Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDBAQFSC11X1XFDMEJ9ZT

Run Details

Duration:
34.4s
Cost:
$0.000638
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
A thin crescent moon hung low in the night sky, casting faint silver light over Richmond Park. Aurora Carter walked along the path, boots crunching on gravel. She'd been here countless times before, yet something felt different tonight. A chill breeze whispered through the trees, making shadows dance. Rory pulled her jacket tighter and quickened her pace. According to the map, she was close to the hidden grove Eva had told her about. A place untouched by time, where magic still lingered. Some said it held the key to unlocking the secrets of the fae realm. Rory wasn't sure what she believed, but the allure of mystery had been too strong to resist. She stepped off the path, into a thicket of dense underbrush. Brambles tangled around her ankles as she pushed deeper into the woods. The sounds of the city faded away, replaced by the hushed rustle of leaves and the distant howl of a fox. Then, through a gap in the ancient oak standing stones, Rory saw it – the glimmer of wildflower petals bathed in moonlight. The clearing was small, almost circular, dappled in darkness and light. At the center stood a solitary tree, its branches reaching towards the sky like desperate fingers. Rory hesitated at the threshold, an inexplicable sense of dread coiling in her stomach. The scar on her wrist began to throb. She took a shaky breath and stepped into the fae-grove. As soon as her foot crossed the boundary, the air changed. It grew thicker, heavier, pressing against her skin with an almost tangible weight. The pendant around her neck pulsed faintly with warmth. This was it, she realized with a start. This was the heartbeat of the grove. She walked cautiously towards the center, drawn inexorably closer to the tree. The ground beneath her feet seemed to hum with latent energy. Each step sent a ripple through the grass, disturbing the stillness of the night. Suddenly, a twig snapped behind her. Rory whirled around, heart pounding. But there was nothing there. Only shadows and the shifting branches of the oaks. She swallowed hard, trying to calm her racing thoughts. It was just her imagination playing tricks on her. She turned back to the tree, intending to examine it closer. Then, out of the corner of her eye, she saw movement. A shapeless blur darting between the trees. Rory froze, senses on high alert. There it was again, a flicker of motion, gone before she could fully grasp it. A whisper of a breeze caressed her cheek, carrying with it the scent of decay. The wrongness of the grove began to seep into her bones, a slow-building certainty that she did not belong here. Whatever resided in this place was ancient and powerful, and it watched her with malevolent eyes. Another twig cracked, closer this time. Rory's heart leapt into her throat. She spun in a circle, frantically scanning the darkness for any sign of what lurked in the shadows. The trees seemed to close in around her, their branches twisting into grotesque shapes. Run, her mind screamed. But her body refused to obey, rooted to the spot by a terror she couldn't name. The night grew colder, the air thickening until each breath burned in her lungs. The pendant at her throat flared to life, bathing her in crimson light. And then she saw it – a figure emerging from the blackness between the trees. Tall and skeletal, with eyes that glowed like embers. It moved with unnatural grace, flowing towards her with the inevitability of a nightmare given form. Rory screamed, the sound tearing from her throat in a desperate plea. She stumbled backwards, away from the advancing horror, away from the tree and the pulsing grove. Her heel caught on a root and she fell, landing hard on the ground. The figure loomed over her, its face a mask of rotting flesh and exposed bone. It reached for her with spidery fingers, its touch like ice on her skin. Rory scrambled to her feet, bolting for the boundary of the clearing, for the safety of the standing stones. But the oaks seemed to have moved, the gap she'd entered through vanished as if it had never existed. Rory beat against the trunks, clawing at the rough bark, sobbing in terror. The creature's laughter echoed in her ears, a sound that sliced through her like a scalpel. She was trapped, she realized with dawning horror. Trapped in this nightmare realm with no escape, no hope of rescue. The creature had her now, its fingers closing around her wrist, the scar throbbing in agony. Then, with a suddenness that left her reeling, the tree began to glow. Silver light spilled from its branches, blasting through the grove with the force of a small sun. The creature shrieked, its form disintegrating into wisps of shadow. Rory collapsed to the ground, gasping for breath as the magic of the grove washed over her. The pendant cooled against her skin, its glow fading to a gentle pulse. Slowly, the night began to return to normal. The oaks stood silent once more, the wildflowers glimmering peacefully in the moonlight. Rory staggered to her feet, torn between relief and lingering fear. She had to get out of here, had to find the gap in the stones and escape back to the world of the living. She stumbled through the clearing, desperately searching for a way out. After what felt like hours, she found it. A sliver of moonlight piercing the darkness between two oaks. Rory plunged through, stumbling onto the path on the other side. The grove vanished behind her as if it had never been, leaving only the chill breeze and the distant cry of a fox. Aurora Carter ran. She ran until her lungs burned and her legs ached, ran until the lights of London rose up to greet her. Only then did she allow herself to stop, to collapse against a wall and shudder in relief. The nightmare of the fae grove was over. But the memory would linger, etched into her skin and her bones, a reminder of the horrors that lurked just beyond the edge of reality. She touched the pendant at her throat, a silent acknowledgment of the debt she owed to whatever power had saved her. Never again, she vowed. Never again would she seek out the unknown, the mysteries beyond the veil of the mundane world. Some secrets were better left undisturbed, buried in the darkness of a forgotten grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
63.3364% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1091
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"inexorably"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"inexorably"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.5069% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1091
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"solitary"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"tangible"
1"throb"
2"flicker"
3"loomed"
4"solitary"
5"weight"
6"dance"
7"echoed"
8"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
1.1010% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean45.46
std6.99
cv0.154
sampleLengths
048
165
244
349
432
548
637
743
850
951
1044
1147
1240
1342
1448
1548
1636
1740
1851
1946
2052
2141
2254
2335
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was trapped"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1091
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thicker, heavier, pressing against her"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03666361136571952
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010999083409715857
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
91.1595% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.69
std4.79
cv0.378
sampleLengths
017
110
211
310
49
516
69
714
817
911
1012
1121
1222
1311
1416
1514
168
1710
1811
1913
209
218
227
2312
2411
2514
266
275
285
299
309
319
3211
3311
347
356
3615
3715
3820
3916
406
416
4218
4314
444
4516
4614
4713
4815
499
51.5504% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3372093023255814
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners29
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
83.4502%