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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMD5GB92XY57S35K6Y6SXN
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
1m 51s
Cost:
$0.002132
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance
flickered
as Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy wooden door, a wave of warm air and the low murmur of conversation washing over her. The Raven's Nest never changed, its dimly lit interior a welcome respite from the cold London evening. She made her way to the bar, her boots sticking
slightly
to the worn floorboards. Silas Blackwood looked up from wiping down the polished oak, his hazel eyes crinkling in surprise. "Aurora! Haven't seen you in ages. How's the delivery gig treating you?" His neatly trimmed beard, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair, twitched with a smile. Rory shrugged out of her leather jacket, draping it over the back of a stool. "Can't complain. Yu-Fei keeps me busy." She ran a hand through her straight shoulder-length black hair. "I'll have the usual." Silas nodded, reaching for a glass. As he poured her a pint of ale, his signet ring caught the light,
glinting
silver. He slid the drink across to her. "On the house. It's been too long." She took a sip, savoring the familiar bitterness. "I know. Life gets in the way." Her bright blue eyes roamed over the old maps and black-and-white photographs covering the walls. This place held so many memories. The door creaked open again and Rory's heart stuttered. The man who entered was taller than she remembered, broader through the shoulders. His dark hair was longer, too, curling over the collar of his coat. But those eyes, one blue, one green, were unmistakable. "Finn Gallagher," she breathed. He scanned the room and his gaze locked on hers. A smile broke across his face, a mix of surprise and something tentative. Uncertain. He wove through the tables towards her. "Rory. I'll be damned. What are you doing here?" His Irish lilt was just the same, warm and rich. "I could ask you the same thing." She willed her pulse to steady. "Thought you were off chasing adventure on the high seas." Finn chuckled, the sound low and wry. "Turns out adventure wasn't all it's cracked up to be." He nodded to Silas. "A whiskey, neat." Silas poured the drink, his expression
unreadable
. He set it before Finn with a quiet, "This one's on me too. Any friend of Rory's." Finn tossed back the shot, hissing through his teeth. As he set the glass down, his sleeve rode up, revealing the tail end of a tattoo. Black ink,
stark
against his skin. Rory's fingers itched to trace the design, to explore this new territory of him. "I'm surprised to see you, is all," she said, trying to fill the silence. "Last I heard you were crewing a ship out of Dublin." "Aye, well. Even the best laid plans, and all that." He drummed his fingers on the bar, a staccato beat. "Turns out I'm not cut out for a life on the waves. The solitude got to me." Rory arched a brow. "Solitude? On a ship full of sailors?" He shot her a wry look. "You'd be surprised. Plenty of time to think out there under all that sky." His mismatched gaze turned distant. "Too much time, maybe." "And what were you thinking about?" The question slipped out before she could stop it. Finn held her stare, a lifetime of history crackling between them. "The past. Things I left behind." His throat worked. "People."
The weight of those words
hung in the air
. People. Like her. Left behind without a backward glance while he chased the horizon. She should be angry. Indignant. But all she felt was a hollow ache, a splinter wedged beneath her ribs. She reached for her drink, needing something to do with her hands. But Silas was there, topping off her ale, his keen gaze flicking between them. She'd forgotten how the old spymaster never missed a trick. Finn cleared his throat, shattering the moment. "Listen, I actually had a drink with your Da a few weeks back. He's worried about you, love. We all are." Rory stiffened. "Worried? About what?" "You. This life you're leading. Bouncing from job to job, living above a bar..." He waved a hand, encompassing the dimly lit room. "It's not what any of us wanted for you." The words stung, a slap she hadn't braced for. She stood abruptly, the legs of her stool scraping against the floor. "What any of you wanted. Right. Because my wants don't factor into it at all, do they?" "Rory, come on. Don't be like that." Finn reached for her but she stepped back, out of range. "No. You don't get to waltz back in here after two years and presume to know what's best for me. That ship sailed, Finn. You made your choice." His jaw tightened, a muscle jumping. "I made a mistake. Is that what you want to hear? That I was an idiot to leave? That I've regretted it every day since?" "That's not - " She broke off, shaking her head. "God. I can't do this. Not here. Not now." She grabbed her jacket, shrugging into it blindly, her vision blurring. She needed air. Space. Distance from the confusing tangle of emotions Finn's presence stirred up. Silas caught her eye as she turned to go, concern
etched
in the lines of his face. She shook her head, a minute jerk, and he let her go, understanding without words. That was the beauty of the Spymaster. Always watching. Always knowing. The cold night air hit her like a slap as she escaped the bar, sucking in deep lungfuls, trying to calm her racing heart. She didn't know what just happened, but she knew one thing for certain. Finn Gallagher was back. And nothing would ever be the same again.
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2/17/2026, 1:47:50 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
3
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
89.6158%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
963
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
37.6947%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
963
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"glinting"
count
1
2
word
"unreadable"
count
1
3
word
"stark"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
1
5
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"glinting"
2
"unreadable"
3
"stark"
4
"weight"
5
"etched"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"The weight of those words"
1
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
71
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
71
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
87
matches
(empty)
90.6913%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
34
mean
28.24
std
13.2
cv
0.467
sampleLengths
0
64
1
41
2
35
3
36
4
36
5
44
6
4
7
31
8
19
9
23
10
24
11
24
12
46
13
25
14
37
15
11
16
29
17
15
18
21
19
42
20
36
21
28
22
5
23
32
24
38
25
18
26
28
27
31
28
19
29
26
30
43
31
37
32
4
33
8
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
71
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
123
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
658
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
18
adverbRatio
0.02735562310030395
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.00911854103343465
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
87
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
87
mean
11.03
std
6.74
cv
0.611
sampleLengths
0
32
1
17
2
15
3
16
4
25
5
15
6
16
7
4
8
6
9
16
10
7
11
7
12
8
13
22
14
6
15
9
16
13
17
13
18
9
19
4
20
10
21
13
22
1
23
7
24
19
25
13
26
10
27
7
28
14
29
3
30
7
31
17
32
9
33
17
34
6
35
14
36
14
37
11
38
20
39
17
40
4
41
7
42
6
43
19
44
4
45
15
46
11
47
9
48
1
49
9
70.1149%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.4482758620689655
totalSentences
87
uniqueOpeners
39
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"she breathed (breathe)"
1
"He set it before Finn with a quiet, (set)"
2
"she said, trying to fill the silence (say, try fill)"
85.5755%