| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.65 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "down her spine" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "gloom" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "cacophony" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "echo" | | 19 | "tinged" | | 20 | "chill" | | 21 | "reminder" | | 22 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "d with fear" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1309 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1216 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 5 | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 17 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.801 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "warmth that seemed to seep into her skin" | | 1 | "felt like they existed on the edge of r" | | 2 | "voices that seemed to come from all around her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1309 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.66% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "was that Eva" | | 1 | "see that it" | | 2 | "knew that the" |
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| 68.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 39.67 | | std | 15.39 | | cv | 0.388 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 41 |
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| 94.06% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "being pulled" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 222 | | matches | | 0 | "was almost overwhelming" |
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| 86.28% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had learned to trust Eva's instincts, even when they led her to places like this — places that felt like they existed on the edge of reality." | | 1 | "It was subtle at first — a rustling in the underbrush that seemed too deliberate, shadows that flickered at the edge of her vision." |
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| 98.24% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1214 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.042009884678747944 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015650741350906095 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 12.96 | | std | 5.21 | | cv | 0.402 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 44.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2376237623762376 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She had come here at" | | 2 | "She took a deep breath," | | 3 | "She glanced at her watch," | | 4 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 5 | "She had a job to" | | 6 | "It was subtle at first" | | 7 | "She paused, listening intently, but" | | 8 | "she called out softly, her" | | 9 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 10 | "She reached up to touch" | | 11 | "She turned slowly, her eyes" | | 12 | "She swallowed hard, her mouth" | | 13 | "She reached the altar and" | | 14 | "She closed her eyes, trying" | | 15 | "She turned in a slow" | | 16 | "She took a step back," | | 17 | "she demanded, her voice trembling" | | 18 | "It moved closer, and she" | | 19 | "she said, her voice a" |
| | ratio | 0.422 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 4 | "She had come here at" | | 5 | "Rory had learned to trust" | | 6 | "She took a deep breath," | | 7 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 8 | "The sounds of the city" | | 9 | "Time moved differently here, she" | | 10 | "An hour inside could be" | | 11 | "She glanced at her watch," | | 12 | "The wildflowers brushed against her" | | 13 | "The trees around her were" | | 14 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 15 | "She had a job to" | | 16 | "It was subtle at first" | | 17 | "She paused, listening intently, but" | | 18 | "she called out softly, her" | | 19 | "She tightened her grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed faintly, a subtle warmth that seemed to seep into her skin." | | 1 | "It was subtle at first — a rustling in the underbrush that seemed too deliberate, shadows that flickered at the edge of her vision." | | 2 | "The path wound deeper into the Grove, the trees growing denser, their branches intertwining overhead to form a canopy that blocked out the moonlight." | | 3 | "The shadows at the edge of the clearing seemed to shift and move, coalescing into vague shapes that danced just beyond her vision." | | 4 | "The whispering grew louder still, a cacophony of voices that seemed to come from all around her." | | 5 | "Rory's hand went to the Heartstone Pendant, its warmth a small comfort against the chill that had settled over her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice barely more than a whisper" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice trembling" | | 2 | "Rory whispered, her voice barely audible" | | 3 | "she said, her voice a soft, mournful echo" | | 4 | "she asked, her voice stronger now, though still tinged with fear" | | 5 | "she said, her voice steadying" | | 6 | "she asked, her voice barely more than a whisper" | | 7 | "she said, her voice firm" | | 8 | "she said, her voice steady" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.65 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |