright here?" Aurora nodded, a small smile on her lips. "Yeah, Si. Everything's alright." He gave them a nod and returned to the bar, leaving them to their conversation. Aurora turned back to Eva, her heart full of hope and determination. They had both changed, both carried the weight of their pasts, but they were still here, still fighting. And in that moment, Aurora knew that no matter what the future held, they would face it together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.7273% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said, pulling back to look at her [back]"
1"Aurora replied, her eyes searching Eva's face for the friend she once knew [once]"
67.3203% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1224
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count3
highlights
0"gently"
1"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.1307% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1224
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"clandestine"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"symphony"
1"flickered"
2"flicker"
3"clandestine"
4"unspoken"
5"weight"
6"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean30.45
std16.9
cv0.555
sampleLengths
070
157
216
354
455
524
638
780
815
926
1041
1115
1220
1327
1426
1530
1613
1728
1812
1940
2020
2125
2225
2333
2412
2519
2621
2743
2810
2952
3037
3125
3220
3323
3422
3556
3613
3712
3845
3918
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"were adorned"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was polishing"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount948
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03059071729957806
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010548523206751054
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean13.53
std6.06
cv0.448
sampleLengths
028
124
218
321
421
515
614
72
811
927
1016
1110
1211
1315
1419
1513
1611
1715
1823
1913
2015
2120
228
2324
2415
2521
265
277
2816
2918
3012
313
3216
334
3417
3510
3618
378
3816
3914
4013
4111
4217
436
446
4519
4612
479
488
4912
50.3704% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.32222222222222224
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners29
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"he greeted her with a nod, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners (greet crinkle)"
1"she replied, her voice steady but her heart racing (reply, race)"
2"he said, sliding it across the bar to her (say, slide)"
3"she murmured, taking a sip and feeling the warmth spread through her chest (murmur, take feel)"
4"Eva said, pulling back to look at her (say, pull look)"
5"Aurora replied, her eyes searching Eva's face for the friend she once knew (reply, search once know)"
6"she said, her voice firmer than she felt (say, feel)"
7"Aurora began, her voice softer now (begin)"
8"Aurora replied, her voice choked with emotion (reply, choke)"
82.0323%